Fires Of Hell burns on the surface of my skinO_O

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No, it is not, I am going down the list. And actually, this jutsu is very flashy, and would serve better as a defensive wall or to control the effects around the battlefield.
(Katon: Hokori Tenka no Jutsu) - Fire Release: Dust Ignition Technique
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user will first ignites a flame of fire across the ground infront of them and then they will enhance that fire with a gust of wind to extend the range of the fire
Next one...
Please proceed to create a fireball in the same way you've done before. However, focus your chakra into the middle of this fireball to give it an explosive nature.
Then, proceed to send it directly at my clone, exploding on impact. Describe the impact it has on the surrounding battlefield.
O_Ookay

*I mold my fire chakra, then channel fire chakra into my chest, as I do that, I apply pressure and spit it out as a ball of fire, I make sure to focus more of my chakra into the middle of the fire ball in other to give it an explosive nature, then I send it towards your clone, the fireball explodes on impact with your clone*

The surrounding will undoubtedly not remain the same, the explosive effect will destroy anything within its range<_<
 

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Okay, let's discuss some more details. I'll replicate this move for you.
Concentrating on the flow of chakra, I easily let it slide into its dominant form of chakra, a burning fire that started within my chest, gathering momentum and pressure as I let the jutsu grow. Believing that I have applied enough pressure and force to the fireball, I released it from my mouth towards the clone at about chest level. Due to the fact that we were at mid range, it would take at least a second plus a fraction or so, however, as it strikes my clone, it bursts into a maelstrom of flames that quickly spread across the mid to long range (10~25+ meters, providing that I did not stand too close to the move to get burned), the intensity of it so hot that I could feel it from my position. The storm burned loudly and was large enough so that even my peripheral view was covered with flames.
Notice what details I just put in there.
 

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Eh, yeah, make sure you don't miss out on vital details in a battle.
(Katon: Gōka no Jutsu) - Fire Release: Hellfire Technique
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user will manipulate their chakra and breath out from their mouth a large fireball that travels at the opponent. As it reaches the opponent it bursts into a maelstrom of fire engulfing them in flames.
Now, do you know Rasengan yet?
 

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~_~ Okay, let's brief on it here.
Anyhow, hold out your hand and I want you to begin feeding chakra into it. If you have learned Earth jutsu before as guide, I want you to maintain a form in your hand. If you have learned Lighting jutsu before, I want you to maintain a steady control of chakra in your hand. Then, if you have maintained both natures, I want you to begin slowly turning the chakra in your hand like a spiral. Think of a hurricane.
 

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~_~ Okay, let's brief on it here.
Anyhow, hold out your hand and I want you to begin feeding chakra into it. If you have learned Earth jutsu before as guide, I want you to maintain a form in your hand. If you have learned Lighting jutsu before, I want you to maintain a steady control of chakra in your hand. Then, if you have maintained both natures, I want you to begin slowly turning the chakra in your hand like a spiral. Think of a hurricane.
Okay=DD although, I've learnt about rotation and powerxd now onto it>_>

*I hold out my hand, then I start feeding chakra into it, while I do that, I try to maintain form in my hand, taking advantage of the guides given by sensei, I also try to maintain a steady control of my chakra, concentrating full on maintaining both natures, as I do that, I slowly start turning my chakra in my hand like spiral, causing it to rotate, as I think of the spinning nature of a hurricane*
 

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Very good. I want you to actually add Fire chakra into it and explain how it makes the jutsu different.
*As my chakra starts spining, I start to add fire chakra into it, continue adding fire chakra till it is covered in flaming chakra*

When fire is added, it covers the rasengan in flames, the rasengan become engulfed in fire, and when it is used on the enemy it pushes them back, and explodes into a huge flame reach about mid range- long o_O
 

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Well done.
(Katon: Goen Rasengan) - Fire Style: Flame Rasengan
Rank: S
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user creates a normal Rasengan and covers it in flaming fire chakra. They then hit the opponent, causing a blazing maelstrom of fire, burning them and their surroundings.
Now, what do you know about summoning scrolls?
 

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Summoning scrolls, are a t scrolls used to summon either an animal, weapon, human etc, inscribed on it are summoning formulas with which the user uses to summon them. In most cases, blood needs to be swiped across the formula.

o_O did I get it?>.>
 

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Alright, proceed to unfurl this scroll while charging fire chakra into it and then form a dragon that will come out and soar directly at my clone.
Once it hits him, it would explode on impact. Describe the effects.
 

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Alright, proceed to unfurl this scroll while charging fire chakra into it and then form a dragon that will come out and soar directly at my clone.
Once it hits him, it would explode on impact. Describe the effects.
Okay
*I take the scroll and open it, then I start charging my fire chakra into it, I continue adding chakra into it until its enough for the jutsu, then I form a dragon that comes out and moves directly at your clone, on impact with your clone, the fire dragon explodes causing the clone to disperse*

In any case the victim would be burn't badly, and I think it gives off black smoke as seen in the filler<_<
 

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Very good, but you forgot to look at the size of the dragon.
Since you are able to control it, it can go anywhere on the battlefield and can also potentially block your enemy's vision. As said, it can also be used as a defense mechanism against Wind attacks, as the dragon can basically "eat up" the wind and grow stronger.
(Katon: Bakuryūgeki) - Fire Release: Exploding Dragon Strike
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user through use of one their scrolls will summon a large flame dragon that is directed towards the enemy target and explodes upon impact.
Now, much like the concept earlier, take this scroll once more and manipulate your fire chakra so that a tiger is released from it, running towards my clone and attaching on it. (<- Purpose of this.)
Then, proceed to cause it to explode, causing massive damage as it does so. Describe the impact it has on the clone and the battlefield.
 
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