[CJ] Enzup and Nāruto trade

[Naruto.]

So yes, here's the tech. Analyze it for me please.

(Mokuton: Uragiri umare) | Wood Release: Born Treacherous
Rank: S
Type: Supplementary/Offensive
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40(+30 for using the roots offensively)
Damage Points: N/A(60 for using the roots offensively)
Description: With a single handseal, using his ability to manipulate the roots, the user manipulates the roots underground to spread out throughout the ground, to hold the earth firmly. The roots actually form a network underground and also extend above the ground, forming a jungle-floor like terrain. The roots hold the ground so tight, making it impossible to move, and as such prevents both the user and the opponent to use any techniques that alter/move the ground (upto S rank) like creating the S ranked Golem, creating spikes, raising the ground etc.. However, techniques like the swamp of the underworld that change the physical properties of the soil will still be possible, as long as they follow the laws of physics. With a single handseal, the user can manipulate the roots above the ground to attack the opponents like using a whip. The roots are all atleast 15 meters in length, (with the power of A rank, consuming 30 chakra and dealing 60 damage; counts as a move) but with varying thickness.
Notes:
- The user can, if he wishes, create the roots in such a way that it does not hold up the earth, allowing both him and the opponent to perform techniques that involve earth.
- Can only be used once per battle with a two turn cooldown.
- No wood jutsus above S rank in the same or next turn.
- No earth jutsus above S rank in the same or next turn.
- Can only be taught by Nāruto.

 

[Enzup]

A fast single heandseal technique which can be used in many useful situations. For instance, if one's Earth element is sealed and hence he's unable to use any earth technique then using this technique could be of some good use since his opponent wont be able to use earth as well. Or if the opponent is Earth specialist and/or spams too much of earth's technique then this technique could come in handy.

I personally feel this technique could've been better had you made it a bit more versatile, like growing roots on a specific area or everywhere but where user stands, disabling only opponent from using earth. Because as of now, if we use this technique and our opponent uses some A-rank 'short range' lightning technique on the earth then he'd be able to use the earth again but we won't. That's a big con you should've kept in your mind. Another thing that you could've added to this technique "user can re-grow roots if partially destroyed from the remnants of roots, 2 times per battle, counting as a move"

As of restrictions part, "no S-rank or above technique next turn" these weren't required. Would've have gotten approved without them as well, but then its your technique, so yeah... your rules.
And this one doesn't make any sense, "Can only be used once per battle with a two turn cooldown". Perhaps you wanted to write 2 times per battle instead of one.

 

[Naruto.]

Yea, actually this was the idea of Azrael. He made this custom for me, although I had to submit it, and hence it wouldn't count as a tech in his 35 CJ slots, since it was agreed upon that I would teach it to him. For the changes, yes, I did feel that restricting ourselves too was a drawback, but I was too lazy to edit. Actually Madara declined this in the start and asked to add this line: "Can be used twice per battle with a two turn cooldown", since that was the standard criteria for S-Ranks. Oh shit! I realized now that I "one" was written in place of "two". A small error lol.

I'm planning on updating this, and I will teach it to you again then. ;3

Alright, your turn.

 

[Enzup]

Make sure to inform me before you update it >_O

Alright, this is a pretty simple technique, nothing really there to explain as its self explanatory. Ask me if you have any doubts?

(Fuuton: Zennou Clap) - Wind Stye: Almighty Clap
Type: Defense/Supplementary
Rank: S
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user spread his arms and then clap with all his power in the direction of target. The huge amount of wind blows in that direction, which can repel any fire style jutsu upto A-Rank with slightly greater speed. This technique doesnt continue on towards the opponent and if used with an opponent in close range the force will knock them off their feet
~Can only be used twice per match.
~Can't use S-rank and higher wind jutsus the following turn.
~Can only be taught by Enzup.

 

[Naruto.]

Nice technique. Useful against short ranged Fire techniques. However, one can also use this against Taijutsu if they're fast enough to react, since the Wind is released from the body.

OOC: You should've let it continue towards the opponent and add some slicing damage and stuff which would make it quite deadly imo. No doubts.

 

[Enzup]

So, we're done, I guess.