Facing loss

[AlexUchina]

To and forth
is one I see
up and down

Troubles I face
I see
I hear

Hate I know
I feel
I take

Pain I reject
I hide
I break

Ones that face
ups and downs
is the life I lose

 

[Unbiased]

You sure write a lot of poetry

 

[AlexUchina]

I have six I did so far

 

[Kuroh]

I like it.
Sorry i clicked on Dislike by mistake. :sy:

 

[AlexUchina]

lol ur good zeo

 

[Colonel Armstrong]

i got a nice flow for this....if it was mine...lol xd