[Fire Release] with Omnom

[Thoth]

*patiently awaits for his senpai to arrive*

My previous training:

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You can check out the reply I've made to the first B-rank techique. My previous senpai didn't reply and say I learned it.
Plus, I haven't learned that last two, recently added C-rank techniques.

 

[Omnom]

*patiently awaits for his senpai to arrive*

My previous training:

You must be registered for see links

You can check out the reply I've made to the first B-rank techique. My previous senpai didn't reply and say I learned it.
Plus, I haven't learned that last two, recently added C-rank techniques.

Redo that last move for me. We'll go from there.

 

[Thoth]

*performs sequence of hand signs; Ram → Horse → Snake → Dragon → Rat → Ox → Tiger*
While doing that, he starts concentrating his fire chakra into his stomach. When he thinks that it's enough he starts kneading it toward his gullet. When his chakra reaches his gullet, and then mouth going toward the lips, he uses shape manipulation to make the fire. He carefully expels it out of your mouth in the shape of a fire stream. Then, he starts using more advanced shape manipulation to make the fire into the dragon head. After a few seconds, he manages to do it. While controlling the dragon with his hands, he starts splitting it into three equal pieces. When he splits them, he severely pushes the hands forward and makes the dragon heads go in different directions; one on the left, one on the right and one straight forward. He increases the speed and size of the dragons with using and controlling his chakra and sees the dragons hit three of his enemies. He watches them burn into ashes very satisfied.

 

[Omnom]

*performs sequence of hand signs; Ram → Horse → Snake → Dragon → Rat → Ox → Tiger*
While doing that, he starts concentrating his fire chakra into his stomach. When he thinks that it's enough he starts kneading it toward his gullet. When his chakra reaches his gullet, and then mouth going toward the lips, he uses shape manipulation to make the fire. He carefully expels it out of your mouth in the shape of a fire stream. Then, he starts using more advanced shape manipulation to make the fire into the dragon head. After a few seconds, he manages to do it. While controlling the dragon with his hands, he starts splitting it into three equal pieces. When he splits them, he severely pushes the hands forward and makes the dragon heads go in different directions; one on the left, one on the right and one straight forward. He increases the speed and size of the dragons with using and controlling his chakra and sees the dragons hit three of his enemies. He watches them burn into ashes very satisfied.

Very well done. Somehow, I missed adding your thread to my subscriptions, so that's fixed now. Next up:

( Katon: Rakka Sanran Kasai ) - Fire Release: Falling Fire Scatter
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user whilst in mid air will release from their mouth a series of small fire shots that rain down upon the target.

Relatively simple technique. Gather katon chakra to your mouth, and jump in the air. This jutsu requires three hand seals I believe, and allows you to shoot down several "shots" of fire at the opponent.

 

[Thoth]

*preforms the three needed hand seals*
Whilst doing that, he starts gathering his Katon chakra in his stomach. After a while, he thinks that he has enough chakra to preform this technique, he stops. He starts sending the chakra toward his gullet and beyond. While the chakra is still travelling, he jumps as high as he can in the air. When it gets at the end of his mouth he uses shape manipulation to make a small fire shot. He aims the shot at the senpai's clone, The shot still doesn't get to the clone and he starts falling, but the severely make a few more fire shots and sends the again toward the clone. They all hit the clone and make him vanish from the burns.

 

[Omnom]

*preforms the three needed hand seals*
Whilst doing that, he starts gathering his Katon chakra in his stomach. After a while, he thinks that he has enough chakra to preform this technique, he stops. He starts sending the chakra toward his gullet and beyond. While the chakra is still travelling, he jumps as high as he can in the air. When it gets at the end of his mouth he uses shape manipulation to make a small fire shot. He aims the shot at the senpai's clone, The shot still doesn't get to the clone and he starts falling, but the severely make a few more fire shots and sends the again toward the clone. They all hit the clone and make him vanish from the burns.

Next time, do me a favor and put the name of the move at the top of your reply. Also, give me strengths and weakness of each particular technique.

( Katon: Kitsunebi ) - Fire Release: Fire Whisp
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user creates a small ball of bright fire from their mouth that shoots at the opponent burning on impact.

Pretty simple. Gather katon chakra into your hand, and add shape manipulation to it to form it into a whip.

 

[Thoth]

( Katon: Kitsunebi ) - Fire Release: Fire Whisp

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*starts collecting his Katon chakra*
When he's done, he starts moving it toward his mouth. When the chakra get to his lips he uses shape manipulation to make a small ball. When the fireball is ready, he makes it a little bit brighter using more chakra and concentrating on it. Now, he makes a fire ball igger to increase it's power. He aims at the opponent and hits it with the ball and makes it disappear.

This technique is good against Wind Release jutsu like all fire ones and that's it's advantage. The disadvantages are that this is pretty weak jutsu and is easy to avoid and can be defended by most of the water techniques. It's simply a fire ball with more description. xD

 

[Omnom]

( Katon: Kitsunebi ) - Fire Release: Fire Whisp

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*starts collecting his Katon chakra*
When he's done, he starts moving it toward his mouth. When the chakra get to his lips he uses shape manipulation to make a small ball. When the fireball is ready, he makes it a little bit brighter using more chakra and concentrating on it. Now, he makes a fire ball igger to increase it's power. He aims at the opponent and hits it with the ball and makes it disappear.

This technique is good against Wind Release jutsu like all fire ones and that's it's advantage. The disadvantages are that this is pretty weak jutsu and is easy to avoid and can be defended by most of the water techniques. It's simply a fire ball with more description. xD

xd. I totally read that move as "Fire Whip"... Not "Whisp" I should probably read the techniques a little more closely...

But anyways! That's it for the C-ranks. We'll be moving on to Bs. Keep up your good description, and we might move up to two ore thee jutsus at a time.

( Katon: Karyū Endan ) - Fire Release: Fire Dragon Flame Bullet
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user first performs seven handseals Ram → Horse → Snake → Dragon → Rat → Ox → Tiger and kneads chakra into flames, which are then manipulated into a genuine-looking dragon. The flames are divided to launch a left side, right side, and frontal assault in all three directions at once, turning the enemy into ash in a matter of seconds.

Quite a few hand seals on this one. Gather your katon chakra, and release a stream of fire from your mouth. Add in shape manipulation, forming the fire into three dragons, and control them to attack your opponent from every side.

 

[Thoth]

Senpai, I've already learned that one, check out the beginning of our training.

 

[Omnom]

Senpai, I've already learned that one, check out the beginning of our training.

Well now. This is awkward. What technique should be next, Mr. Smartypants?!

 

[Thoth]

Lol.
Everything further than this technique is unlearned. >_O

 

[Omnom]

Lol.
Everything further than this technique is unlearned. >_O

Sheesh. Just trying to help a guy out. And where is your Ame bar, mister?!

( Bakuhatsu Enhogan ) – Exploding Flame Shots
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user shoots multiple fire shots from their hands that are able to cause fiery explosions on impact with any object. The shots can't set the opponent on fire, though they can cause damage by exploding on him.

Gather your katon chakra into your hands, and from there, shoot out bullets of fire, that will explode on contact. Remember that this can't actually cause fire, but damages by exploding.

 

[Thoth]

My premium ran out and the Amegakure banner disappeared. I've already put it back on. >_O

*starts concentrating his chakra in his abdomen*
When he thinks that the Katon chakra is ready and that he has enough of it, he stops. Now, he starts moving it toward both of his hands, arranging the power to be balanced. When the chakra arrives, he highly concentrates on making the technique and imaigenes how to do it properly in his head. He's done with the analyzing, he stretches both of his hand out toward the senpai's clone with his fists opened. He takes a deep breath and triggers the chakra in one of his hand. Just as the chakra leaves his body, he uses shape manipulation to make it explosive, but whilst doing that, it loses it's ability to set thing on fire. He aims the small explosive fire.base ball to hit the senpai's clone and it explodes. Now, he sees five of the other clones going after him. He releases two explosive balls from his right palm, but at the same time, three from his left palm. He really carefully aims them to perfectly hit the clones and make them all vanish.

The advantages of this technique is that it can easily destroy the opponent with one shot and the uses can create many of them and aim until he/she hits the opponent. The disadvantages of this technique is that it can easily be stopped by a earth-based or water-based defense and that it can't set things on fire.

 

[Omnom]

Are you still training with me?

 

[Thoth]

Hey, I am. ;D

 

[Omnom]

Hey, I am. ;D

Great. Continue keeping that same level of detail in your moves, and you'll be done in no time.

( Katon: Hiendan ) – Fire Release: Soaring Flame Bullet
Rank: B
Type: Offense, Deffence
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user exhales a stronger yet shorter version of the Fire Release: Great Fireball technique.

( Katon: Gōenkyū ) - Fire Release: Great Blaze Ball
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user after performing two hand seals Horse → Tiger exhales a meteor-sized sphere of fire that carries the enemy away and causes a massive explosion on impact.

The first one is pretty simple, it is the same as Great Fireball, except it trades range for increased power and size.

The second one requires two quick hand seals, and release a huge sphere of fire. Send it at the opponent or the ground, and it explodes violently.

 

[Thoth]

*sees the sempai's clone and starts running towards it*
The clone is too far from his and he needs to get closer for this technique to function. While running, he starts collecting his Katon chakra in his abdomen. When he thinks that he has enough of it, he stops. Now, he starts moving the chakra towards his gullet and beyond. When the chakra get to the end of his mouth, he uses shape manipulation and starts creating something familiar to fireball. Just when he starts exhaling fire, he gets close enough to the opponent. He makes the fire much stronger, but shorter that the mentioned C-rank technique. The fire easily destroys the clone.

The advantages of this technique is that it can be both offense and defense and that it's pretty strong and can easily burn away the opponent. The disadvantage is that the technique can be only performed while being at close range and the opponent can use the opportunity to attack.

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*performs hand seals Horse → Tiger *
While doing that, he starts gathering his Katon chakra in his stomach. When he feels that he has enough of it for this technique to be done properly, he starts moving it towards his mouth. When the chakra gets to the end of his lips, he uses shape manipulation and starts making the ball. First, he has an usual sized fire ball, but he uses much more power and keeps making it bigger and bigger. He stops when he sees that it's much bigger than him. He shoots it toward the sempai's clone. The clone tries to escape but the sphere is too big and hits him. The impact causes the sphere to maximize and kill the clone in a split of a second.

The advantage of this technique is that it can kill not only the one opponent but the field around him because it expands on touch. I think that the disadvantage of this technique is that it need some time to create a meteor-sized sphere and the opponent can use it to attack the user.

 

[Omnom]

*sees the sempai's clone and starts running towards it*
The clone is too far from his and he needs to get closer for this technique to function. While running, he starts collecting his Katon chakra in his abdomen. When he thinks that he has enough of it, he stops. Now, he starts moving the chakra towards his gullet and beyond. When the chakra get to the end of his mouth, he uses shape manipulation and starts creating something familiar to fireball. Just when he starts exhaling fire, he gets close enough to the opponent. He makes the fire much stronger, but shorter that the mentioned C-rank technique. The fire easily destroys the clone.

The advantages of this technique is that it can be both offense and defense and that it's pretty strong and can easily burn away the opponent. The disadvantage is that the technique can be only performed while being at close range and the opponent can use the opportunity to attack.

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*performs hand seals Horse → Tiger *
While doing that, he starts gathering his Katon chakra in his stomach. When he feels that he has enough of it for this technique to be done properly, he starts moving it towards his mouth. When the chakra gets to the end of his lips, he uses shape manipulation and starts making the ball. First, he has an usual sized fire ball, but he uses much more power and keeps making it bigger and bigger. He stops when he sees that it's much bigger than him. He shoots it toward the sempai's clone. The clone tries to escape but the sphere is too big and hits him. The impact causes the sphere to maximize and kill the clone in a split of a second.

The advantage of this technique is that it can kill not only the one opponent but the field around him because it expands on touch. I think that the disadvantage of this technique is that it need some time to create a meteor-sized sphere and the opponent can use it to attack the user.

Great job.

( Katon: Gōenka ) - Fire Release: Great Flame Flower
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user jumps in the air and shoots three giant bullets of fire that come down like giant meteors, then erupt into a geyser of flame.

( Katon: Haisekishō ) - Fire Release: Ash Pile Burning
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user spews superheated ash from their mouth after performing four handseals. The ash is hot enough to cause third-degree burns on the victim. Because it's composed entirely of ash, it stays in the air around the victim like a cloud. If the user clicks his teeth, the stagnant ash will ignite, creating a violent explosion.

Gather your katon chakra to your mouth as you jump in the air. Then spit down three bullets of fire towards your opponent. As the bullets hit the ground, use your chakra further to erupt the ground in fire.

For number two, gather chakra to your lungs, and use it to release a fine ash through the area. The ash should be extremely hot, hot enough to burn your opponent to crisp.
You then click your teeth, as you are at the edge of the ash, and case a massive explosion to occur.

 

[Thoth]

*starts collecting his Katon chakra in his stomach*
When he thinks that he has enough if it, he stops. He starts moving it towards his gullet and further. Whene the chakra gets really close to his mouth, he jumps as high in the air as he can, turning toward the sensei's clone. When he gets to the highest point, his chakra arrives to the end of his lips and he uses shape manipulation and starts making the special fire bullet. Already when the bullet isn't fully formed, he makes it to have the ability to erupt into a geyser. When the bullet is ready, he shoots it towards the opponent, but he misses because he wanted to. He severely makes two more of the fire bullets with same characteristics and shots it towards the clone. He misses again. He sees the little smile on the clone's face, but when he starts falling, near to the ground, he claps with his hands and triggers the bullets and three massive geyser of flame appears. They easily destroy the clone because they spread almost all over the field. He controls them not to hit him, though.

I think that the disadvantage of this technique is that the user needs to jump in the air for it to function normally. And if the opponent is skilled enough, he/she is able to interrupt the user. The advantage of this technique is that it's a double threat. If you miss with the first shot, you can make the geyser which is the real use of this technique. Pretty unpredictable, too.

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*performs a sequence of 4 hand seals*
He takes a deep breath and while inhaling, he starts gathering his Katon chakra in his lungs. When he thinks that the chakra is ready, he starts exhaling and whilst doing that, he starts moving the chakra towards his mouth, When the chakra get to the end oh his mouth, he uses shape manipulation ans starts making a gust of ash. But, this is a special ash. He spreads more pieces of it's chakra through it and heats it up to be very hot in it. When he sees that the ash has covered the sensei's clone, he triggers all of the pieces of his chakra by clicking with his teeth. When he does that, a massive explosion ensues and starts burning the hell out of the clone. The clones disappears in a split of a second because the burns were very serious.

The advantage of this technique is that it's very unpredictable. The opponent thinks that there's only ash that suposses to blind them but when they see the explosion, it's far too late. The disadvantage of this technique is that the user must be really careful when using it because he/she needs to read the air currents, the insight to read the movements of the enemy, the tactical experience to not also enfold one's allies in the flames, and careful attention for the timing of the ignition.

 

[Omnom]

*starts collecting his Katon chakra in his stomach*
When he thinks that he has enough if it, he stops. He starts moving it towards his gullet and further. Whene the chakra gets really close to his mouth, he jumps as high in the air as he can, turning toward the sensei's clone. When he gets to the highest point, his chakra arrives to the end of his lips and he uses shape manipulation and starts making the special fire bullet. Already when the bullet isn't fully formed, he makes it to have the ability to erupt into a geyser. When the bullet is ready, he shoots it towards the opponent, but he misses because he wanted to. He severely makes two more of the fire bullets with same characteristics and shots it towards the clone. He misses again. He sees the little smile on the clone's face, but when he starts falling, near to the ground, he claps with his hands and triggers the bullets and three massive geyser of flame appears. They easily destroy the clone because they spread almost all over the field. He controls them not to hit him, though.

I think that the disadvantage of this technique is that the user needs to jump in the air for it to function normally. And if the opponent is skilled enough, he/she is able to interrupt the user. The advantage of this technique is that it's a double threat. If you miss with the first shot, you can make the geyser which is the real use of this technique. Pretty unpredictable, too.

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*performs a sequence of 4 hand seals*
He takes a deep breath and while inhaling, he starts gathering his Katon chakra in his lungs. When he thinks that the chakra is ready, he starts exhaling and whilst doing that, he starts moving the chakra towards his mouth, When the chakra get to the end oh his mouth, he uses shape manipulation ans starts making a gust of ash. But, this is a special ash. He spreads more pieces of it's chakra through it and heats it up to be very hot in it. When he sees that the ash has covered the sensei's clone, he triggers all of the pieces of his chakra by clicking with his teeth. When he does that, a massive explosion ensues and starts burning the hell out of the clone. The clones disappears in a split of a second because the burns were very serious.

The advantage of this technique is that it's very unpredictable. The opponent thinks that there's only ash that suposses to blind them but when they see the explosion, it's far too late. The disadvantage of this technique is that the user must be really careful when using it because he/she needs to read the air currents, the insight to read the movements of the enemy, the tactical experience to not also enfold one's allies in the flames, and careful attention for the timing of the ignition.

Absolutely beautiful. Great job man.

( Katon: Gōryūka no Jutsu ) - Fire Release: Great Dragon Fire Technique
Rank: B
Type: Offense/Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user fires several large dragon-shaped fireballs at their opponent after performing one handseal. It is able to alter localized weather conditions to the point of making thunder clouds when shot into the air, enabling the user to perform Kirin.

( Katon: Hōsenka Tsumabeni ) - Fire Release: Phoenix Sage Flower Nail Crimson
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user unleashes a volley of shuriken with one hand, while at the same time exhaling fire-infused chakra onto them in order to increase the weapons' destructive potential by making them capable of inflicting severe burns upon direct contact with either the intended victim or any other object caught within their trajectories. Due to the chakra-based nature of the flames that surround them, the shuriken will continue to burn after impact, regardless of the flammability of the object that they ultimately collide with.

1.) Preform the single hand seal, and spew out large dragon fireballs. Add some shape manipulation to make them look awesome.

2.) This is more precise. With one hand, throw a mass amount of shurikens. The other one make a single hand seal, and spew fire chakra out of your mouth, coating each and every one in fire. Increase the damage and give them the damaging properties of fire.

Mine brain is fried and I can't think of a good way to explain it. >_> Itachi use this jutsu several times. You're a bright one, you'll get it.