Feitan [Winter Theme]

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§ Basic Information §

Name: Feitan
Nickname: N/A
Gender: Male
Age: 22
Clan: N/A



Looks


Feitan is muscular, lean, and of small stature. He has black, mid-length hair and gray eyes. He wears dark clothes, and a bandana sporting the trademark skull crest over his mouth. Feitan is mostly seen with a straight and gloomy face, and him genuinely smiling is a rare occurrence.


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Personality


Feitan is extremely cold natured, however, he is loyal to those he can trust. From his appearance, you can tell that he is a cruel person, but he surprisingly can display a sort of humorous side. He can be intelligent, a quick thinker, mature and doesn't let himself be fooled that easily, in other words, Feitan slightly shows any trust, except few people he trusts. Feitan also likes to banter when he feels like it. In the battlefield, Feitan doesn't let his emotions rule him. He always remains calm and keeps his straight posture in any situation, be it near death too. He also acknowledges his opponents, if they have impressed him.



"Dark is the New Black"


§ Village Info §

Village of Birth
Kirigakure
Village of Alliance
Iwagakure


§ Rank & Chakra Info §

Ninja Rank:

Sage​

Specialty:

Dark Release
Taijutsu
Renewal Taekwondo​

Elements:

Fire
Lightning
Water
Earth
Wind
Dark
Smoke​

Your ninjutsu:

Ninjutsu
Genjutsu
Taijutsu
Kenjutsu
Snake Summoning and Ninjutsu
Tern Summoning and Ninjutsu​

Special Abilities:

Medical Ninjutsu
Leg Weights
Fuuinjutsu
Curse Mark of Heaven Level 1 and 2
Gyration
Renewal Taekwondo


§ Background Info §

History



Peace in Iwagakure did not last for very long. A new threat rose called Kurogakure with Berserker as its leader, a sworn enemy of Feitan. The Dark user couldn't just forget the deeds he did in Konohagakure against him. Feitan was caught off-guard regarding the invasion, as he was getting prepared to be blessed with the Curse Mark of Heaven (get it?) ability. Although late, he made it to his comrades in the middle of the war and assisted them against Berserker's crooks. After a fierce battle, Berserker managed to grab a laboured win against Iwagakure

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Even though the Rock lost the war, Feitan obviously does not give up and bring shame to its name. He still walks with his head up. With the upcoming event taking place in Turtle Island, he along with Morgana (Inch), Mugestu (Xylon) and Shiro (Osmon) will make sure that messing with the Rock was a mistake on their part. Until then, tune in again the next update.


§ Other §

(Meiton: Daraku Oujou Majikku) – Dark Release: Corruption of Necromancy
Type: Defensive/Supplementary/Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 30 (-10 chakra per turn)
Damage Points: N/A (60 damage if used to attack the opponent)
Description: The user will place one or both of their dark marks in contact with the ground before focusing their meiton chakra into it to create a subterranean field of sentient tendrils constructed entirely of dark chakra. In terms of magnitude, each tendril is fifteen meters in length (can reach up to the edge of mid-range from the user's position) but they rarely ever expose themselves entirely and instead prefer to reside mostly within the ground. The area this tentacled creature encompasses is a mid-range radial reach around the user and its epicenter resides directly below his or her feet on creation. All of these tendrils are a part of a single central structure and so the power of this technique is not divided between the individual tendrils, it's regarded as one whole. They collectively make up one gargantuan creature which is sentient and as such it is capable of acting on the user's mental commands. The tendrils maintain themselves by passively leeching chakra from their creator every turn (via their contact with the ground). The tendrils can freely transition between intangibility and solid-like tangibility so they can both seamlessly emerge from and merge back into the earth and interact with anything on the field. The purple tendrils are capable of absorbing techniques following Dark's S/W, namely neutral techniques of the same rank (S-Ranks for elements weak to Dark; B-Ranks for elements strong to Dark). It will absorb chakra channeled into the ground (of the specified ranks) before they can manifest or they can emerge to absorb techniques directly. The tendrils also have the ability to absorb chakra from everyone on the field (barring the user) that's in contact with the ground and is within it's vicinity. The tendrils can leech 50 chakra from everyone on the field every turn but as long as it does this, it will be incapable of moving/acting. The tendrils can also be used to attack their opponent, with the effect depending on whether they choose to be tangible or intangible. If the tendrils are tangible they stab, impale or entangle the opponent but if they're intangible they will obviously be incapable of doing physical harm. If they're intangible, the tendrils will instead absorb copious amounts of chakra on contact (50 per strike), the chakra drain being exacerbated by the direct contact with the dark chakra. To destroy the tendrils, the opponent needs to target it with techniques such as Swamp of the Underworld that exceeds it's threshold for absorption. The tendril creature will be neutralized completely as it attempts to absorb all of the chakra within the doton jutsu. It will not leech the chakra completely as A-Rank earth exceeds it's threshold for absorption but it will weaken the earth jutsu by one rank. This weakening will happen despite the power of the original technique as part of it's chakra is consumed.

Note: Can only be used twice per battle
Note: Lasts until deactivated or destroyed
Note: No S-Rank or above Dark on the turn this is used or next turn
Note: Has a cool down time of three turns in between uses
Note: While this is active, the user can only use two other moves per turn

Meiton: Chijō burēka - Dark Release: Terrestrial Breaker
Type: Offensive/Supplementary
Rank: C - S Rank
Range: Mid - Long
Chakra: 15 (40)
Damage: 30 (80)
Description: Terrestrial Breaker is a prime example of how a simple Dark technique can become lethal. The user slams either palm on the ground and sends Dark chakra underground. Via using shape manipulation, he will manifest said chakra in the form of a basketball sized purple dark orb which will lie inches underneath the ground's surface. The lethality of this technique depends on how long the orb will stay active. Each turn, this orb will absorb the target's chakra (-30 per turn) and any absorbable technique they use (only underground related techniques; following Dark's elemental S/W). The longer this orb stays active, the more it will absorb and this will result in a more powerful release. Once this orb absorbs chakra it will turn into light blue color, associated with flames. The diameter of the orb increases by 2 meters every time it increases in rank, as the main point of it is to absorb chakra in order to make itself stronger and bigger. The surface of the earth will start to gain a light blue glow, once this orb absorbs chakra. The blue shade is faint at first, but it becomes vivid once the rank of the orb increases. At will, with a single hand seal by the user, he'll trigger the orb and make it explode in an extensive amount of blue flames which will cause internal and external burns to anything caught in it. The explosion leaves a crater behind, its size depending on how strong the release was. This orb increases by one rank every turn (it's C-Rank on the first turn, B-Rank on the next) up to a maximum of S-Rank and it can only be detonated once it's at least B-Rank in power.

Restrictions
-The orb lasts for four turns
-It has two turns cooldown before used again and can only be used twice per battle
-Can only be taught by Klad

Tsuindoragonringu - Twin Dragon Rings
Type: Weapon
Rank: S-rank
Range: Short/Long
Chakra: N/A
Damage: N/A
Description: Twin Dragon Rings are two almost identical rings which are made of solid, indestructible, coil-patterned gray material, with respective colored gems in the middle. One ring's gem has a dark/red pigment, whereas the other one has a light blue/light yellow shade. The gems are surrounded by two dragons facing the opposite of each other. It is said that they originate from an isolated region of the ninja world. The person who has created them remains a mystery, but legend says that he died upon finishing creating those. In the last moments of his life, he gifts them to his two twin sons. The sons, however, became corrupted with power and started using them for bad deeds. Eventually, they would confront each other and have a death-match. At the end of the fight, both brothers fell lifeless, however, the rings respectively on their fingers remained shiny. The twins' corpses started to rot, but nature had no effect on such rings. People would also not near the rings because they believed they would cast a curse upon you. That said, the rings have remained untouched for ages. During his travels, Feitan got to find about these rings. Without worrying about anything, he would take a hold of the two rings. Studying them, he realized that these could be used to amplify his main ability; Dark Release. With that in mind, he began working on these rings and would put them on.

The main thing Feitan noticed about these two rings, is that both rings were always ready to give the user extra chakra when needed. Making use of this feature, Feitan manipulated these rings to amplify his Dark Release techniques. The dark/red ring, he would name it the "Absorption" ring, and the light blue/yellow one, he would name it the "Release" ring. The rings also have the ability to sense any kind of chakra or energy, both techniques and beings alike (people, summons, clones, etc). The mechanism of this lies within the rings constantly releasing dark chakra waves omnidirectionally, similar to Revival Fist technique. However, unlike the actual technique, these shock waves are harmless. These shockwaves are invisible and act like detectors and sonars, but will take 5 chakra points every turn from the user. Though, this is only a small part of what the rings are capable of. The main abilities of them are divided into two parts, "Absorption" and "Release".

"Absorption" ring
This is the dark/red ring. This ring will grant him the ability to enforce absorption-related techniques. The most common example will be the Inhaling Maw technique. Whenever it is used, the ring will glow in its respective colors and assist in increasing its rank by one, thus allowing the user to absorb stronger techniques. These will include S-rank Wind/Lightning/Fire techniques, F-rank raw chakra and B-rank water. It has no effect on earth techniques. The rank won't increase for S Rank or above techniques of this kind. However, the user can alternatively only add half the amount of damage, so +10, or the user will spend less chakra without weakening them (specifically -10). The user however can only at a time.

"Release" ring
This is the light blue/yellow ring. This ring amplifies release-based techniques. Whenever these kinds of techniques are used, the ring will glow in its respective colors and enforce said technique by increasing its rank by one, making them greater and stronger. This ring won't have effect on S Rank or above techniques of this kind. However, the user can alternatively only add half the amount of damage, so +10, or the user will spend less chakra without weakening them (specifically -10). The user however can only do one at a time.

Restrictions
- The effects of the rings are passive
- Can only be taught by Klad

Reference
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(Ten no Juin: Ichi) - Heaven's Cursed Seal: Level 1
Type: Supplementary
Rank : A
Range: Short
Chakra: 30 ( +100 chakra; -10 to user per turn )
Damage: N/A
Description: The user wills the opening of the cursed seal partially, giving him more chakra and more strength, as the Senjutsu Chakra contained within the seal is unleashed upon the users body in a reduced amount. Patterned red lines that extend from the Cursed Seal on the body of the user course through the user's body, covering it in a repetitive pattern as their body surges with chakra. When the state it done, the lines will become a solid black. While active, the seal actively consumes the users chakra in order to produce and fuel Senjutsu Chakra into his body. While in this stage, the user gains +15 damage to his elemental Ninjutsu and +10 to his Taijutsu. His physical strength is slightly improved as is his speed.

Note: Lasts for 5 turns.
Note: Can be deactivated at will.
Note: Usable twice.

(Ten no Juin: Ni) - Heaven's Cursed Seal: Level 2
Type: Supplementary
Rank : S
Range: Short
Chakra: 40 (+ 200 chakra; -15 to user per turn)
Damage: N/A (-10 to user per turn )
Description: After opening the first level of the seal, the user forcefully opens the seal completely, unleashing the full extent of Senjutsu Chakra contained in it which floods his body. Because this Senjutsu Chakra is raw and is fueled by the enzymes extracted from Jugo's DNA, the user will experience a physical transformation unique to him. As the seal opens, the previous black markings glow almost like fire and grow covering the user completely. As the transformation ends, his skin gains a grayish tone, his sclera becomes black and his eyes change in shape. The transformation is unique from user to user but always has some animalistic feature to it. While active, the seal actively consumes the users chakra in order to produce and fuel Senjutsu Chakra into his body.While in this stage the user gains +30 damage to his elemental Ninjutsu and +20 to his Taijutsu. His physical strength is improved as is his speed. Once it deactivates (regardless of being willed or timing out), it leaves the user drained of stamina for 2 turns as well as unable to mold chakra above A-Rank or use Taijutsu above B-Rank for 2 turns. His speed drops drastically (2 base ranks) as the damage and pain produced by the stress on his body overcomes the user. After those 2 turns, the user regains some of his ability to mold chakra, with each turn increasing by one the rank of chakra he can mold.

Note: Lasts for 6 turns.
Note: Must be in stage 1 to use.
Note: Can be deactivated at will.
Note: Can only be used twice.

(Ten to Chi Juin: Bubun Henkan) - Heaven and Earth's Cursed Seal: Partial Transformation
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 20 (-5 to sustain )
Damage Point: N/A
Description: Aside from the first and second levels of the seal, skilled users of the seal are able to perform partial transformations enabling the user to transform a part or parts of their body into the form it bares while under the full transformation of Cursed Mark Level 2. This is accomplished by partially mastering the spreading of the Senjutsu Chakra released from the cursed mark and enabling it to effectively only affect one area of the body. While in this state, half of the user's face becomes grayed according to the side of the body that the user transforms their body. While within this state, the user is not granted the power boosts of either of the cursed levels. This technique is only used to grant the user extra appendages for a duration of time.

Note: Must possess Cursed Seal Level 2.
Note: Lasts for 3 turns.
Note: Can be deactivated at will.
Note: User is limited to transform one leg or one arm or his torso or his head and the transformation always spreads from the seal towards the users desired body part.
Note: Usable 3 times per match if he hasn't yet used Level 1 or 2 of the cursed mark.

Theme Song and Background Music:



§ Battles §

Won: 6
Lost: 2
Draw: 1

Dropped Rain for Smoke
Permission from for Fuuinjutsu
Permission from and for Smoke Ninjutsu
Curse Mark
Special thanks to Akasha!
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Klad

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ITTSSSS LITTTTT! Good lookin bio.
Thanks my man! 47shit
Tis what you get for mentioning them in the bio lmao

You've gained some nice abilities and the bio is good.
Its just their way to express love. Iwas home to NBs ultimate weirdos. And ya thanks my boy
Horrid to be completely honest.
;_;
Great bio, as you know I love the custom drawings
Thank you Mattobi
Ya rude (if y'all didn't understand im leaving iwa)

U glo'd up fast kid. Bio sucks doe
One love Jamal <3
Its meh

Character is kinda weird in design its lacking in some areas and overall not really a fan

Ill give it 4/10
Keep hating. Who are you though?
A negative time's a negative, don't equal positive in the real world; so stop it people. e_e

I like the last pic :3
Arigatou
-1x-1=1 >.>

OP: Nice character choice
Thanks Ame ninja
These days everyones a critic when it comes to bios, but then you realize the people critiquing the bio have shitty bios themselves or have other people make them. :|
Lol
 
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