NarutAwesome
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Sup guys I'm working on a new rap and I wanna go with something like space bound so I used the instructment as a bass.I edited the lyrics, how is it. it starts at 0:18
[video=youtube_share;FIg4rRTDSdY]http://youtu.be/FIg4rRTDSdY[/video]
VERSE 1
Being famous is my goal
it’s my dream, it’s my strive
Don’t care how I get there
I just want success to arrive
and I’ll wait for that day
if it takes me my whole life
so I’ll always keep rapping
practicing on the mic
spittin’ lyrics and verses
in my mirror rehearsing
letting no one hold me back
I don’t care who’s the person
but my mind is already set
so why am I still searchin’
until this body stop breathing
until this heart stop beating
I’ll never give this shit up
man, no matter the reason
can you feel what I’m feeling
can you see what I’m seeing
the amount of pain that I felt
call it internal bleeding
people tryin to bring me down
but their words are misleading
so nothing can get in my way
nothing is superceding
how much stress can I hold
inside I’m feelin’ so cold
and I’m stuck on this path
like they’re a fork in the road
but I gotta keep fighting
stand with my hopes held high
going after my dreams
staying tough- ride or die
cause one day I’ll be famous
and then I’ll be realized
VERSE 2
I made myself a promise
that was to always stay real
I can’t let life lead me
so I gotta take the wheel
I got these dice in ma hand
that’s why I always stay rollin’
And I stay hitting strikes
but I’m not even bowling
but then why do I feel
like I have a hole in heart
like something is missing
a portrait but no art
my insides are twisted
I can’t even think straight
and if I don’t get better
I’ll lose myself at this pace
People got their hands out
waiting for me to drop
I’m going for my success
but they want me to stop
But they made a mistake
I’m a 1 way train to the top
VERSE 3
so I stand here today
kissing my sorrows goodbye
and even though I was hurt
there’s no tears in my eye
I won’t sink to that level
can’t let bitches see me cry
cause rapping is my drug
it’s what keeps me so high
and I’m not coming down
not to where I use to be
I can’t stay at status quo
cause that was the old me
and I won’t be a number
I can’t be a statistic
I’ll make my dreams into goals
and make them goals realistic
so I’ll always follow them
like my shadow follows me
so as I climb up this ladder
I’ll leave my troubles beneath
cause to this very day
I still haven’t committed defeat
[video=youtube_share;FIg4rRTDSdY]http://youtu.be/FIg4rRTDSdY[/video]
VERSE 1
Being famous is my goal
it’s my dream, it’s my strive
Don’t care how I get there
I just want success to arrive
and I’ll wait for that day
if it takes me my whole life
so I’ll always keep rapping
practicing on the mic
spittin’ lyrics and verses
in my mirror rehearsing
letting no one hold me back
I don’t care who’s the person
but my mind is already set
so why am I still searchin’
until this body stop breathing
until this heart stop beating
I’ll never give this shit up
man, no matter the reason
can you feel what I’m feeling
can you see what I’m seeing
the amount of pain that I felt
call it internal bleeding
people tryin to bring me down
but their words are misleading
so nothing can get in my way
nothing is superceding
how much stress can I hold
inside I’m feelin’ so cold
and I’m stuck on this path
like they’re a fork in the road
but I gotta keep fighting
stand with my hopes held high
going after my dreams
staying tough- ride or die
cause one day I’ll be famous
and then I’ll be realized
VERSE 2
I made myself a promise
that was to always stay real
I can’t let life lead me
so I gotta take the wheel
I got these dice in ma hand
that’s why I always stay rollin’
And I stay hitting strikes
but I’m not even bowling
but then why do I feel
like I have a hole in heart
like something is missing
a portrait but no art
my insides are twisted
I can’t even think straight
and if I don’t get better
I’ll lose myself at this pace
People got their hands out
waiting for me to drop
I’m going for my success
but they want me to stop
But they made a mistake
I’m a 1 way train to the top
VERSE 3
so I stand here today
kissing my sorrows goodbye
and even though I was hurt
there’s no tears in my eye
I won’t sink to that level
can’t let bitches see me cry
cause rapping is my drug
it’s what keeps me so high
and I’m not coming down
not to where I use to be
I can’t stay at status quo
cause that was the old me
and I won’t be a number
I can’t be a statistic
I’ll make my dreams into goals
and make them goals realistic
so I’ll always follow them
like my shadow follows me
so as I climb up this ladder
I’ll leave my troubles beneath
cause to this very day
I still haven’t committed defeat
