Intermission!
Detective L, don't hold back. Judal is your pride and jewel, and the only thing you're revealing is is arrogance towards Muggles and the Slytherin pride. A Genjutsu master is more than what he thinks of others, and much more about what he thinks of himself. And I know ful well the array of emotions Judal can showcase, because I have been reading the Mahou Showdown. If you must, do as I did, and, to an extent, what Alice is doing: Create personnas within the realm, like different personifications of conflicting emotions within Judal. Afterall, not only were you faced with Isabella Uchiha and all her marvellously crafted darkness (if I do say so myself), who is definitely not a witch, but even this peasant has been lasting quite a while in a battle of wits against you.
As for Nakiri, clearly I like how your deepening your character, and showcasing all that is conflicted within. You are layering depth into the multiple facets of Alice, and even going as far as showing the history of techniques and weapons you have in your possession, which I see as lingering memories of chakra that populate her mind. This is indeed what I see but now, without losing that aspect I need you to do two things:
1. Focus. You're perfectly recreating the initial Dogma of Surreal Palm, Illusion is a confusion, a taint within your soul. You have now exposed all that is plaguing your character, and all these conflicting personas are like a mist surrounding you. Alice must now take hold of this confusion and reign it in, streamline it and pour it out on your opponent, so that it can emerge as a single Alice Nakiri, in control of her darkness, while attacking your opponent's psyche with it. So, in sum, you have exposed your complexity, now conquer it and use it against your opponent.
2. Increase the complexity of your Illusions. Think creatively, think outside the box. Pick techs and use them in completely different ways that the majority of people, find loopholes if you must, or simply see the context you're in and amplify what you want, to give it new meanings. Overall, make me fall in love with your genjutsu usage, teach me something.
Detective L, don't hold back. Judal is your pride and jewel, and the only thing you're revealing is is arrogance towards Muggles and the Slytherin pride. A Genjutsu master is more than what he thinks of others, and much more about what he thinks of himself. And I know ful well the array of emotions Judal can showcase, because I have been reading the Mahou Showdown. If you must, do as I did, and, to an extent, what Alice is doing: Create personnas within the realm, like different personifications of conflicting emotions within Judal. Afterall, not only were you faced with Isabella Uchiha and all her marvellously crafted darkness (if I do say so myself), who is definitely not a witch, but even this peasant has been lasting quite a while in a battle of wits against you.
As for Nakiri, clearly I like how your deepening your character, and showcasing all that is conflicted within. You are layering depth into the multiple facets of Alice, and even going as far as showing the history of techniques and weapons you have in your possession, which I see as lingering memories of chakra that populate her mind. This is indeed what I see but now, without losing that aspect I need you to do two things:
1. Focus. You're perfectly recreating the initial Dogma of Surreal Palm, Illusion is a confusion, a taint within your soul. You have now exposed all that is plaguing your character, and all these conflicting personas are like a mist surrounding you. Alice must now take hold of this confusion and reign it in, streamline it and pour it out on your opponent, so that it can emerge as a single Alice Nakiri, in control of her darkness, while attacking your opponent's psyche with it. So, in sum, you have exposed your complexity, now conquer it and use it against your opponent.
2. Increase the complexity of your Illusions. Think creatively, think outside the box. Pick techs and use them in completely different ways that the majority of people, find loopholes if you must, or simply see the context you're in and amplify what you want, to give it new meanings. Overall, make me fall in love with your genjutsu usage, teach me something.