Father and son are ready to do some shit (Elite review)

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Good job.I lawl'd more than I should have.
 

The Western Wheel

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Not too shabby, kind sir, not too shabby at all.


And yes... Minato saved the Alliance... and this issue!
 

Osagyefo

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Dat badass coolness:cool:
Dat father and son moment:cool:
Dat entree:cool:
Dat review:scorps:
Too bad can't rep.
 

osba

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Vileplume vileplume!
 

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Agreed,
Minato saved the day...
 

EliteRamenNinja

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Can't wait for next week. Minato will give his gift to Naruto!


And thanks all. :) Appreciate it.
 

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Agreed,Only the last two pages worth reading.
 

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What I liked most about it was instead of centering on just Obito and Kakashi or just the war, it went back and forth, building the suspense! The whole pace was perfect for the climatic surprise on the final page with Minato showing up just in time and Naruto's reaction. The causal words between them was as if he had always been with Naruto.
 

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Tbh, I thought the middle of the chapter was dragging a little with all of the dialogue panels. But the sporadic Juubi panels that were placed every page or so cured that issue.
There should have been just one more panel after Naruto's line that would be Minato with a little smirk saying: "Like A Bossssss."

I give it a solid 4/5. -1 point for too much predictable talk no jutsu that seems to be useless against Obito.

BTW Minato alive, Itachi dead, and therefore; irrelevant.
 

EliteRamenNinja

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What do you people expect from next chapter? I think next chapter will focus more on Naruto and Minato. Then the chapter after that one, it will be Minato vs Obito?
 

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Awesome review. I pretty much agree with you on all points.

Dat Minato. Such a boss!
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very..very... good review BUT you are right! :) Those 2 last pages made the chapter better XD

Without Minato: 5/10
With Minato at the end: 8/10
 
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