[CC] Extreme Gyojin Training!!!

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Alright. Next one. I like this one a lot.

(Gyojin Karate: Jodan Bakusho) - Fishman Karate: Exploding Palm
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: 50
Description: The user will thrust one palm forward, aiming at a desired body part belonging to the enemy, causing him to be blown back by using the water molecules in the air to release a shock wave. Due to the water molecules being very little in size, only doujutsu is capable of actually seeing the shock wave being created. A regular ninja will think its a simple palm thrust. Once the shock wave connects, it will be difficult for the enemy to breathe normally for one turn, due to the impact. This palm trust is powerful enough propel large summon up to long range.
 

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I Think it is a very useful + powerful technique , because of the water molecule that always present in the air, and air is everywhere it can be used anywhere and anytime.
As this cant be seen by the enemy this is the real upperhand.
 
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I Think it is a very useful + powerful technique , because of the water molecule that always present in the air, and air is everywhere it can be used anywhere and anytime.
As this cant be seen by the enemy this is the real upperhand.
Hmm. But what does this technique do? How do you do it? But effort into your replies please.
 

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With focusing Water chakra on my palm , i'll move it forward releasing the water chakra in to the air's water molecule that will travel to the enemy and gives them shock ?
 

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You took the words out of my mouth, Nathan. This one is great. Using the Gyojin abilities, and channeling water chakra in your desired hand, and using the water molecules in the air, you just deliver a simple thrust forward to the opponent in a selected spot of the body and let the water molecules produce the shock wave and cause them to be blown back and unable to breathe. Its very useful since your average ninja cannot see the shock wave happening, nor the water molecules because of the size, which gives you a huge upper hand in a official or unofficial fight. It would also be great because since the opponent wouldn't be able to see the shock wave they might think it is something else causing it because to them it only seems like you're doing a simple Taijutsu thrust, and by them thinking that would be extremely naive. And if successfully went through, the opponent wouldn't be able to breathe correctly for a full turn, which gives you a lot of opportunities to kill the opponent if you wanted to, which makes this a great jutsu. I have not but a simple question. How fast is the jutsu? Other than that, no questions. I absolutely love this jutsu.
 
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With focusing Water chakra on my palm , i'll move it forward releasing the water chakra in to the air's water molecule that will travel to the enemy and gives them shock ?
When someone asks for effort. They expect more then two lines of text. Yes, you have the basic understanding the of the technique. But there could have been so much more put into your post.

You took the words out of my mouth, Nathan. This one is great. Using the Gyojin abilities, and channeling water chakra in your desired hand, and using the water molecules in the air, you just deliver a simple thrust forward to the opponent in a selected spot of the body and let the water molecules produce the shock wave and cause them to be blown back and unable to breathe. Its very useful since your average ninja cannot see the shock wave happening, nor the water molecules because of the size, which gives you a huge upper hand in a official or unofficial fight. It would also be great because since the opponent wouldn't be able to see the shock wave they might think it is something else causing it because to them it only seems like you're doing a simple Taijutsu thrust, and by them thinking that would be extremely naive. And if successfully went through, the opponent wouldn't be able to breathe correctly for a full turn, which gives you a lot of opportunities to kill the opponent if you wanted to, which makes this a great jutsu. I have not but a simple question. How fast is the jutsu? Other than that, no questions. I absolutely love this jutsu.

Perfect. You explained it completely, Waaiz read Wastes post. I couldn't have said it better myself. -.-
The speed of the shockwave is no more then a second or two delay from once you release to hitting your target, but again it depends on the range. i.e how far away you are from your target.

Any other questions before we proceed to the last technique you two are able to learn at your current rank?
 

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Good.

(Gyojin Karate: Kaisoku Harakudashigeri) - Fishman Karate: Stomach Drop Kick
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: 40
Description: This technique requires precise water molecule manipulation. The user will dart forward creating a small shock wave with the water molecules around the feet to increase his speed. Using that incredible momentum, the user will deliver a savage side kick, slightly inclined downward. On impact, a shock wave will be created from the water molecules that were already manifested around the user's feet, sending the opponent crashing into the ground.

This isn't to bad of a technique. Not as good as the last, but still not bad.
 

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This is quite similar to the previous one. As i manipulate water molecules from my hand at my feet using water chakra, that let me speed up. Then i run towards my enemy and deliver a drop kick on the impact a shockwave will be produce that will give a good damage, due to the water molecules arent visible tl regular shinobi eyes this will give us an upperhand. Maybe i didnt understand the tech thats why , i want to ask why is it Long range ???.
 

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I half assed this reply, was just too lazy @_@
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This one is okay, but not the best in my opinion. Its pretty simple though. All you have to do is channel suiton chakra in your legs while you run, controlling the water molecules in the air to be aimed at your feet, allowing a shock wave to be produced to initially make you run faster than you normally were running and you use that advantage to kick the opponent and since the water molecules were around your feet a shock wave will be created to send the opponent flying into the ground.
 

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This is quite similar to the previous one. As i manipulate water molecules from my hand at my feet using water chakra, that let me speed up. Then i run towards my enemy and deliver a drop kick on the impact a shockwave will be produce that will give a good damage, due to the water molecules arent visible tl regular shinobi eyes this will give us an upperhand. Maybe i didnt understand the tech thats why , i want to ask why is it Long range ???.
It's long range because if you are long range from your target, that extra boost of speed from that water molecules will get you there in no time at all.

I half assed this reply, was just too lazy @_@
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This one is okay, but not the best in my opinion. Its pretty simple though. All you have to do is channel suiton chakra in your legs while you run, controlling the water molecules in the air to be aimed at your feet, allowing a shock wave to be produced to initially make you run faster than you normally were running and you use that advantage to kick the opponent and since the water molecules were around your feet a shock wave will be created to send the opponent flying into the ground.
This technique can kill due to our x2 strength. And, plus the crashing to the ground would make the earth crack around, you and your target.

What I want from you two next is a small spar in this thread, each of you get one move each. Draigo you make the opening move, and Waaiz you counter his move. Your move(s) have to have at least one Fishman Karate technique in it, and used correctly.

Begin.
 

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Staring down at Waaiz, I knew we had to battle to test both of our strengths, and it seemed I had to make the first blow. Starting the match, I would pretend to weave a hand seal and put my opponent into a Genjutsu to make it seem like it wasn't. The Genjutsu caused snakes to appear beneath Waaiz's feet and would constrict him, and crush him. In reality he would be immobilized and would be damaged.

Once hes constricted he would have to figure out how to get out of the Genjutsu, but while he figures that out I'd make my next move by then. I'd take advantage of my enhanced speed of being a Gyojin and a Taijutsu user and channel water chakra around my feet and build water molecules around my feet to enhance my speed even more. Soon after, I would dart forward to Waaiz, obviously running faster than usual and upon getting close enough I would kick him, inclining my foot downwards and releasing a shock wave that would cause him to crash on the ground and could possibly cause Waaiz to be totally injured, possibly dead because of the enhanced strength that Gyojin's have.

Rank: B
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user puts the opponent into a genjutsu which has snakes appear beneath the opponent to constrict them and with the users command, they crush the opponent. In reality, the opponent is immobilized and takes damage due to the stress on his mind.



Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short - Long
Chakra Cost: 25
Damage Points: 40
Description: This technique requires precise water molecule manipulation. The user will dart forward creating a small shock wave with the water molecules around the feet to increase his speed. Using that incredible momentum, the user will deliver a savage side kick, slightly inclined downward. On impact, a shock wave will be created from the water molecules that were already manifested around the user's feet, sending the opponent crashing into the ground.


 

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Seeing the Snake coming Waaiz thought to himself "How'd a snake can come to this secred place" then Waaiz got it that it is a genjutsu then he punches himself on his face as he break out the genjutsu he sees Kureh running towards him then he quickly Focuses water chakra around his hand and performs a karate chop faster than usual then the water molecules hitz Kureh and make him fall down by giving him a shock then Waaiz slams his hand on the ground on 10 meter above Kureh, water appears and falls down on him very hard crushing him.

Rank: C
Type: Attack
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 30
Description: While focusing
water chakra around the
desired hand and
performing a karate chop,
the user can split a water
source out in front of him in
order to send a shock wave
to attack the enemy. The
sheer pressure of the shock
wave travelling through the
water will cause unstable
tides as if it was a water
"world shaking", causing
the opponent to loose
balance.



Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will
slam their hands against
then ground allowing him/
her to summon a massive
amount of water from the
sky, crushing it into the
opponent. If needed, the
user can cancel the
technique in an instant.
Note: The water needs to be
summoned at least 10
meters above the opponent
to have any real effect.

 

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Waaiz - Honestly this isn't a sacred place. It is merely a training field, so really a snake could show it self. I feel as a punch to the face would not be enough to break you out of a B-rank technique. Also, with the technique you used. It is recommended to use in conjunction with a water source, and there or I didn't state there was a water source for this little test. Also, he performed a hand seal to confuse you which you didn't pick up. Your whole releasing of the genjutsu is based off one thing, that is that where we are is sacred.

How would you release from it normally?

Kureh - Superb. I don't really need to add anything. But then again you weren't actually countering something, you were making the first move. But good none the less.

You both did good besides the little mishaps.
 
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