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This chapter is written in book format. If any one who reads this would reply would you please tell me if you like the new book format or the old script format. Also, if you would tell me your feed back about the story I would much appriciate it.
[size=+1]"Hi, I'm Sakura Haruno. I'm Lady Hokage's apprentice." she said as they walked out of the office. Hesitanly, Keotsu said "I'm Keotsu Akarusa. *(akarusa means Opposite of Darkness I have no clue if Keotsu is even translatable.)* he said. "Nice to meet you. Now lets go introduce you to every one else."
"Hey Kiba,Hinata,Shino!" yelled Sakura, spotting them in the training grounds. "Bark!" growled Akamaru at the sight of Keotsu. "Who's this?" asked Kiba. "This is Keotsu Akarusa." said Sakura' "he's a new shinobi here." "Oh,"said Kiba, "I'm Kiba Inuzuka." The man in sunglasses stated,"I'm Shino Aburame." A girl who had remained silent untill now said "H-hello. I'm Hinata Hyuuga." "Umm who's the stray?" asked Keotsu. "STRAY!?!" yelled Kiba. As Kiba was about to tackle Keotsu a tree appeared in the way. "He's new here, remember that Kiba." the tree said which then turned into a person. "That's Kurinai-sensei. She specializes in genjutsu." said Sakura. Keotsu bowed slightly to show respect for his now superior. "Well we have to go. I've got to introduce him to everyone else." said Sakura. "Wait, Kiba is it?" asked Keotsu. "I'm sorry if I offended you or your-ehh..-partner?" Kiba looked surprised "Yeah, and its okay. By the way, his name is Akamaru." "Come on Keotsu. Later guys." said Sakura.
As they walked into a barbecue restaurant they Sakura brought Keotsu over to a table with four people. "Hi Asuma-sensei. This is Keotsu. I'm supposed to introduce him to our shinobi." The man with the cigarette said "Nice to meet you. I'm Asuma Sarutobi." Keotsu bowed. "No need for such formalities. This is my team." Pointing to a blond girl who Sakura had been aurguing with since they got there Asuma said "This is Ino Yamanaka." "Hello there." said Ino. Pointing to a boy with barbecue hanging out his mouth he said "This is Choji Sasakibe." "Mife moo meet ew" (Nice to meet you) he said. "And this is Shikamaru Nara." Asuma said pointing to a boy who looked bored out of his skull. "Hey." he said. "Well I've got to leat him meet a few more people so see you later." said Sakura.
As they walked to the forest Keotsu asked "Sakura, who are your team mates?" Sakura became very sad and said "Well, my team is composed of myself, Kakashi-sensei, who you already met, an annoying kid named Naruto, and Saskue-kun. He left the village though..." "I'm sorry, I shouldn't have asked. I've met Naruto though, he seems nice." said Keotsu. "Yeah, he tries to be nice but he's just a fool though." Keotsu decided not to ask about whoever this Saskue person was.
"Sakura!" yelled a boy wearing a green jumpsuit. "Oh, I'm sorry. Who are you? My name is Rock Lee." said the over-enthusiastic youth. "...Nice to meet you..." said Keotsu kind of freaked out by him. "This is Keotsu Akarusa." said Sakura. A group of people walked over the horizen. "Hey Guy-sensei, this is Keotsu." said Rock Lee. "HEY!! How's it going-ah!" said the sensei who was more enthusiastic than Lee. Keotsu decided that he had better be cautious around these people. "Uh..." said Keotsu. "Don't mind them, I'm Ten-Ten. Nice to meet you. she said happily. "Hello. I'm Neji Hyuuga." said the quite boy in the back. "Oh, are you Hinata's brother?" asked Keotsu. "No, but I do come from the same clan as her." said Neji. "Well, I should probably go and show him where he is going to stay while he is here." stated Sakura. "Alright, and Keotsu, if you ever want to train come train with me, because I'm the Leaf's Handsome Devil!" said Guy. "Alright Lee, so last one to do 2,000 push ups has to do 3,000 jumping jacks." Keotsu heard Guy say as they left.
"Its small, but you don't have much stuff so I don't think you'll mind." said Sakura showing Keotsu his new dwelling. "Actually, this is next door to wear Naruto lives." Keotsu looked around and decided that the place suited him nicely. "Thank you for your assistance today, Ma'am." Sakura looked surprised "Not at all, and please you're not going to get very far if you keep using formalities. I'll stop by with your assignment tomorrow." she said as she left. Keotsu put his equipment down and laid in the bed. He drifted to sleep, dreaming of future.[/size]
Chapter 6-Assignment coming soon!
[size=+2]Chapter 5- Teammates.
[/size][size=+1]"Hi, I'm Sakura Haruno. I'm Lady Hokage's apprentice." she said as they walked out of the office. Hesitanly, Keotsu said "I'm Keotsu Akarusa. *(akarusa means Opposite of Darkness I have no clue if Keotsu is even translatable.)* he said. "Nice to meet you. Now lets go introduce you to every one else."
"Hey Kiba,Hinata,Shino!" yelled Sakura, spotting them in the training grounds. "Bark!" growled Akamaru at the sight of Keotsu. "Who's this?" asked Kiba. "This is Keotsu Akarusa." said Sakura' "he's a new shinobi here." "Oh,"said Kiba, "I'm Kiba Inuzuka." The man in sunglasses stated,"I'm Shino Aburame." A girl who had remained silent untill now said "H-hello. I'm Hinata Hyuuga." "Umm who's the stray?" asked Keotsu. "STRAY!?!" yelled Kiba. As Kiba was about to tackle Keotsu a tree appeared in the way. "He's new here, remember that Kiba." the tree said which then turned into a person. "That's Kurinai-sensei. She specializes in genjutsu." said Sakura. Keotsu bowed slightly to show respect for his now superior. "Well we have to go. I've got to introduce him to everyone else." said Sakura. "Wait, Kiba is it?" asked Keotsu. "I'm sorry if I offended you or your-ehh..-partner?" Kiba looked surprised "Yeah, and its okay. By the way, his name is Akamaru." "Come on Keotsu. Later guys." said Sakura.
As they walked into a barbecue restaurant they Sakura brought Keotsu over to a table with four people. "Hi Asuma-sensei. This is Keotsu. I'm supposed to introduce him to our shinobi." The man with the cigarette said "Nice to meet you. I'm Asuma Sarutobi." Keotsu bowed. "No need for such formalities. This is my team." Pointing to a blond girl who Sakura had been aurguing with since they got there Asuma said "This is Ino Yamanaka." "Hello there." said Ino. Pointing to a boy with barbecue hanging out his mouth he said "This is Choji Sasakibe." "Mife moo meet ew" (Nice to meet you) he said. "And this is Shikamaru Nara." Asuma said pointing to a boy who looked bored out of his skull. "Hey." he said. "Well I've got to leat him meet a few more people so see you later." said Sakura.
As they walked to the forest Keotsu asked "Sakura, who are your team mates?" Sakura became very sad and said "Well, my team is composed of myself, Kakashi-sensei, who you already met, an annoying kid named Naruto, and Saskue-kun. He left the village though..." "I'm sorry, I shouldn't have asked. I've met Naruto though, he seems nice." said Keotsu. "Yeah, he tries to be nice but he's just a fool though." Keotsu decided not to ask about whoever this Saskue person was.
"Sakura!" yelled a boy wearing a green jumpsuit. "Oh, I'm sorry. Who are you? My name is Rock Lee." said the over-enthusiastic youth. "...Nice to meet you..." said Keotsu kind of freaked out by him. "This is Keotsu Akarusa." said Sakura. A group of people walked over the horizen. "Hey Guy-sensei, this is Keotsu." said Rock Lee. "HEY!! How's it going-ah!" said the sensei who was more enthusiastic than Lee. Keotsu decided that he had better be cautious around these people. "Uh..." said Keotsu. "Don't mind them, I'm Ten-Ten. Nice to meet you. she said happily. "Hello. I'm Neji Hyuuga." said the quite boy in the back. "Oh, are you Hinata's brother?" asked Keotsu. "No, but I do come from the same clan as her." said Neji. "Well, I should probably go and show him where he is going to stay while he is here." stated Sakura. "Alright, and Keotsu, if you ever want to train come train with me, because I'm the Leaf's Handsome Devil!" said Guy. "Alright Lee, so last one to do 2,000 push ups has to do 3,000 jumping jacks." Keotsu heard Guy say as they left.
"Its small, but you don't have much stuff so I don't think you'll mind." said Sakura showing Keotsu his new dwelling. "Actually, this is next door to wear Naruto lives." Keotsu looked around and decided that the place suited him nicely. "Thank you for your assistance today, Ma'am." Sakura looked surprised "Not at all, and please you're not going to get very far if you keep using formalities. I'll stop by with your assignment tomorrow." she said as she left. Keotsu put his equipment down and laid in the bed. He drifted to sleep, dreaming of future.[/size]
Chapter 6-Assignment coming soon!
