better than ur last, still needs improvement tho, for one, there are effects EVERYWHERE which means it looks very messy, the colours could also use some work as they dont really contrast or add to eachother, there is some small depth created by your c4d but i suggest u use tuts to learn how to get depth without overloading the sig.
There isnt a lot of flow in the sig - but the render is one that flow would be easily created from, try to add effects that compliment the render rather than just putting them on the page everywhere..
overall, not bad, still needs work
