Ending Lines ~ Pilot

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~Ending Lines~

Deep in the shadows,lies a being,a being known to all,but avoided by many,but to fully understand the reason,we must run back to his life,or death.

-Listen song 0:00-0:50-


*knock on the door*

???? : Whoever you are,get the **** out of my building.

????? : Open up,it`s really important

???? : Who the **** is it?

????? : Someone you know,just open the damn door Fla...Florian.

???? : *thoughts* Did he just call me Flaw?Bad news... *pack`s bags and jumps out of the window*

????? : *hears smashing window* Shit! *talks on wakie talkie*He jumped out,i repeat,the ****er just jumped out

????? : *talks on walkie talkie*Say what?We have to get normal radios Boss,i can`t hear shit

????? : *talks on walkie talkie* Just shut up,he jumped your way

????? : *talks on walkie talkie* Well,there is no-one here,but it appears something is running through the rooftops,shall we try to pursuit?

????? : *talks on walkie talkie*No,leave it


-Scene Change to Airport-

Flaw : *thoughts* I gotta find someone,trustworthy....*sees Viagra add* Damian?Nah *sees Vodka add*Maybe Ben..nah..*sees tourist trip to Greece add* Ahh shit,just great,he seems like the only option.

-Scene Change to Greece-

Flaw : *looks at paper*This has to be it..*gets in the building and stands near the door,hearing moans*What the...*knocks door*

?????? : *falls off the chair* Who the **** is it.

Flaw : Open up you faggot.

?????? : *thinks* Faggot?Is that...can`t be...*screams* Flaw?!@$

Flaw : No shit,open up Sora!

?????? : The ****,don`t call me that!

Flaw : Whatever you ****ing doctor.

Doctor : *gets up,wears pants and opens the door*The **** you want?

Flaw : Your mom.

Doctor : Seriously though?

Flaw : Ok ok,some faggot from NB,is trying to hunt me down.

Doctor : To tell you the truth,i wouldn`t blame anyone even if it were for him to try to kill you,anyway,and why did you come here?

Flaw : I need somewhere to stay,somewhere they least expect me to be.

Doctor : Right...Why should i let you in?

Flaw : Because...i don`t know....

Doctor : Exactly.

Flaw : Ahh come on.

Doctor : What do I earn?.

Flaw : A **** in your ass?

Doctor : And you`r surprised i don`t let you in?

Flaw : Ok,ok,just...I can`t believe i am about to say this...please.

Doctor : Just get in...*closes the door once he is in*Where did you get my adress anyway?

Flaw : Frogman traced your IP by request a couple of years ago,by the way,i heard moans...

Doctor : Yeah,i was just....

Flaw : *sees computer screen on youporn.com*Ohh...

Doctor : Yeah...

~Sneak Peak~ :

Doctor : So we have come down to 10 candidates.

Flaw : Yeah,that doesn`t help much though.

Doctor : It`s a start,wait a minute*points at name on the list*Hmm?

Flaw : Nah,Arch-Faggot is too dumb to pull off a man hunt like this.

Doctor : He seemed very angry the last time we saw him.

End Chapter.
 
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Paying 167 kumi to the person who guesses who Arch-Faggot is.

I won`t announce the winner to anyone,I`ll just transfer the money,i ask of the one who gets the money to keep quiet though. :)
 

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LOL?! Yay, Herro! Lots of *facepalms* to do...this is PG13 xd:D JK!

On to some real comments. I see you have improved a lot better than the last FF of yours that I've read. Twas a long time ago though. When your mind's still pure and clean. xd:D
 

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His name is Florin, not Florian. :|

At least that's what I was made to believe, unless you made it on purpose and now he will find me in Iasi and kick my ass because I revealed his true name.
 
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