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*I run down the hand seals until I've got them down. Then, I form them for real, focusing my Katon chakra within my lungs, taking in a deep breath. Then, I move the chakra-heated air through my throat into my mouth. The intense heat begins to burn my tounge, and then I expel it from my mouth. The flame lingers before me for a short while, growing with the new flames into a meteor sized fire-ball. Then, I focus one last shot of flame into it in order to send it flying towards you clone. As the fire-ball makes contact with your clone, I focus the katon chakra within it into one massive force, causing it to explode, leaving a crater where your clone once stood.*
 

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*I run down the hand seals until I've got them down. Then, I form them for real, focusing my Katon chakra within my lungs, taking in a deep breath. Then, I move the chakra-heated air through my throat into my mouth. The intense heat begins to burn my tounge, and then I expel it from my mouth. The flame lingers before me for a short while, growing with the new flames into a meteor sized fire-ball. Then, I focus one last shot of flame into it in order to send it flying towards you clone. As the fire-ball makes contact with your clone, I focus the katon chakra within it into one massive force, causing it to explode, leaving a crater where your clone once stood.*

good...now I want you to perform a combo using this jutsu but before that I want you to tell me pros and cons of the jutsu :p
 

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(Katon: Goenkyu) - Fire Style: Blaze Ball
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user exhales a meteor-sized sphere of fire that carries the enemy away and causes a massive explosion on impact.

good...now I want you to perform a combo using this jutsu but before that I want you to tell me pros and cons of the jutsu :p

Pro: This is a long-range fire jutsu, meaning that you can keep your distance and still hit your target. It's a two part jutsu, meaning that after he's being siered by the flames, you can still make it explode.
Con: It's a large jutsu so it makes it hard to aim. If the opponent runs around it by the time it's shot (from long-range, as it's ineffective at short-range due to the time it would take to make a meteor-sized fireball), it's useless. Also, being a long-range jutsu, it gives the opponent time to create a counter.

Okay, combo now...
I throw three kunai, one going directly at you, the other two going to either side of you. As you defend those, I weave handseals for
(Doton: Yomi Numa) - Earth Style: Swamp of the Underworld
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This technique creates a swamp beneath the target (relative to them) that immobilizes them. If the swamp is made deep enough it will kill the target. The size of the swamp is proportioned to the amount of chakra of the user.
The swamp sucks your down to your armpits, and as you're going down I use
(Raigen Raikochu) – Lightning Illusion Flash of Lightning Pillar
Rank: S
Type: Supplementaty
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: after performing the following handseals the user will then create a blinding light that appears to emanate from the users body and blind the target/s.
This jutsu blinds you to what is comming, in addition to your inability to move. Then, I weave handseals and take in a deep breath
(Katon: Goenkyu) - Fire Style: Blaze Ball
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user exhales a meteor-sized sphere of fire that carries the enemy away and causes a massive explosion on impact.
The meteor goes flying at you, unable to escape the swamp nor even see it comming.

How was that, sempai?
 

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Pro: This is a long-range fire jutsu, meaning that you can keep your distance and still hit your target. It's a two part jutsu, meaning that after he's being siered by the flames, you can still make it explode.
Con: It's a large jutsu so it makes it hard to aim. If the opponent runs around it by the time it's shot (from long-range, as it's ineffective at short-range due to the time it would take to make a meteor-sized fireball), it's useless. Also, being a long-range jutsu, it gives the opponent time to create a counter.

Okay, combo now...
I throw three kunai, one going directly at you, the other two going to either side of you. As you defend those, I weave handseals for
(Doton: Yomi Numa) - Earth Style: Swamp of the Underworld
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This technique creates a swamp beneath the target (relative to them) that immobilizes them. If the swamp is made deep enough it will kill the target. The size of the swamp is proportioned to the amount of chakra of the user.
The swamp sucks your down to your armpits, and as you're going down I use
(Raigen Raikochu) – Lightning Illusion Flash of Lightning Pillar
Rank: S
Type: Supplementaty
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: after performing the following handseals the user will then create a blinding light that appears to emanate from the users body and blind the target/s.
This jutsu blinds you to what is comming, in addition to your inability to move. Then, I weave handseals and take in a deep breath
(Katon: Goenkyu) - Fire Style: Blaze Ball
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user exhales a meteor-sized sphere of fire that carries the enemy away and causes a massive explosion on impact.
The meteor goes flying at you, unable to escape the swamp nor even see it comming.

How was that, sempai?

I will need to add something here...look at the size of the jutsu (meteor-sized) so it would block the opponent's view of you, so that you could create a surprise attack...however it also blocks your view of the opponent which is the main con of the jutsu.

About the combo - it was good, however I want you now to use what I said above...use the jutsu as a distraction and then create a surprise attack (the opponent wont see the secondary attack)
 

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i seem to have touched on the size, but didn't get where you wanted it.
I start off by using
(Katon: Goenkyu) - Fire Style: Blaze Ball
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user exhales a meteor-sized sphere of fire that carries the enemy away and causes a massive explosion on impact.
to shoot a massive fireball at you. As the fireball is large enough to block your view of me, I run behind it, weaving the handseals for
(Raiton: Raikiri) - Lightning Release: Lightning Blade
Rank: S
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: This jutsu is an advanced form of Chidori.
I wait back a bit for the fireball to disapait after contact, and then finish the run, my hand surrounded by a field of lightning, jabbing it into your (clones) chest.
 

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i seem to have touched on the size, but didn't get where you wanted it.
I start off by using
(Katon: Goenkyu) - Fire Style: Blaze Ball
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user exhales a meteor-sized sphere of fire that carries the enemy away and causes a massive explosion on impact.
to shoot a massive fireball at you. As the fireball is large enough to block your view of me, I run behind it, weaving the handseals for
(Raiton: Raikiri) - Lightning Release: Lightning Blade
Rank: S
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: This jutsu is an advanced form of Chidori.
I wait back a bit for the fireball to disapait after contact, and then finish the run, my hand surrounded by a field of lightning, jabbing it into your (clones) chest.

this is not a good combo because the lightning jutsu is short range and you need to run at your opponent...

What if the enemy uses strong water jutsu that overcomes the fire and continues at you...You wouldnt be able to see it due to the massive fireball and you will be very volnerable...

Now try again and this time dont use short ranged techniques :p
 

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alright.
I start off by using
(Katon: Goenkyu) - Fire Style: Blaze Ball
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user exhales a meteor-sized sphere of fire that carries the enemy away and causes a massive explosion on impact.
The fireball blocks your view of me so I can use
(Doton: Dochu Eigyo no Jutsu) - Earth Style: Underground Projection Fish Technique
Rank: C
Type: Defence/Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Using this jutsu, a person can hide underground until they're ready to attack an opponent. By utilizing earth-chakra, the person can stealthily emerge from the ground without disrupting the ground around him. This jutsu can also be used to avoid incoming jutsus.
to go underground, even more out of sight. I move, underground, until I am beneath you, and then I weave handseals
(Doton: KajΕ«gan no Jutsu): Earth Style: Aggravated Rock Technique
Rank: S rank
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Range: short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: By performing the needed hand seal the user will release a body of earth that will allow the user to petrify anything that comes into contact with him.
Note: The target stays petrified for 1 turn.
I grab your ankle from below and then rise from the ground, behind you, and place a kunai to your neck when I am fully risen.
 

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alright.
I start off by using
(Katon: Goenkyu) - Fire Style: Blaze Ball
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user exhales a meteor-sized sphere of fire that carries the enemy away and causes a massive explosion on impact.
The fireball blocks your view of me so I can use
(Doton: Dochu Eigyo no Jutsu) - Earth Style: Underground Projection Fish Technique
Rank: C
Type: Defence/Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Using this jutsu, a person can hide underground until they're ready to attack an opponent. By utilizing earth-chakra, the person can stealthily emerge from the ground without disrupting the ground around him. This jutsu can also be used to avoid incoming jutsus.
to go underground, even more out of sight. I move, underground, until I am beneath you, and then I weave handseals
(Doton: KajΕ«gan no Jutsu): Earth Style: Aggravated Rock Technique
Rank: S rank
Type: Offensive/Defensive
Range: short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: By performing the needed hand seal the user will release a body of earth that will allow the user to petrify anything that comes into contact with him.
Note: The target stays petrified for 1 turn.
I grab your ankle from below and then rise from the ground, behind you, and place a kunai to your neck when I am fully risen.

Again short range...O_O And going underground is no good...A skilled opponent will see that you are not there and if the terrain is something like "plain valley" he will figure out where you are and use lightning to zap you.

Again (something like mid range lightning would do)
 

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I weave handseals to use
(Katon: Goenkyu) - Fire Style: Blaze Ball
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user exhales a meteor-sized sphere of fire that carries the enemy away and causes a massive explosion on impact.
and exhale a massive fireball towards you. Afterwards, as your vision of me is blocked, I weave handseals to use
(Raiton: Gian) - Lightning Style: False Darkness
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Descripton: Two powerful lightning blasts.This strong attack can be defended against by an equally strong attack of the same element such as Raikiri.
spitting one behind the other, ready to strike as you fall from the fireball exploding on impact.
 

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I weave handseals to use
(Katon: Goenkyu) - Fire Style: Blaze Ball
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user exhales a meteor-sized sphere of fire that carries the enemy away and causes a massive explosion on impact.
and exhale a massive fireball towards you. Afterwards, as your vision of me is blocked, I weave handseals to use
(Raiton: Gian) - Lightning Style: False Darkness
Type: Attack
Rank: S
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Descripton: Two powerful lightning blasts.This strong attack can be defended against by an equally strong attack of the same element such as Raikiri.
spitting one behind the other, ready to strike as you fall from the fireball exploding on impact.

Simple but effective...the opponent wont see it and if he uses water then the lightning will pass through the water leaving him very volnerable becuase he wont have time to react...

now lets continue :p

(Katon:Gouenka)-Fire Style:Fire Flower
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Chakra cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user spits three fireballs that combine in mid-air into one giant fireball.

*shows you handseals* perform them and then exhale 3 fireballs that combine ind air into one giant fireball. use it at my clone *poof*
 

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Simple but effective...the opponent wont see it and if he uses water then the lightning will pass through the water leaving him very volnerable becuase he wont have time to react...

now lets continue :p

(Katon:Gouenka)-Fire Style:Fire Flower
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Chakra cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user spits three fireballs that combine in mid-air into one giant fireball.

*shows you handseals* perform them and then exhale 3 fireballs that combine ind air into one giant fireball. use it at my clone *poof*

Alright. *I run down the handseals and then begin. I perform the handseals and then gather my Katon chakra into my lungs, along with a massive ammount of air. Heating the chakra/air mixture, I move it through my throat and into my mouth, where I split it into three different entities of fire. Then I spit them out, one right after another, with the second one having more power than the first one, and the third one having even more power than the second one, so they each run into each other, merging as they do so to create a large fireball that crashes into your clone at full force.*
 

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Alright. *I run down the handseals and then begin. I perform the handseals and then gather my Katon chakra into my lungs, along with a massive ammount of air. Heating the chakra/air mixture, I move it through my throat and into my mouth, where I split it into three different entities of fire. Then I spit them out, one right after another, with the second one having more power than the first one, and the third one having even more power than the second one, so they each run into each other, merging as they do so to create a large fireball that crashes into your clone at full force.*

*poof* Nice :p lets move on :)

(Katon: Haisekisho) - Fire Style: Combustion Ash Cloud
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user spews superheated ash from their mouth. The ash is hot enough to cause third-degree burns on the victim. Because it's composed entirely of ash, it stays in the air around the victim like a cloud. If the user clicks his teeth, the stagnant ash will ignite, creating a violent explosion.

Perform these hand seals *shows you* and then spew superheated ash from your mouth at my clone. Then click your teeth creating a spark that will ignite the ash making it explode.
 

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Alright. *I run down the handseals and then begin. I focus my katon chakra into my lungs, along with a deep breath of air, and this time, I focus my chakra into small, condensed specks. I heat these specks until they're charred black, and then I move this large mixture of ash through my throat, and into my mouth. Then, I exhale all of the super-heated ashes onto your clone, burning it. Then, I smirk at your clone, and click my teeth together with a little nod towards it. The spark lands on the first ash, and a chain reaction occurs, where in the end your clone is engulfed in a massive fireball.*
 

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Alright. *I run down the handseals and then begin. I focus my katon chakra into my lungs, along with a deep breath of air, and this time, I focus my chakra into small, condensed specks. I heat these specks until they're charred black, and then I move this large mixture of ash through my throat, and into my mouth. Then, I exhale all of the super-heated ashes onto your clone, burning it. Then, I smirk at your clone, and click my teeth together with a little nod towards it. The spark lands on the first ash, and a chain reaction occurs, where in the end your clone is engulfed in a massive fireball.*

(Katon: Goryuka no Jutsu) - Fire Style: Dragon Fireball Jutsu
Rank: B
Type: Offense/Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user fires several large dragon-shaped fireballs at their opponent. It is able to alter localized weather conditions to the point of making thunder clouds when shot into the air, enabling the user to perform kirin.

Perform these hand seals *shows you* and then concentrate your katon chakra in your lungs. By using shape manipulation try to exhale several large dragon-shaped fireballs at mah clone *poof*
 

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(Katon: Goryuka no Jutsu) - Fire Style: Dragon Fireball Jutsu
Rank: B
Type: Offense/Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user fires several large dragon-shaped fireballs at their opponent. It is able to alter localized weather conditions to the point of making thunder clouds when shot into the air, enabling the user to perform kirin.

Perform these hand seals *shows you* and then concentrate your katon chakra in your lungs. By using shape manipulation try to exhale several large dragon-shaped fireballs at mah clone *poof*

*I run down the handseals and then I begin. I take in a deep breath and begins to focus katon chakra within them.* Fire Style is a really good breathing excersize. I can take in a MUCH deeper breath than when we started! *I focus my natural body heat into my lungs, heating the mixture considerably until my lungs begin to burn.* It also redifines 'heatburn'. *I move the mixture through my throat and into my mouth. From my mouth, I exhale a portion of the flames out of my mouth, using shape manipulation to 'sheer' off an outcrop of a dragon, pulling some flames in from the front to give its 'face' some features, those flames dragging out the back as if it were a cape billowing in the wind.
Then, I spit out another dragon following close behind it, using the same technique to give its face some features, pulling the top back to sort of indent it to give it a large snout, as with the first one. I also 'carve' out some cool-looking spiral designs and some symbols in the side to give it a more appealing appearance. I use the rest of the flames in my mouth to spit out a third and final dragon, slightly smaller than the other two, as I put most of the fire into them. This dragon was made to have its mouth open, as to seem more intimedating to my opponents. Manipulating my chakra within the dragons, I have the first two fly towards your clone, angled slightly upwards, and then smash downwards into your clone. If I can't manipulate them in that way, then my third dragon is aimed directly at your clone.*
 

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*I run down the handseals and then I begin. I take in a deep breath and begins to focus katon chakra within them.* Fire Style is a really good breathing excersize. I can take in a MUCH deeper breath than when we started! *I focus my natural body heat into my lungs, heating the mixture considerably until my lungs begin to burn.* It also redifines 'heatburn'. *I move the mixture through my throat and into my mouth. From my mouth, I exhale a portion of the flames out of my mouth, using shape manipulation to 'sheer' off an outcrop of a dragon, pulling some flames in from the front to give its 'face' some features, those flames dragging out the back as if it were a cape billowing in the wind.
Then, I spit out another dragon following close behind it, using the same technique to give its face some features, pulling the top back to sort of indent it to give it a large snout, as with the first one. I also 'carve' out some cool-looking spiral designs and some symbols in the side to give it a more appealing appearance. I use the rest of the flames in my mouth to spit out a third and final dragon, slightly smaller than the other two, as I put most of the fire into them. This dragon was made to have its mouth open, as to seem more intimedating to my opponents. Manipulating my chakra within the dragons, I have the first two fly towards your clone, angled slightly upwards, and then smash downwards into your clone. If I can't manipulate them in that way, then my third dragon is aimed directly at your clone.*

I dont know if you can do that...But very nice description...I like you (not gay) xd

let's move on *poof*

(Katon: Hoenka) - Fire Style: Flame Flower
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user jumps in the air and shoots three giant bullets of fire that come down like giant meteors.

do you need explaination for that one ? *shows you hand seals* use it on my clone*poof*
 

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I dont know if you can do that...But very nice description...I like you (not gay) xd

let's move on *poof*

(Katon: Hoenka) - Fire Style: Flame Flower
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user jumps in the air and shoots three giant bullets of fire that come down like giant meteors.

do you need explaination for that one ? *shows you hand seals* use it on my clone*poof*

lol, thanks... I guess.
*I run down the handseals and then begin. I focus my katon chakra within my lungs as I take a deep breath, and then, with some promting from my chakra, the mixture heats. As my lungs begin to burn, I take a running jump into the air, moving the chakra-fire to my mouth as I do so. In the air, I split the flames within my mouth into three separate entities and I try to increase their size before I exhale them. Then, I spit all three out, one directly after another in a triangle formation, angled diagonally downwards towards your clone. The three 'meteors' fly down towards your clone, reducing it to a puff of smoke in a crater.*

If you want to see me being REALLY descriptive, you should check out my genjutsu training.
 

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lol, thanks... I guess.
*I run down the handseals and then begin. I focus my katon chakra within my lungs as I take a deep breath, and then, with some promting from my chakra, the mixture heats. As my lungs begin to burn, I take a running jump into the air, moving the chakra-fire to my mouth as I do so. In the air, I split the flames within my mouth into three separate entities and I try to increase their size before I exhale them. Then, I spit all three out, one directly after another in a triangle formation, angled diagonally downwards towards your clone. The three 'meteors' fly down towards your clone, reducing it to a puff of smoke in a crater.*

If you want to see me being REALLY descriptive, you should check out my genjutsu training.

too lazy for that xd

*poof* very well :p

First have you learned 16 pillar blind ?
 

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no, I haven't. Jinbei wouldn't teach it to me since i didn't know an earth jutsu (I can't remember it's name). i've learned the earth jutsu, so we could always go back, learn Sixteen Pillar Bind, and then do this jutsu...
 

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no, I haven't. Jinbei wouldn't teach it to me since i didn't know an earth jutsu (I can't remember it's name). i've learned the earth jutsu, so we could always go back, learn Sixteen Pillar Bind, and then do this jutsu...

16 pillar bind is lightning jutsu...

So I will do it for ya *I use 16 pillar bind*

(Katon: Shageki Bisuketto) – Fire Release: Firing Biscuit technique
Rank: A
Type: Offensive, supplementary
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: After performing the needed hand seals the user then creates powerful flames inside the giant oven created by Lightning Release: Sixteen pillar bind, cooking the opponent until their burnt. Its normally used together with Earth Release: Mud fall to harden the mud covering the enemy, immobilizing them.

Now I want you to perform these hand seals *shows you* and then concentrate fire chakra into the over I just created and try to make flames appear inside of it.
 
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