[Tai] featuring Detective L

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is my previous thread from almost 4 years ago. :lol

I'm looking forward to training with you. The last one I learned was Nirvana Fist, I think. Adachi posted the wrong one by mistake.
 
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Shall we just go on in an analysis method? If so, I explain a technique then I want you to perform it, and give a small analysis on it. This includes stuff like its advantages and disadvantages and the like, anything that comes to mind then. I remember you liked to write wallies, I hope you still have that quality. If you agree, we shall begin U_U
 

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Dat edit. xD Nonetheless, let us begin!


Rank: C
Type:Attack
Range:Short
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points: 30
Description:After making 4 clones they attack with kicks that launch the foe into the sky and the original hits the enemy on the shoulder sending them flying back to the ground.



If you are able to use Shadow clones, form 4 of them. These clones will then attack the opponent with kicks, which ultimately leads the opponent to being kicked into the sky. You will follow suit and come from above, hitting the opponent onto their shoulder, blasting them back to the ground. A pretty simple technique, but 4 clones is a bit too much for a C rank technique.


Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points: 30
Description: A variant technique of the Front Lotus, It is an ultra-fast combo attack that requires an advanced physical condition and a certain knack for it. The opponent is first kicked into the air and shadowed with the Shadow of the Dancing Leaf. Upon inflicting a blow, one takes advantage of said opponent's counterattack to spin around and rise again for further assaults. Since the fall is increased in velocity with each blow, the damage when one is eventually struck to the ground is inconceivable. All variations end with the opponent being thrown to the ground and kicked in the chest.



Created by the Lord and Savior, Sasuke, a technique which is a variant of the Front Lotus. Its fast paced, and requires the opponent to have been kicked into the air and shadowed with Shadow of the Dancing Leaf. Once the opponent aims to attack or retaliate, you will take advantage of it, and use it to position yourself above the opponent and deliver devastating strikes which increases the speed of you both coming towards the ground. There is some freedom here as to what you can do, but it ends with the opponent falling to the ground, and kicked in the chest.


Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points: 30
Description: This unusual taijutsu style is a unique style of combat Drunken Fist Fighters become human powerhouses who'll strike unpredictability, with no inhibitions, an explosive fury and without any second thoughts about their actions. The user can either make themselves drunk or imitate the method by use of swaying and uneven balance on their feet to attack their opponents a total of 12 variant attacks.



The most bad ass technique around, where you will imitate a state of being drunk as hell, or really drink some alcohol and get lit. In this state, your movements are unpredictable and you have no second thought on where you want to strike. The swaying and uneven balance can be used to dodge attacks, even those of elemental natures, and simply attack right afterwards with approximately 12 strikes. It can be less though.
 

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I've misread something. Sorreh. <_<



Naruto Barrage

I use Shadow Clone Jutsu to make 4 clones. I control them to start marching towards Detective L's clone, while cautiously following them behind. Once the clones get close to my target, they surround it by forming a circle. My first clone slides towards L's clone, spreading out his leg and aiming for the chest. While the first clone is still preparing for the attack, the other ones are ready on their positions. As soon as number one makes its strike, the clone that's waiting behind L's clone, uses a 360° spin to kick it in the back. Quickly following the previous kicks, the two clones which are left use the same spin to kick the clone from the sides, aiming for the ribs. This results in the clone being kicked high in the air. When all 4 clones finish with their actions, I'm already using the first clone which is bent over to jump as high as I can, surpassing the target. For the finishing move, I use my fist to punch it in the shoulder, making it fly back towards the eart in an almost vertical manner. The targeted clone is dispelled as soon as it touches the ground.

> As you've said, 4 clones is a bit too much a requirement for this jutsu. It's not effective to use this while fightning hand-to-hande since it slow because you have to make the clones and there's no way your opponent would allow you to do that. On the other hand, if you make the clones and they run towards your opponent, they will probably be defeated before they get there. Even if the attacks manages to start, it's hardly going to get finished and only the final hit makes the damage.

Lions Barrage

I start running towards my target while forming a fist and making a move with my hand to make it look like I'm going to punch it. But when I get really close, I quickly change my movements by squatting and spreading out my leg towards the head of L's clone. I manage to kick it into the air and I don't stop with that. In a split of a second, I'm below the clone, following it in the air, imitating its moves by using the Shadow of the Dacing Leaf. As the clone tris to defend itself, I use my hand to block the attack. By swinging my other hand, I use it to strike the clone into it's chest, making it start falling towards the ground. I then make two punches into the chest to increase the speed of the fall. I finish it with a final kick which slams it into the ground and makes it disperse.

> Now this is better. Straightforward, fast and open for manipulation. While fighting in close combat and you manage to kick your opponent in the air, in a spilit of a second, you're shadowing them, taking control of the situation. You might not get to use the finishing kick in the chest, but this could be very effective if you manage to perform it quickly and correctly follow and read your opponents movements, attacking their weak spots and at least giving them a hard time to get into balance again.

Q: Is Shadow of the Dacing Leaf countend as 1/3 jutsus per move?

Drunken Fist

I take a sip of sake. In a matter of seconds, I start to feel disorianted and ready to party. Damn, I really don't have a high immunity to alcohol. I start to get very brave, deciding to own a clone that's in front of me. As it throws a kunai at me, I stretch out to form a half-moon with my body, dodging the kunai as it passes through the half-circle create with my body. I then start going even faster and get close to it in a split of a second. Then I deliver a series of strong punches and kicks whilst cheering myself to 'finish the clone'. After the clone is defeated, I deliver a few empty attacks because I haven't realized that it's gone. I'm never drinking again. I mumble in disbelief.

> Of course this is very cool and fun to use. The primary advantage would be that it makes you very unpredictable, your moves being hard to dodge and defend from. You're also very agile in dogding your opponent's attacks. However, it also makes you very foolish and careless and an easy target when you're not paying neough attention. And because you put so much uncontrolled, unthought strength into your moves, it's hard to quickly recover from a missed hit, making you vulnerable.
 

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It does, hence why that technique is like a follow up to Shadow of the Dancing Leaf. Other than that, great job, exactly what I am looking for. Nonetheless, let us move on.


Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 30
Description: The user jumps into the air while spinning forward, delivering a powerful punch.



Now this batch is a bit simple. You will dash towards the opponent, and then jump into the air as you still move forward. Through this spin, you will deliver a powerful punch, enhanced by the spinning motion of your body.


Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will deliver a spinning kick to knock the enemy into the air and continue with spinning around in mid air rising upwards and bombarding the target multiple times before they fall to the ground again.



A technique where you will deliver a spinning kick to the opponent, in the attempt to hit the opponent into the air. You will then continue the motion by hitting the opponent more and more, bombarding them with hits until they eventually fall to the ground.


Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 30
Description: The user kicks the enemy into the air then kicks them again higher and jumps on their shoulders and spins the enemy into the ground.



Lastly, this technique is also a type of continuation of bombarding one, where you will initially kick the opponent into the air. You will then kick them higher, and lastly, jump onto their shoulders, and spin their entire body down onto the ground, using your body weight as the anchor. All pretty simple and straightforward.
 

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Leaf Thunder Fist

I run towards the opponent at high speed. Once I get fairily close, I jump whilst spreading one hand towards it and forming a fist. I use the motion of my other hand along with the lower part of my body to spin myself. The speed that I've accomplished while running, greatly aids me in making the rotations successful and fast. The clone doesn't have time to react to such speed and I punch it in the chest, making a powerful attack which easily defeats the clone.

Leaf Tempest

I get close to one of L's clones. While exchanging some punches, I quickly make a squat whilst spreading one of my legs. As I concentrate the balance on the leg that's left on the ground and helping myself with hand movements, I start spinning. I hit the clone and that sends it into the air. However I don't stop with that and continue spinning ans I jump following my clone. As I rise, I continue to repeatedly hit the clone until it vanishes.

Leaf Ferris Wheel

I kick the clone into the air my making a squatting motion and spreading one leg towards the head of the clone. I then jump, following the clone's movement. In mid air I change my legs, spreading the one that was bent before which gives me power to kick the opponent again, making it go even higher into the air. I then jump high and end up standing on the clone's shoulders. I then make my body spin along with the clone. We start falling towards the ground while the speed of the spinning and falling is becoming faster and faster. I finish the move as the clone gets slammed like a nail with a hammer.

These are all plain and simple, but I like them. They all involve a spinning motion in one way or another which improves the speed and strength of the endind impact. The first one is great to attack one opponent, but I wouldn't really use it in the middle of direct close range combat since you have to jump and spin which takes some time. The second one is also powerful, good for dealing with clones, as the roations while jumping can disperse more clones. The last one is the best, because once you manage to spin your opponent, it's hard to defend when being caught in that unless you do something before the spinninng begins.
 

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Also, when you spin, you expose your back to the opponent. Nonetheless, great job.


Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 30 (+5 used with Chakra Enhanced Trench Knives)
Description: A series of punches and slashes finishing with a rising uppercut lifting the opponent into the air.



A simple technique where you will utilize the use of Trench Knives. You will deliver a combination of slashes and punches, aiming to stagger and damage the opponent, and then finish it off by delivering an uppercut, which hits the opponent into the air.


Type: Defensive/Offensive
Rank: C
Range: Short
Chakra: N/A
Damage: 30
Description: A very advanced and complex defensive form, the Defensive Crane allows the user to divert the path of incoming attacks with the back of his hands, using circular and wide movements that expand outwards. He can intercept weapons or incoming taijutsu attacks. The technique is best used when facing an opposing Taijutsu move by diverting the incoming limb to one side and combo the defensive stance with an attack, exploiting the opening created.



Another one of my favorite techniques, where you will utilize the back of your hands, and through a circular and wide motion, divert an incoming attack from the opponent, or a weapon. This can be used to push the opponent's limb to another side, and their body by extension, creating an opening for you to exploit.


Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 30
Description: The user strikes the enemy with a powerful rising uppercut, sending him hurling backwards.



A simple one, where you will strike the opponent with a simple rising uppercut, which sends the opponent blasting backwards.
 

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Wolf Fang Rising Fist

I make a start at the clone and deliver a series of punches, having trench knives on both oh my hands. Firstly, a direct one into the stomach with right hand. Then second one goes to the side of its head with a left hand. I finish with the last one that goes to the chin. Straight-hook-uppercut.

> This is again very plain and simple. Nothing memorable and serious. These Chakra Enhanced Trench Knifes are the ones that Asuma had, if I am correct. Those do make this a little more interesting and dangerous but no one really posseses them, so we're left just with a series of punches.

Defensive Crane

I see that sensei's clone is running towards me with a kunai and I let him get close. As he get to short range and is aiming towards my chest, I swiftly move my hand, making a circular motion and moving the clone's hand away from my face with my forearm. I immediatly form a fist with my other hand and start rising it towards the clone's chin. Shortly after I defend from the attack, I deliver an uppercut which sends the clone flying.

> A great jutsu, extremely useful. It's rare to see a specified Taijutsu defense. You can't say that you simply 'dogde' or 'defend' from a certain projectile or Taijutsu attack. Everything must be a verified move. Amazing when fighting hand-to-hand and creating openings, but also for defending against a kunai or something similar that is being thrown at your from a greater distance and you don't want to use something more complex to defend. This is a simple and elegant solution.

Q: When I'm fighting in close combat, using Taijutsu for a longer time, does the technique work all the time, or do I have to repost it as 1/3? Since it's stated that it's a general defensive pose for more attacks.

Uppercut

While being in the middle of exchanging punches and kicks with L's clone, I suddenly spread my hand towards the clone's chin and deliver a powerful uppercut which easily knocks it out.


> This is again simple but very useful. What makes it better than the first jutsu in this set, for example, is that it's much more straightforward and thus can't cause confusion. It's a one single powerful punch which everyone can do, just with more brute strength. It's very neat to use it in hand-to-hand combat to throw someone away from you after you created a good opening to strike.
 

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Every time you use it to divert an attack and create an opening, you have to post it. Nonetheless, awesome.


Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 30
Description: The user punches the target with both fist into the chest with enough force to knock him down or send him flying backwards.



A simple technique where you will deliver a powerful hit to the opponent's chest, by using both your fists to hit him back. This can cause the opponent to fly backwards.


Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 30
Description: The user kicks the enemy in the knee, causing him to stumble in his movement and fall to the earth. If used with a chakra enhanced kick, the user can break the leg of the enemy with this.



After that, a technique where you will deliver a kick to the opponent's knee. This causes the opponent to stumble, and fall to the ground. If the kick used was chakra enhanced, the opponent's leg can be broken with this technique.


Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 30
Description: The user grabs the enemy by his shirt and falls backwards, using his weight to produce all the momentum. The user will put one or both of his legs into the targets body, extending them in the correct moment, propelling the enemy backwards, upside down across the battle field.



A technique where you will grab the opponent by their shirt, and fall backwards. Using this momentum, you pull them with you, and as you come close to the ground, you push your leg, or legs to their chest, and extend them right as you land, propelling the opponent across the field upside down.
 

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Double Fist

As I practice hand-to-hand combat with L's clone, I wait for a perfect opening. I see that the clone is about to make a great swing at me with their hand. When I completely dogde the clone's attack, I sense that it doesn't have time to retreat it to defend from my attack. I make I half-squat and start stretching out both of my hand simultaneously and form a fist. I aim for the clone’s stomach. I manage to hit the clone and I send it flying backwards with great force.

Stumbling Turtle

In mid fight, I raise my left leg and stretch it out, kicking the clone into its right leg. Once that the clone starts stumbling, I lower put the leg back down. As the clone quickly starts falling out of balance, I raise my right leg and I bent it right away, directing my knee towards the clone's stomach. I deliver a powerful upwards thrust and defeat the clone.


Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will strike their opponent with an upwards thrust with their knee.



Monkey Flip

I watch and stand still as L's clone keeps running towards me. Once the clone gets close, it starts to raise their hand whilst forming a fist. I see that he's heading towards my head. Too slow. I quickly make a squat as their hand misses its target and continues to move over my head. Before the clone has time to recover from my dogde, I start to head with both of my hands towards its shirt. I firmly grab it and start to swing back as if I were to make a bridge. I use my legs as a strong support and start to lift the clone from the ground. Once the clone is in mid air, I jump into making a back flip. I bend my legs and direct them towards the clone's back. When my legs start to touch the clone's back, I straighten them up and use all the force to push it back. The clone rapidly flies away from me, hits the ground and disappears. I finish the backflip and land on the ground.

Love this set! I really don't have much to say about it, except that they are all very useful. The first one is a double-punch, which is something very plain and easy to perform. Same goes for the second one, which is only a kick aimed towards the knee. This is a very vulnerable spot and as it's stated in the description, it makes the person stumble and fall to the earth and thus makes it hard move around the battlefield and to defen in hand-to-hand. Great opening. The last one is a bit more complex maneuver but that doesn't even matter because it's done very quickly. I would perhaps use when I wanted to push my opponent away from me to fight in mid range. Great move.
 

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Good job, last C rank, and onto the B ranks.


Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 30
Description: The user swings low and performs a leg sweep. As he causes the enemy to fall, he jumps upwards and draws his legs in his chest, and then extends them swiftly, stomping him in the chest with great force.



A simple technique where you will perform a low leg sweep, and cause the opponent to fall backwards. As they do, you will jump upwards and draw your legs in, only to extend them as you are above the opponent and blast it into the opponent's chest. This hits him down with great force.


Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 40
Description: The user runs at the opponent, then kicking them into the stomach, following up with a spinning kick to the chest and punching multiple times to the upper body then follows up with a punch hitting the opponent into the sky. Once in the Air the user performs a spinning kick hitting the opponent into the ground where finally, they poses by raising their arms and bringing their legs together.



Run towards the opponent and kick them in the stomach, followed by a spinning kick to the chest and some punches to the upper body. You will then hit the opponent into the air, and perform a spinning kick to the opponent and cause them to hit the ground. Pretty simple.


Rank: B
Type: Defence
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 40
Description: With this jutsu, the user is able to intercept and counter an oncoming taijutsu technique by raising the knee, and driving the elbow downwards at the same time. This catches the attacking limb between his two limbs, and drives the elbow down with great force, effectively shattering the bone.



Another super useful technique, where you will intercept an incoming limb by lifting your knee, and bringing your elbow down, catching the limb in between. Due to the force, the bone of said limb can be shattered with this.
 

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Leaf Downwards Crash

As L's clone attempts to make a move at me, aiming for ma head, I make a squaut. As I am lowering into a squat, I use the force of the motion and when I get close to the ground I start spinning. I strecth out my right leg, whilst concentrating balance on the left one, and sweep the clone. As the clone is falling towards the earth, I finish my 360°spin and again use the force from the movement to jump high into the air above the opponent. As I start falling back, I spread out my left leg and aim with my heel towards the clone's chest. I stomp it with great force and defeat it.

Hmm, I don't particularly like this. I think it leaves the user too much exposed. Because when I swipe my opponent down and they fall to the earth, they have more than enough time to send a quick attack while I'm in mid air. I think it makes me more vulnerable than them. Because they are sitting on the firm ground and I'm floating in the air. It's easy to send me flying away. I just feel like this wouldn't go through in almost all scenarios.

Leaf Great Violent Sky

I start running towards my sensei's clone. As I get into short range from it, in mid run, I concentrate my mass on my left leg and spin my body for 90° whilst streching out my right leg towards my the clone. I kick the clone and it bounces back. As it's boun counging back, I put my right leg back to the ground, transfering my mass to it. I start moving my upper body in a circular motion to create a spin. At the same time, I start streching out my right leg. I make a 180° spin and kick the clone into it's chest making it take a fest steps back to remain in balance. I am then again standing with both of my feet on the ground and I make my next move. I exchange three direct punches into the clone's torso. Left-right-left. For the fourth punch, I use an uppercut and aim towards the clone's chin. As i punch the clone, it flies into the air. I following him and jump higher than it, whilst spinning for the whole 360° and kicking it with my right leg into its chest making him hit the ground at great speed and disperse. I make my landing, bring my legs together and raise my arms with firm fists.

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I don't have a lot to say about this. It's a nice series of punches and kicks. Very fast and strong, classical Taijutsu moves. Once you manage to hit the opponent into the stomach and start with the jutsu, it's not easy for them to disrupt the flow and defend. That ending, though.

Intersection Method

Whilst fighting with L's clone, I see that its first is headed towards my stomach. I start raising my left knee into the air and at the same time, lowering my right elbow towards the knee, as if I want them to colide. With perfect timing, I manage to catch the clone's hand inbeetwend my knee and elbow. Due to the great pressure from both sides, I make the bone in that arm break and instantly disperse the clone.

This is a very intense jutsu. Cruel even, like the one before where I was breaking the opponent's leg. However extremely useful. If you manage to break their limb, you have a great chance of delivering a finishing strike at that very moment. Even if they manage to defend, they continue fighting with a big disadvantage which gives you a great opportunity to win. I caught myself thinking a bit psychopathicly about this. If I was fighting a person and they tried to use this technique, I could perhaps let my limb get caught and broken (preferably a leg), and then when my opponent is standing on only one long and with one occupied hand, I could use my free hands to deliver a K.O. attack at my opponen, at the right moment, when they don't have the time to defend. This would be a bit extreme and very risky because if this is not the end of the fight, then you'rescrewed. Just a little scenario.
 

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Great job, and yes, it is quite brutal, to be honest.


Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 40
Description: The user punches the opponent twice with their fist. The second launches them high into the air. The user then jumps above them and punches them back down. Then, the user disables the opponent with large shuriken from above, then lands several powerful blows while spinning like a drill, drilling the opponent into the ground.



Punch the opponent twice, with the second punch hitting them into the air. You will then jump above the opponent and punch them back down into the ground. You will then launch a shuriken into the opponent's back, and deliver several blows as you come down, much like a drill, drilling the opponent down into the ground.


Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: short - mid
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 40
Description: A taijutsu technique where the user smashes their elbow into their opponent using the other arm as support. It deals a powerful blow to the target and as the name suggests, is even strong enough to destroy rock formations.



A technique where you will smash the opponent with your elbow, and using your other hand as support (holding you hands together, to give more force to the elbow smash), and thus, it is even able to be used to destroy rocks (unranked). Nonetheless, it is a pretty powerful technique if used right.


Rank: B
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short
Charka cost: N/A
Damage points: 40
Description: Similar to Tsunade’s Sky leg but the user user charges at their opponent and unleashes a powerful lateral kick aiming at the head that will send their opponent flying away.



A technique similar to Tsunade's Sky leg, where you will dash towards the opponent and deliver a powerful lateral kick. This is aimed at the opponent's head, and will send the opponent flying back.
 

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Lightning Bolter

I punch L's clone with my right hand to the left side of its face. I then use my left hand to deliver a powerul uppercut into the clone's chin. This launches the clone into the air. I jump after him and as I get higher into the hand, I punch it with my right hand directly into the face and that makes it fly back down. I throw a large shuriken which ties the clone to the ground because its two spikes end up around the clone's hips. For the finale, as I start falling, I start spinning and aiming the clone's chest with my heels. As I drill into the clone, I defeat it.

A nice Taijutsu combo. I would like to compare this to Leaf Downwards Crash. In both jutsus, the user has their opponent on the ground and is in mid air, trying to deliver the final strike. But the previous jutsu doesn't have a flow like this one. You only swipe the enemy and jump into the air, leaving yourself very vulnerable in the next few moments where nothing happens. But in this one, you don't give your opponent a break with your attacks. Once you get them into the air and punch them back down, you don't stop there and only do the final spin to drill it into the ground. In the middle of those things you, throw a shuriken, so they don't have time to properly recover. Due to the speed of multiple attacks and the power of a spinning blow, this is good Taijutsu.

Q: Is the shuriken meant to directly hit your target, or tie it down to the ground like I understood it?

Leaf Rock Destroying Rise

As I am fighting L's clone and create an oppening, I take a step towards the clone with my right leg and change my stance. Now my right side of the body is facing the frontn side of the clone . As I am taking the step, I start pulling back my right hand and forming a fist. Now my right elbow facings directly towards the clone's chest. I grab the right fist with my left hand and I start delivering the attack. I use my left hand to push the right one towards the clone. I hit the clone with great power, defeating it.

Q: This 'mid range' in the description is a mistake, right? Couldn't possibly be correct.

Leaf Great Flash

I run towards the clone and as I get into short range, I start stretcing out my right arm and forming a fist, heading for the clone's face. I concentrate my weight to my right leg, and I use the momentum to start spinning while stretching out my left leg. I intentionally miss the clone with my punch. I make a 360° back spin and aim for the clone's head. I kick the clone with great power making it fly away to left. While the clone is in mid air, I throw a kunai at it. When it hits it, the clone instantly vanishes.

The next two jutsus are simple and straighforward, containing a single strike, but both very powerful. That is my favourite thing in Taijutsu. Best to be used in the middle of hand-to-hand battle when you create a good oppening and then deliver a strong strike. If you manage to hit the opponent with the first one into the stomach, you have a high chance of winning that instant since it would hurt them a lot and greatly slow their reaction to your next attack. As for the second one, if you manage to send the opponent flying away from you like that, you can perform a quick attack at them while they're vulnerable.
 

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For your first question, its supposed to hit the opponent, and secondly, some of these techniques are old and require some minor editing. I'll talk to LoK about it. Good job though.


Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user will strike the target into the air with a lightning infused uppercutting palm attack.



A technique that combines Lightning and Taijutsu. Focus your Lightning chakra to your hand which you will strike the opponent with, and deliver an uppercutting palm hit, which blasts the opponent into the air. Pretty straightforward.


Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: N/A
Damage Points: 40
Description: A taijutsu using a combination of speed and power. The essence of this technique is concentrated in a spinning back kick, with such speed that makes it hard to follow the user's movement, smashing his enemy with overwhelming strength. This is a more Powerful leaf great whirlwind.



A simple spinning back kick, which is done with great speed and power. Makes it difficult for the opponent to counter, and is quite simple to do as well.


Rank:B
Type:Attack
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user uses Dynamic Entry on the opponent and then appears behind them to use it again. They are blasted into the air where they use a third Dynamic Entry to knock the enemy to the ground with great force and speed.



Remember the technique, Dynamic Entry? Well, here you will use it on the opponent, and then appear behind them, to use it again. The second one hits them into the air, and you will deliver a last Dynamic Entry to smash the opponent to the ground. Best used with enhanced speed. Pretty cool technique overall.
 

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Zeus

As I am fighting my sensei's clone, I ccreate myself an oppening, leaving its head exposed and strart making my attack. I start moving my open left palm towards the clone's chin. As my hand is heading towards the clone's face, I start channeling Lightning chakra in the palm. When enough of it is gathered, I start releasing it, restraining it to stay around my palm. The elemental part of the jutsu is done and all that's left is to make the strike. I hit the the clone with great force making it fly into the air. The clone vanishes quickly after separating from the ground.

This is a great jutsu. It combines brute strength with elemental chakra to make it more powerful. The jutsu is much like similar Taijutsu we've had in previous ranks, in terms of performing it and using it in a fight. It's a plain, straightworward uppercut, only this time, the user concentrates Lightning chakra into their palm to strengthen the strike. I imagine this would be great against stronger Earth defenses. Weaker Earth jutsus could be broken through even with weaker Taijutsu.

Q: Could this defeat an A rank defensive Earth jutsu? Like a wall, or a shield.

Leaf Strong Whirlwind

I run towards the clone with great speed, and as I get close, I concentrate my weight on my left leg and I start raising my right leg into the air. I use the momentum to start spinning to the right. I make the whole 360° circle extremely quickly and I aim for the clone's stomach. I hit my target with the upper side of my foot and launch it into the air. It immediatly disperses.

Again a simple jutsu, but very powerful. It's just a spinning back kick, a move seen in numerous fightning styles. What makes this special is the speed in which the user utilizes it, making it hard to defend against. Furthermore, due to this being B rank, we're talking about a very intense kick and your opponent would get through with great power, far away from you, being in a vulnerable state whilst in mid air.

Triple Dynamic Entry

I run towards L's clone and as I get into short range, I use both of my legs' strength to jump high into the air. As I am flying up, I start bending my left leg stretching out my right leg and use it to spin to the right. I do a back spin for a whole circle and aim for the clone's chest. When I hit my target with my heel, I send it flying back. I make a landing, and run to get behind the clone extremely quickly.When I do so, I repeat the process I used for the first attack, only this time with a left leg and aiming for the clone's back. I hit the clone in such an angle that I send it flying into the air. I make a squat so that I could use more force to jump higher, following the clone. I quickly appear above the clone with both of my legs bent. I start stretching out my right leg and making a spin. The final kick hits the clone into its head and makes it rush towards the gtound. It disappears in an instant, as soon as it hits the earth.

Now this is a cool series of kicks. After the user delivers the first kick, they almost immediatly appear behind the opponent to deliver a second, and then again are instantly in the air, making the final strike. That means that it is done in an amazing speed. The fastest Taijutsu yet, I think. That makes is very, very hard to deal with it, since the entire sequence is done extremely quickly and with great power. If the first kick goes through, then your opponent is really screwed. And if you manage to finish it until the end, it would be hard for them to recover quickly enough and continue fighting. I like this one very much.
 

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Good job, and I'd preferably not use it against Earthen defenses that highly ranked, maybe C rank and below, despite its rank, it wasn't really made for that. Nonetheless, let us move on.


Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 40
Description: The user will launch a succession of high and low kicks dealing a several continuous kicks to the chest region alternating between both legs.



A technique where you will deliver a succession of high and low kicks to the opponent. This is aimed at their chest, alternating between both legs as well. A pretty simple technique, but allows for a lot of freedom.


Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 40
Description: The user will jump into the air or be airbourne and delivers a powerful drop kick that sends the opponent flying.



When you are in the air, or jump into the air, you will deliver a very simple and straightforward drop kick, aimed anywhere on the opponent. This causes them to be sent flying.


Type: Offensive/Defensive
Rank: B-Rank
Range: Short
Chakra: N/A
Damage: 40
Description:
Using simple, yet effective movement when performing a counter attack or a freeform hand attack, the user will manage to spin rapidly and performs a strong rotative high kick to hit the opponent. The technique can be triggered in many ways and more than one kick can be delivered if the user manages to gather enough momentum.



A rotative kick that is used in reaction to an attack, in order to dodge the opponent and attack at the same time. However, it can be triggered in different ways, and more than one kick can be delivered if enough momentum is gathered.
 

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Leaf Hurricane Bullet

I run towards L's clone and when I get close, I stop and in the momentum, concetrate my weight on my right leg. I start streching out my left leg and making a spin to the left, aiming for the clone's chest. I hit my target with my lower leg after perforin a 360° spin, which makes it bounch back. I quickly lower my leg and follow the clone, I again concentrate my weight on my right lef and strecht out my left leg towards the clone's chest. However, this time I don't go for a spin, but a direct hit into its chest with my heel. That makes it bounce back even farther. For my final attack, I start running towards the clone. Again, when I get close enough, I use my left leg to jump and my right leg to deliver a powerful back spin kick into the clone's chest, making it hammer into the ground. This finally defeats it.

Drop Kick

I gather chakra in my stomach and stop when I have enough of it. I start releasing chakra and utilizing it to make one Shadow Clone. I control my clone to grab me for my feet and start spinning me around. Once that we achieve the adequate speed, it throws me, aiming for L's clone. I quickly change the position in mid air so that my legs are pointed at my target. I quickly countinue to flow through the air and I hit the clone into its chest with my heels. The clone start flaying back, but quickly disperses.

Leaf Gust

In the middle of fighting hand-to-hand with L's clone, I see that the clone is going for a punch into my chest with its left hand. As it starts going at me, I concentrate my weight on my right leg and I start dogind the attack by moving my right leg back and with that, the whole torso. I countinue that leg movement by streching my left leg and raising it high into the air. I quickly make a 180° spin and kick the clone into its head. With that, I both dogde the attack and defeat the clone with my counter-attack.

These are again very plain and revetitive. The first jutsu is really nothing special, just a series of kicks towards the chest. It's nice that it's open for interpretation, though. I can control the position from which im attacking (air, ground, left, right) and also the number of kicks. The second jutsu is just a strike with both legs into the chest. I wouldn't however use this just by jumping in front of my opponent because the idea of me being with both of my legs connected and almost parallel to the ground makes me feel very vunerable and unstable. I like the idea of using it when being thrown at the opponent, though. The last jutsu is cool because it's one of the few legitimate dogdes in Taijutsu. And it's also a counterattack, which is very useful. Both in one. Other than that, just a simple strong spin kick, or kicks if you manage to spin enough.
 

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Sorry for the late reply. Good job, though.


Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 40
Description: The user performs a small combo where he starts by punching the enemy in the chest and then a punch to the gut, and then a powerful palm thrust, pushing him down to the earth.



Now, a technique where you will deliver a small combination. You will start off by punching the opponent in the chest, then a punch to the gut, and followed by a deadly palm thrust which hits the opponent down into the ground. Pretty simple.


Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: N/A
Damage points: 40
Description: Spinning on his foot, the user strikes the enemy with a strong back-fist, followed by a kick with the alternating leg to force him away.



Spin on your foot to turn your body, and strike the opponent with a powerful back fist, which is followed by a kick with the alternating leg, to hit the opponent away. Another simple one.
 
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