Finishing Lightning

[Byakuya K]

Why does this sound a little familiar?
-I gather my lightning chakra into my left hand in the shape of a large orb. I then run at your clone and as I slam the orb of chakra into his face, I can feel the overwhelming chakra overload causing the orb to explode upon impact sending your clone 5 meters back into a tree and dispersing.-

 

[Shinta]

Well, a lot seem to be upgraded versions of themselves... so we are bound to run in to similar jutsu. ^^

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(Raiton: Sanda Appu) – Lightning Release: Thunder Up
Rank: A
Type: Offence
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user concentrates a lot of lightning chakra into their hand and compressing it into a ball of energy and then releases it at once, causing a huge explosion.

Okay, so this is a toughie... maybe... >_>

Charge your raiton chakra, focusing it into the ground under my clone over there. *Points at my clone* Then perform the Rat → Monkey → Horse → Tiger to release the stored chakra into a juiced up version of Four Pillar bind, mulitplying the power of Four Pillar bind by Four... also creating four times the number of pillars, manipulating them so they form a nice little oven around my clone. No lightning shock him either... the lightning just moves the pillars into place!

I'm sure you know the two jutsu commonly used in combination with this?

 

[Byakuya K]

The oven technique with the fire jutsu. This is the 16 pillar bind.
-I channel and charge my lightning chakra into my hands, then holding them out, I direct and shoot out the visible chakra into 16 bars of lightning towards your clone surrounding it. With a little manipulation, I reform it into a cube shaped cell around your clone trapping him in it unable to get out. Then to juice things up, I shoot out a fire ball at the cell burning your clone inside of it thus the Oven name.-

 

[Shinta]

Fire ball wont deliver a nice continuous source of heat, a fire steam technique though would have done nicely.

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(Raiton: Jūrokuchū Shibari) – Lightning Release: Sixteen-Pillar Bind
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: After performing the needed hand seals Rat → Monkey → Horse → Tiger the user will create a even more powerful version of lightning release: four pillar bind, the user creates sixteen giant pillars, which then form a giant oven to trap the enemy. It is often used after Earth Release: Mud Fall to cover the enemy target in mud and then follow up with using Fire release: Firing Biscuit, creating flames in the oven to roast and harden the mud, immobilizing the enemy.

Back to the chidori!

Create a chidori in your hand and then extend it to take on the shape of an elongated sword, aiming to pierce my clone standing just outside short range of you. Tell me where you pierce him while also remembering to describe the numbing effects on my clone.

 

[Byakuya K]

- I stand directly across from your clone about 7 meters away. I charge a chidori in my left hand and concentrating it and molding it. In a single motion, I exert the lightning chakra while still keeping it in shape, I extend the chidori from my hand in a form of a spear piercing him in the chest spreading the electricity from the chest everywhere.-

 

[Shinta]

So this can only reach up to 10 meters at max.

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(Raiton: Chidori Eiso) - Lightning Release Chidori Sharp Spear
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user increases the range of their Chidori by using form manipulation to extend it into a blade up to 10 meters in length. This blade is capable of splitting into multiple additional blades upon contact with an enemy, drastically increasing the number of wounds it can inflict. Like other Chidori-related techniques, this jutsu will numb its target upon contact.

Release your lightning charkra out around you and make it spin around you, creating a spinning vortex of wind and lightning. Shape the front of the spinning vortex into a dragon's head, reaching out to eat my clone in front of you. Make sure the lightning is chaotic enough that is jumps out from the vortex to strike nearby objects (within short range of you).

 

[Byakuya K]

-I channel my lightning chakra and release from everywhere in my body, making a vortex of chakra and electricity crackling around me. As I the chakra is able to finish forming and spinning, I mold the chakra in front of me into the shape of a dragon's head. I send it towards your clone at a very fast speed carving a path in the earth as it travels and hits your clone burning it to a crisp.-

 

[Shinta]

My clone! You can mention the random lightning bolts that might shoot off... you know... for dramatic effect! xd

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(Raiton: Rairyu no Tatsumaki) - Lightning Release: Thunder Dragon Tornado
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user forms a whirling vortex of wind and electricity around themselves. The vortex will take on the form of a dragon’s head and will cover the area in front of them. Even if the attack doesn't directly connect with his foe, the lightning can jump from the vortex to hit a nearby target.

Perform three-four punches and/or kicks to my clone (describe what you do) finishing with a powerful punch or kick that sends him air borne, turning his back to you in the process. Then leap up after him and slam a chidori into his back.

 

[Byakuya K]

-I run towards your clone at a very fast pace in front of him. As I reach your clone, I use the momentum of my speed to punch him in the gut once, forcing him to bend over. Then as he does so, I lower myself kicking him square in the jaw like rock lee as he prepares for the lotus sending him flying up into the air about 10 meters. As that happens, I jump above him to knock him downwards with an elbow (so if he were to land right now, it would be face down) then I charge and slam a chidori into his back sending him quickly into the ground dispersing.-

 

[Shinta]

O__O' Good, remember that you can still do some major damage with the punches and kicks... 'cause you know... people can survive a chidori in the back occasionally.

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(Chidori Kireme) - One thousand Birds Breaker
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user will deliver several punches and kicks to the opponent sending them into the air where the user will then strike a Chidori into their back.

This time you'll use a sword (You may borrow mine) using it to slash upwards at my clone to send him airborne. The you'll leap up after him, so that you are looking down on him. Create a chidori in your free hand, plunging it deep into my clones chest, then falling to the ground with my clone so that you land on him with the chidori still in him.

 

[Byakuya K]

- I take your sword while running then once I reach your clone, I use both hands to do a vertical slash upwards slicing him open sending him upwards into the air. I then leap up after him charging a chidori in my left hand plunging it into his heart while still pushing him down causing him to land very hard. After your clone lands, I twist my hand causing his heart to twist making him disperse.-

 

[Shinta]

Very nice.

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(Chidori Tokkan) - One Thousand Birds Rush
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user will first strike the target with a slash from their sword hitting them into the air and then as they begin to land the user will drive them into the ground with a Chidori.

So once again, slash at my clone to send him airborne, then jump up after him as you re-sheath your sword. Perform a series of punches and kick (be descriptive, two-three punches and kicks), then push of him to keep him airborne and to propel you to the ground. You should position yourself under him as you land with one of your arms pointed up to catch him. Have a chidori formed in the hand you catch my clone on, then let him fall off your arm onto the ground before your feet.

Catch him like this:

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[Byakuya K]

-I take your sword and run at your clone, then using the momentum of my speed, I slash upwards at your clone sending him flying up. After re sheathing the sword, I leap up from under him punching him on the chest then axe kick him downwards making him spit up blood, but I go under him, put both of my hands on his back pushing causing him to go back up and myself to go down. As I land, I charge a chidori in my left hand and raise it up as your clone lands right on my left land making it disperse.-

 

[Shinta]

Very good O__O'

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(Raiton: Raikō Shishi Rendan) - Lightning Release: Lightning Flash Lion Combo
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user knocks the enemy into the air with thier Sword and jumps at them quickly after. They then proceeds to punch and kick the opponent while still in mid-air. After their combo, the user ducks to the floor, just underneath the opponent. As the opponent reaches him, the user strikes the falling opponent in the back with his Chidori, and then lets the helpless victim falls off.

Now I want you to try and create huge thunderclouds using your lightning chakra, creating a sizable storm, brimming with lightning. Then use your lightning chakra to direct a lightning bolt down to hit all three of my clones.

 

[Byakuya K]

-I raise up my left hand channeling my lightning chakra in to the sky making thunderstorm, gathering around the clones. I then gather all of the lightning into an area. After one motion of lowering my hand, I bring down a huge lightning bolt destroying and incinerating your clones leaving a massive crater.-

 

[Shinta]

You're almost S-class... that means I'll be able to teach you S-ranks.

Don't be afraid to send several bolts down, add to the intimidation factor!

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( Raiton: Raiun ) - Lightning Release: Thundercloud
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user generates a cloud above the battlefield kneaded with their chakra and then cause a series of lightning bolts to rain down upon the battlefield causing severe damage.

The more I look at this, the more I like it...

Release several orbs of condensed lightning chakra out into the air, surrounding my clone. Then cause them to discharge a current of lightning between each other, shocking my clone and anything else that comes into contact with them.

 

[Byakuya K]

Oh lol this is almost like hell zone grenade.
-I raise both of my hands up towards the sky about 45 degrees. Then I gather and mold lightning chakra into sphere like shapes. As I finish I launch them up in the air above your clone scattering to surround it giving it no route to escape. Then the orbs activate and electrocute your clone giving off a discharge zapping your clone to dust -

 

[Shinta]

Looks like you can learn S-rank jutsu now. xd

Very good.

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( Raiton: Denko Sekka ) – Lightning Release: Lightning Mineralization
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user creates several large electrical balls of energy spread out around them and then causes electrical currents of lightning that spreads out on a vast area shocking any enemy target in the vicinity by connecting with the orbs.

Charge your hands with lightning chakra as you perform the Ram hand seal, then point one of your hands at my clone and release a concentrated bolt of lightning at him.

 

[Byakuya K]

-I clap my hands together gathering lightning chakra into both of my hands. Then, once there is an adequate amount, I channel all of that lightning into my left hand, raising it towards your clone's torso shooting a concentrated bolt of lightning straight through his chest.-

 

[Shinta]

Don't forget to mention you performed the Ram hand seal.

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(Raiton: Gian) - Lightning Style: False Darkness
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Descripton: The user after performing the hand seal snake emits lightning in the shape of a spear from their hands whilst kakuzu lightning mask emits it from its mouth, which then pierces the enemy. Its destructive power is great enough to even pierce through rock; meaning it has a high killing potential. The user can increase the number of spears to attack multiple enemies. This, coupled with the sheer speed of the lightning, makes it a difficult technique to evade. This strong attack can be defended against by an equally strong attack of the same element such as Raikiri.

Tell me know how you'd make chidori stronger and then put it into practice, performing it.