[Mystery] Fallen Soul: Chapter 1 Diary

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"The world we used to know is now forever lost in darkness and despair. A long time ago when I was a child I remember when neighbors used to converse with each other, when children rode their bikes through the streets without a care in the world, and when I could walk around without fear. But all those joyful childhood memories are long gone. It was the year 2039 when things started going downhill. Countries started to close their borders, governments issued martial law, homicides were normal, schools were nonexistent, and the moans of grieving mothers could be heard through the streets. This age of time the world seemed like it was ending, like how the bible spoke of. But it wasn't! It was the greed of cooperate America that drove this world into insanity. If I were to ever speak publicly about my views, the consequence would be the removal of my tongue. I'm scared for my daughters. We're living in poverty and my husband is abusive. He may kill us one day. We have to run away, but if we do we would have no where to go, but in the streets filled with rats and decomposing bodies. My mom used to tell me angels would look over us and help us when we're in dire help. Now I see that was a lie, angels don't exist," Ni writing in her diary.​



A loud glass shattering noise is heard from down stairs

?:Mom!!!!!!!!

Ni rushes down the stairs in panic. She see her husband with a bag full of money and a gun

Ni: Josh what is this! Where did you get this money and why do you have a gun! Why did you break the window josh.

Josh: shut up!! You ask to many damn questions. I robbed a bank and we are leaving this shit hole. I broke the window because the cops are after us and we need them to come in here. When they see sasha and kate all by themselves they will stay to ask them questions and take them to the poilce department giving us enough time to escape.

Ni: After us? They are after you and you won't use our children to be scapegoats for you! I won't allow it.


Josh runs and punches Ni in the face

Kate: mommy.

The two girls start to cry

Josh: You listen here, you know how much it cost to raise children in this world? It takes a lot of money, and are you working no you aren't. You are in the house watching the kids and writing in your stupid ass diary all day. Screw them, they can go to a orphanage

Ni gets up blood dripping from her mouth

Ni: You wont use my children for your self pleasure ........... I would die before you use them you sick twisted freak.

Ni: !!?
Kate?
Sasha: !!!

josh raises his gun up.

Ni: what !?

sasha and kate are screaming. Josh was decapitated

Eric: hahahah hehehe Your diary is quite intrasting Ni hahaaha. I would love to hear how this world changed in depth. And fyi angels do exist heheehe.






A evil presence fills the room​


This story goes more in detail in chapter 2
 
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Let me first start off by saying that I love the horror genre thus I’m already liking this fanfiction ;) And the fact that its taking place in the future is very intriguing. I was thinking perhaps Josh would kill his wife but the ending definitely took me by surprise. I wonder who this Erik character is, who revealed that Angels do exist.This chapter was very short but interesting and I’m interested in what’ll happen next. Great job! ;)
 
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