[Katon] Fire with the Great Detective

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*without having time to respond to his sensei a huge wall of flames appeared infront of him. Having to respond Quickly Chojuro exerts his fire element chakra around his body and runs through the wall of flame*

Advantages - Requires no hand seals. Allows the user to conceal themselves within a jutsu which can add an element of surprise if used correctly. This jutsu can also be useful if another fire user tries to use a technique like you just used to slow down another opponent. They can use it to get through the wall of flames easily.

Disadvantages- water element ninjutsu can not only remove the concealment but counterattack the user. Sharingan and Byakugan users might see through the attack easily. Wind element can ignite the fire tech the user is hiding inside past the level of a B-rank technique and thus injuring the opponent.

In Battle - I would use this technique to attack with clones hidden inside fire ninjutsu's adding an element of surprise when the opponent thinks its just another fire technique.

"Phew. I almost thought I wouldn't make it through"
 

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Listen, I'll post the technique I am teaching you in the same post where I give you instructions on how to perform it.


"Luckily you did! Now onto the B ranks!"


Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user first performs seven handseals Ram → Horse → Snake → Dragon → Rat → Ox → Tiger and kneads chakra into flames, which are then manipulated and exhaled as a thin yet incredibly fast jet of flames that spread across the ground as it runs towards the enemy. Its temperature is such that it easily melts the ground as it travels and can reduce an enemy to ash.



"Now, form the needed hand seals, and manipulate your Fire based chakra. This allows you to release a deadly stream of Fire from your mouth, which blasts towards the opponent, pretty useful. Use it against my clone. "

Dean creates a clone that runs towards Chojuro.


Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user shoots multiple fire shots from their hands that are able to cause fiery explosions on impact with any object. The shots can't set the opponent on fire, though they can cause damage by exploding on him.



"After that, a technique where you will manipulate your Fire based chakra and release shots lf Fire from your hands. These shots explode upon impact. Use it agaisnt my clone."

Dean creates a clone that runs towards Chojuro.
 
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(Alright Cool.)

"Alright sensei I Will go straight into it"

*Chojuro Quickly Takes a deep Breath and performs the hand signs in the sequence of Ram → Horse → Snake → Dragon → Rat → Ox → Tiger and manipulating his fire based chakra he releases the jutsu pierces through the incoming clone*

Advantages- this technique once performed is very fast and may leave the opponent open to a direct attack if used within a small range. It also has the ability to force the opponent off the ground by directing it directly below their feet, opening them to being attacked whilst in the air.

Disadvantages- Like all fire techniques its main weakness it water element ninjutsu. It Can also take a while to get prepared since is requires a few hand signs to perform and thus leaving yourself open to and attack while preparing it.

In battle - I would likely use this technique to strand the enemy on the ground forcing them into the air and giving them minimum space to counter and dodge attacks.

Justsu 2

*chojuro starts thinking taijutsu immediately as he crunches his fists together and manipulates his fire bases chakra in his fists and fires a punch into the air causing shot of fire to be released towards the clone which explodes upon contact*

Advantages - this technique is very useful when used with taijutsu. It can also be performed multiple times allowing multiple explosive shots at your opponent. Requires no hand signs to perform.

Disadvantages - Opponent needs to be within a certain range for this jutsu to work. It can be countered with water ninjutsu.

In Battle- I would use this as a straight forward attack combined with taijutsu or to attack multiple enemies at once

"Hmm... thats all I can think of with this one. Is there anything that I missed?"
 

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"Awesome, and nah, you got it!"


Rank: B
Type: Offense, Deffence
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user exhales a stronger yet shorter version of the Fire Release: Great Fireball technique.



"Remember the Great Fireball Technique? This is a stronger version where you will manipulate your Fire chakra once more, and cause more damage (perform it the same way as Great Fireball Technique, we did it earlier, but stronger and more powerful). Use it against my clone."

Dean says as he creates a clone that runs towards Chojuro.


Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user after performing two hand seals Horse → Tiger exhales a big-sized sphere of fire that carries the enemy away and causes a massive explosion on impact. The fire ball has a given solidity property to it, being able to punch through solid obstacles without exploding.



"With this technique, you will form two hand seals, and manipulate your Fire based chakra. This allows you to release a fire ball which has a solid like property and upon impact, would cause a massive explosion. Use it against my clone."

Dean creates a clone that runs towards Chojuro.
 

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Jutsu 1

"Alright Sensei Here Goes"

*Chojuro Takes out the lighter and begins to manipulate more of his chakra. As he visualizes the elements of fire in his mind he lights the lighter and using the chakra that he had build up before manipulated the fire from the lighter instantly into a larger wall of flame that engulfs the clone as it begin to get closer and destroys it*

Advantages - Does not require Hand Signs which makes it quick and easy to use, Can Be used instantly within a close range to blow back enemies, Just like its smaller version it can be used as Both an offensive and defensive Jutsu

Disadvantages - Well this Jutsu is naturally weak to Water, I seems to have a short range and if its anything like the smaller version then it requires a source of fire to perform.

In Battle - I wold most likely use this attack to enemies whom are too close in hopes of making some distance or attacking Enemies within a close Range


Jutsu 2


Chojuro Quickly performs the Horse → Tiger Hand Signs as he builds up Chakra in lungs and Exhales a sphere of fire that destroys the incoming Clone.

Advantages - It can be used bot long and short Ranged, It only requires 2 hand signs to perform making it reliable, Can be used to break through solid objects since it takes a solid state. If it hits it can be used to push back the enemy.

Disadvantages - A similar water technique may be able to counter.

In Battle - I would use this technique to attack an enemy hiding behind an object.
 

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"Good job for the second technique, but the first technique is a variation of this one."


Type: Offense
Rank: C
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: After performing the necessary hand seals Snake → Ram → Monkey → Boar → Horse → Tiger, a ninja inhales air, and utilizing a large amount of fire chakra, spews a large fireball from their mouth after blowing through a ring made by the thumb and index finger of the user, incinerating everything in range. The fireball ignites externally. The fire ball can present itself in 2 forms: it can either be created by a stream of fire and sustained as a gigantic ball of flames in front of the user spanning up to short range or be released as a slightly smaller ball of fire which will travel towards the enemy up to mid range.



"You performed Wall of Flames, could you re-try the first one using the technique above as guidance, so you release a more powerful variant?"

Dean asked, waiting for Chojuro.
 

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"Oh my bad Sensei, I feel Like a Idiot now. Alright Here goes"

*Chojuro Takes a deep Breath in while building up his fire element Chakra. As he feels the heat in his lungs building he quickly exhales a blast of fire through his mouth incinerating the incoming clone*

Advantages - Can Be used to attack and Defend, making it flexible depending on the situation you are in. It also seems to have a Blast effect with the added power. May Cause Burns if it hits directly

Disadvantages - Has a Short Range, Water techniques can counter it easily. It uses a large amount of chakra to perform

In Battle - I would use this Best to defend against enemies approaching in front of me within a short range

"Was this the right one?"

*Chojuro Jokingly asked as he laughed*
 

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"Indeed, that was."

Dean says, as he readies the next techniques.


Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user jumps in the air and shoots three giant bullets of fire that come down like giant meteors, then erupt into a geyser of flame.



"A simple technique, where you will first jump into the air, and deliver three giant bullets of fire. These come down upon the opponent like meteors, and erupt into a geyser of flame. Pretty lit."


Dean creates a clone that runs towards Chojuro.


Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user spews superheated ash from their mouth after performing four handseals. The ash is hot enough to cause third-degree burns on the victim. Because it's composed entirely of ash, it stays in the air around the victim like a cloud. If the user clicks his teeth, the stagnant ash will ignite, creating a violent explosion.



"After that, you will manipulate your Fire based chakra in your chest, and spew out superheated ash, after the formation of four hand seals. The ash can cause third degree burns, and stays around the opponent like a cloud. With a click of the teeth, its ignited. You know what to do."

Dean creates a clone that runs towards Chojuro.
 

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Jutsu 1

*Chojuro Quickly steps Back and jumps into the air, as he goes up he fill his lungs with fire element chakra. As soon as he feels like he is not going up anymore he releases the jutsu upon the clone that is looking up and Destroys it*

Advantages - The best part about this technique to me is that it can cause some damage and it requires no hand signs. Other than that it can be used in the air to limit an opponent's area of movement if used to attack around them. I can also be used to attack multiple opponents since you are releasing fire balls at once. The bullets also erupt which may cause burns to any enemies within the range of the eruption.

Disadvantage - Major disadvantage would be that this technique seems to work best when used in the air and you would have to make some some space between you and your opponent for it to have the full effect.

In Battle - I would mostly used this to rain down attacks on multiple enemies in battle by continuously performing the jutsu.


I have a Question about the second Jutsu Before I perform it.

When You spew the ash out, you stated that it sticks around the opponent. Does it stay around them even if the move around?
 

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"Good job on the first, and as for the second, not necessarily stick, but more like the ash covers a certain range which aims to enclose the opponent within it. So before they can run, or make their way from the ash, its triggered to explode."
 

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"Cool, Alright here goes"

*chojuro quickly jumps back from the incoming clone as he builds up fire chakra in his lungs. As the starts to get close enough again he releases the jutsu which makes the clone stop. As soon as the clone stops chojuro clicks his teeth and cause the ash to ignite and destroys the clone*


Advantages - Well a major advantage of this technique is that it can cause burns on the opponent which may allow for other attacks to cause more damage. The ash cloud may also limit the opponent's ability to see. This techinques can also be used to attack multiple opponents in a limited space if used well. It requires no hand signs and has a second layer of attack which allows you to cause an explosion of the ash cloud causing more damage.

Disadvantages- Unlike other fire techniques this one seems to have a Wind counter. By using a wind element jutsu you may be able to disperse the ash which makes the jutsu useless after that. You may get caught in your own technique if you use it when your opponent is close to you.

In Battle- Overall a Pretty cool technique that I would use especially to cause a burn on the opponent while attack. Dont have any great ideas about this one as yet.

Note: I am currently in the jungles of Guyana. I was lucky to find an internet so I responded. I am set to return by the 29th. Please dont Get impatient, will respond as soon as I can
 

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"Good job."


Rank: B
Type: Offense/Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user fires several large dragon-shaped fireballs at their opponent after performing one handseal. It is able to alter localized weather conditions to the point of making thunder clouds when shot into the air, enabling the user to perform Kirin.



"Now, in this technique you will form one hand seal and manipulate your Fire based chakra. You will then exhale from your mouth, and unleash several large dragon shaped fire balls at the opponent. These fireballs can also be launched at the sky, to create the necessary conditions to use Kirin. Use it against my clone."

Dean creates a clone that runs towards Chojuro.


Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user unleashes a volley of shuriken with one hand, while at the same time exhaling fire-infused chakra onto them in order to increase the weapons' destructive potential by making them capable of inflicting severe burns upon direct contact with either the intended victim or any other object caught within their trajectories. Due to the chakra-based nature of the flames that surround them, the shuriken will continue to burn after impact, regardless of the flammability of the object that they ultimately collide with.



"In this technique, you will unleash Shuriken towards the opponent with one hand and at the same time, exhale Fire based chakra onto them to increase their destructive potential and allow them to cause some burns on contact. Pretty cool technique, use it against my clone."

Dean creates a clone that runs towards Chojuro.
 
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