Fanfiction: Obito vs Madara

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Obito: Naruto, come here and i will make you hokage in my dream world

Naruto: I have plenty of things to accomplish, i must stop you

Obito: didn't you say you will protect your comrades? Look around you now. Even if you stop me now, others will come. It's the circle of hatred. It will never change

Naruto: I'll change it. Minato, my father, my master Pervy Sage, the ninja world trusted me and i'll definitely change everything, being the hokage who will bring peace, being the saviour of the world

Obito: *smiles*

Madara: *what's happening? Is he really caring about Naruto?*

Obito: Nothing will change, i'll prove you i'm right, destroy this world and create a new one thanks to my infinite Tsukuyomi. Prepare to die Naruto

Juubi launches a TBB that decimates the last survivors

Fodders: *paralysed by fear* It's over. Even outnumbered, we can do nothing against them

Madara: Calm down! What are you rushing for?

Obito: Since when are we allied? I do what i want

Madara: *I can't really become Juubi's Jinchuriki in this Edo body, but will he really want to revive me? Things are really not going according to plan. Maybe i should use that jutsu forbidden by Rikudoo sennin himself to make myself revive, but this is really risky especially against all those shinobis. Must i kill Obito, kill all of them before using it?*

Obito: Hahaha, do you see it now Naruto? Your behaviour is hopeless

Kakashi: *By using kamui, i may be able to close the distance to them by teleporting myself near them and disconnect them to the Juubi, but it could be dangerous as well, since a Juubi out of control would still be difficult to handle. Thanks to them, that thing is not exploding TBB everywhere, which helps us to gain time and create some strategys to defeat them. But we will seriously have to...

Stop thinking, there is no time for that, i'll have to do it. At least it's the best i could do right now to save the world*
Kamui

Obito: Mmm..

Kakashi: *Go!!!*

Obito: Mokuton Sashiki. Did you really think i would let my guard down that easily? I didn't forget about you at all. Die

Kakashi: Why? why? why Obito? Why did you become like this? I always thought of you as an hero

Obito: You killed Rin

Kakashi: What do you mean?

Obito: Don't be stupid, i was there when you were facing those Kirigakure ninjas, i saw everything

Kakashi: Ugh? Which kirigakure ninjas?

Obito: Mmm?

Madara: Mwahahaha stupid child, i was the one responsible for that. You were in my genjutsu. Everything you've seen never happened.

Obito: What? But Zetsu said...

Madara: I needed you to awake your MS, so i told white Zetsus to tell you all those lies. Don't worry there were really kirigakure ninjas fighting, but the Kakashi and Rin you saw that night were nothing else than illusions created by my Sharingan. I needed to make you mine?

Obito: *I need to make Sasuke mine*

Madara: I needed to manipulate a little boy like you because i thought it would be easier. Infinite tsukuyomi was never my goal, all what i wanted to accomplish it becoming Juubi's jinchuriki. Obtain a power even greater than Rikudoo's himself, obtain everything, rule over everything, become the strongest

Obito: *thinking about how he manipulated Sasuke* So this is it? All that was for this? No wonder i never wanted you as an ally

Madara: Mmm? What does it mean?

Obito: I have the habit to never trust anyone. Prepare yourself Madara. I will kill you here and now

Madara: Stupid child, do you really think you can beat me? Instead of taking care of myself, don't you have to take care of your dying friend before?

Kakashi: *cough, cough, seems it's finally time for me*

Obito: Kakashi!!! Finally it seems that i was the trash one

Kakashi: Does this mean?

Obito: Yeah, i will take care of Madara, save the ninja world. You don't need to care of it now

Kakashi: *smiles* This is the Obito i liked, my best friend.

Obito: Don't talk too much, i need to save you before, you need to be healed
Kamui *Obito teleports where the alliance shinobi are*

Madara: So that little boy decided to betray me? I will teach him, i'll show him the true power of the legendary Madara Uchiha

Fodders: What the hell? Obito??? Kill him guys

Naruto: Stop

Obito: Mmm?

Naruto: It seems that we gained another ally *smiles*

Fodders: What?

Obito: *smiles* It looks like it

Kakashi: cough, cough.

Obito: *Kakashi* Medical ninjas, can you come here? Kakashi needs to be healed

Kakashi: It.. it's already too late Obito.

Naruto: *Kakashi sensei*

Obito: *looks* No, don't tell that. If only...if only i wasn't that stupid

Kakashi: *thinks about Obito's death* Don't worry Obito. I'm happy to die if i managed to save you

Obito: *cries* Save me?

Kakashi: Yes, i finally saved you from darkness. Now i'm sure you will have great decisions, now i'm sure the world will be saved

Obito: *cries*

Kakashi: Do you remember what happened back then?

Obito: *thinks about his faked death* Yeah i remember. What do you mean? *crying*

Kakashi: I want you to take your eye back, i'm sure you could even be more powerful

Obito: But.. *crying*

Kakashi: Don't worry, just take it and kick Madara's ass

Obito: I could never thank you enough. Sure i'll *looks at Madara*

Madara: What do you think you're doing little boy? Do you know my power?

Obito: Hahaha, do you know the true power of kamui?

Madara: No, and i don't care about it. I'll just kill you here and now

Obito: Then i've pity for you. Kill me you say? I won't only kill you. I'll show you hell

To be continued. Hope you enjoyed reading U_U
 

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I really enjoyed reading it, you write a better script than Kishi.
Thanks for the compliment, i really hope Kishi would make something good on his side :D

I like it. But Obito went from evil to jolly too quickly... Good writing though
Well i think there are many things that shows that Obito will turn from evil to good that we see in previous chapters, it's the reason why i didn't specially spent my time on that. Thanks anyway :)

Obito turning good should not happen
He needs to die a villain
It will most likely happen unfortunately :p
 

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well its it was a great reading , but i hate the idea of obito turning on madara ... but i like the idea of him revivving him , but i see that as one of obito's last trump card / good job bro
 

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I can see obito beating madra due their power being on pair with each other but obitos MS gives him the edge but than agian madra can use the susasnoo
 
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