[Raiton] Electrical Discharge with Noni

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I start by removing a large shuriken,then channeling my raiton chakra into it to increase it piercing ability. I then aim and throw it at senpai,it pierces and due to the raiton chakra on its edges,it numbs senpai. It is connected to my hand by a cable,increasing my accuracy to target senpai.
creative uses
it requires no handseal and it is both a projectile and streaming tech.
drawbacks/counter
it is visible and can be heard by the opponent making the defense easier
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I start by manipulating my raiton chakra to generate a plasma ball around my whole body while i dash at senpai delivering a few punches to his face,damaging his face and electrocuting him.
creative uses
it can defend against projectile and strong attacks as well as used for attacking
drawbacks/counters
when active,only lightning and taijutsu techs can be used and the blast only goes up to short range.
 

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( Raiton: Kaminari no Shogeki Ame ) - Lightning Release: Lightning Shock Rain
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user manipulates their lightning chakra condensing into a orb of chakra and then releasing it into the air. The lightning orb will then remain in the air for several seconds releasing a continous rain of lightning bolts shocking any enemy within the radius of the attack.
Note: Lasts only the turn in which its used.

A good technique the user will condense a orb of lightning into their hands and release it into the sky. The ball will have built up energy and quickly after condensing it they will send the ball into the sky above the opponents area. After a few seconds (3-5 seconds) the ball will release its energy into countless needles which rain down upon the opponent, it acts as a way to pierce and shock the opponent. Now do not use this close to you. The bolts shoot everywhere short range within the radius its placed. So if you are in the radius it might hurt you to since the bolts shoot randomly. Also the rain goes down for one whole turn this makes it very tough for the opponent, its best you destroy the orb as soon as possible.
 

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I start by condensing an orb of lightning in my hands,after which i release it into the air above senpai,after 3 seconds it releases the energy in the shape of countless needles that rain down on senpai,piercing and electrocuting him randomly at the same time.
creative uses
it requires no handseal and it pierces and shock the opponent from several angles.
drawbacks/counters
the user can get affected by the bolts if he is in range of the orb since it shoots randomly
 

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I expect more description in A-Ranks.


Raiton: Raisogekishin ) - Lightning Release: Lightning Rat Violent Quake
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: After performing the required hand seals Monkey โ†’ Ox โ†’ Boar โ†’ Tiger the user releases a discharge of electricity that shapes itself into several destructive disks of lightning. These are shot at the targets with great speed.

This jutsu is simple projectile technique which allows for combos to be in use which this can be used as a flanking jutsu or a distraction. The user after 4 hand seals will generate from their hands lightning which they send towards the opponent and mold it into a very sharp disk. You can send more then one disk; they are very fast and destructive, this is because of how thin and sharp they are. It can easily cut through some of the hardest materials like rock and wood. It also has a shocking property like any other lightning. Each disk you send the more weaker they get though you can send a rapid amount to make evasion tough. You can send one disk and use another technique, its mobility is up to you to decide on where you want to aim and what to use for. Its range is limited to only up to mid range. Ways to counter this jutsu is over power it with lightning blade that can easily cut it as well as send a attack. Wind blade attacks can work as well.

(Raiton: Chidori) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user must first perform the following sequence of hand seals Ox โ†’ Rabbit โ†’ Monkey โ†’ Dragon โ†’ Rat โ†’ Bird โ†’ Ox โ†’ Snake โ†’ Dog โ†’ Tiger โ†’ Monkey and they will then focus lightning chakra into their hand to create a lightning jutsu that is concentrated in the user's palm and thrusted toward the opponent at high speed. The lightning in the user's palm sounds like birds chirping, hence the name, and allows the user to perform high grade cutting damage or high penetration piercing thrusts.
Note: Someone who mastered lightning release can perform chidori with just the Ox hand seal.
Note: Uchiha Sasuke and Kakashi Hatake bios can use the technique without handseals

The famous chidori. The user will do 11 hand seals and generate the chidori into one of their hands by gather raiton chakra into their favorited hand. Now I don't think their is much for me to say that you might not already know since it is one of the most famous jutsus in the canon list. The chidori is a very destructive melee attack jutsu, one hit and the opponent will receive terrible damage, not only can it pierce the opponent it will numb the area hit, so if the opponent does survive he will have a tough time to move around with pace depending on where it is hit as well. For example hitting the opponent on the shoulder would result in them not doing hand seals anymore because they would not be able to feel their arm and move it. The chidori has a sound to it, which sounds like one thousand birds chirping, you can hear it easily so you can anticipate the attack so its not a snick attack jutsu to use. The chidori only works in close range but there are many varients of the technique. Other things to mention is how those hand seals can be a problem, but when you master lightning you will be able to perform it with one hand seal so it will be much more quicker. Sasuke and Kakshi bios can do it with no hand seal at all.

(Raiton: Chidori Nagashi) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds Current
Rank: A
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short (Mid if channeled through a medium)
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A (+10 if used to boost weapon damage)
Description: This jutsu allows the user to generate non-focused electricity from their body. It can be used as an omnidirectional attack or be channeled through weapons, the ground or other conductive mediums. Because the electricity isn't focused, it doesn't kill on contact, instead it has great numbing and paralyzing effects. To channel Nagashi through a medium, the user needs to focus the technique into one of his hands which will then be put in contact with the medium and can only choose to either do a widespread attack throughout his whole body or to channel it into something; he cannot achieve both usages at the same time. Despite not having much destructive or damaging properties, Nagashi can be used to destroy low rank earthen and wooden structures and even negate chakra on the ground to stop high ranked earth and wood techniques. It has also been noted that Lightning Specialists that have mastered Lightning to the highest degree can resist total paralyzation, although they still feel the pain and numbing effects.
Note: Paralyzation lasts 1 turn if sucessful but is ineffective against bios who have a primary Lightning Specialty

Another known jutsu by all which was used by sasuke. The user will send non-focused lightning chakra through the entire body first and release it towards the opponent, depending on how you release it makes the difference of how this technique works. If you use the ground as a medium it will begin to crack through the ground and race towards the opponent in attempt to paralyze them, not kill though but its numbing ability is very strong. When channeled short range it covers the whole radius of short range so it is great to use in close range battle to push an opponent back or combine with taijutsu attack, if you send it at a opponent from mid-range it travels straight as a projectile on the ground or anything that can conduct lightning. You can also channel it through metal giving it a shocking potent ability to the metal which can cut better and numb the opponent if hit with it, this is a much more powerful method with the nagashi but their are other techniques similar to this ability. Despite it not having much damage to an opponent it can still cut through many tough material like rock and wood. Now having the benefit of specilizing lightning is if you are ever struck by the nagashi you will not be paralyzed but you can still feel the pain which might make you lose some balance or hesitate but nothing more. Simple ways to counter this technique is to manipulate the ground if it is channeled you can lower it so the medium becomes longer in range so it will disperse before it touches you. Others counters are quite obivous.
 

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After weaving 4hs,i generate lightning from my hands by nature manipulating my raw chakra into raiton,after which i send it towards senpai,moulding and shape manipulating it into a sharp disk that cuts senpai into half still electrocuting him.
creative uses/strengths
it can cut through earth and wood materials as well as it has shocking properties as it is relatively fast and destructive.
drawbacks/counters
it can only reach up to mid range and can be easily countered by the wind blade as it is its natural weakness.
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After performing the 11 handseals,i start by gathering my raiton chakra into my right hand,shape manipulating it in a ball of raiton which is connected to my hand as i dash towards senpai cutting through his heart piercing and numbing him.
Creative uses/strengths
it pierces and numbs the area hit on the opponents body as well as it is a destructive melee attack(a jutsu that can be used to attack head on)
drawbacks/counters
due to the sound it makes,it can be anticipated by simply hearing the chirping sound,making the opponent ready for the jutsu
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I start by gathering raiton chakra all over my body generating it into a non focused energy that i release from the 361 chakra points of my body that paralyses and numbs senpai that is close to me.
creative uses
it can destroy low rank solid materials like wood and earth and also to negate chakra that is on the ground.
drawbacks/counters
Although it is a lightning jutsu,it does not kill the opponent but paralyses them for 1 turn.
"i wish to master raiton soon,after it will you train me in earth,pretty please"
 

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How bout this, re-do the template with more detail for this is disgraceful -_- and if you impress me I will think about it. I will also be looking over the S-Ranks Dork will teach you so nothings gets over me heuheueheuehueheueheu
 

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After weaving the required 4hs,i gather my raw chakra from my body nature manipulating it to raiton by increasing its frequency and vibration.i then continue by focusing the chakra to generate lightning from my hands after which i shape manipulate the chakra to form a large disk made out of lightning while i send it to senpai,cutting senpai into a half still electrocuting him afterwards.
creative uses/strengths
it can cut through earth and wood materials as well as it has shocking properties as it is relatively fast and destructive to the opponent
drawbacks/counters
it can only reach up to mid range and can be easily countered by the wind blade as it is its natural weakness also gives the opponent time to properly think of a defense.
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I start by gathering my raw chakra from my whole body while i nature manipulate it into raiton as done earlier while performing the required 11 handseals,i continue by gathering the raiton chakra into my right hand,shape manipulating it in a ball of unstable electrical energy which is connected to my hand,pulling my colar with my left hand, i dash towards senpai aiming the ball to his heart with speed cutting through his heart piercing and numbing him.
Creative uses/strengths
it pierces and numbs the area hit on the opponents body as well as it is a destructive melee attack(a jutsu that can be used to attack head on)
drawbacks/counters
due to the sound it makes,it can be anticipated by simply hearing the chirping sound,making the opponent ready for the jutsu and also the long handseal required by a newbie to perform the jutsu
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I start by gathering my raw chakra from the whole of my body,nature manipulating it into raiton chakra on all over my body after which generating it into a non focused energy that shape manipulate to tiny bolts of lightning which i eventually release from the 361 chakra points of my body to attack senpai omni-directionally which instantly paralyses and numbs senpai as it makes contact with his body since he is close to me.
creative uses
it can destroy low rank solid materials like wood and earth and also to negate chakra that is on the ground and also a quick counter to surprise attacks
drawbacks/counters
Although it is a lightning jutsu,it does not kill the opponent but paralyses them for 1 turn and also the attack is random,it can't be focused on a location or person.
"what is my answer please about the earth training"
"quick question:can chidori nagashi break genjutsu,i'm kinda confused......."
 

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You killed me @_@

Anyway yes its a full body surge.

And Ill answer you after you are done with lightning :)


(Raiton: Ikazuchi Hakai) โ€“ Lightning Release: Lightning Destruction
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short โ€“ Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: After performing a small sequence of hand seals the user will place their hand on the ground converting their chakra in to lightning. The user then sends an enormous bolt of electricity that cuts through the ground in the direction of the enemy. The shape of the bolt is a triangular with the base in the direction of the user and the tip headed towards the target. It causes devastating destruction on its way and generates enough heat and power to destroy whatever it comes into contact with.

After a small set of hand seals the user will place their hands on the ground and send a electrical surge through the ground cracking and tearing it through. It cuts through the ground all the way towards an enemy. The shape of bolt is triangular. The base will be in the direction of the user, while the tip towards the enemy. Now its a very powerful technique able to easily destroy the ground and tear through many dense material like wood and earth. A huge downside is it moves quite slow since it takes up a shape of a triangle. The bolt will easily be heard when ripping through the ground, its also straightforward since you know the tip will attack the opponent, lastly you must keep your hand on the ground until the tip hits the opponent for if you don't it will disperse making it a streaming technique. When it does the opponent will be seriously wounded and down due to the destructive shock. Simple ways to counter is something similar to the nagashi by manipulating the ground to lower or higher the medium will be longer. The range goes only mid range in length.

(Raiton: Chidori Senbon) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds Needle
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user reshapes the Chidori in their hand into the form of countless senbon which are shot with a simple hand movement towards the target. The senbons are extremely precise and have the same numbing and paralyzing effects as Chidori, carrying enormous speed. Because the technique requires no handseals and is done with simple hand movements, its extremely hard to avoid while in short range and quite dangerous to counter due to the precision attacks it can be used to perform.

Its fairly simple but nice, with one hand seal the user will gather their raiton chakra into their hands and condense it creating the chidori. They will then raise the chidori high and release its energy which in turn release multiple needles which can pierce through an opponent and paralyze that area hit.This is a great distracting technique since it fires from all over the place it would be very tough on an opponent to dodge them and blocking is just as tough since their is a constant fire of them being released. Its fast and easy to perform. A downside is you must keep focused on the chidori to contently send the senbons towards the opponents area. So I recommend creating a clone, if you have the training of course to send a straight attack to hurt the opponent. Note you are also a target for water jutsus, so expect the opponent to use a water jutsu on you for if the palm with the chidori is wet the lightning will go crazy and shock your entire arm or body depending on just how much water is used.

(Raiton: Sanda Appu) โ€“ Lightning Release: Thunder Up
Rank: A
Type: Offence
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user concentrates a lot of lightning chakra into their hand, compressing it into a ball of lightning energy. The user can then hurl it at the enemy or trust it forward in a melee attack. Once the ball hits the target, it expands into a massive lightning explosion.

Very simple technique. The user will gather lightning chakra in their favorited hand and condense while molding it all in one ball of lightning. The user will then release its energy towards the opponent causing a explosion around them, which can shock the opponent and push them back with some force. Now you can send it from mid range by throwing it at the opponent and as it makes its way have the explosion occur, that is the projectile based attack and simple ways to counter include trying to overpower it. The other method is by thrusting it towards the opponent as a melee attack which can explode on the opponents body. It is a much more dangerous technique because you have to get close to the opponent and you will be open for water attacks.
 

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After performing a sequence of handseals,i place my hands on the ground nature manipulating my raw chakra into raiton by increasing its frequency and oscillations,i continue by sending an enormous bolt of electricity in form of an electrical discharge that immediately cuts through the ground towards senpai.i shape manipulate the discharge into a triangular bolt by increasing its length as well as its width,the tip heads towards senpai as it causes and deal devastating damage and destruction generating heat and power that destroys everything it comes in contact with including senpai,tearing him into shreds thereby electrocuting him also.
/Creative uses/
it can cut through dense materials as it also destroy the ground dealing devastating damage to the opponent.
/Drawbacks and Counters/
it is slow and can be easily heard when it rips through the earth and also,the user must place their hands on the ground till the tip reaches the opponent as it only gets up to mid range from the user.
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I begin by building up my raw chakra as i then make 1hs as i do this,i begin to increase the oscillation and vibration of the chakra nature manipulating it into raiton. I continue by releasing the chakra from my palm as i mold it into a ball of lightning,holding the ball upwards,i manipulate it to release and shoot countless senbons that rips through senpai.
/Creative uses/
it is very hard to dogde the senbons when used in short range,it is easy and fast since senbons shoot out of an already made chidori.
/Drawbacks and counters/
when this jutsu is active and the user gets in contact with water,the user gets shocked. It is a streaming tech,so no other jutsu can be made while it is active.
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I begin by building up my chakra as i reminisce about the characteristics of raiton,while i increase the frequency of the chakra nature manipulating it into raiton as i move it to my right hand,i continue by releasing the chakra from my hand,moulding the chakra and shape manipulating it into a ball of raiton. I send the ball towards senpai, it explodes immediately it got into short range from senpai,it burns and breaks senpai into tiny pieces.
/Creative uses/
it requires no handseal thereby making it easier to perform, when in short range with the opponent it is almost undogdeable since it explodes and covers a wide area.
/Drawbacks and counters/
when the ball is still in the users hand,he is vulnerable to water techs because he will be electrocuted. When the jutsu come in contact with water,it gets up to mid range and therefore cant be used to attack opponents in long range.
 

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(Raiton: Jลซrokuchลซ Shibari) โ€“ Lightning Release: Sixteen-Pillar Bind
Rank: A
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short โ€“ Long
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: After performing the needed hand seals Rat โ†’ Monkey โ†’ Horse โ†’ Tiger the user will create a even more powerful version of Lightning Release: Four Pillar Bind. Using this technique, the user creates sixteen giant pillars by using his lightning chakra to shape the ground into a multitude of pillars, which then form a giant cubic oven to trap the enemy. It is often used after Earth Release: Mud Fall to cover the enemy target in mud and then follow up with using Fire release: Firing Biscuit, creating flames in the oven to roast and harden the mud, immobilizing the enemy.

Funny technique since it does not generate any lightning whatsoever but it can work with combos and is very large. The user will have 16 pillars rise around the opponent after performing 3 hand seals which wrap around to create a box almost to trap anything within it. Its large enough to trap a summon or many opponents all in once so it can help with combo attacks or trapping plans. The bind has a small box which you can send techniques in to finish an opponent off. The pillars are made of earth with that being said wind can slice it through very easily or use a lightning jutsu to destroy it. If you are ever caught in the box you can evade from under the box. The pillar creates a huge box which covers a very long range so it can be used anywhere. Simple to say it does take some time for it to fully rise around the opponent making a time window you can use to evade the pillars. I recommend while you use it for yourself try to distract the opponent while raising it but you will need to remain focus. So having a ally to help will be best.

(Raiton: Chidori Eiso) - Lightning Release Chidori Sharp Spear
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user increases the range of their Chidori by using form manipulation to extend it into a blade up to 10 meters in length. This blade is capable of splitting into multiple additional blades upon contact with an enemy, drastically increasing the number of wounds it can inflict. Like other Chidori-related techniques, this jutsu will numb its target upon contact but unlike others, seems to focus more on having a cutting power, like a katana, than a piercing one. Because of its cutting abilities, it often seems to manifest a certain "solidity"; a tangible aspect.

The user will form a chidori which he then thrusts it releasing it forward to summon a spear to erect out of the chidori. The spear is very useful to keep a distance away from an opponent as well as combo with attacks in close range by distracting them with the spear and then get in close, it also acts as a normal chidori which on contact will numb the area of the opponent if caught. You can wield the spear with great ease so you can aim it however you want, it can cut through the most solid materials as well. Its great to use to finish an opponent off, and the spear when release forward is actually quite quick so it can be used to decive an opponent. The spears also after piercing an opponent can release more spears at the tip to completely destroy the opponent from the inside.

(Raiton: Rairyu no Tatsumaki) - Lightning Release: Thunder Dragon Tornado
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user forms a whirling vortex of wind and electricity around themselves. The vortex will take on the form of a dragonโ€™s head and will cover the area in front of them. Even if the attack doesn't directly connect with his foe, the lightning can jump from the vortex to hit a nearby target.

The user will release wind chakra and spin it around like a vortex, then add lightning on the edge of the wind chakra not touching one another but acting to make layers. The wind acts as a base while the lightning is on top. Now the vortex can be a barrier and a attack all at the same time because it can intercept basic attacks as well as be sent to the opponent. Its projectile based when launched but needs to remain focus while performing it or else it will disperse, though its quick performance with no hand seals. The best part is if a opponent tries to evade the lightning can be manipulated and jump out the vortex to shock a evading opponent almost to act as deception. It inflicts serious shock and pain like any other normal attack. This technique is very harmful with fire techniques, since fire will act to phase around the lightning it can feed on the fuuton chakra and over power it so be weary of fire jutsus, that can also make of a great combo as well.
 

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Perform the technique: i begin by building up my chakra nature manipulating it into raiton chakra i then make the needed handseals i then flow my chakra into the ground make the around twenty dummies i then forcefully shape the earth to form sixteen pillars around them infused with lightning.
Creative/strengths: this jutsu can be used to trap a target since it creates like a box around the target leaving them nowhere to go to.
Drawbacks/counters:before the pillar forms completely the target can get out of it using hurricane fist to go upwards out of the box
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I begin by building up my chakra as i then think about the characteristics of lightning while i increase the vibration of the chakra,nature manipulating it into raiton,i then make 1hs and release the chakra from my right palm shape manipulating it into a chidori. I begin focusing on the chidori as i increase its length to about 7meters aimed at senpai head which rips through senpai's head,i continue by making it split into multiple additional blades tearing senpai's head into shreds.
Creative uses : Unlike other chidori techs,the jutsu allows the user to attack opp in mid range. The spear is released quickly making it hard for an opp in short range dogde. The jutsu has more cutting power than the other chidori techs.
Drawbacks and counters : it is a streaming jutsu not allowing the user to perform another tech. When the jutsu is active and the user comes in contact with water,he gets electrocuted.
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After releasing my wind chakra to form a vortex,i begin by building up my chakra as i nature manipulate the accumulated chakra into raiton by increasing its frequency and vibration. I then release the chakra simultaneously shape manipulating it into a vortex to surround the wind without having physical contact with each other. I send the vortexes to senpai as it hits and rips through him.
Creative uses : it requires no hand seal making it an easy and quick jutsu to perform. The lightning can be controlled or manipulated to attack the target alone after they think they have dodged the jutsu.
Drawbacks and counters : it only goes up to mid range so the user wont be able to attack opp in long range. The jutsu needs focus if it is not wanted to disperse making it a streaming tech.
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Stop please, after this training I will decide.


( Raiton: Denpล Sekka ) โ€“ Lightning Release: Telegram Flash
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: After doing the Rabbit โ†’ Rat โ†’ Horse โ†’ Ram hand seals, the user will slam his hand on the ground and release into it a massive amounts of lightning chakra which will then pool beneath his opponent before releasing itself into a gigantic column of lightning which shocks anything caught above it. The technique can affect a bigger or smaller area depending on the users will.

Very similar to jutsus we have already seen in reality I don't see much of a difference. The user will do the required hand seals and gather raiton chakra, then after slamming on hand on the ground the user will release the lightning to the opponent which will act to pool under him paralyzing the opponent on contact then after it gathers it will erupt in a giant column which will shock the opponent. Like the other similar techniques it creates large sound and can easily destroy hard material. It moves up to mid range at most as well but can be used in short to, though I don't recommend it. This is great to use though with large summoning or slightly airborn animals since it erupts in a column.

( Raiton: Fusei Shuriken Chidori Jutsu ) - Lightning Release: Rigged Shuriken One Thousand Birds Style
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user will utilize a large shuriken and channel a chidori into it. The user will then throw the shuriken charged with chidori towards the opponent resulting in paralysing them on impact. (paralysis lasts for 1 turn)
Note: Must Know Chidori

Okay the user will take out a large shuriken and channel the chidori into the shuriken which will appear as a bright blue lightning current running through it. It takes up the abilities of a normal chidori, the user will send it towards the opponent by throwing it. If it makes contact with the opponent it will paralyze the opponent as well as pierce them like any other normal shuriken would. Now this is a obvious projectile technique and is limited to only mid range. The shuriken uses the air as a medium of travel of course and it is quite fast moving but nothing that can't be handled. Lastly simple ways to counter can be a dense wall or trying to evade it will a earth pillar to push you to the side since it is a straightforward technique.
 

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I begin by building up my chakra as i then think of the features of lightning while i increase the frequency of the chakra nature manipulating it into raiton. After this,i do the required hand seals after which i gathered my raiton chakra, slamming my hands on the ground, i release the lightning at senpai which pools under him paralysing immediately on contact. During its gathering,it erupt up into a giant column that shocks senpai.
Creative uses : it can destroy hard materials like wood and earth and can only move up to mid range. It can be used to disperse summons and slightly air borne animals.
Drawbacks and counters : it makes a loud sound which notify the user of an incoming raiton attack. It is drastic to the user if used in short range.
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I begin to build my chakra thinking about the characteristics of lightning while i increase the frequency of the chakra nature manipulating it into raiton. Making 1hs i release the chakra into a windmill shuriken,channeling the chidori into it. Aiming and throwing it at senpai to hit him on his chest as it pierces and rips his heart off. It paralyses him as it makes physical contact.
Creative uses : it is quite fast in the air as it also has the piercing and numbing characteristics of a normal chidori.
Drawbacks and counters : it is a projectile jutsu and also a straight fowarded tech that only reaches up to mid range and can be evaded or countered by erecting a dense wall of earth or wood or using the earth pillar to push the user to a safe side.
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There is no way I'm posting all 7 at once. :|


(Raiton: Gian) - Lightning Style: False Darkness
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Descripton: The user after performing the hand seal snake emits lightning in the shape of a spear from their hands whilst kakuzu lightning mask emits it from its mouth, which then pierces the enemy. Its destructive power is great enough to even pierce through rock; meaning it has a high killing potential. The user can increase the number of spears to attack multiple enemies. This, coupled with the sheer speed of the lightning, makes it a difficult technique to evade. This strong attack can be defended against by an equally strong attack of the same element such as Raikiri.

With one hand seal the user will generate lightning chakra on their hands and release the lightning and mold it into a spear. This is very similar to the B-Rank False darkness spear. The spear though is much more powerful and runs much quicker then its weaker counter part, its attack potency is high and can pierce through even the strongest of earth material. The spear acts to pierce the opponent and paralyze them at the same time due to natural ability of lightning. The technique has great mobility being able to move up to long range and you can aim it anywhere. The spear can only be cut away using a equal rank lightning jutsu or dispersed by a wind technique of at least A-Rank. Lastly the spears can split on the users command to deceive this can be used to decieve an opponent as well as attack more then one target. Though remember the more you make the more each get weak. Its a fast performance technique, projectile based technique as well which helps in combos but this also makes the spear quite straightforward so you can easily have the time to evade.


(Raiton: Raikiri) - Lightning Release: Lightning Blade
Rank: S
Type: Offense
Range: Short (Long if applied to a projectile weapon)
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The Lightning Cutter is an enhanced and concentrated form of the Chidori with the same effects and drawbacks that is done performing the Ox โ†’ Rabbit โ†’ Monkey hand seals. According to Might Guy, it gained its name after Kakashi split a bolt of lightning with it. Because the Chidori is already powerful on its own, the Lightning Cutter requires better chakra control, which is exemplified in its appearance. The Chidori appears as simply a mass of white electrical chakra in the user's hand, while the Lightning Cutter is much more focused. Kakashi has shown different ways of forming and using the Lightning Cutter, unique to him. For example, he demonstrated the ability to imbue a projectile weapon, such as a kunai, with his Lightning Cutter, granting the technique long-range capabilities by throwing the kunai towards his target. In this instance, the kunai was capable of piercing through multiple large rocks with ease, without any loss of momentum or change in trajectory.
Note: Kakashi biographies can use the technique without hand seals.
Note: Only Kakashi biographies can apply the technique to a kunai and use it as a projectile attack.

I'll be explaining this technique as if you have a regular bio and not a kakashi bio. The user will do 3 hand seals and create a serious condensed amount of raiton which appears almost completely white. It has a serious amount of power so much though that it can cut through actual lightning making it one of the most powerful techniques in the lightning jutsu list its power is so noticable you can hear the lightning current as well as see the lightning revolve around the user due to the insane concentration. It is mainly used as a melee weapon great for close range battle, it is the type of technique a opponent does not want to get close to, it can easily be used in combo with other close combat attacks like taijutsu, or hold a sword in the other hand to always keep up to battle in close range. This technique has the ability to cut through many dense objects. In short it is very similar to chidori but in a more advanced form.


(Raiton: Raikiri Nibai Raikou Jishin) โ€“ Lightning Release: Lightning Blade Double Lightning Quake
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user performs (Raiton: Raikiri) - Lightning Release: Lightning Blade and splits it in two, covering both hands in Lightning. He will then perform a melee attack at the enemy, unleashing the powerful lightning into him.

So, this technique is very similar to the Raikiri you just did. First, you create a Raikiri (using Raikiri's handseals), and then place your other hand by your lightning-charged palm, splitting the Raikiri into two, allowing you to essentially hold two Chidori as you cut it's power in half when you cut it in half. Using this technique doesn't count as two techniques, one for Raikiri and one for this; just one jutsu for this one. This technique allows you to turn hand-based taijutsu into powerful lightning strikes with both of your hands, instead of simply having your one hand with lightning in it. Now, depending on the situation, this technique and regular Raikiri or even Chidori could be favored or the other; it's all situational. But the one thing to remember about this jutsu is that it's more like two Chidori than two Raikiri, as you have to cut it's power when you divide it among your two hands.
 

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Perform the technique: I
begin by building my up
my raw chakra I then
think about the
characteristics of lightning
as I nature manipulate my
chakra into ration chakra I
then make one hand seal
and begin to release the
chakra around my hand
towards the target I then
shape manipulate the
chakra into a spear that
rips through the dummy at
blind speed
Creative uses/strengths: I
would first use fire shower
I will then follow with this
jutsu making the
opponent counter both at
the same time since the
spear moves very
fast......the spear is fast so
thereby making it hard to
evead....the spear gets up
to long range so it can be
uses to attack a target at
any range....the spear can
be split to attack multiple
targets
Drawbacks/counters: the
jutsu require one hand
seal and informs the
target that a jutsu is
being performed....the
spear moves in one
direction so it can be
avoided by moving out if
the way
Perform the technique: I
begin by building my raw
chakra I then start to
think about the
characteristics of raiton as
I begin to increase the
frequency of my chakra
nature manipulating it to
raitom chakra I then make
three hand seals and
release the chakra around
my hand while I run
towards the dummy and
cut through the dummy
with my hand
Creative uses/
strengths: the jutsu can
cuts through the lightning
jutsus of lower or equal
rank.....the jutsu can be
used in conjunction with
many taijutsu techniques
Drawbacks/counters: the
jutsu requires many hand
seals so it will give the
target time to react and
think of a counter....the
jutsu stays around the
user hand only
Perform the technique: i
begin by building up my
chakra as i then think
about the characteristics
oflightning while i then
increase the frequency of
the chakra nature
manipulating it into raiton
chakra i then do three
handseals while i release
the chra around my right
hand i then lap my hands
together anx spread the
lightning over to the other
hand now leaving me with
two raikiris in hand
Creative uses/strengths:
this jutsu is two jutsu and
it doesnt count has two it
counts as only one......the
jutsu can be used in
conjunction with many
taijutsu techniques.... the
jutsu will be useful in
close range battle as i
think it can be used to
cut a sword
Drawbacks/counters: this
jutsu is less concentrated
than the normal one has
the user splits the normal
one into two..... the justsu
can't get up to long range
so it can be used to attack
someone at long range....
 

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.....You may not like the fact that I am not doing every single technique in one post, but that doesn't mean you should make it as difficult as possible for me to read. :|


First technique: even if you move out of the way, the user can split off more spears to follow them.
Third technique: the weakness of a melee jutsu is that it's not long-range? Your idea of fighting is rather narrow. And though it's "less concentrated", it's still the equivalent of holding two Chidori, one in each hand.


(Raiton: Kirin) - Lightning Release: Kirin
Rank: S
Type: Offense
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra Cost: 70
Damage Points: 120
Description: After using a fire jutsu to heat the atmosphere and create thunderclouds in the sky, the user will use Chidori to take control of the lightning above. They can then make the lightning strike an opponent in the blink of an eye.
Note: Can only be avoided with time/space techniques or otherwise absolute defenses.
Note: Can only be used once per battle.
Note: In the turn before the use of Kirin, the user must have used at least a B-Rank, Long Range Fire (Katon) technique directed at the sky.
Note: User needs to post Chidori, meaning that in the turn Kirin is used, the user spends 2 moves.

So, one of the most powerful Raiton techniques in the series: Kirin. Of course, you must have used a fire technique to heat up the sky to create stormy conditions in order to bring down a bolt of lightning in the first place. A couple things to note about this technique: the first is that after using your fire technique, the general rule-of-thumb is that you must wait three techniques before you can use Chidori for the storm to fully form. This generally allows you to use the fire at the end of your turn, your opponent uses three jutsu, and then you can defend before using Kirin. The second thing to note is that you must use Chidori before you can use Kirin, making it cost two jutsu instead of one like Double Raikiri. However, as soon as you use Chidori, which only uses one handseals after you complete Raiton, you can begin manipulating the lightning in the clouds and bring it down very close to instantly in conjunction. And when trying to use this technique, be wary; the best way to beat it is to disrupt it, so watch out for people trying to stop you from using Kirin, or even trying to distract you to use the storm for themselves.


(Raiton: Chidori Jinrai) โ€“ Lightning Release: 1000 birds ThunderClap.
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user will cover his hands in with lightning, essentially performing a (Raiton: Chidori) Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds in each hand. Clapping his hands together, the user can unleash that massive amount of lightning chakra into the form of a powerful Thunderbolt directed at the user. The technique is best used if the user has a height advantage in relation to the target. The Thunderbolt is strong enough to leave a giant crater and cannot be used while being in Short-range of the target, at the risk of being hit also.

Another Chidori based technique, the user mid-air will perform the chidori and release the lightning chakra from the chidori into a very large thunderbolt which is shot at the opponent, it moves at amazing pace and has great attack potency. Note this technique can only be used if your opponent is in a mid-long range for the explosion it leaves off, if you are caught in it, it will actually hurt you as well. The bolts can pierce through anything and shock the opponent terribly. Its a projectile based attack after you send the thunderbolt. Its a great jutsu to use if your stuck in mid-air and you can send an attack because being mid-air always leaves you vulnerable. Its very fast to perform almost instantly since no hand seals are required and when the bolt rains down it moves rather quick. It does give off a large light though and because you make the chidori first you can hear the chirping sounds and anticipate it.


I'm aware there's only two jutsu. Prove to me that your last post (with all the text bunched up at the side) was an accident (by doing this next post correctly) and we'll move back up to three. U_U
 

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After creating the required weather conditions by shooting fire balls into the sky and performing the chidori as well as maintaining it in my hand, with the help of the Chidori in my hand, i am able control the lightning that's formed above and use shape manipulation to create a lightning dragon that is aimed towards the opponent and in a blink of an eye it goes at him and completly destroys him along with the area around him.
Creative uses/strengths:
A finishing move for battle as it deals devastating damage and destruction to the opponent and area hit. The jutsu kills the target in the blink of an eye.
Drawbacks/counters:
It akes up to a turn to perform and the opponent might use the clouds against you to perform their own kirin as it needs chidori to control the lightning for effective destruction.
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I begin by molding my raw chakra and channeling it into my hands, using nature manipulation i manipulate it into Raiton chakra and then i release the chakra to cover both of my hands with lightning gradually creating a chidori in both hands, after doing that i clap my hands releasing a massive amount of electrical discharge and then using shape manipulation i transform it into a thunderbolt that is aimed towards the opponent shocking and killing him simultaneously.
Creative uses/strengths:
No hand seal is required making it a very fast and useful jutsu also highly destructive too, the bolts can pierce even though hard earth structures and solid elements making it useful to destroy obstacles, it will severely damage the area around him and also instantly killing the opponent in the process.
Drawbacks/counters:
Requires to be mid or long range from the opponent since there is a chance of getting hit by the bolts and it requires the opponent to be in mid-air, it could be tough against fast and aggressive opponents. Wide range wind jutsus can counter this jutsu very easily.
 

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That was good. And, as for the second technique, neither you nor your opponent necessarily need to be mid-air; it just helps.


(Raigen Raikochu) โ€“ Lightning Illusion Flash of Lightning Pillar
Rank: S
Type: Supplementaty
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: N/A
Description: After performing the following handseals Ram โ†’ Horse โ†’ Snake โ†’ Tiger the user will release a massive amount of lighting chakra which he uses to create a blinding light that appears to emanate from all over the users body. The light can blind any enemy that sees it but its main ability is that, through skill and precise chakra control and timing, the user can use it as a cover to put the enemy into a genjutsu by using the light as a decoy, preventing the enemy from noticing the genjutsu was placed.
Note: Can follow with any Genjutsu the user knows up to A-Rank but needs to have mastered Genjutsu. The user will need to effectively spend two moves, performing both the Lightning Illusion and the Genjutsu; the first only serves as a cover to place the second unnoticed
Note: Can only be used once every three turns

After doing the hand seals the opponent will generate a blinding light from their body. The light can easily blind the opponent obscuring the opponents vision, this is best to use against an Uchia, Byakugan users can see through it easy, I would also say its good to use against a Rinnegan user. The performance is quite slow but the light is generated fast. Its a very simple technique, and its meant for combo making. You can anticipate that the opponent will try to use an attack on you. When the user does use this jutsu, they will not be able to even look at the user for the duration. Notes are that the longer you keep generating your chakra the longer the light stays but you must keep focus and can not be able to use another technique. Its great to use with an ally or clone who is right behind you, not worrying about the light.


(Raiton: Chidori Raimei) - Lightning Style: 1000 Birds Thunderstorm
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost:40
Damage Points:80
Descripton: The user will channel lightning chakra into his hand, covering it with a massive chidori. The user will then point his palm forwards, unleashing that chakra, creating a massive 120ยบ blast of lightning that spreads from his hand, outwards and forward towards the enemy.

Another chidori technique, very fast to perform and easy. The user after making the chidori will spread from the users palm to cover a large area in front of them and cover a wide range up to 120ยบ blast making evasion tough so trying to move to the side will not work well. Its a fast moving technique and can cut through many attacks as well as shock the opponent badly while slicing them. Its great to use to push an opponent back but a huge disadvantage is it only goes mid range so evading it by simply moving back is the more simplest of methods. After you send the lightning bolts from your hands it becomes a projectile based attack, its great to use for combos for flanking a fire technique trying to make sure the opponent does not see it. As any other chidori technique similar it will give off a 1000 bird chirping sound if done alone.


( Raiton: Chidori Shinso ) - One Thousand Birds True Spear
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description:The user starts off by dashing at his opponent with a Chidori in his hand. As they strikes his opponent, they uses shape manipulation to extend the Chidori into a lightning spear that impales and hurtles the opponent into the air. The user then increases the potency of the lightning, generating a powerful electric explosion at the end of the spear and sending the enemy back to the ground.
Note: Only the spear extention can reach up to mid range.

This is a advance version of the lightning spear. Now with the spear alone, you could move it around and cut through many tough rocks. The spear is very useful to keep a distance away from an opponent, it also acts as a chidori which on contact will numb the area of the opponent if caught. You can wield the spear with great ease, it can cut through the most solid of metals. Its great to use to finish an opponent off, and the spear when release is very quickly. Now the spear extends mid-range (10m). The spear now if the opponent is pierced by it, the user can send extra chakra to the tip to create a explosion which can destroy the opponents inside. Its very deadly.


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