Fire & Ice - 1
KarinxSuigetsu? I've never done romance before. I don't have a plot in mind. Tell me if you have any ideas.
Her feet padded lightly with each jump, as her figure leaped from branch to branch, passing through countless towering trees within the thick forest. She glanced at her two comrades on each side of her, who were not too far away. Then she looked towards the figure in front of her.
Her Knight.
Although all four of them were clad in identical black cloaks and were travelling the same direction, he was different from the rest. He gave off a different feeling; a quiet, powerful, tense aura. She could sense it; she was a special chakra sensor after all.
Her heart fluttered at the determined expression in her vision that she knew must be adorned on his handsome face at this very moment.
He’s doing a noble thing, She thought. Avenging the death of his loved ones. Restoring the family honor.
And she was going to help him. They all were; Her, Suigetsu, and Juugo. They all shared a unique connection with him, and the each of them were desperately clinging to it. But she knew her connection with him was different than the rest. It was on an entirely different level.
She loved him.
And after his task, I’m going to follow him. I’ll always be there to help him, and perhaps we’ll…
She blushed furiously and grinned at the flow of her thoughts. Yes, following Sasuke was the right thing to do.
Suigetsu was bored. Sure, hunting down Akatsuki’s Uchiha Itachi would get him closer to obtaining Samehada, but it was taking much too long. He leaped from branch to branch, branch to branch, branch to branch…it was getting dull. He needed something to test his sword on.
He glanced to his left at Karin. Then he did a double take. Her face was red, and she was grinning about something. It was an evil grin. Weird. He followed her gaze.
Sasuke? He thought, confused. Is she going to do something to him?
“Karin, why are you staring at Sasuke?” He asked curiously. “And why’s your face red? And why are you smilin-“
All of a sudden, there was a blur of motion and he felt a sharp pain on his head. “Ouch!” he winced. Karin had thrown a rock at him.
“What do you mean, Suigetsu! I’m not doing anything!” She called back angrily. Her eyes flashed a warning, and her face looked tense.
Suigestu confusedly rubbed his head. What did I do?
Karin’s face was flushed again, but this time it was in anger. She resolutely pushed her glasses further up her nose. There was a dangerous gleam in her eyes.
Baka Suigetsu! Your days are numbered!
So how was it? I've never done this before, just experimenting. Tell me if you have any ideas, I have nothing in mind.
This sentence, I was confused about the grammar: "She glanced at her two comrades on each side of her, who were not too far away." does this mean that there are two on either side, or two people, one on each side? I hope you knew what I meant though. -.-
Oh, and just in-case: "Blushing furiously" means blushing a lot, not blushing angrily. lol.
KarinxSuigetsu? I've never done romance before. I don't have a plot in mind. Tell me if you have any ideas.
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Caught
Her feet padded lightly with each jump, as her figure leaped from branch to branch, passing through countless towering trees within the thick forest. She glanced at her two comrades on each side of her, who were not too far away. Then she looked towards the figure in front of her.
Her Knight.
Although all four of them were clad in identical black cloaks and were travelling the same direction, he was different from the rest. He gave off a different feeling; a quiet, powerful, tense aura. She could sense it; she was a special chakra sensor after all.
Her heart fluttered at the determined expression in her vision that she knew must be adorned on his handsome face at this very moment.
He’s doing a noble thing, She thought. Avenging the death of his loved ones. Restoring the family honor.
And she was going to help him. They all were; Her, Suigetsu, and Juugo. They all shared a unique connection with him, and the each of them were desperately clinging to it. But she knew her connection with him was different than the rest. It was on an entirely different level.
She loved him.
And after his task, I’m going to follow him. I’ll always be there to help him, and perhaps we’ll…
She blushed furiously and grinned at the flow of her thoughts. Yes, following Sasuke was the right thing to do.
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Suigetsu was bored. Sure, hunting down Akatsuki’s Uchiha Itachi would get him closer to obtaining Samehada, but it was taking much too long. He leaped from branch to branch, branch to branch, branch to branch…it was getting dull. He needed something to test his sword on.
He glanced to his left at Karin. Then he did a double take. Her face was red, and she was grinning about something. It was an evil grin. Weird. He followed her gaze.
Sasuke? He thought, confused. Is she going to do something to him?
“Karin, why are you staring at Sasuke?” He asked curiously. “And why’s your face red? And why are you smilin-“
All of a sudden, there was a blur of motion and he felt a sharp pain on his head. “Ouch!” he winced. Karin had thrown a rock at him.
“What do you mean, Suigetsu! I’m not doing anything!” She called back angrily. Her eyes flashed a warning, and her face looked tense.
Suigestu confusedly rubbed his head. What did I do?
*
Karin’s face was flushed again, but this time it was in anger. She resolutely pushed her glasses further up her nose. There was a dangerous gleam in her eyes.
Baka Suigetsu! Your days are numbered!
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So how was it? I've never done this before, just experimenting. Tell me if you have any ideas, I have nothing in mind.
This sentence, I was confused about the grammar: "She glanced at her two comrades on each side of her, who were not too far away." does this mean that there are two on either side, or two people, one on each side? I hope you knew what I meant though. -.-
Oh, and just in-case: "Blushing furiously" means blushing a lot, not blushing angrily. lol.
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