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Yes! Very Good lol

Ok, well from now on to speed up your training we'll be doing three jutsu at a time. Just because we are doing more at a time doesn't mean that your training will have any less quality. I will still be asking questions and giving you ides on how to use them in battle. And we wont move on until I feel you've come to understand how the techniques properly work, just like I did with this one which took us days to get by.



(Doton: Doryū Jōheki) - Earth Release: Earth Flow Rampart
*Creates clone*
Being by performing the Tiger handseal and creating a large rampart beneath your feet. The description of the jutsu explains pretty much how to do the jutsu. Be sure to use detail, and decribe to me what your Rampart looks like when it's complete.

(Doton: Doryō Dango) - Earth Release: Earth Mausoleum Dumping
*Creates Clone*
A very simple jutsu, this involves using your chakra to augment your own strength temporarily to superhuman levels and lifting up a chunk of Earth from the ground. You then follow by using this new found strength to hurl the tremendous boulder in the desired location. Due to the sheer size of it, it will flatten anything in its path.

(Doton: Doryuheki) - Earth Release: Earth Style Wall Jutsu
*Creates Clone*
Begin by memorizing all of the handseals carefully. Afterwards perform the jutsu as instructed I
n the jutsu description. Use as much detail as possible without writing unnecessary things.


Anndddd....Go
*i channel a large amount of chakra to my feet and I have it spread out throughout the earth beneath at a great depth. I then have the chakra morph in shape, with a perfect circle beneath me and the rest of the chakra move downwards in individual slants. Once that is done, I have the chakra infuse thouroughly with the earth and raise upowards, raising the earth. Due to the shape I morphed the chakra in, the earth rises in the shape of a cone-like mountain, with me on the encircled tip*

*i channel an immense flow of chakra throughout my right arm. I have the chakra flow quickly. Due to the fct that the chakra network is tightly intertwined with the muscular system, the intense flow and immense chakra, it pushes my muscles to the limit and beyond, increasing the strength in my hand beyond normal levels. I then grab onto the earth in front of me and rip a large boulder out of the ground. I then use my strength to hurl the boulder at your clone, whose body and bones are shattered and crushed, destroying him*

*i channel my chakra in front me in a large pool withing the earth. I then perform the seals and have the chakra infuse tightly and thoroughly with the earth. I then habve the chakra change shape to look like a brick from an aerial view and a wall from a front view. I then have the chakra rise up, as it does, it drags the earth with it and form it into a very dense wall. I then release another flow of chakra that infuses with the wall and forms a membrane. I then have this membrane support the wall and incrase its defensive power*
 
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*i channel a large amount of chakra to my feet and I have it spread out throughout the earth beneath at a great depth. I then have the chakra morph in shape, with a perfect circle beneath me and the rest of the chakra move downwards in individual slants. Once that is done, I have the chakra infuse thouroughly with the earth and raise upowards, raising the earth. Due to the shape I morphed the chakra in, the earth rises in the shape of a cone-like mountain, with me on the encircled tip*

*i channel an immense flow of chakra throughout my right arm. I have the chakra flow quickly. Due to the fct that the chakra network is tightly intertwined with the muscular system, the intense flow and immense chakra, it pushes my muscles to the limit and beyond, increasing the strength in my hand beyond normal levels. I then grab onto the earth in front of me and rip a large boulder out of the ground. I then use my strength to hurl the boulder at your clone, whose body and bones are shattered and crushed, destroying him*

*i channel my chakra in front me in a large pool withing the earth. I then perform the seals and have the chakra infuse tightly and thoroughly with the earth. I then habve the chakra change shape to look like a brick from an aerial view and a wall from a front view. I then have the chakra rise up, as it does, it drags the earth with it and form it into a very dense wall. I then release another flow of chakra that infuses with the wall and forms a membrane. I then have this membrane support the wall and incrase its defensive power*

1)Ok, first off, wheres the damn handseal? Your jutsu already fails. Secondly and more important, a cone shaped rampart with you on the top? Now again I think you have a problem with visualizing what your techniques look like, seeing as this is the second time your describing something that makes no sense. Now think rationally for a second, would you really be able to stand on a cone shaped mountain in the middle of a battlefield? What would happen if you stood on the circular face of the cone? I want a serious answer for this before you even think about attempting this again.

Another thing is that the jutsu doesn't create a mountain, just a large plateau.

Yamato's version

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2)Come on, so simple yet you managed to do one thing wrong ~_~ Use both hands, the damn thing is huge you'll need both hands. Mark my words, after this we're going to fight. I want to see if you're actually capable of RPing. Not to insult you, but your coming up with impossible ways to do everything, and I can't turn a blind eye to someone like you who seems to not have the slightest clue how to perform a simple jutsu.


Jirobo using the technique as seen in the Anime

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3) This was done most accurately. Although, a membrane isn't included in this jutsu. The fact that the Earth is infused with your chakra already makes it powerful, there's no need for another coat of chakra.

However, it's acceptable and you got this one.

We'll move on once you get them all right like I promised.
 

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1)Ok, first off, wheres the damn handseal? Your jutsu already fails. Secondly and more important, a cone shaped rampart with you on the top? Now again I think you have a problem with visualizing what your techniques look like, seeing as this is the second time your describing something that makes no sense. Now think rationally for a second, would you really be able to stand on a cone shaped mountain in the middle of a battlefield? What would happen if you stood on the circular face of the cone? I want a serious answer for this before you even think about attempting this again.

Another thing is that the jutsu doesn't create a mountain, just a large plateau.

Yamato's version

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2)Come on, so simple yet you managed to do one thing wrong ~_~ Use both hands, the damn thing is huge you'll need both hands. Mark my words, after this we're going to fight. I want to see if you're actually capable of RPing. Not to insult you, but your coming up with impossible ways to do everything, and I can't turn a blind eye to someone like you who seems to not have the slightest clue how to perform a simple jutsu.


Jirobo using the technique as seen in the Anime

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3) This was done most accurately. Although, a membrane isn't included in this jutsu. The fact that the Earth is infused with your chakra already makes it powerful, there's no need for anothe
r coat of chakra.

However, it's acceptable and you got this one.

We'll move on once you get them all right like I promised.

You're right, I do have trouble putting what I see in my head into words.

*i channel a large amount of chakra to my feet and flow it into the ground. I have the chakra stretch and go down deep, covering a large area below and around me. I then infuse the chakra with the earth and have the chakra take the shape of a "box". I weave the seal and have the chakra rise up quickly. This in turn raises the earth as well, creating a plateau with me standing on it. Due to the shape I made the chakra, the earth takes that shape, which would be equivalent to the shape of a brick,*

*i channel chakra to both of my hands and have the chakra flow throughout them. I have the chakra flow very very quickly at high speed, making the flow intense. Due to the chakra network being tightly woven with the muscles in my arm, the muscles are vigorously pushed to their limits and beyond by the intense flow of chakra, giving my arms greatly increased strength. I then use this strength to rip a large boulder, much much bigger than myself, out of the ground and I hold it above my head. I then hurl the boulder at the clone, shattering his body and killing him*
 

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1)Ok, first off, wheres the damn handseal? Your jutsu already fails. Secondly and more important, a cone shaped rampart with you on the top? Now again I think you have a problem with visualizing what your techniques look like, seeing as this is the second time your describing something that makes no sense. Now think rationally for a second, would you really be able to stand on a cone shaped mountain in the middle of a battlefield? What would happen if you stood on the circular face of the cone? I want a serious answer for this before you even think about attempting this again.

Another thing is that the jutsu doesn't create a mountain, just a large plateau.

Yamato's version

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2)Come on, so simple yet you managed to do one thing wrong ~_~ Use both hands, the damn thing is huge you'll need both hands. Mark my words, after this we're going to fight. I want to see if you're actually capable of RPing. Not to insult you, but your coming up with impossible ways to do everything, and I can't turn a blind eye to someone like you who seems to not have the slightest clue how to perform a simple jutsu.


Jirobo using the technique as seen in the Anime

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3) This was done most accurately. Although, a membrane isn't included in this jutsu. The fact that the Earth is infused with your chakra already makes it powerful, there's no need for another coat of chakra.

However, it's acceptable and you got this one.

We'll move on once you get them all right like I promised.

You're right, I do have trouble putting what I see in my head into words.

*i channel a large amount of chakra to my feet and flow it into the ground. I have the chakra stretch and go down deep, covering a large area below and around me. I then infuse the chakra with the earth and have the chakra take the shape of a "box". I weave the seal and have the chakra rise up quickly. This in turn raises the earth as well, creating a plateau with me standing on it. Due to the shape I made the chakra, the earth takes that shape, which would be equivalent to the shape of a brick,*

*i channel chakra to both of my hands and have the chakra flow throughout them. I have the chakra flow very very quickly at high speed, making the flow intense. Due to the chakra network being tightly woven with the muscles in my arm, the muscles are vigorously pushed to their limits and beyond by the intense flow of chakra, giving my arms greatly increased strength. I then use this strength to rip a large boulder, much much bigger than myself, out of the ground and I hold it above my head. I then hurl the boulder at the clone, shattering his body and killing him*

I'm ignoring everything you wrote because you ignored my question :p
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I'm ignoring everything you wrote because you ignored my question :p
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Oh my bad. Well with the picture I had in my head, the circular surface would be at the top with me on it, like where yamato was standing on his plateu, that's where I'd be.
 

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Oh my bad. Well with the picture I had in my head, the circular surface would be at the top with me on it, like where yamato was standing on his plateu, that's where I'd be.

Still doesn't answer the question o_o
 

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Still doesn't answer the question o_o

What would happen if I'm on the circular face of a cone-shaped plateu of earth.mm

I guess ill be susceptible to attacks and unable to avoid them due to there not being as much space compared to yamato's version
 

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What would happen if I'm on the circular face of a cone-shaped plateu of earth.mm

I guess ill be susceptible to attacks and unable to avoid them due to there not being as much space compared to yamato's version

Erm, Nope. Think once more before I give you the answer. It's quite obvious o_o
 

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Well I guess I can fall or something

I'm terrible at pointing out obvious things

Exactly ^_^
You would fall. I'm pretty sure you now know, that's a huge flaw in your move.

Now you may attempt the techniques again :p
 

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Exactly ^_^
You would fall. I'm pretty sure you now know, that's a huge flaw in your move.

Now you may attempt the techniques again :p

*i channel my chakra into the ground beneath me and focus it spread outwards and downwards deep into the ground. Once the chakra Is spread out, I focus it to change shape, taking the form of a cube. I then form the seal and have the chakra rise up. The rising chakra drags the earth with it, creating a large box-shaped plateay with me on it*

*i channel my chakra to my hands and have the chakra flow vigourously throughout my arm. Due to the chakra network being so close to my muscles, the flowing chakra affects them. The intense speed and flow of my chakra pushes my muscles, increasing the strength in my arms and hands to extreme levels. I then grab the earth and rip an immense boulder out of the ground and, using my newfound strength, hold it above my head. I then hurl the boulder at the clones, destroying the clones by shattering their bones and ripping their skin apart*
 

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*i channel my chakra into the ground beneath me and focus it spread outwards and downwards deep into the ground. Once the chakra Is spread out, I focus it to change shape, taking the form of a cube. I then form the seal and have the chakra rise up. The rising chakra drags the earth with it, creating a large box-shaped plateay with me on it*

*i channel my chakra to my hands and have the chakra flow vigourously throughout my arm. Due to the chakra network being so close to my muscles, the flowing chakra affects them. The intense speed and flow of my chakra pushes my muscles, increasing the strength in my arms and hands to extreme levels. I then grab the earth and rip an immense boulder out of the ground and, using my newfound strength, hold it above my head. I then hurl the boulder at the clones, destroying the clones by shattering their bones and ripping their skin apart*

Good

Onto the next ones..

(Doton: Iwagakure no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Hiding in Rock Technique
Rank: B
Type: Defence/Supplementary
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This is a technique that allows its user to blend into rocks and then move in and out of other rocks undetected.
Note: Can only blend through on B rank and below Earth Techniques

(Doton: Doryūsō) - Earth Release: Earth Flow Spears
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user first performs the Bird hand seal and the user condense mud or stone, from the ground, and shape them into spikes that will protrude from the ground in order to skewer the target. The spikes cannot penetrate targets of greater density.

(Doton: Iwayado Kuzushi) - Earth Style: Rock Lodging Destruction
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user performs the required hand seals Tiger → Rat → Snake and they then causes a cave-in by destroying the equilibrium that holds the cave together. Just removing a single vital stone throws off the balance of the cave, making it unexpectedly fragile and causing a domino effect that destroys the entire cave. The shinobi from Iwagakure use this technique in their pride tactic, luring several enemies into a cave to kill them all at once.

(Doton: Iwagakure no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Hiding in Rock Technique
Well, I don't know how to explain that any differently than the description says, so do your best and I'll guide you if you get anything wrong or inaccurate. Phase through the Mausoleum Dumpling

(Doton: Doryūsō) - Earth Release: Earth Flow Spears
*Creates clone*
Again, this description explains it pretty well. Try it out, and I'll guide you.

(Doton: Iwayado Kuzushi) - Earth Style: Rock Lodging Destruction
*Creates clone*
Create a Corridor and try the jutsu out xd Once again, I feel the techniques description is fine.

It should look like this..

 

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Good


Onto the next ones..



(Doton: Iwagakure no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Hiding in Rock Technique
Well, I don't know how to explain that any differently than the description says, so do your best and I'll guide you if you get anything wrong or inaccurate. Phase through the Mausoleum Dumpling

(Doton: Doryūsō) - Earth Release: Earth Flow Spears
*Creates clone*
Again, this description explains it pretty well. Try it out, and I'll guide you.

(Doton: Iwayado Kuzushi) - Earth Style: Rock Lodging Destruction
*Creates clone*
Create a Corridor and try the jutsu out xd Once again, I feel the techniques description is fine.

It should look like this..


*as the Dumpling comes at me, I focus my chakra around my body and have it flow off of me. I then have the chakra turn into earth chakra so it will react with the Dumpling better. As the dumpling touches the field of earth the chakra around me when it gets close, I have the chakra infuse with the dumpling and lower the density of the area that would hit me. As the dumpling touches my body, I move and phase into the dumpling, this being possible due to the lowered density. Once I'm safely infused within the dumpling, I pass out the other side, avoiding the damage it would have caused.

*i channel a pool of chakra under the clone's feet and have it form a perfect circle, covering all angles around the clone. I have the chakra sink in deep within the earth and I have the chakra infuse thoroughly with the earth. I then form the seal and have the chakra shoot upwards towards the clones. As the chakra moves up, I mold its shape into long cylinders. This in effect causes the earth to rise with it, morphing the earth in spears due to the shape of the chakra and impaling the clone from multiple angles and directions*

*i focus a large amount of chakra into the earth and around your clone. I then have the chakra infuse with an immense amount of earth around the clone. Once I have enough earth ready, I have it erupt from the ground and surround the clone, creating a makeshift cave that traps him. Once the clone is trapped, I focus on the chakra within the earth and form the handseals. As I finish the seals, I have the chakra within the earth making up the cave vibrate greatly in a few key places, knocking out several rocks and stones that acts as support. Due to the support being gone, the rest of the rocks dislodge and fall, causing the cave to collapse and crush the clone*
 
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