Finishing Storm with Nathan
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Okay; You and I both know how storm works, so all I want you to do is re-perform this technique. Using my template.
(Ranton: Raiunkōha) - Storm Release: Thunder Cloud Inner Wave
Rank: A
Type: Offensive/ Defensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: After performing the required hand seals the user uses Storm Release to generate a thick ring of thunderclouds and electricity around him, creating an offensive and defensive ward. He can then uses these clouds to fire powerful blasts of lightning at his enemies, and as an electrified perimeter; effectively preventing his enemies from getting close. But a wind elemental technique can blow the clouds away.
Note: Cloud of rings lasts 2 turns
I may as well explain it in my own words, with this I want you to perform the hand seals, and then gather your storm chakra up to create a thick ring of thunderclouds, this is the version that has water then lighting in the mix. This technique acts as a defence, it keeps target from getting in close from you, and this technique also can fire blasts of lighting towards your target, sort a two birds one stone kind of thing.
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[CODE][B]One/three advantages (no obvious ones, be creative):[/B]
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[B]How you would use it in battle:[/B]
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[B]How you perform it (with as much detail as you can):[/B][/CODE]Rank: A
Type: Offensive/ Defensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: After performing the required hand seals the user uses Storm Release to generate a thick ring of thunderclouds and electricity around him, creating an offensive and defensive ward. He can then uses these clouds to fire powerful blasts of lightning at his enemies, and as an electrified perimeter; effectively preventing his enemies from getting close. But a wind elemental technique can blow the clouds away.
Note: Cloud of rings lasts 2 turns
I may as well explain it in my own words, with this I want you to perform the hand seals, and then gather your storm chakra up to create a thick ring of thunderclouds, this is the version that has water then lighting in the mix. This technique acts as a defence, it keeps target from getting in close from you, and this technique also can fire blasts of lighting towards your target, sort a two birds one stone kind of thing.
One/three advantages (no obvious ones, be creative):
How you would counter it: I would ideally use either Pressure Damage to blow the clouds away or Great Fire Flame Pillars.
How you perform it (with as much detail as you can):
I concentrate my chakra and perform the necessary hand seals as I spread my suiton chakra around me and condense it slowly to form clouds around myself. I then manipulate the clouds whilst adding raiton chakra into it slowly electrifying them and making them larger as I mix the two elements whilst maintaining a steady ratio for both. As I condense my ranton chakra the clouds are now large thunderclouds which hover around me and I concentrate the electricity in one area before releasing it in the form of a lightning bolt which hits a nearby tree.
- 1. This technique is both offensive and defensive as it stops enemies from coming in whilst also being able to attack them with electricity at the same time.
- 2. Because of the electricity coursing around the clouds any objects already within the perimeter of the clouds will be electrocuted.
- 1. Enemies can still attack from underground.
- 2. Wind jutsus can be used to blow the clouds away.
- 3. Can partially obstruct sight
How you would counter it: I would ideally use either Pressure Damage to blow the clouds away or Great Fire Flame Pillars.
How you perform it (with as much detail as you can):
I concentrate my chakra and perform the necessary hand seals as I spread my suiton chakra around me and condense it slowly to form clouds around myself. I then manipulate the clouds whilst adding raiton chakra into it slowly electrifying them and making them larger as I mix the two elements whilst maintaining a steady ratio for both. As I condense my ranton chakra the clouds are now large thunderclouds which hover around me and I concentrate the electricity in one area before releasing it in the form of a lightning bolt which hits a nearby tree.
Well done.
(Ranton Ougi: Rankiryuu) Storm Release Ultimate Technique: Turbulance
Type: Offensive
Rank: S-Rank
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description:
After doing a sequence of 4 handseals (Rat→Dragon→Hare→Tiger) the user releases a burst of red chakra in the form of a gigantic collumn of energy that rises high into the atmosphere above him. As soon as he does so, huge cold thunderclouds gather and swirl around and above the user, covering the whole battle field. As the pitch black thunderclouds gather high above the user, the whole atmosphere becomes charged with static energy. After some time, having gathered enough thunderclouds and lightning energy, the whole energy is unleashed upon the ground descending in the form of a collum of energy (similar to the one initially triggered). As it touches the ground around the user, the collumn explands outwards, taking advantage of the moisture in the air to travel up to long range, hitting everything while clearing the skies in the process. The energy destroys anything in its wake, leaving nothing but an empty wasteland behind. Because of the massive range and chakra needed to perform this technique, the user can only make use of it a limited amount of times.
Note: Usable only twice per battle.
Note: Takes one full turn to charge completely.
With this one, it takes a full turn to form. Perform the seals, and release a burst of storm chakra that has a red tint to it in front of you, then use shape manipulation on it to form a large column that you then will rise high into the sky. Then after that is done, clouds will surround the red column when one turn passes by the column should have gathered enough lighting and dark thunderclouds. This will then crash down to earth completely levelling the whole area. The range and power on this is massive and very good, waiting one turn to use is, a downer. But for something so powerful I can understand why they need to place it there.
(Ranton Ougi: Rankiryuu) Storm Release Ultimate Technique: Turbulance
Type: Offensive
Rank: S-Rank
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 40
Damage: 80
Description:
After doing a sequence of 4 handseals (Rat→Dragon→Hare→Tiger) the user releases a burst of red chakra in the form of a gigantic collumn of energy that rises high into the atmosphere above him. As soon as he does so, huge cold thunderclouds gather and swirl around and above the user, covering the whole battle field. As the pitch black thunderclouds gather high above the user, the whole atmosphere becomes charged with static energy. After some time, having gathered enough thunderclouds and lightning energy, the whole energy is unleashed upon the ground descending in the form of a collum of energy (similar to the one initially triggered). As it touches the ground around the user, the collumn explands outwards, taking advantage of the moisture in the air to travel up to long range, hitting everything while clearing the skies in the process. The energy destroys anything in its wake, leaving nothing but an empty wasteland behind. Because of the massive range and chakra needed to perform this technique, the user can only make use of it a limited amount of times.
Note: Usable only twice per battle.
Note: Takes one full turn to charge completely.
With this one, it takes a full turn to form. Perform the seals, and release a burst of storm chakra that has a red tint to it in front of you, then use shape manipulation on it to form a large column that you then will rise high into the sky. Then after that is done, clouds will surround the red column when one turn passes by the column should have gathered enough lighting and dark thunderclouds. This will then crash down to earth completely levelling the whole area. The range and power on this is massive and very good, waiting one turn to use is, a downer. But for something so powerful I can understand why they need to place it there.
One/three advantages (no obvious ones, be creative):
I would use this battle whilst my opponent is either ensnared or trapped in a genjutsu or paralyzed as I would have the time to to prepare the technique.
How you would counter it:
I would counter it with a quick jutsu such as arrow step to incapacitate the opponent before they can gather enough chakra for this jutsu.
How you perform it (with as much detail as you can):
I perform the Rat→Dragon→Hare→Tiger hand seals whilst spreading my ranton chakra out in front of me and altering it so that it has a slight red shade as I make it take the form of column. I then manipulate the column steadily making it lengthen until it reaches the skies and then using my ranton chakra I make thunderclouds surround the column and I wait a few minutes for the clouds to accumulate. Once there are enough thunderclouds around the column I concentrate a great amount of chakra and make the column quickly come crashing down to earth completely leveling the surrounding area.
- 1. It is incredibly powerful and is an instant kill.
- 2. Could counter any gathering thunderclouds being used for Kirin.
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- 1. It takes a turn to form.
- 2. The opponent can easily interrupt the jutsu while the pillar is being formed or in the 1 turn wait period
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I would use this battle whilst my opponent is either ensnared or trapped in a genjutsu or paralyzed as I would have the time to to prepare the technique.
How you would counter it:
I would counter it with a quick jutsu such as arrow step to incapacitate the opponent before they can gather enough chakra for this jutsu.
How you perform it (with as much detail as you can):
I perform the Rat→Dragon→Hare→Tiger hand seals whilst spreading my ranton chakra out in front of me and altering it so that it has a slight red shade as I make it take the form of column. I then manipulate the column steadily making it lengthen until it reaches the skies and then using my ranton chakra I make thunderclouds surround the column and I wait a few minutes for the clouds to accumulate. Once there are enough thunderclouds around the column I concentrate a great amount of chakra and make the column quickly come crashing down to earth completely leveling the surrounding area.
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