[CJ] Erzo and Best

[-Best-]

Waits for Erzo.

Doton : Mosquito Trap | Earth Style : Mosquito Turapu
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A(60 if Bursted up)
Description:

The user will spit out 30 earthen Mosquitoes from their mouth. The size of each mosquito is at the size of a normal mosquito. These mosquitoes Can either sustain as a single group or gets divided into two or three groups(10-15 per group) and stays in the air. The mosquitoes can reach upto Long range from the user in all directions i.e. they can reach long range heights from the user. The main characteristic of this mosquito is that, when these mosquitoes attack the opponent Instead of doing actual damage, they will pierce the opponents skin, turn into a watery mud material and enter the Epidermis layer of the Skin. On reaching the Layer, the watery mud will get hardened and the the weight of the watery mud will be increased ten fold. So, when a mass of 10-15 Mosquitoes attack a particular part of the skin of the opponent, the entire part(a leg or a hand or the head etc etc.) will suffer a large weight gain which makes the particular part unable to be used by the opponent. The user can also use this technique is another way. instead of turning into a water mud substance, the mosquito can turn into numerous small sized mosquito and enter the epidermis layer of the skin of the opponent. When the user makes a single hand seal, the tiny mosquitoes burst thereby creating slight cracks on the skin layer of the particular part on the opponents body .They will suffer damage because of the pain caused by the cracks and also renders that part to be useless in Taijutsu move of B rank and above for two turns. In order to affect a particular part like the leg or hand or head. at least 10 mosquitoes are required or else the technique will be rendered use less. In order to affect a large portion of the body like the entire upper body or the entire lower body all the 30 mosquitos are needed.
- Can only be taught by -Best-
- The attack of the Mosquitoes is counted as a move and occupies a jutsu slot.
- No Doton techniques above S ranks for the next two turns.
- No Doton techniques S rank and above in the same turn.
- The mosquitoes last in the battlefield for 4 turns.
- Can only be used twice per battle.

The Description is pretty much self explanatory. Just analyse the tech and ask if any questions are there.

 

[Erzo]

Waits for Erzo.

Doton : Mosquito Trap | Earth Style : Mosquito Turapu
Type: Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short - Long
Chakra: 30
Damage: N/A(60 if Bursted up)
Description:

The user will spit out 30 earthen Mosquitoes from their mouth. The size of each mosquito is at the size of a normal mosquito. These mosquitoes Can either sustain as a single group or gets divided into two or three groups(10-15 per group) and stays in the air. The mosquitoes can reach upto Long range from the user in all directions i.e. they can reach long range heights from the user. The main characteristic of this mosquito is that, when these mosquitoes attack the opponent Instead of doing actual damage, they will pierce the opponents skin, turn into a watery mud material and enter the Epidermis layer of the Skin. On reaching the Layer, the watery mud will get hardened and the the weight of the watery mud will be increased ten fold. So, when a mass of 10-15 Mosquitoes attack a particular part of the skin of the opponent, the entire part(a leg or a hand or the head etc etc.) will suffer a large weight gain which makes the particular part unable to be used by the opponent. The user can also use this technique is another way. instead of turning into a water mud substance, the mosquito can turn into numerous small sized mosquito and enter the epidermis layer of the skin of the opponent. When the user makes a single hand seal, the tiny mosquitoes burst thereby creating slight cracks on the skin layer of the particular part on the opponents body .They will suffer damage because of the pain caused by the cracks and also renders that part to be useless in Taijutsu move of B rank and above for two turns. In order to affect a particular part like the leg or hand or head. at least 10 mosquitoes are required or else the technique will be rendered use less. In order to affect a large portion of the body like the entire upper body or the entire lower body all the 30 mosquitos are needed.
- Can only be taught by -Best-
- The attack of the Mosquitoes is counted as a move and occupies a jutsu slot.
- No Doton techniques above S ranks for the next two turns.
- No Doton techniques S rank and above in the same turn.
- The mosquitoes last in the battlefield for 4 turns.
- Can only be used twice per battle.

The Description is pretty much self explanatory. Just analyse the tech and ask if any questions are there.

Little mosquito which you release from your mouth, they can be sustained for four turns which is cool.
You can use them to attack an opponent in two different ways, one directly (when they burst), and the other indirectly (when they hinder opponents movement).

Only thing I wish you had added is that it can be released from other Earth sources too, but other than that, it's a simple and cool jutsu.

No questions.

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Your turn:

(Doton: Kuroi Kurohyou) - Earth release: Black Panthers

Spoiler

Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range:Short-long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user quickly concentrates his doton chakra in his hands and quickly touches the ground to release 2 panthers made out of Earth to run at the opponent at full force and take down the opponent savagely without trouble upon impact. The user can take his hands of the ground and the jutsu will still be active however to control the panthers the user must bring his hands back to the ground. If the users hands are not touching the ground, the panthers will simply attack the opponent whenever they see him/her.
Note: can only be used by RockLeeGreenBeast and those he shares this jutsu with.
Note: Can only be used 2 times.
Note: Panthers must be destroyed with an approperate jutsu.
Note: Panthers disperse after 3 turns if they are not destroyed.
Note: No S-rank Earth jutsus next turn.
Note: User can order the Panthers and tell them what to do as long as his hands are still touching the ground.

 

[-Best-]

Little mosquito which you release from your mouth, they can be sustained for four turns which is cool.
You can use them to attack an opponent in two different ways, one directly (when they burst), and the other indirectly (when they hinder opponents movement).

Only thing I wish you had added is that it can be released from other Earth sources too, but other than that, it's a simple and cool jutsu.

No questions.

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Your turn:

(Doton: Kuroi Kurohyou) - Earth release: Black Panthers

Spoiler

Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range:Short-long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The user quickly concentrates his doton chakra in his hands and quickly touches the ground to release 2 panthers made out of Earth to run at the opponent at full force and take down the opponent savagely without trouble upon impact. The user can take his hands of the ground and the jutsu will still be active however to control the panthers the user must bring his hands back to the ground. If the users hands are not touching the ground, the panthers will simply attack the opponent whenever they see him/her.
Note: can only be used by RockLeeGreenBeast and those he shares this jutsu with.
Note: Can only be used 2 times.
Note: Panthers must be destroyed with an approperate jutsu.
Note: Panthers disperse after 3 turns if they are not destroyed.
Note: No S-rank Earth jutsus next turn.
Note: User can order the Panthers and tell them what to do as long as his hands are still touching the ground.

well actually am planning to revamp and upgrade it next turn. ll link you if the upgrade was successful.

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Nice technique. I pretty much create two panthers from the ground by touching the ground after gathering some doton chakra on the ground. the panther are controllable if the user places his hands on the ground which is nice. the Panthers will be on their own if the user does not control it by placing the hand on the ground and attacks the enemy on sight which is even more advantageous in certain situations. the panthers last for three turns which is nice.

Question : what is the rank of each panthers? A I persume?

 

[Erzo]

well actually am planning to revamp and upgrade it next turn. ll link you if the upgrade was successful.

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Nice technique. I pretty much create two panthers from the ground by touching the ground after gathering some doton chakra on the ground. the panther are controllable if the user places his hands on the ground which is nice. the Panthers will be on their own if the user does not control it by placing the hand on the ground and attacks the enemy on sight which is even more advantageous in certain situations. the panthers last for three turns which is nice.

Question : what is the rank of each panthers? A I persume?

Yep. Power is split between them, so A-rank each.

 

[-Best-]

Yep. Power is split between them, so A-rank each.

Alright. thanks for the technique doe.

 

[Erzo]

No, thank you.

 

[Erzo]

*Hands over a bunch of curved arrows*

Spoiler

Yumita Geijutsu: Magarimichi Dageki: (Bow and Arrow arts: Curving strike)
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-long
chakra: N/A
Damage: 80
Description: The user uses an arrow which has its arrow head shaped in a way which enables it to curve and attack the enemy from the side.(Moves in an arc) Although its power is not as strong as an arrow which has a sharpened head, its fletching allows it to move in a certain direction with the air resistance giving it the ability to turn, which means it can hit the opponent from the side of his leg or body restricting his movement. The Arrows are faster than regular thrown projectiles and therefore can be more trickier to counter.
Note: Can only be used 2 times.
Note: Can only be taught by Erzo

There isn't much to teach. This arrow can curve and hit the opponent from their due to it's head-shape. It might not be able to overcome a strong jutsu or even a weak one at that, but on the plus side, it doesn't require chakra and still does damage.
Any questions?

 

[-Best-]

Nope. No questions. Pretty self explanatory!

 

[Erzo]

Cool, then it's yours