[Other] Fear

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Kishi Uzumaki

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how can i understand these fears sleeping
-deep inside my heart , that arise time to time ,
as we sometimes get delusionalized by fear ,
fearing the things that can't see or hear ,
so what's really is this fear , that should be ,
not allowed to conquer our inner peace.....

if fears are innate feelings that put in us by nature ,
when you are threatened , it's to fight or just flee ,
but is fear as simple as that , to think simply ,
as we fear lot of things ,
fear of rejection , fear of commitment , fear of death ,
fear also can be a tricky at times ,
making us not see , what's true , what's in front of us .

so can we conquer these fears , and find inner peace ,
awakening the courage that always sleeps deep
-to go against this fear that cripples us every time ,
will it go away by acknowledging these fears ,
can i keep telling my heart to fight these fears ,
as this fears always shouts from inside of my heart .

as for now I'm positive , i can face these fears ,
i will face them , trying to triumph over them ,
thinking someday i will live , as a man that's fearless ,
who face them and put a smile on his face , always.....

 
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I'm not afraid of nothin.

Except clowns. Goddam clowns >_>
then you can't say you are not afraid of anything man .

Nice, I really liked the ending line, which I felt was catchy.^_^
Thanks sach .

Amazing...I am scared of...unknown....dattebayo!=D
Thanks sis =D .

Fear philosopher u are ? nice job thought ...
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Well , i have face my fears few times , thanks man .

my sign of Fear > ur poom of Books

short words are harder then long text
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OT: it was good
Can't run away from fears , must face them anyway thanks .
 
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