I loved the parting script of Obito saying
"Then i've pity for you. Kill me you say? I won't only kill you. I'll show you hell"...
Amazing, he said the same thing when he passed onto the dark side. Such a chilling line..
I can see something like this happening, I can't see Obito crying this easy, or being this "jolly, and nice" but I can see something like this happening, great fanfic.