Fire Training - Dark Matter.

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perform last technique.
Also for the convenience of my student, I ask you; do you want to be straightforward in our training or want to add some RP to it? All up to you.
 

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*I grab a scroll and I quickly open it. I do this as I gather a large amount of fire chakra and once I feel that I've gathered enough I place my right hand on the scroll and I channel all of my chakra which summons a large tiger of fire from the scroll that quickly travels towards my opponent, attaching it's self to him and exploding causing massive damage on detonation making it similar to a paper bomb but with more power*

(Katon Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Hitora Bakufu) - Fire Release Summoning Technique: Fire Tiger Explosion
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user summons a tiger made of flames from a scroll, directing it towards the target, and attaching itself onto the target and explode causing massive damage on detonation making it similar to a paper bomb.


Sorry for the late reply and straightforward for me please.
 

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Seems as though you are very much close to being finished, we will finish you up today.
From now on no need to perform the jutsus, just you this template.

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Okay so we can finish your training without delay, I need you to write long and hard. Be descriptive in everything so the training can finish fast without delay. I will not hesitate, if I see you show no effort. We will redo the jutsus. As long as everything is clear, we will continue. Is everything clear?
 

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(Katon: Goka Mekkyaku) - Fire release: Great Fire Majestic Annihilation
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: A technique where the user makes the horse hand seal and then kneads chakra inside his body which is then converted into fire and expelled from the mouth as a massive wall of intense flames, which covers an expansive range in both vertical and horizontal dimensions, making it extremely difficult to avoid.

A dangerous and powerful katon jutsu made famous by Madara uchia. The user will keen a large amount of katon chakra and send a stream of intense and powerful flames towards the opponent. It spreads a very wide range and burns everything in its path. A great terrain changer, a finisher jutsu and moves at intense speeds noted in the Anime. This is also a distracter type jutsu to lure a opponent out of position and push him back. A dangeroud jutsu indeed.


(Katon: Goka Messhitsu) - Fire Release: Great Fire Destruction
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: A technique where chakra kneaded inside the body is converted into fire, and then expelled from the mouth in a massive stream of intense flames. The technique has an enourmous range and can cover a huge area. When it was used by Madara Uchiha, the massive scale of the technique was such that, in comparisson, his incomplete Susanoo seemed small.

Another jutsu Madara Uchia made famous and very similar. The fire is of great heat and and travels very fast pretty much everything like the previous technique only thing is it can travel a much longer range and is more narrow it does not spread wide range but straight forward more so.
 

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(Katon: Goka Mekkyaku) - Fire release: Great Fire Majestic Annihilation​

Strong points

  • This jutsu covers a large area
  • The technique can't be canceled out with just any water jutsu since it covers a huge area.
  • The user can take out multiple opponents with this technique.
Weak points

  • This technique blocks your entire vision of the things in front of you
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Combinations-strategies
Well since the flames blocks everyones vision I could prepare any surprise attack. Since my opponent won't be looking at me as the flames travel towards him I surprising by using the swamp technique. I could also use a lightning technique which would hide on the flames which should surprise my opponent.

Ways to counter this technique
This isn't your normal fire jutsu were it can easily be canceled with a water bullet, so I would personally take advantage of the fact that the flames block both my vision and my opponent's and use the hiding like a mole technique, avoiding the intense flames and then appearing behind my opponent. I could also use a powerful stream of water of the same rank.

Questions None.





(Katon: Goka Messhitsu) - Fire Release: Great Fire Destruction​

Strong points

  • The technique can reach up to long range which is pretty rare.
  • The jutsu is pretty large as it made Madara's incomplete sunsano'o look small
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Weak points

  • Blocks your vision
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Combinations-strategies
Like the previous jutsu you can combine this with a lightning technique but something I find interesting is the fact that this technique makes madara's incomplete susano'o look small so I can probably summon a flying animal as the fire travels towards my opponent and surprise my opponent with an attack from above.

Ways to counter this technique
This one is easier to defend against since it doesn't cover a huge area like the previous techniques so I could use an S-rank water jutsu to cancel the fire, this also creates steam and I can use that to my advantage. Once the steam is created I could use that C-rank water technique where the user reflects the natural light blinding my opponent.

Questions None.
 

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Okay so we can finish your training without delay, I need you to write long and hard. Be descriptive in everything so the training can finish fast without delay. I will not hesitate, if I see you show no effort. We will redo the jutsus. As long as everything is clear, we will continue. Is everything clear?
Read it again mate. Now redo the template. This are the two of some of the deadliest jutsus on all the canon list. Show respect for them.
 

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This are the last two jutsus on the list my friend, I'm not asking for perfection.Just think outside of the box and put some effort in it, the detail you gave me would work with a D-Rank, not two of the most deadliest fire jutsus. Do it one more time, with more effort.
 
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