[Approved] Evil Onion [Bio]

[ANiMUS]

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Basic Information

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Name:Animus
Nickname:Evil Onion Senpai
Gender:Male
Age:19
Clan:Hozuki

Looks: Ordinarily Animus appears just as you see above. In He stands 2 feet 4 inches tall. He wears a suit, bow tie, looks like he hasn't slept for years, and on missions a he wears the a village jacket over his usual outfit. When in tight spots he must release his transformation jutsu and revert to his human appearance.

Personality: Animus has a very proud attitude, he is easily offended, and has a obsessive interest in binding others. Still Animus learns quickly, and adapts his tactics quickly to match any opponent in battle. He is very fast and prioritizes speed over power. Animus is very. reluctant to change into his true form, and has sometimes even sustained serious injury thanks to that stubbornness. Something strange though is that he never seems to speak while in his human appearance

Village Info Kirigakure

Village of Birth: Kirigakure
Village of Alliance: N/A

Rank//Chakra Info Sage

Ninja Rank:Unofficial Sage
Specialty: N/A
Elements:
Water- needs training
Wind- needs training
Earth-needs training
Your ninjutsu:

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(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)

(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.

(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.

(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.

(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.

(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).

(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)

Background Info
Born from two loving parents in the times of Peace. Animus has made it his mission to bring war back to the five nations. Why? Because Peace bores people xd

History:
Known for being one of the Kirigakure's best tactical shinobi of his age Animus capable at even out maneuversing ANBU ranked shinobi at a young age. He easily cleared the genin exam at 7, the chuunin exam, at 8, and the jounin exam at ten years old. Of all the kirikages Animus admires The Second the most. Animus now leads a group of his peers that run counter to the Government of Kirigakure in effort to restart the age of war. He has gained quite a few contacts in the last three years and is currently looking at Akatsuki as potential partners. Even still Animus needs more strength, until he can grasp power at least on the level of the Second Kirikage Animus can never make his dream a reality

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Theme Song and Background Music:

[video=youtube;mJBtkZxzmUo]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mJBtkZxzmUo[/video]
Battles

Won:None
Lost:None

~Approved~

 

[Mellow]

Your rank is sage

 

[ANiMUS]

Your rank is sage

Should it be genin? This is my first time doing this

 

[Monxstaa]

Should it be genin? This is my first time doing this

its your rank based upon your posts btw reborn will reject this without even thinking it has no backround history not enough pictures xd just warning you, you should edit it and put more info etc

 

[Mellow]

Should it be genin? This is my first time doing this

No. Your rank is according to post coun

 

[ANiMUS]

its your rank based upon your posts btw reborn will reject this without even thinking it has no backround history not enough pictures xd just warning you, you should edit it and put more info etc

Thanks

 

[Monxstaa]

No. Your rank is according to post coun

*count fixed :bdpf:

Thanks

np xd the history needs to enough xd not 5-8 lines 10 or something

 

[ANiMUS]

*count fixed :bdpf:


np xd the history needs to enough xd not 5-8 lines 10 or something

Is it OK now?

 

[Joker]

Is this what we've come to?

 

[King Kendrick]

Is it OK now?

Remove Dark, and put - needs training next to all the elements .

You also have to remove Genjutsu as your speciality, since you have to learn it .

You dont need an elaborate history, it'll get better once you actually start roleplaying. I suggest you try to add some pictures though .

 

[ANiMUS]

Is this what we've come to?

I tried thinking of something really serious, but I just couldn't be happy unless I put my own personal spin on it.

Your rank is sage

its your rank based upon your posts btw reborn will reject this without even thinking it has no backround history not enough pictures xd just warning you, you should edit it and put more info etc

Remove Dark, and put - needs training next to all the elements .

You also have to remove Genjutsu as your speciality, since you have to learn it .

You dont need an elaborate history, it'll get better once you actually start roleplaying. I suggest you try to add some pictures though .

Thanks for the help everyone=D

 

[Kooljay]

Even after all of the stuff people suggest, this still might get rejected due to the lack of seriousness since it basically isnt human. Might want to say your bio is wearing a mask or something to account for its looks.

 

[ANiMUS]

Even after all of the stuff people suggest, this still might get rejected due to the lack of seriousness since it basically isnt human. Might want to say your bio is wearing a mask or something to account for its looks.

That isn't fair Zetsu isn't human

 

[Kooljay]

That isn't fair Zetsu isn't human

Technically Zetsu is a mutated human. He is a special case altogether though as it was created by Kaguya and later infused with Hashirama's DNA by Madara.

 

[ANiMUS]

Technically Zetsu is a mutated human. He is a special case altogether though as it was created by Kaguya and later infused with Hashirama's DNA by Madara.

Well if it doesn't fit then I will just start over or quit :|

The reason it took me this long to make one was because the profiles seemed like a lot of work and I still don't know the rules. Tbh if this doesn't work I doubt I will make another one

 

[Kooljay]

You dont have to quit. Here are the rules {

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} and here are the specific rules regarding clans, kekkei genkai, and special bios {

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If you ask around somebody will help you make a bio. Yours appears to be fine I would just add the mask part.

 

[Troi]

Take that clan off and either put Dark or nothing at all. If you're not in a canon clan or a custom clan made by a member, then you're not in a clan. If you use a canon element/release that wasn't specified to be used by a clan, you just put the element next to clan or leave it blank. Although you are a sage, you're an unofficial sage. So put that next to your sage rage. It should say "unofficial sage".

I can tell you right now that this bio won't get approved, but saying you're just going to give up and quit is no way to look at it. You either want to have fun and RP and you don't want to RP at all. There are plenty of people around here to help and plenty of the ones helping didn't have a great first bio either. I know I didn't and now I make my bios on point, as do the rest of the people who were once in your position. If it doesn't get approved, take what we said into consideration and then post it again. It's not hard to make simply changes and then post it again. There is no waiting period between posting a bio again after it gets declined, just make the right changes to where it is acceptable.

Other than him not even being human and being up to about my 9 year old character's shin, everything else is decent. Although I didn't read the history. I'm scared too... If you've linked yourself to any canon characters, take that out and if you said you learned something or found something out that you actually haven't in the RP, take it out.

And welcome to the RP. Don't be a baby and toughen up.

 

[ANiMUS]

Take that clan off and either put Dark or nothing at all. If you're not in a canon clan or a custom clan made by a member, then you're not in a clan. If you use a canon element/release that wasn't specified to be used by a clan, you just put the element next to clan or leave it blank. Although you are a sage, you're an unofficial sage. So put that next to your sage rage. It should say "unofficial sage".

I can tell you right now that this bio won't get approved, but saying you're just going to give up and quit is no way to look at it. You either want to have fun and RP and you don't want to RP at all. There are plenty of people around here to help and plenty of the ones helping didn't have a great first bio either. I know I didn't and now I make my bios on point, as do the rest of the people who were once in your position. If it doesn't get approved, take what we said into consideration and then post it again. It's not hard to make simply changes and then post it again. There is no waiting period between posting a bio again after it gets declined, just make the right changes to where it is acceptable.

Other than him not even being human and being up to about my 9 year old character's shin, everything else is decent. Although I didn't read the history. I'm scared too... If you've linked yourself to any canon characters, take that out and if you said you learned something or found something out that you actually haven't in the RP, take it out.

And welcome to the RP. Don't be a baby and toughen up.

Did what I can for now. Gtg Will do the rest of the changes later. If it gets denied then oh well :|

 

[Troi]

Did what I can for now. Gtg Will do the rest of the changes later. If it gets denied then oh well :|

If it gets declined I'll personally help you on your next bio but as long as you follow the rules that Kooljay linked you, you should be fine.

 

[Rōshi1]

We'll help you until you get it approved mate. Don't you worry.