Final Fantasy Odyssey Chapter One

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The year is 5402 Evelin and the sun is rising on the city of Charidol. The United Federation of Charidol has long been at war against the Kingdom of Trinexus but for the past few years peace has been a pleasant surprise. However.....the people of Charidol would soon learn, peace is never eternal.

*Sun rises as the day begins in Charidol*
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*People begin their day as they would normally, birds are heard chirping and church bells ring in the distance*

*A child looks up to the sky to see the launch of the CSR Charidol, a magnificent inter-stellar ship carrying many high ranking government officials*
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*As the child watches the ship blast off with excitement, she sees a flash in the sky*
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*The CSR Charidol erupts in a ball of fire*
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*Debris begins to rain down on the city, large chunks wreak havoc like a hail of meteors.*
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Screams are heard throughout the streets as citizens run for cover. The girl is frozen with fear as he continues to stare up at the fiery sky. They then appear.
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10 Trinexus battle cruisers descend upon the city, leveling buildings and causing destruction.

A beam strikes the building to the left of the girl and the top two floors are blown off and begin dropping towards the child.

Man: "Watch out!"

*A man runs towards the girl, grabs her and dives out of way. Barely escaping being crushed by the falling debris*

Man: "Hey where are your parents? You need to get to a shelter now, its not safe."

Girl: "uh....um.....ok......"

*The girl runs off to find shelter"

Man: "What the hell is going on....I need to get home and make sure my mom is okay."

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Man: "Mom, I'm here, where are you?"
Mother: "Oh my God are you ok Kougi?. Let me see you."

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Kouji: "Yes mother, I'm fine, are you hurt?"

Mother: "No, I'm.....I'm okay. Its horrible Kouji, they're destroying the entire city!"

Kouji: "I know Mom, but we have to hurry and get into one of the shelters! Its not sa....."

*An explosion rocks the house!*

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TO BE CONTINUED
 

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Ya, I just wanted to give some help for visualization. Did you like it or dislike it? Really my first fan fic so any feedback is great. :D
Its good , but it needs more text , as someone said . Its first try so I cant comment bad =P , you will improve :D

o_O I cant believe FanFic Sub-Forum is so active these days , is it some fan fic fever ? :confused:

So many writers these days XDD
 
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