('Paperwork'? That's a nice way to put it xD)
Aigis snapped out of her flashback and saw Itachi had finished the techniques.
"You don't like hitting pretty girls? Well, Itachi-san, you'll have to be able to do so eventually, or else you'll be killed by them!" she teased him a little, giggling ever so slightly.
(-Sach-, when performing free-form Kenjutsu or Taijutsu, you must be VERY descriptive and specific or your opponent will take advantage of your descriptions. Let's take a quick look at what you wrote:
1. "Powerful Slashes", ok, this is good, but where are you hitting my clone? Her chest? Her lower body? Which direction are you cutting from? Left? Right?
Here is how I would have worded it if I was attacking you instead:
"For your question about the second technique, you can time the jutsu to hit your opponent while they're in midair or travelling towards you. For example, if the opponent is trying to maneuver in mid-air, you can use the second jutsu and shoot it in front of them, so they will hit the flaming column."
"Excellent! Congratulations on completing the B-ranks! We're almost there, now for the A-ranks! These jutsus are quite powerful and useful, so use them wisely."
"For the first one, perform the hand seals Rat → Dog → Tiger and exhale a small fireball. Looks can be deceiving, though. Once this fireball makes contact with a surface, it will explode and erupt into a gigantic fire-storm, trapping everything and burning everything that's caught in the area. It's widespread, strong, and when combined with Wind techniques, it can even evaporate water.
"After that, stomp on the ground after molding your fire chakra and create a tunnel that runs between you and me across the ground. Then, you will breathe a stream of fire into the tunnel, turning what's inside it into molten rock, almost like lava. Once that's done, you will perform one hand seal, and the lava will erupt from the tunnel, creating something like a explosion that will overwhelm and engulf opponents."
"This jutsu requires a lot of setup, but the range and damage is amazing."
Aigis snapped out of her flashback and saw Itachi had finished the techniques.
"You don't like hitting pretty girls? Well, Itachi-san, you'll have to be able to do so eventually, or else you'll be killed by them!" she teased him a little, giggling ever so slightly.
(-Sach-, when performing free-form Kenjutsu or Taijutsu, you must be VERY descriptive and specific or your opponent will take advantage of your descriptions. Let's take a quick look at what you wrote:
The first part is good. But for the second part, I have a few tips:Itachi first takes his kenjutsu stance by keeping his left leg in front of him and pivoting his weight on it. He then quickly runs towards Algis clone jump into the air, and attacks her clone by delivering some powerful slashes.
1. "Powerful Slashes", ok, this is good, but where are you hitting my clone? Her chest? Her lower body? Which direction are you cutting from? Left? Right?
Here is how I would have worded it if I was attacking you instead:
Bascially, description is key. Since we're just training, I'll let it slide, but keep these tips in mind.)Aigis ran up to Itachi in a quick dash, her katana held in her right hand. Her first strike begins from Itachi's left hip, as Aigis slashes the sword upward, from Itachi's left hip to his right shoulder, leaving a deep cut across his body. Aigis repeats this motion, except this time, using the momentum gained from the first slash to reverse it, now cutting from Itachi's RIGHT hip to his left shoulder. This creates an "X" mark on the Uchiha's chest.
"For your question about the second technique, you can time the jutsu to hit your opponent while they're in midair or travelling towards you. For example, if the opponent is trying to maneuver in mid-air, you can use the second jutsu and shoot it in front of them, so they will hit the flaming column."
"Excellent! Congratulations on completing the B-ranks! We're almost there, now for the A-ranks! These jutsus are quite powerful and useful, so use them wisely."
"For the first one, perform the hand seals Rat → Dog → Tiger and exhale a small fireball. Looks can be deceiving, though. Once this fireball makes contact with a surface, it will explode and erupt into a gigantic fire-storm, trapping everything and burning everything that's caught in the area. It's widespread, strong, and when combined with Wind techniques, it can even evaporate water.
(Katon: Zukokku) - Fire Release: Intelligent Hard Work
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user after performing the required hand seals Rat → Dog → Tiger fires a small fireball that erupts into a giant fire-storm after making contact with a surface, causing widespread destruction to the area. Since the flames travel along the ground, and cover such a wide area this is a difficult technique to evade. When combined with Wind Release: Pressure Damage, this technique is amplified to the point of being able to evaporate a large amount of water in an instant.
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user after performing the required hand seals Rat → Dog → Tiger fires a small fireball that erupts into a giant fire-storm after making contact with a surface, causing widespread destruction to the area. Since the flames travel along the ground, and cover such a wide area this is a difficult technique to evade. When combined with Wind Release: Pressure Damage, this technique is amplified to the point of being able to evaporate a large amount of water in an instant.
"After that, stomp on the ground after molding your fire chakra and create a tunnel that runs between you and me across the ground. Then, you will breathe a stream of fire into the tunnel, turning what's inside it into molten rock, almost like lava. Once that's done, you will perform one hand seal, and the lava will erupt from the tunnel, creating something like a explosion that will overwhelm and engulf opponents."
"This jutsu requires a lot of setup, but the range and damage is amazing."
(Katon: Keshi Makuga Hara) - Fire Release: Exploding Flame Crater
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user first stomps on the ground, using his fire chakra and making an underground tunnel from between themselves and the opponent. They then breathe out fire into the tunnel, causing the fire carry rock and other debris with it as it travels, melting them. With a single hand seal, the molten rock debris will erupt from the ground underneath the opponent, engulfing them and burning them alive.
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user first stomps on the ground, using his fire chakra and making an underground tunnel from between themselves and the opponent. They then breathe out fire into the tunnel, causing the fire carry rock and other debris with it as it travels, melting them. With a single hand seal, the molten rock debris will erupt from the ground underneath the opponent, engulfing them and burning them alive.