[Doton] [Earth] With xHoudinii

[Excālibur1]

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First Nathy Sensei and now Nathy's Senpai XD​

 

[Houdinii]

Ok so Mr. Naruto69 I see I have you down for earth training in that case heres my template.

Perform the technique:

Advantages:

Disadvantages:

Techniques that counter this one:

Speed of use:

The first few are fairly easy, the first is simply you performing the technique. Use a good amount of description and don't forget to use nature and shape manipulation. The next two are simply the advantages and disadvantages that are accompanied with the technique we are learning. Whether that be for example, trapping your opponent or losing sight of him from the scale of the technique.

While with the techniques that counter you simply have to copy/paste a whole technique that you think counters the one we are learning and give a small explanation why you think so.(1-2 sentences). Also with this try to think outside the box so don't always go straight for the element that its weak to, doing so will help you understand battling more and will actually help you in fights.

As for speed of use you factor in the techniques preparation time(handseals, etc) where it actually forms(near you, near your opponent) and its travel speed to assign it as slow, medium or fast. Along with that give it a small explanation on why you assigned it so.


So with that out of the way is there any questions about the template or anything before we begin?

 

[Excālibur1]

Nope, I don't have any questions.

Instead of exact techniques being specified wholly, why not simple explain how it counters this jutsu as there might be variations to that technique and there might be unlimited ideas on how to counter?

 

[Houdinii]

You have to specify a technique and then explain as to why you think it counters the technique were learning. It helps me to see if there are any flaws in your understanding of the jutsu.

Anywhore perform the last technique Nathan posted but utilize my template instead would you kindly.

 

[Excālibur1]

(Doton: Fukusuu no Dorosandan) - Earth Release: Multiple Mudshot Technique

Perform the technique:

I first start by gathering my raw chakra into my mouth while slowly molding it into Earth chakra. Then while spitting it out, I use shape manipulates and changes the shape of the mud ball while adding more chakra into it. Then I spit it out towards the dummy present over there a few meters away from me, when the Mud ball hit the Dummy, it got smashed.

Advantages:

• Capable of making the opponent blind if aimed correctly at his/her eyes
• Can also choke the opponent if the Mud Ball falls onto the opponent's nose
• Can be used in all directions making sure that all the opponent's get hit by it
• The speed of the Mud Ball could increase if powered by a wind jutsu from behind it
• Can reach upto Long Range making it a effective jutsu

Disadvantages:

• If it is spitted in the direction, the opponent has the chance to dodge it completely by simply using free-form taijutsu
• The Mud Ball will become less powerful and will go with less speed if the distance which needs to be covered by it is longer

Techniques that counter this one:

(Raiton: Raiton no Heki ) – Lightning Release: Lightning Release Wall
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary, Defence
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user manipulates their chakra while doing the Ox hand seal and then releases it in front of him whilst holding their hands out. By doing this, the user generates a wall of lightning energy that can defend against certain techniques. The user can use this defence to shock enemy targets who attempt close range combat and deliver massive shocks to anything that comes in contact with it.

The above jutsu can be used so that if the opponent tries to approach to close range after firing the mud. The mud would get dissipated while the opponent has to withdraw because of the Lightning field.

Speed of use:

The longer distance it has to cover, the less powerful and slow it becomes. There is no requirement for hand seal so this is almost immediate jutsu. Highly effective in close range if used properly.

Questions

Does the Lightning Wall disappear if the mud ball hits it?
Does the mud ball get slower and less powerful if it needs to cover long distance?

 

[Houdinii]

You can't dodge this with freeform. The only thing that can be dodged with freeform is freeform, if its a technique you have to counter it with another technique. As for your questions 1)No the lightning wall would not dissipate as it has elemental advantage, after the mud struck it the wall would still stand and would be C rank. For your second question. 2)It wouldn't really get slower since the technique states it goes to long range. Final thing, remember to mention when you use nature manipulation in your performance of the technique.

If you have any questions about the above just Vm me anyways lets move on.

(Doton: Doryūha) - Earth Release: Earth Flow Wave
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Mid - Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: After performing the required hand seal sequence Rat → Snake → Tiger the user creates and rides a wave of earth that can branch of to attack from a distance. The user can also use the technique to manipulate the terrain and trap the target by wrapping earth round their legs preventing them from moving

Channel your doton chakra into the earth below you and build up a small amount there. Then perform the Rat>Snake>Tiger hand seals and focus your chakra, using nature manipulation to change your chakra into earth and then shape manipulation to form it into a wave of earth under you that you can ride. Then jump off the earth and manipulate it so that it continues and crashes down upon my clone. Remember that you can also use this technique in a much simpler way, manipulating the earth below an opponents feet and causing it to rise up and trap their feet.

~Creates clone

 

[Excālibur1]

(Doton: Doryūha) - Earth Release: Earth Flow Wave

Perform the technique:

Looking at the clone placed at mid-range from me. I start by focusing my raw chakra underneath my feet into the ground. Then while thinking about the Earth waves and it's properties, I slowly use nature manipulation to turn the raw chakra into earth chakra. Utilizing it, I start by performing Rat → Snake → Tiger hand seals and manipulating it into a form of huge wave capable of covering the entire body of the opponent making him/her choke underground. While the wave started rising upwards, I feel it under my feet and direct it towards the clone in order to choke him. When the wave neared the opponent, I jump off the wave backwards in still by triple somersaulting while still maintaining the shape of the wave. After a few seconds, I land on the ground and looks at the clone which is nowhere to be find. The Earth became uneven and formed a small sort of hill.

Advantages:

• Can cover the body of the opponent if required to hide it
• Can be difficult to dodge since the opponent might not be able to see through the mud
• The speed of the wave can be increased if used along with a wind jutsu making it more devastating
• Can also manipulate the earth to trap the other opponent's legs in case he/she arrives.

Disadvantages:

• The wave might take to build up giving an advantage for the opponent
• Cannot be executed if both of the ninjas are in short range

Techniques that counter this one:

I don't if this is a valid but anyways, here I go...

(Katon: Keshi Makuga Hara) - Fire Release: Exploding Flame Crater
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user first stomps on the ground, using his fire chakra and making an underground tunnel from between themselves and the opponent. They then breathe out fire into the tunnel, causing the fire carry rock and other debris with it as it travels, melting them. With a single hand seal, the molten rock debris will erupt from the ground underneath the opponent, engulfing them and burning them alive.

When the waves start heading towards, I would use this jutsu creating a tunnel underground and then the waves would calm down underground. With the earth, I would then use the fire burning and melting them making the lava even more powerful that the power of the way in which this jutsu is used normally.

Speed of use:

I think that this jutsu would take time to build up as the earth waves need to rise up in the air and then head towards the opponent.

Questions:

Can waves be created one after the another in line?
Can it cover the entire body of the opponent?

 

[Houdinii]

Waves can be sent one after another but that requires more than one use of the jutsu. And yes I suppose it could cover their body.

Anyways that was good apart from your counter, how will creating lava underground help to defend/counter a wave of earth coming at you from above ground? Try again with the counter please, the counter technique is the only thing you need to redo.

 

[Excālibur1]

Techniques that counter this one:

(Raiton: Ikazuchi no Kiba) - Lightning Release: Fangs of Lightning
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user will raise his hand or a weapon and send an electrical discharge into the clouds, allowing them to create lightning strikes in the desired location. The discharges are triggered right after the technique and cannot be delayed or prepared before hand but are quite fast.

This could prove a very good jutsu if the wave comes towards us, the field of vision might be blocked. So using this jutsu from the above can shatter the earth as well as a little bit of random thunder strikes behind the waves can make the opponent faint due to its power if it. Also this could be used and is one of the best if the opponent is still riding on the wave.

 

[Houdinii]

Good choice ^^ ok next.

(Doton: Doro Ookami) - Earth Release: Mud Wolves
Rank: B
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20 (+10 per reformed wolf)
Damage points: 10 damage per wolf attack
Description: A trap technique in which the user will place somewhere and is activated upon contact with the opponent's chakra. The user uses a scroll to lay the trap in which releases mud that forms into the shape of wolves that will attack the enemy target/s. Despite being damaged the wolves can reform which can keep the enemy occupied to allow the enemy make a getaway. (Can only create a maximum of 3 mud wolves)
Note: Takes one turn to set the trap up and wolves only last two turns

Ok take a scroll from your ninja pouch and then channel a medium amount of doton chakra into it. As you are channeling this chakra into the scroll you have to concentrate and push shape and nature manipulation with your chakra as it goes into the scroll. Think of this like your trying to use the scroll as the source of the earth jutsu itself. As you are doing so focus in your mind's eye the shape of the wolves that you want your chakra to take, remember to form it into three separate wolves. Its an interesting little technique that isn't used often. You could use it say by slamming it onto the ground and then use an earth jutsu that would move towards the opponent, creating a double earth combo of sorts. Set the trap near my clone and see if you got it right.

~Creates clone

 

[Excālibur1]

(Doton: Doro Ookami) - Earth Release: Mud Wolves

Perform the technique:

Looking at the clone, I draw out a scroll from my ninja pouch and slowly and steadily walks towards the clone and places it before him and runs away by saying "A gift for you!". While still being near the opponent, I start by concentration by raw chakra into the scroll and slowly turns it into earth chakra by using nature manipulation whilst thinking about the properties of the earth and the soil. With it changed and the Earth formed, I start by using shape manipulation to change it's shape into 3 wolves whilst thinking of the physical features of it in my mind. The sharpness of the claws, it's facial features and it's power to rip apart an animal. Whilst thinking, the Earth slowly started taking shape, and immediately, I use my chakra to make it head towards the opponent and attacking him by the claws to death. After a few scratches, the opponent/the clone seemed to disperse into the calm air and mixed with it.

Advantages:

• A person wouldn't normally expect wolves to jump out of a mere scroll
• Can reform the wolf if destroyed into pieces
• Makes it challenging to escape since there are three wolves

Disadvantages:

• Can only be used to form 3 wolves
• The wolves disrupt if I walk away from Short range
• Takes one full turn to set up the trap
• The wolves crumble after two turns

Techniques that counter this one:

Getting rid of the scroll before hand by burning it or something would be better. But if it were to launched, it would be much better to use this.

(Fūton: Rasen Kazedan) - Wind Release: Spiralling Wind Ball
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: This technique allows the user to breathe wind-infused chakra into the palm of their hand, shaping it into a small, whirlwind-like ball. Then the user will shoot it at their opponent. This technique seems to be very fast and powerful, as it is capable of smashing through thick rock. They can be launched in rapid succession.

Since the balls are fired at a rapid succession and several can be fired at a single use. This could prove useful to break the wolves into pieces.

Speed of use:

I think the speed of this jutsu is very slow. As it would take a full turn to get activated. But the good thing is, the wolves can stay alive for a maximum of two turns unless they are totally destroyed or absorbed by a dark release jutsu.

 

[Houdinii]

There are two things I have to address in your reply. 1) When you use the technique you must focus the chakra into the scroll and then place the scroll, while you did it around the other way in your performance. You have to maintain contact with it, a small but important mistake, don't forget it

2) I don't believe that your counter would work. The wind balls are rather small which means that they would only punch a hole through the wolf and allow it to reform. Even though they can be rapid fired, this would only work on a single wolf, leaving you open to the other two. Because of this I want you to redo just your counter, I suggest a large technique that can affect all three wolves at once. Try again.

 

[Excālibur1]

(Raiton: Chidori Nagashi) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds Current
Rank: A
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short (Mid if channeled through a medium)
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A (+10 if used to boost weapon damage)
Description: This jutsu allows the user to generate non-focused electricity from their body. It can be used as an omnidirectional attack or be channeled through weapons, the ground or other conductive mediums. Because the electricity isn't focused, it doesn't kill on contact, instead it has great numbing and paralyzing effects. To channel Nagashi through a medium, the user needs to focus the technique into one of his hands which will then be put in contact with the medium and can only choose to either do a widespread attack throughout his whole body or to channel it into something; he cannot achieve both usages at the same time. Despite not having much destructive or damaging properties, Nagashi can be used to destroy low rank earthen and wooden structures and even negate chakra on the ground to stop high ranked earth and wood techniques. It has also been noted that Lightning Specialists that have mastered Lightning to the highest degree can resist total paralyzation, although they still feel the pain and numbing effects.
Note: Paralyzation lasts 1 turn if sucessful but is ineffective against bios who have a primary Lightning Specialty

This jutsu would entirely destroy the wolves due to this being an unfocused lightning reaching upto mid-range and can also paralyze the opponent making him/her unable to reform the wolves if not totally destroyed.

 

[Houdinii]

(Raiton: Chidori Nagashi) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds Current
Rank: A
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short (Mid if channeled through a medium)
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A (+10 if used to boost weapon damage)
Description: This jutsu allows the user to generate non-focused electricity from their body. It can be used as an omnidirectional attack or be channeled through weapons, the ground or other conductive mediums. Because the electricity isn't focused, it doesn't kill on contact, instead it has great numbing and paralyzing effects. To channel Nagashi through a medium, the user needs to focus the technique into one of his hands which will then be put in contact with the medium and can only choose to either do a widespread attack throughout his whole body or to channel it into something; he cannot achieve both usages at the same time. Despite not having much destructive or damaging properties, Nagashi can be used to destroy low rank earthen and wooden structures and even negate chakra on the ground to stop high ranked earth and wood techniques. It has also been noted that Lightning Specialists that have mastered Lightning to the highest degree can resist total paralyzation, although they still feel the pain and numbing effects.
Note: Paralyzation lasts 1 turn if sucessful but is ineffective against bios who have a primary Lightning Specialty

This jutsu would entirely destroy the wolves due to this being an unfocused lightning reaching upto mid-range and can also paralyze the opponent making him/her unable to reform the wolves if not totally destroyed.

A much better counter ^^ next.

(Doton no Yoroi) - Earth Release Armor
Rank: B
Type: Defensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20 (-15 per turn to remain active)
Damage points: N/A (+10 to taijutsu moves)
Description: This Technique coats the users body with stones, making them much more resistant to attacks, at the cost of their speed. Whilst using this technique, the user can even change their appearance, but once the technique is either defeated or worn off the users original appearance is shown. The user whilst in this armor is resistant to B rank ninjutsu techniques but is vulnerable to Lightning Techniques.

Ok so begin by channeling your doton chakra evenly throughout your body and begin to build it up. Continue to do so until you have a medium amount everywhere and then focus the chakra out of your body onto your skin, as you do so use nature manipulation to form the chakra into rock that seems to grow from your skin. As the rock begins to grow use shape manipulation to form the rock around your body and to make it thick enough so that it can be used as armor. Be careful to avoid your eyes, nose and mouth so as to not suffocate yourself lol. This is a great fast defence technique when you have very little time, it can save you alot. Remember that it has a bonus to taijutsu at a cost of speed and a constant chakra drain while it is active. Protect yourself before your stabbed.

~throws three kunai at you

 

[Excālibur1]

(Doton no Yoroi) - Earth Release Armor

Perform the technique:

Looking at the teacher throwing out three kunai towards me, I immediately gather my doton chakra from my body and makes it go outwards onto my skin making the earth to appear on my skin. With the chakra infused earth on my skin, I use shape manipulation to change it's form into a armor thick enough to withstand some basic taijutsu moves. Making sure that the eyes, mouth, ears and the nose are left alone, I wait for the kunais to hit me. When they hit me, they just held down due to the power of the earth armor.

Advantages:

- Capable of blocking upto B-Rank Ninjutsu
- Can block basic Taijutsu
- Adds +10 to all Taijutsu attacks

Disadvantages:

- The speed decreases
- The armor is entirely vulnerable to Lightning techniques
- The chakra is decreased by 15 every turn active

Techniques that counter this one:

(Raiton: Gian) - Lightning Style: False Darkness
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Descripton: The user, after performing the Snake hand seal, emits lightning in the shape of a spear from their hands or mouth which then pierces the enemy. Kakuzu, the original user, shoots the technique from his Lightning mask's mouth. Its destructive power is great enough to even pierce through rock; meaning it has a high killing potential. The user can increase the number of spears to attack multiple enemies by branching the main spear. This, coupled with the sheer speed of the lightning, makes it a difficult technique to evade. This strong attack can be defended against by an equally strong attack of the same element such as Raikiri.

The above jutsu can be used to break through the armor and as well as kill the opponent due to the extreme killing power of the spears. Also the power of the spears can aimed at different locations causing tremendous damage.

Speed of use:

As you just said, this armor covers almost entire body in a flash. It helps with quick defense at the cost of speed.

Questions

- If it can block B-Rank Ninjutsu. Upto what rank Taijutsu can it block?
- If a B-Rank Ninjutsu has been blocked, will the earth turn into rumble after a few moments?

 

[Houdinii]

Be careful in your performance of the technique, you must describe how you build up the chakra and then use nature manipulation to change it into earth. Both of which you neglected, I won't make you repeat it this time but I will next time. As for your questions Id say itd be able to block all taijustu apart from the very high ranked ones and the elemental tai, though I know little about taijutsu overall so I may be wrong. Also ninjutsu is either weaker to elemental techniques or if a lot of shape manipulation is involved in the ninjutsu then it is neutral to elemental techniques, so it differs from jutsu to jutsu.

(Doton: Domu) – Earth Release: Earth Spear Technique
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A (+10 to physical attacks)
Description: After performing the Snake hand seal the user will channel their chakra throughout their entire body, which then hardens their skin to a steel-like quality. This increases their defensive power to the utmost limits. The user’s skin also becomes much darker, an almost black colour. The destructive power of physical attacks is increased, making this a great, all purpose technique. But this technique when activated leaves the user vulnerable to lightning based techniques.
Note: Kakuzu bios can use this technique without the need for handseals

Alright this technique is pretty similar to earth armor. Once again build up a medium amount of doton chakra throughout your body but this time perform the snake hand seal and focus the chakra and instead of building earth on yourself this time you must use nature manipulation to harden your skin itself. If you do this correctly your skin with take a darker colouring.

 

[Excālibur1]

Sorry, I will be careful in future.

(Doton: Domu) – Earth Release: Earth Spear Technique

Perform the technique:

I start by releasing a reasonable amount of raw chakra from all the 361 points into my skin while using nature manipulation to change it's form into earth chakra. Then I perform the Snake hand seal while using shape manipulation to change its shape into a hard black earth covering my entire body from head to toe. With the black armor present, I run towards the clone and bends my right arm and punches it into the clone's stomach making it disperse into thin air due to immense pain added.

Advantages:

Adds +10 damage to Taijutsu
Kakuzu biographies can perform this jutsu without a hand seal

Disadvantages:

Makes the user vulnerable to Lightning attacks
Makes the user slow down

Techniques that counter this one:

(Raiton: Ikazuchi no Kiba) - Lightning Release: Fangs of Lightning
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user will raise his hand or a weapon and send an electrical discharge into the clouds, allowing them to create lightning strikes in the desired location. The discharges are triggered right after the technique and cannot be delayed or prepared before hand but are quite fast.

This jutsu will be the best to use as it falls down from the air. Also this has the capability to break through the black skin.

Speed of use:

This jutsu is very useful as the skin turns hard and black in color very quickly.

Question

Does this slow down the user?

 

[Houdinii]

Sorry, I will be careful in future.

(Doton: Domu) – Earth Release: Earth Spear Technique

Perform the technique:

I start by releasing a reasonable amount of raw chakra from all the 361 points into my skin while using nature manipulation to change it's form into earth chakra. Then I perform the Snake hand seal while using shape manipulation to change its shape into a hard black earth covering my entire body from head to toe. With the black armor present, I run towards the clone and bends my right arm and punches it into the clone's stomach making it disperse into thin air due to immense pain added.

Advantages:

Adds +10 damage to Taijutsu
Kakuzu biographies can perform this jutsu without a hand seal

Disadvantages:

Makes the user vulnerable to Lightning attacks
Makes the user slow down

Techniques that counter this one:

(Raiton: Ikazuchi no Kiba) - Lightning Release: Fangs of Lightning
Rank: B
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user will raise his hand or a weapon and send an electrical discharge into the clouds, allowing them to create lightning strikes in the desired location. The discharges are triggered right after the technique and cannot be delayed or prepared before hand but are quite fast.

This jutsu will be the best to use as it falls down from the air. Also this has the capability to break through the black skin.

Speed of use:

This jutsu is very useful as the skin turns hard and black in color very quickly.

Question

Does this slow down the user?

Sorry for the delay, if you were unaware I was very sick for the past week and am only now feeling up to replying.

This jutsu does not slow down the user, thats its advantage over the other earth armour techniques. But your counter to this I find incorrect, you must counter the technique as if it is being used against you. Thus someone is running at you, presumably in short range with the earth armour over themselves in an attempt to hit you with a punch or kick.

So the lightning jutsu you posted is must too slow to be of use in this situation. Pick another counter and explain why you chose it. Sorry I know I can be a bit of an ass when I teach but I want to make sure that you are taught in the best way possible

 

[Excālibur1]

( Raiton: Denpō Sekka ) – Lightning Release: Telegram Flash

Spoiler

Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: After doing the Rabbit → Rat → Horse → Ram hand seals, the user will slam his hand on the ground and release into it a massive amounts of lightning chakra which will then pool beneath his opponent before releasing itself into a gigantic column of lightning which shocks anything caught above it. The technique can affect a bigger or smaller area depending on the users will.

Since I am a lightning specialist, I would use this to blast out the earth as well as make the lightning penetrate into his body disabling the entire armor as well as stunning him.

Or even this one...

(Raiton: Gian) - Lightning Style: False Darkness

Spoiler

Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Descripton: The user, after performing the Snake hand seal, emits lightning in the shape of a spear from their hands or mouth which then pierces the enemy. Kakuzu, the original user, shoots the technique from his Lightning mask's mouth. Its destructive power is great enough to even pierce through rock; meaning it has a high killing potential. The user can increase the number of spears to attack multiple enemies by branching the main spear. This, coupled with the sheer speed of the lightning, makes it a difficult technique to evade. This strong attack can be defended against by an equally strong attack of the same element such as Raikiri.

This could actually break the armor as well as kill the opponent as this has high killing potentiality...

 

[Houdinii]

Ok the first counter would not work but the second would. If you read the description it mentions that the chakra has to 'pool' before the lightning is released. Meaning this would probably be too slow assuming this technique is being used against you. But thats good enough so we can continue.

(Doton: Iwa Keiro) – Earth Style: Rock Trail
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user slams their hands on the ground and giant rocks rise up and jag the opponent from underneath.

Concentrate your doton chakra and channel it into the ground beneath my clone. There build up a medium amount of chakra an then focus it upwards. As you do so use nature manipulation to change your chakra into earth and shape manipulation to form the earth into mutliple jagged rocks. Cause these rocks to protrude out of the ground and knock my clone into the air, causing him to disperse.

~Creates clone