Elite wasted review- LET ME REWRITE THIS CHAPTER!!!!!! (Edit thread)

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*my most wasted thread ever* be warned*

Many people were asking me for my review but...

I really was not happy with this chapter, sorry. So no review this time, but a REMAKE from this chapter. I really rewrote each single page, this is the result! I hope you enjoy it! I think this is better then me raging... ;)

So here it is, a completely new written chapter, Elite-style. And yes, I am wasted right now, lol. Big time wasted! ...

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SBL7

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That was a great revision.=D
 

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funny but it would be better without the sakura hate bronie
 

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This is the single greatest thing I have ever read in my life. :| LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL XD !!! And FUDGE YOU :rage: Itachi is still sexy :T_T:
 

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DUDE... firrst of all... welcome back!

Second of all: Remake the chapter each week please... you just refueled my desire to read once more.... thanks!
 

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That was really funny even though I hate you for the gay slurs towards Sasuke but I know its all in good fun.
 

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can't believe i actually gave the time to read this lmfao XD

+ R E P :scorps:
 

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fcukkk this the mod removed it, fucckkkk i actually put a lot of work in it and he removed it too this???
 

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well now.........

Someone has too much time on his hands.... good job nevertheless

fcukkk this the mod removed it, fucckkkk i actually put a lot of work in it and he removed it too this???

Yeah,.... not too smart buddy
 

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naruto and minato are the only good things in this manga, mofo!
 
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