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Okay, before people start getting mad, I plan to add more NB members to the story, but I want to make them relate to the story not just fillers. Tell me what you think; your feedback is important!
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Chapter 19 coming soon! Tell me what you thought!
[size=+3] Chapter 18: One of Three[/size]
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Keotsu awoke with a lurch and next thing he knew, his head was jerked back, and water was being poured in his mouth. "Drink it all. You've been unconscious for two weeks, and are probably severely dehydrated." he heard a voice say. "R-Rena?" asked Keotsu, still semi-unconscious. "Rena? Who's that? Your girlfriend?" asked the voice. "Not my girlfriend, just a friend..." replied Keotsu. A torch was lit and saw two people in the room. There was a boy holding the torch, with a head band with nine circles and a dot varying in size on each one, and a girl, with a head band with ten stars on it.
The boy helped Keotsu up who asked, "Who are you two?" "I'm Mizutoki Terra. Just call me Mizu for short." said the boy. (Terra is an old word for "Earth" referring to the planet). "I'm Rei Polaris." said the girl. (Polaris is the first part, of I believe, the North Star) "Why are you here, and if you don't mind, why do I feel so bad?" asked Keotsu. "Inter-dimensional travel is hard on you the first time around." replied Mizu.
It was Rei who replied now, "Your one of three." "One of three? What do you mean?" asked Keotsu. "Hmm, so its true. You don't know what he meant by other targets. You just want him dead because he wiped out your village." said Mizu. "One of three. Celestial Guardians." said Rei. "Celestial Guardians?" asked Keotsu.
"Space and time. They make up the fabric of existence. Time cannot exsist without space, and space would be useless and unmoving without time. The one you call the Guru, the one known to me as The Sage, and the one known to Rei as the Ace, serve the King, an Akatsuki member who uses space-time jutsu, or in other words, he manipulates existence." started Mizu, "Space is divided into a few parts: The planets, satellites like the moon, asteroids and other bodies represented by me, the starts, nebula, and galaxies, represented by Rei, and everything else, including Light and Darkness, by you. You could say you are the strongest, although, I doubt it." "So, one of three. As in Spacial Representatives?" asked Keotsu. "Yeah, and now they have all three of us." said Rei.
"But now that your here two things have and will happen. One, we can break out, because together, we are extremely powerful, which is why the King wants us, because if he has all our powers, he could probably alter Space-Time itself. And two, Mizu isn't as quiet as usual." laughed Rei. Mizu rolled his eyes.
Keotsu looked at his new squad mates. "So, you guys got a plan?" asked Keotsu summoning, for the first time of his own will, a silver Dragon, about the same height as him, with a blue crystal inlaid on its fore head, a Phoenix,with crimson feathers with gold tips and a flaming tail, about four feet tall, and a Griffin, with broken chains around its feet and neck and with a scar over its left eye, about the same size.
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Two weeks before Keotsu awoke...
Rena looked a Tetsugi, and said, "Sir, can you train me in Solar, Lunar, and Eclipse chakras, even though I'm not a Twilight child?" "I can't tell you, but one person can." started Tetsugi lifting Mikomi,"Mikomi is a special sword. It will never break, it will never let people use it who are not approved by Keotsu, otherwise it will be come incredibly heavy, to heavy to lift. Also, even if he does appoint you worthy, if you can't use any of those three chakras, the sword remains heavy, but not as much." he finished starting to hand the sword to Rena.
Mikomi was almost as light in her hands as it was in Keotsu's.
"Very well, let us begin training. Kakashi, Asuma. I want you two to tell the Hokage that I will need your two's help on a rescue mission in about two weeks." said Tetsugi. And over the next two weeks, Rena went through the same training as Keotsu, except for the Dark side Release, which after examining Rena, Tetsugi found was not necessary.
Rena stood at the village gate, wiping her brown hair out of her face, and with Mikomi strapped to her back, waiting for the three Jounin. When they appeared, Rena asked, "How are we going to find Keotsu?" Tetsugi said, "Simple, Mikomi will want to be with its true master, and it will lead your instincts to it." And as soon as he said that, the blue jewel started to glow. "We go North for now." said Tetsugi.
"Keotsu, I'm not gonna stand by helpless this time!" thought Rena.
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