Ebi Bio

[Ebi..]

Basic Information
Name:Ebi
Nickname: Ian
Gender: Male
Age: 17
Clan: Darkness

Looks: Ebi is a rare and magical creature from Seiren. He resembles a plump miniature seal with the face of a cat and a pair of large bobbing antenna.

Personality: Ebi is forgetful, playful, but surprisingly intelligent.

Village Info.
Village of Birth: Kumogakare
Village of Alliance: Konoha

Rank//Chakra Info.
Ninja Rank: Genin
Specialty: Ebi is also able to shoot a powerful beam attack (called the E-beam ) from his mouth.
Elements: Lightning: needs improvement
Wind: needs improvement
Water: needs improvement
Your ninjutsu:

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Heavenly Thunderous Armament

Rank: E

Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 7
Damage Points: 15
Description: The caster absorbs 1000 lightning bolts, fusing it with his body, this jutsu increases the speed and attack of the caster
*created by Dakrazyebi(can only be taught by Dakrazyebi)*

Background Info.
History: No record exists

Other

Picture:

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Theme Song and Background Music: Will update later when i can figure how to put a Youtube video

Battles

Won: 0
Lost: 0​

 

[Tento]

Go read the rules.

 

[Ebi..]

i did but its confusing x_X gonna remove it

 

[-Albel-]

I know this is your first bio but there are so many things wrong with it.
1) You can't make a bio where your character is a "Magical Creature" it has to be a human
2) You can only pick one element to start out with since you are only Genin
3) You can't have any specialties since you are only Genin
4) You Have to have a history for your bio or it wont get approved
5) The jutsu you have in your "Ninjutsu" spot needs to be removed unless that was approved in the CJ Submissions Thread, and you need to add the basic E-Rank jutsus to it instead.

Spoiler

(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)
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(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.
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(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.
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(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.
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(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
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(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).
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(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)

 

[Ebi..]

I know this is your first bio but there are so many things wrong with it.
1) You can't make a bio where your character is a "Magical Creature" it has to be a human
2) You can only pick one element to start out with since you are only Genin
3) You can't have any specialties since you are only Genin
4) You Have to have a history for your bio or it wont get approved
5) The jutsu you have in your "Ninjutsu" spot needs to be removed unless that was approved in the CJ Submissions Thread, and you need to add the basic E-Rank jutsus to it instead.

Spoiler

(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)
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(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.
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(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.
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(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.
_____
(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
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(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).
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(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)

Thanks for the help .__. never done RP so didnt know how to do it right, i read the rules but was still confusing... thanks again will redo it....