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Chapter 2- Bad greetings.
As Keotsu tried to shield himself from the freezing wind, he saw the lights of a town in the distance; he could barely make out the word: Tanzaku.
Keotsu: "I should stock up on provisions while I'm here."
As Keotsu approached a shinobi suppliant store, something caught his eye.
It was a small glass bell.
Keotsu knew from the craftsmanship that it was one of the only surviving pieces of glass work form his village.
Keotsu: "Would you please include that bell with my supplies?"
Shopkeeper: "Yes, certainly."
As Keotsu looked around his rented room he took inventory of his items:
12 kunai knife, 29 shuriken, 12 senbon, 8 paper bombs, 45 yards of wire, a small brown package with a blue ribbon, a small brown package with a pink ribbon, the unopened message that the old man had given him, a black cloak with some red embroidered pockets, and a straw hat to shied his face from the wind.
Also, there was his glass ocarina with a crack running down the side.
The next morning Keotsu set off for Konoha.
As he approach the gate he saw a large amount of movement by the gate guards.
Guard 1: Holy crap! Is that one of those A-skiing-cat-guys?
Guard 2: You mean Akuatski?!
Guard 1: Whatever! Look!
Unannounced to Keotsu, he did resemble an Akuatski member. He was wearing his black cloak and in the distance the red pockets looked like clouds. The straw hat was extremely similar, and the fact that he hung the glass bell from it did not help matters any.
Keotsu: What the..! (Jumping back as a barrage of kunai knife flew his way)
Suddenly, four shinobi with animal like mask surrounded Keotsu. He recognized them immediately; ANBU.
Keotsu: Huh!?! Hey wait a minute!
ANBU 1: Make it easy on your self and just give up.
Those words danced in Keotsu's ears:
The Guru: Make it easy for your self and just give up.
and he black out and started to fight.
Keotsu:No...
ANBU 2: I knew it couldn't be that easy, after all we are dealing with Akuatski.
ANBU 3: And here, I was hoping to get to catch up on my reading.
ANBU 4: Come on. Lets take him down.
The four ANBU rushed towards Keotsu who had started gathering chakra. He released the chakra in a golden beam, illuminating the night. The ANBU dodged the jutsu, some what surprised by the strange technique.
They formed a diamond around him.
ANBU 3: Nighty-night.
And with that each ANBU used a different gen-jutsu and knocked out Keotsu.
Keotsu awoke in a dimly lit chamber.
Keotsu: Ugh....What a bad way to welcome visitors.
ANBU 2: Look whose finally awake. Go head and extract the information from him.
???: Right.
A man with a single red eye looked at Keotsu. Suddenly Keotsu couldn't think and was completely at the man's mercy.
Kakashi: Right. So shall we begin?
End of chapter 2.
I'll start on chapter 3 soon.
Chapter 2- Bad greetings.
As Keotsu tried to shield himself from the freezing wind, he saw the lights of a town in the distance; he could barely make out the word: Tanzaku.
Keotsu: "I should stock up on provisions while I'm here."
As Keotsu approached a shinobi suppliant store, something caught his eye.
It was a small glass bell.
Keotsu knew from the craftsmanship that it was one of the only surviving pieces of glass work form his village.
Keotsu: "Would you please include that bell with my supplies?"
Shopkeeper: "Yes, certainly."
As Keotsu looked around his rented room he took inventory of his items:
12 kunai knife, 29 shuriken, 12 senbon, 8 paper bombs, 45 yards of wire, a small brown package with a blue ribbon, a small brown package with a pink ribbon, the unopened message that the old man had given him, a black cloak with some red embroidered pockets, and a straw hat to shied his face from the wind.
Also, there was his glass ocarina with a crack running down the side.
The next morning Keotsu set off for Konoha.
As he approach the gate he saw a large amount of movement by the gate guards.
Guard 1: Holy crap! Is that one of those A-skiing-cat-guys?
Guard 2: You mean Akuatski?!
Guard 1: Whatever! Look!
Unannounced to Keotsu, he did resemble an Akuatski member. He was wearing his black cloak and in the distance the red pockets looked like clouds. The straw hat was extremely similar, and the fact that he hung the glass bell from it did not help matters any.
Keotsu: What the..! (Jumping back as a barrage of kunai knife flew his way)
Suddenly, four shinobi with animal like mask surrounded Keotsu. He recognized them immediately; ANBU.
Keotsu: Huh!?! Hey wait a minute!
ANBU 1: Make it easy on your self and just give up.
Those words danced in Keotsu's ears:
The Guru: Make it easy for your self and just give up.
and he black out and started to fight.
Keotsu:No...
ANBU 2: I knew it couldn't be that easy, after all we are dealing with Akuatski.
ANBU 3: And here, I was hoping to get to catch up on my reading.
ANBU 4: Come on. Lets take him down.
The four ANBU rushed towards Keotsu who had started gathering chakra. He released the chakra in a golden beam, illuminating the night. The ANBU dodged the jutsu, some what surprised by the strange technique.
They formed a diamond around him.
ANBU 3: Nighty-night.
And with that each ANBU used a different gen-jutsu and knocked out Keotsu.
Keotsu awoke in a dimly lit chamber.
Keotsu: Ugh....What a bad way to welcome visitors.
ANBU 2: Look whose finally awake. Go head and extract the information from him.
???: Right.
A man with a single red eye looked at Keotsu. Suddenly Keotsu couldn't think and was completely at the man's mercy.
Kakashi: Right. So shall we begin?
End of chapter 2.
I'll start on chapter 3 soon.
