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thanks a lot senpai
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Yes... not sure where to start with this one...

You can only learn up so A-rank for your current rank, just so you know.

We are going to do these last jutsu again as I am NOT happy with the method used to learn them.

Perform the Ox β†’ Rabbit β†’ Monkey β†’ Dragon β†’ Rat β†’ Bird β†’ Ox β†’ Snake β†’ Dog β†’ Tiger β†’ Monkey hand seal as you gather lightning chakra into your preferred hand. Use it to form a ball of lightning in your hand, brimming with lightning so that it makes an chirping electric noise as it emits small bolt from every direction. Be sure to contain as much of the lightning as you can in your hand as by the nature of lightning, it wants to spread out a lot. The thrust it into the large boulder before you, shaping the lighting ball at the last minute to mould around your hand so you can pierce through it.

Describe the impact to me.
 

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Yeah, I didn't like how it was rushed through either but I had no right to say anything...
- Preforming the required 11 hand seals then I channel my lightning chakra all into my left hand molding it. As it develops, the electricity begins to hum and make a chirping noise and it vibrates my hand making it feel a little numb. Then I run at your clone at high speed and in one single motion, I thrust my hand into the boulder causing it to crumble upon impact from the condensed strong lightning in my hand-
 

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Describe what happens between the rock and the chidori on impact.
 

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Well Senpai what happens right on impact is that a hole is formed where the chidori hits, then very quickly cracks run throughout the rock causing it to crumble into multiple smaller rocks.
 

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I'll accept that, try to include as much detail as possible in the future please! ^_^

(Raiton: Chidori) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user must first perform the following sequence of hand seals Ox β†’ Rabbit β†’ Monkey β†’ Dragon β†’ Rat β†’ Bird β†’ Ox β†’ Snake β†’ Dog β†’ Tiger β†’ Monkey and they create a lightning jutsu that is concentrated in the user's palm and thrusted toward the opponent at high speed. The lightning in the user's palm sounds like birds chirping, hence the name.
Note: Someone who mastered lightning release can perform chidori with just the Ox hand seal.

Keeping in mind the same paralysing abilities of the chidori, as well as the electic-chirping sound, I want you to channel a chidori based lightning current all around your body at the same moment my Clone attempts to tackle you. This should shock him and cause him to collapse to the ground, paralysed by the current.
 

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- Now just like before, I channel all of of my lightning chakra but instead of focusing it in my hand, I channel it throughout all of my body making not as focused. I brace myself as your clone runs at me but I notice that as he tries to punch me on the face, the lightning current stops him from touching me and it spreads to his body causing your clone to be paralyzed and to disperse-
 

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Not focused just means that it is not located in on singular point, as this is spread all over your body. It doesn't work like lightning armour as your description suggested to me. Nagashi is a brief and very quick jutsu to execute.

Try again keeping this in mind.
 

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- Okay so it's brief, and not focused doesn't mean that it's not as strong right?
Then this time, I wait for your clone to make his move while I prepare lightning chakra. As your clone throws a punch at me, even though the timing was hard to get, I manage to channel it just in time to electrocute your clone paralyzing it and to fall down.-
 

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Much better.

Now, as this jutsu is very easily abused I shall go through with you some facets of it.

I use an earth jutsu to cause earth spikes to rise from the ground around you in an attempt to skewer you (The c-rank version). You then use Nagashi to counter them, what happens to the rock spikes?
 

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I can finally make an Uchiha bio :overjoy:

Well since Raiton is superior to Doton and Nagashi is A rank and the spikes are C Rank, then the spikes should easily break into many small pebbles right senpai?
 
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Well you reasoning is correct but wrong for the case of Nagashi.

Nagashi is only strong enough to nullify the chakra in the earth jutsu, not destroy the earth structure. So as the spikes are attempting to stab you, the nagashi will cause them to stop growing as there is no chakra in them any more and may even cause the spikes to retract.

Do you understand this?
 

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Yes I understand, so using Nagashi in that situation, then I can use it not to break the spikes but to stop it from growing so I can get out of the way.
 

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Correct!

Now, as you may or may not know Nagashi can be used in one of two ways: As a full body current that only hits people who are basically touching you; or it can be channelled along the ground to paralyse an opponent standing in mid-range to you.

I cannot stress enough that you can only do ONE of these two item per use of Nagashi.

Does that make sense?
 

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Yeah I get it, if I were to use both of those variations, then it would be 2 different usages of nagashi and be counted as 2 moves in the spar.
 

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Indeed, very good. It also genjutsu release applications in that it can release genjutsu up to b-rank.

Sorry that took a while to get through but it is an important issue that needs to be shared with everyone.

(Raiton: Chidori Nagashi) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds Current
Rank: A
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: This jutsu allows the user to generate non-focused electrically charged chakra from their body. Because the electricity isn't focused, it doesn't kill on contact, instead it only paralyzes. The lightning can be channelled through metal objects, as well as spread out into the air or ground.

Now, a quick break from Chidori!

After performing some hand seals (aren't specified) I want you to build up a large amount of chakra in your hands as you place them on the ground. Use your charka to release a massive, triangular shaped bolt of lightning that rips through the ground to obliterate my clone. A substantial amount of heat should also be generated by the lightning bolt, scorching the ground as it travels along.
 

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- No problem senpai detailed is good ^_^
I channel my lightning chakra into both of my hands. Then I slam them close to each other onto the ground creating a Triangular Lightning Bolt that rips through the ground in a snake like motion towards your clone. The heat of the bolt leaves scorch marks on the path that it travels like a car tire. As soon as it hits your clone, it obliterates him zaps him-
 

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Excellent!

Now, back to chidori!

(Raiton: Ikazuchi Hakai) – Lightning Release: Lightning Destruction
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: After performing a small sequence of hand seals the user will place their hand on the ground converting their chakra in to lightning. The user then sends an enormous bolt of electricity that cuts through the ground in the direction of the enemy. The shape of the bolt is a triangular with the base in the direction of the user and the tip headed towards the target. It causes devastating destruction on its way and generates enough heat and power to destroy whatever it comes into contact with.


Create a chidori in your preferred hand and then point it at my clone. You will then shape some of the lightning bolts into thin needles and shoot them at my clone, paralysing him on contact. Describe where you hit him with the needles.
 

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-Chidori Senbon eh? Lol
I charge up a chidori in my left hand, then mold the lightning into small needle like shapes making a whole lot. Now this jutsu is very effective if I hit a wide area so I swing my hand in an arc sending the needles towards your clone hitting him in the torso, arms, and legs because of the way I swing my hand causing him to be paralyzed.-
 

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Yep, chidori senbon. Remember that is basically still a chidori so it makes the same noises and what not...

(Raiton: Chidori Senbon) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds Needle
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user reshapes the Chidori in their hand into the form of countless senbon. It has more specialized speed than the normal Chidori and can cause damage throughout multiple places on the body. Although it’s not stated, this technique probably takes on Chidori's characteristics such as its ability to cut through almost anything and numb parts of the body.


Gather a huge amount of lightning chakra into your hand, containing it into something about the size of a basketball. Then run up to my clone and slam it into his face, overloading the ball to cause a massive explosion directed in its entirety at my clone.
 
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