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is my previous training and as you can see, I'm very close to completion.

*waits to have some fun with the fresh sensei* :3
 

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After watching his student display everything he's been taught in Fire Release, Kakuzu smirks. This student was already very adept in his use of Katon, so this training was bound to end very soon.

Nice skills, I wonder who taught you all of that but never completed the last few jutsus. Must of been unfortunate circumstances. Anyway, I'd like you to perform that previous jutsu again, something was little off.
 

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Le me grabbing a sword instead of scroll was off, eh? xD

*grabs the scroll that his sensei's given him*
He opens it and puts it onto the ground in front of himself and immediately starts channeling Fire Release chakra in the center of his right palm. He gathers a great amount of chakra because what he's about to perform is an S-rank technique and requires both massive chakra and concentration. Once he finishes, he rapidly slams with his right hand onto the scroll and at the same moment, he release the fire chakra that he's channeled into the scroll. With the help of his chakra, he summons a giant amount of fire that starts coming out of the scroll. But he swiftly take control over it and forms it into a big dragon that extending and starts rushing towards the sensei's's clone. The dragon is very big and fast and he has no problems with controling its movements. The dragon succesfully gets to it's target and explodes on contact, making the clone vanish and also scatters flames all around the place where the imact was made.
 

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Excellent, that's the kind of quality jutsu performance I expect from you with every technique. Since you're already on S-Ranks, you will continue the rest of your training filling out the following template. Don't feel too concerned with making every template submission extremely detailed, some jutsus are more straight forward than others. However, for more unique and complex techniques, I expect a substantial level of detail. Also, don't be hesitant to ask questions about techniques. I remember when I was training, I'd sometimes avoid asking questions just so I could learn more techniques with my teacher's next post. I will always answer your questions and provide new techniques to learn, so if anything I encourage asking about things you want to know more about.

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[B]Combinations you could make with this jutsu[/B]:

[B]Ways to Counter[/B]: 

[B] Uses of this technique (Battle orientated and non-battle orientated)[/B]:

[B] Rate the technique out of ten[/B]:

[B] Questions about the technique (Optional)[/B]:
(Katon: Gōka Mekkyaku) - Fire release: Great Fire Majestic Annihilation
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: A technique where the user makes the horse hand seal and then kneads chakra inside his body which is then converted into fire and expelled from the mouth as a massive wall of intense flames, which covers an expansive range in both vertical and horizontal dimensions, making it extremely difficult to avoid.
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Alright, come over here, stand alongside me and face the vast forest before you. Perform the Horse handseal whilst kneading a large amount of superheated Katon chakra in your mouth before exhaling in the form of an intensive wall of large flames which covers both an extensive horizontal and vertical expanse. Attempt to incinerate just over half of the wooden landscape, reducing it to a barren field of ash.

Key Points: This is a large scale and very powerful technique. I'd prefer if you didn't become one of those who senselessly spam it like its easy to pull off, but then again its your choice. Furthermore, since it covers such a wide and high area, it will also block your vision of the opponent, leaving you relying on your sense of sound as well as almost obvlious to their next course of action. If you dont' have a way of sensing them, they could burrow underground and stealthily put an end to you.

(Katon: Gōka Messhitsu) - Fire Release: Great Fire Destruction
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: A technique where chakra kneaded inside the body is converted into fire, and then expelled from the mouth in a massive stream of intense flames. The technique has an enourmous range and can cover a huge area. When it was used by Madara Uchiha, the massive scale of the technique was such that, in comparisson, his incomplete Susanoo seemed small.

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Now turn your attention to other half of the forest, and replicate the same process chakra building process as before. This time, instead release the built Katon chakra as a massive stream of flames instead of a wall of flames, keeping the sheer scale of the jutsu on par with the one you performed previously.

Key Points: This jutsu is more or less the handsealess variant of the other, only the fire is released in a slightly different from. More or less the same comments as on the previous jutsu, use it responsibly.
 

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*performs the one needed hand seal; Horse*
While he's doing that, he starts inhailing and collecting Fire Release chakra in his lungs. He does this action very swiftly which is odd because the technique is S-ranked. But with all practice that he's had and the fact that his Katon training is very close to an end, he manages to do it. Then, he starts exhailing and extremely swiftly moving the massive chakra towards his mouth. Once that the chakra gets to the end of his mouth, he uses natural manipulation to make it into fire. This time, he uses most of his power to the natural manipulation because it's much more important here to create as much fire as you can then to shape it nicely. However, he does involve some shape manipulation mostly to direct the fire away from himself. He causes massive flames that are both wide in width and length. the heat and the power of the technique is so great that after he finishes doing it, everything in the range of his eyes is turned into ash.

Combinations you could make with this jutsu: The power of this technique itself is so great is so great and takes so much chakra that in practice, I wouldn't combine it with anything because I would still get an S-ranked attack and would unnecesarily spend chakra. But lets say I would be in a mood of spending chakra, I would use Wind Release: Tordado Wall to reate the Inferno itself. That is doable becaus eboth techniques can be done really fast. Most other wind technique aren't big enough to make anything to improve this technique.

Ways to Counter: This is not easy to counter at all. Having a water source and and Water Release mastery would help me a lot and then I'd be able to use techniques like Water Style: Giant Water Vortex Technique or if I have a clone already by my side Water Style: Typhoon Water Vortex. Another possibility is using Earth Release: Great Moving Earth Core to raise myslef into the air and have the opportunity to use attack that are better when you'r in the air.

Uses of this technique (Battle orientated and non-battle orientated): The technique's uses are very simple and obvious; a massive fire stream that can defeat almost everything in a short time and with performing only 1 hand seal. That is pretty boring and is the easiest solution for almost every attack. Although the technique is amazing in Narutoverse, here I don't plan to use it often. Due to this being strictly a technique to burn and destory, it has no non-battle orientated uses.

Rate the technique out of ten: I rate this technique with 8/10 because even though this technique is extremely powerful and has almost no disadvantages, it is very mainstream and it would be very non-cretaive of me to use it in a battle. Also, the enormous chakra that is needed and you create such a big stream and it's not usually needed for the stream to be as big especially while fighting against only one person.

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*turns around for 180° and ends up facing the other side of the forest*
He starts inhailing and gathering Fire Release chakra in his lungs. He does this action very with the usement of absolutely no hand seals which takes the whole chakra gathering to an even higher level. Then, he starts exhailing and extremely quickly moving the enormous chakra towards his gullet and beyond. Once that the chakra gets to the end of his mouth, he uses natural manipulation to make it into fire. He uses shape manipulation to direct the flames away from him but also this time, he uses more effort to make the technique a bit thinner in width but also longer in range, making it's power a directed in a bit better way. He also causes amazingly massive flames and the heat and the power of the technique still burns the whole other half of the woods.

Combinations you could make with this jutsu: Combinations with this technique are again not nesecarry because it's so massive that most wind techniques are not big enough to make any difference and I don't wanna combined it with an A-rank or S-rank technique because it would spend too much chakra. That's why I'd use this technique and the time my opponent needs to deal with it to perform a secret move and attack him/her when he/she is unprepared.

Ways to Counter: The counters are pretty much the same as for the last technique. Water source makes things here a lot easier. And S-rank technique; Water Release: Water Bullet Technique would be perfect for this could defeat even as powerful technique as this fire is.

Uses of this technique (Battle orientated and non-battle orientated): This technique is even better than the last one. Kishimoto removed even that one hand seal and even made the range bigger. (Well, in manga they're both long-ranged but still, this makes Madara's Susano'o tornado small). So yeah, it's again quite boring and can burn every summoning into ashes and makes it so hard to be dogded, same ast the last technique that it's makes it crazy. Aceppet "burn, kill, turn into ashes", no other uses.

Rate the technique out of ten: This is again for me 8/10. The extreme distructiveness and no hand seals made it 9 but also the horrible creativity and the simplicity of this technique made it an 7. So this is a golden middle. Darn, I miss the time when Naruto technique were real Ninjutsu and not God-like.

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Impressive, your mastery over Fire Release is almost complete. Should you perform my next few instructions correctly, you'll have learnt all I have to teach you.

(Katon Kuchiyose no Jutsu: Hitora Bakufu) - Fire Release Summoning Technique: Fire Tiger Explosion
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user summons a tiger made of flames from a scroll, directing it towards the target, and attaching itself onto the target and explode causing massive damage on detonation making it similar to a paper bomb.

Retrieve a scroll from your ninja pouch, similar to the one you utilized when you were training with Minato. Summon tiger composed of flames from the scroll and direct it towards that nearby tree. Before inflicting any damage, the spectral tiger should "attach" itself to the tree's trunk in a similar manner to how a paper tag functions before exploding into a massive maelstrom of fire.

Key Points: Of course, you'll have to have a scroll with you and at hand to use this jutsu. Retrieving the scroll and imbuing it with chakra makes this jutsu slightly slower compared to other Katon techniques.

(Katon: Fuuton Ken Katon Bakufuu no Jutsu) Fire Release: Wind and Fire Blast Technique
Rank: S
Type: Offense
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user after combining Fire Release: Intense pain and Wind Release: Pressure Damage at the same time. This creates a blast that is so intense that a standard water technique (ex : Water Release: Water Encampment Wall) can only at most soften of the impact. It was successsfully stopped by Yamato and Naruto's Typhoon water vortex.
Note: Can only be used either with a clone or with an ally

For your last technique, you will be learning my signature creation. Originally, this jutsu was performed by my Fire and Wind Masks, but i've adapted its use to extend to clones, summons and etc. Create a clone capable of utilizing the Fuuton affinity and instruct him to release a massive blast of air (Wind Release: Pressure Damage). Simultaneously, I'd like you to stand by his side and release a large fireball in the same direction as the wind, empowering it to a devastating extent to create a blast of fire on epic proportions.

Key Points:
1) You always need an ally to help you perform this technique, it can never be performed by one single entity.
2) This does not count as an elemental combo of Fire and Wind. Its an S-Rank Fire and behaves as one. That note which says water techniques can only "soften" the impact at most is an exaggeration. Like all jutsus, this follows NB's elemental strengths and weaknesses, meaning an A-Ranked Water technique will neutralize this technique and an S-Ranked one would overpower it.
3) Despite being the combination of two techniques, it counts as one technique. You do not have to post Pressure Damage or Intelligent Hardwork either.
 

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*grabs a scroll that he held on his back*
He unfolds it and puts it onto the ground in front of himsels and immediately starts gathering Fire Release chakra in his left palm. He collects a great amount of chakra because he's about to perform a very complicated technique by its rank. Once he's finishes, he quickly slams with his hand onto the scroll and at the same moment, he release the fire chakra that he's channeled into the scroll. With the help of his chakra, he summons a giant amount of fire. But he swiftly take control over it and forms it into a massive tiger that starts running towards a nearby tree. The tiger is very big and fast and he (the user) has an easy control over its movements. The tiger succesfully gets to its target and attaches itself to the tree and in the next moment, it explodes on destroying that tree and all of the trees that were close to it. The explosion also scatters flames all around the place.

Combinations you could make with this jutsu: Something came to my mind accidentally and I think it could be quite a tricky and cool move. Once I release the tiger and it manages to get close-range to my opponent somehow (I could even work it out with mid-range) and then my opponent would use water to defend as the most logical and mainstream way. Then, I would create a pillar in front of the tiger, by using a simple Earth Release Technique and make the tiger attack to it and explode. This might not always touch or hurt my opponent in any ways but will surely create an opponening for me, while he/she is stunned and his/her vision is blocked by the explosion.

Ways to Counter: It's not hard to defend from this, as long as you don't let it come too close to you. That's because the explosion that is created is pretty massive and if it explodes close to you, no matter if you pull out a Water Style: Water Encampment Wall that is right in front of you, it still might not be the perfect soulution. That's why it's important to get rid of the tiger by a water technique that is of a great rank and can create multiple waves os similar in front of the user to also make the agility of the tiger useless. I was thinking the S-rnak technique Water Release: Water Encampment Pillar.

Uses of this technique (Battle orientated and non-battle orientated): I would use it only if I would create a distraction for my opponent by performing a certain technique or making my opponent fall into a trap, to allow me to use the open the scroll properly. It could be only creating clone/s or doing a rather serious and complicated technique, all depending on my opponent skills. But I would definetely have to give myself proper amount of time. This is very risky, though, and I would probably avoid perfrming this technique.

Rate the technique out of ten: This technique gets a 6/10 from me because of the following; the technique's power is undoubtedly great and can cause massive damage but what makes an S-rank technique having suck a low number are the facts that it requires a scroll and thus takes a hell of a lot of time to be performed, the tiger has to attack to the target and the opponent has plenty of time to figure someting out before it comes to him/her. Oh, and I've almost forgoten, it's S-rank, that's at least 1 point less.

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*creates a clone that stands close to him*
He starts collecting Fire Release chakra in his lungs and at the same time, his clone starts gathering Wind Release chakra in the same place. When he finds the quantity of the chakra to be enough, he rapidly starts transfering the chakra towards his gullet and beyond. After a short time, the chakra gets to the end of his mouth. At the same moment when chakra gets there, he starts releasing the chakra out of his mouth. As soon as the chakra is leaving, he starts forming it into a small ball with a giant temeparure and distructiveness. While he's doing that, his clone finishes channeling chakra and starts transporting Wind Release chakra towards the end of it's mouth. At one moment, both he and the clone have the chakra ready to be released and the do create the techniques at the same time. He shot the previously mentioned ball and the clone shoots an amazingly powerful wide wind. Once that those two touch eachother after a short amount of time, they create a giant fire stream, one of the biggets that he has ever created or even seen. That fire blast destroys everything withing his range of sight.

Combinations you could make with this jutsu: I would definitely not combine this technique with anything that would mix with it because it's really not necesarry. The power of the technique is already S-rank and as the rules say, by adding as much of power to it as you can, it would still remain S-rnak. That's why some distraction earth techniques could serve well to be combined with this technique to allow oyu to properly perform it and possibly create a clone.

Ways to Counter: As you've said, no matter how powerful and how powerful the technique soulds and in reality should be, it is still an S-ranke dtechnique. Period. And that means that any water techniques of A-rank would defeat it in out RP. This is also one of the things that makes this technique a bit undesirable. I could use the classical Water Style: Water Encampment Wall, if I have water mastery and a water source, Water Style: Giant Water Vortex Technique, etc. (There's still Water Style: Typhoon Water Vortex, the counter used in the manga which has similar properties as this fire technique)

Uses of this technique (Battle orientated and non-battle orientated): The uses of this technique are; kill, destroy, burn to ash. It is a technique that would destroy anything on it's way in many cases and that's really mainstream. It would be a noobish move to use this technique for real but it would also be cool to use it against someone whose attack was really straightforward to to mock him/her in a way. In Naruto it would be battle-winning, here it's "I have no idea what to do, let's use this already made combo to spam"

Rate the technique out of ten: I give this technique a 8/10. This is alongside the two Gokka's, the most powerful Fire Release techniquea and one of the post powerful techniques at all. But unfortunately it has a big diadvantage that two of those don't have, it requires an ally or a clone to be created. Now, this doesn't have to be a disadvantage all the time because sometimes you don't have to create a clone afterwards but you already have it. Still, this makes it a bit unnatractive and combined with it being S-rank, it results in the mentioned grade.

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