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[NarutAwesome]

This is my new rap lyric video Lyrically Gifted, check it out and lemme know whatcha think and if I could work on anything. All feed back is welcomed. It helps me better my craft. Comment, Like, and Subscribe!!!!

Currently I'm working on my mixtape, and I would like to thank everyone who previously helped me out and gave me an analysis of my work. It helped me in the long run a lot.

[video=youtube_share;Mkg7Tm09l-M]http://youtu.be/Mkg7Tm09l-M[/video]

 

[NOemotions]

Working rhymes. I didn't like the ending when music just suddenly started to vanish.. I'd give 4/5. Keep it popping.

 

[NarutAwesome]

Working rhymes. I didn't like the ending when music just suddenly started to vanish.. I'd give 4/5. Keep it popping.

thanks man, my engineer said it was best to fade out lol, none the less it turned out great

 

[Lay]

Makes sense... A good one