Fade (Poetry)

[Hattake Ryuzaki]

Fade

No matter the factor
We see what your after,
Sit back in your laughter,
Causing disaster,
Deceiving as master,
Your lies go right past her,
Emotions that transfer
And fade into cancer
That wither and grey

The silence is spoken
Loyalties broken
Left standing with nothing to say
Feelings are tangled, becoming so mangled they turn into death and decay
When digging your grave the dirt is a tough place to lay
Destroying emotions is no way to play
Does it hurt as shes walking away?​

 

[amazing sasuke]

definitely good...the last line...too good:bouncy:

 

[Hattake Ryuzaki]

definitely good...the last line...too good:bouncy:

Thank you Sir. i appreciate the feedback. if you liked this one i have another entitled black hole.

 

[Hori]

that poem deserves a 5/5