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So Super bored had an Idea for an arc but its no where near as good as the one oda makes enjoy
Short verision if you want me to post the full thing I will
  • DD fight ends. Luffy had to fight DD alone cause law got beaten up again
  • Big ma'am wasnt on the ship at all sanji and crew not only defeated the entire enemy fleet but destroyed the ship.
  • Rest of Dress rosa close up
  • Luffy learns from his fight with DD he is no where near strong enough
  • The crew head to zo trying to get away from Big mom's main ship who is coming to avenge her crew.
  • They head to Zo which is a giant mountain zoo Tallest mountian in one piece
  • Walks by stranger talking about the worlds greatest meat ever
  • Luffy tackles him not being able to resist
  • Stranger "Top of the mountain they call it the Trail of The Greatest
  • Luffy runs off alone. Stranger was talking to Rob lucci
  • The rest of the crew panics (Mostly Usopp and Chopper and brook)
  • Lucci tells him that he is going the same place to train on the trail or what evers.
  • Zipper mouth ask if the crew wants to know why
  • He explains the prinicpal basics of Roshukik to the Crew but the crew doesnt care as most of them don't preticularly care about being insanely strong (Bar and hold Zoro) Who says its not true swordsman-ship so he doestn crare
  • Lucci is going there to get strong enough to kill luffy and crew
  • Lucci and luffy both arrive at the base of the mountain at the same time. Luffy knows lucci cant hurt him now (cause luffy is too strong Post Skip) Lucci knows too.
  • They climb up the mountain to the first test.
  • Its a gaint monkey who looks like Wu Kong. he is holding a staff made of fur. His staff extends and retracts at will. Rob lucci uses life return to catch his staff with his hair tangling them up. Lucci passes. Luffy gets man handled till he has to sit down and think.
  • Luffy is stuck at this obstical for almost a day trying to figure out the trick to Life return. He figures it out and blazes up the trail using G2 and catches rob who has been saving his energy.
  • The next test is a dwarf with a Steam punk lookiing sheild.
  • Scene cuts back to the Rest of the straw hats eating with the Cp9 at the top of the Mountain
  • The mountain is also an amusment park and has an escalator and a super hard way. Both ways get equal meat
  • The crew are chatting it up when shanks walks in.
  • Shanks panics and trys not to see luffy. Everyone tells him luffy isn't here
  • Shanks tells him that the Trail luffy took Most Yonko wouldnt even go up
  • Crew panics and Shanks tells him that if luffy does make it that he might be stronger than shanks
  • Sanji and Zoro scream claiming that if luffy is so far ahead of them that wouldnt be fair
  • Shanks tells them the only way to the top is to be made of rubber and Have kings haki and its a trail that only luffy could pass
  • Shanks instead challenges the straw hat crew to a contest (cause luffy wanted a better crew than his) I.e. Navigator Vs Naviagtor to see who can navigate the best. Cooking contest. Sharp Shooting contest ect
  • Rob lucci passed with ease using the 7th form of Roshiki
  • Luffy cant figure it out again and waste almost another day.
  • Luffy improvises with Hassoken to break the Dwarves sheild
  • Luffy climbs up higher to the next level seeing lucci beaten to a pulp in seconds.
  • Next guardain is a box that no matter how hard you hit it you get hit back twice as hard.
  • Back to Crew vs Shanks crew
  • Sniper vs sniper. The cp9 watches and drinks. Foxy shows up in force turning it into a gaint festival.
  • The goal is to take out as many drones (franky and the Red hair's ship rites design) as you can before you miss
  • Yassop and usopp look at eachother.
  • Yassop tries to apologies. Usopp stops him saying there is a time when men must part ways and tears should not be shed. No one was ever mad at you Dad.
  • Bell rings Yassop drops all the drones before usopp can pull back his sling. Three hundred shots three hundred bullseyes
  • Second round drones go .5 miles away from the snipers. Starts Yassop hits all the drones with out flaw again.
  • Third round usopp observation haki kicks in and takes out all the drones who are 15 miles back (over the horizon)
  • Yassop wins but everyone is speachless
  • Back to luffy
  • the box opens up to be many crabs just with reject dial shells that link in the shape of a box before you hit them
  • Luffy hits it and gets set flying back almost falling to his death. Is fine because he is made of rubber.
  • Lucci gets up fails again and again. Lucci puts him self near deaths end and tells luffy he is only here to get strong enough to kill him.
  • Luffy doesn't want to be strong just free and he wants his meat.
  • Luffy does what he did before and sits and thinks for about a day sitting on rob lucci making sure he doesnt try to move and kill himself.
  • luffy figures out how to use life return + hassoken to vibrate his body and cause a small earthquake knocking out the crabs.
  • Luffy carries rob lucci up to the next spot helping him because they are "friends"
  • Third guardian. Neither luffy or lucci has eaten in days. The third guardian is just a living bell.
  • Luffy hits it. It rings so hard that he is knocked back down to the crabs again dropping rob lucci off at the bell.
  • Luffy falls passing out. The crabs inspired by him helping Lucci carry him back up to the top and feed him some berries
  • Another day Luffy wakes up infront of the bell again full not seeing lucci there.
  • Luffy realizes these test arent about brute strength but skill
  • Luffy hits the bell with Kings haki and it doesnt ring. But it starts to crack
  • The festival starts up again with another day for navigator Vs Navigator but is interupted by Luffy's insane haki (who is above the clouds at this point way higher than the Rest who went back to the ground with a whole bucket load of meat)
  • Shanks crew + Zoro/Sanji all stay awake
  • Shanks comments on the beastly haki saying almost there luffy.
  • Navigator Vs Navigator starts
  • Nami beast through the competition with dirty tricks and badass skills.
  • Every one is in awe and hatred for the cold hearted woman
  • nami wins with out difficulty
  • Steals all their wallets.
  • The bell starts to shatter as does everything around him.
  • Goes ahead thinking rob lucci did too.
  • next guardian is an old lady with big hands.
  • Luffy doesn't attack
  • Old lady compliments him on actually learning saying she thought he was actually just a dumb monkey till now.
  • Old lady has insane DF about pottery.
  • Throws endless amounts of pottery walls with small holes in them at luffy.
  • They are impossible to break
  • Luffy gets pushed back to the edge not trying to fall again
  • Uses his rubber body and life return to fit through the shapes with ease. He keeps going as they get faster and smaller and more complex
  • Eventually its like he is a logia warping his body to pass through solid things
  • Reaches the old lady asks if rob got here knowing he couldn't have passed without being rubber.
  • Old lady tells him that since rob failed he was kidnapped and taken to the top level which is the one that deters even yonko.
  • Old lady lets him pass as he climbs to the second to last level.
  • Luffy climbs up stairs now as this level is too high up
  • All luffy says now is meat because he is too tired and trying to stay focused
  • Steps on the last stair and looks out on a vast sea.
  • Walks out on the eerily calm waters and he can walk ontop of it.
  • Keeps walking forward for days and days and days it seems. No end in sight.
  • Keeps walking and walking and walking still no end
  • passes out after what seems like years only saying meat.
  • Back to the fesival everyone is having fun and parting after Chopper just tied the Doctor competition.
  • zoro talks to sanji about how if luffy is too far ahead of them in strength after this they will be of no use.
  • Zoro and Crew Plan to forfiet the contest with shank's crew and tell him how they feel they will be useless and in exchange for giving up shanks crew trains the straw hat crew.
  • they start training not only fight wise but skill wise as well. Learning new Ship writing secrets and more historical skills and navigation techs AND how to fight better Cp9 moved by the crews willingness to give up their pride for the sake of their captain helps with the fighting training
  • Sanji wants to learn from Kalfia but she says no. (Sanji sad face)
  • Back to luffy.
  • Luffy is still alone but now in a boat floating on the water.
  • Luffy wishes his nakama were with him but knows this is a test of his worst fear being alone.
  • Luffy floats there in his row boat for days. He keeps marching on forward and forward.
  • Luffy doesnt seem to be getting closer. Passes out again.
  • Shots of training montage and stuffs.
  • Franky learing how to build the drones that the Redhair-SW was using eariler and how to give autonomus life to robots and stuffs.
  • Luffy wakes up. In a boat with a sail now. Looks at the stairs and they are still right there
  • Luffy uses the sail until it rips then starts paddeling with his arms for what seems like years then passes out.
  • Luffy sits up on a bridge to the end of the ocean.
  • He walks all the way down it.
  • there is a monk medditating. Monk asks him why did he keep going forward if he got no where. Luffy responses with meat.. Monk is impressed lets him up to the final test
  • Its the tip of the mountain right below the cafe where everyone else is resting from their training.
  • Luffy sees rob lucci boa hancock and a buggy the buggy alliance most of the east blue enemies that he beat the bounty hunters he had whooped And almost every other person he had beaten up until he fought crocodile.
  • The Snakeneck woman comments on how they were all here to defeat you and how the woman (Boa hancock) was here because she thought that if she was stronger luffy would love her. The snake neck woman laughs at all of them.
  • Shanks sits at the far side of the cafe but everyone else watches. Strawhats try to interfere but are stopped dead in their tracks by shanks haki.
  • Shanks tells them that there is no way that anyone in this world could beat that monster.
  • The snake necked woman is bound to the mountain by chains with bits of seastone not enough to stop her power but to hold her down.
  • Luffy calmly walks up to her as she looks confused and moves all his enemies and all his friends from under her. He puts them in the cafe with stretchy arms.
  • She asks why he helps his enemies. Luffy replies with meat
  • She has a pain logia and A master of life return so she can bend her body so that even haki cant stop her or hit her.
  • Attacks luffy with pain that drops him to his knees KOing him.
  • Luffy still in his sleep struggles to get up. Luffy still only saying meat.
  • Luffy fights her unconscious using only reflexes.
  • Most people in the cafe say they come here to watch fools who claim to be able to beat this mountain get shamed and its just a cafe show but have never seen anything like this.
  • Luffy subconsciously using life return to let her pass through his body like a ghost and quake hossken to hit her a all sides as she passes through him.
  • The snakeneck gets up screaming in pain as she is a logia of pain and finds being hurt humilating.
  • Luffy hits her (Still knocked out) with a Kings haki blast that shatters the mountain. She passes out and the mountain side with the trials begins to fall into the sea. All thats left is the other side which has the cafe and where the festival was
    held
  • Luffy stretches over to the other side and smashes through the window and walks right by shanks still asleep grabs a whole bunch of the meat that is so famous and smiles eating mouthfuls. Everyone else is just in shock even shanks.
  • Sanji say that all that training was for noting since Luffy is still so much more powerful than them.
  • Zoro tells them that this means they need to work twice as hard.
  • Franky picks up luffy's body and a huge bag of meat and pays for it
  • No one else says anything they walk by law;s crew all the people who got beaten on the trail shanks crew and everyone except luffy is awake lucci being look after by his crew. Not a single person talks they all just looked shocked.
  • Momo and kinemon are still with them
  • Chopper stops as the rest of the crew gets on the escalator down the mountain. Sorry if we are leaving you here but luffy got what he came for and there comes a time when men must part and tears should not be shed.
  • Shanks smiles thinking luffys crew is really great and hopes to meet luffy agaiin.
  • Get on boat.
  • Peace out Zo.
 
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