[Approved] Dumah

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Basic Information
Name: Dumah
Nickname: Snail man (slow on remembering himself)
Gender: Male
Age: 32
Clan: Unknown

Looks: heavey set, 200 pounds, 5% body fat, tan skin , 6' 2" , Black Spikey hair that sticks straight up like it's reaching for the sky, Hazel eyes, Glasses, a kind face, good cheekbones, a mouth thats a little to big for his face, grin lines.

Personality: I strive to be good, but often lose my temper.

Village Info.
Village of Birth: Konoha
Village of Alliance: Konoha

Rank//Chakra Info.
Ninja Rank: Chuunin
Specialty: /
Elements: Wind, water.
Your ninjutsu:

(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)
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(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.
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(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.
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(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.
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(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
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(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).
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(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)


Background Info.
History: Lost in battle during the last great war Dumah was listed as KIA. Shortly after Itachi and Kisame were encountered in the hidden leaf village, He roamed half dead and with no memory back into the village. His entire family was wiped out during the chunnin exam attacks by sand ninja, Few can remember anything about him other then that he was born of the leaf. The only thing he has learned since his memory loss is what fellow konoha shinobi have taught him of himself.

He is dedicated to village, country, and trying to remember who he is.


Other


Theme Song : Pantera - Cemetary Gates.
Metallica - Battery or fight fire with fire.
Psychostick - Beer.

Music: White Zombie, Old school metallica, At the drive in, alice in chains, korn limp bizkit, pantera & godsmack.




jeez how you people can think this stuff up so easily is beyond me xD


I hope I did this right, now what am I supose to do?


edit bahhhhhh crap you have to have 1500 posts to be a hyuuga.... ill be here 3 years b4 that happens rotfl...

~Approved~ Also I think this is your first bio and as you're a chunin it means you can learn up to 2 elements, however you still need to learn them, you don't get them by default.
 
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Re: Dumah hyuuga

looks pretty good...but add these jutsu under the "your ninjutsu" part. Everyone starts with them automatically.

(Bunshin No Jutsu) - Clone Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:A clone made of the user that can move but(cannot use any jutsu)This clone is merely an illusionary projection of the user.
Note:The clone jutsu can be made with different elements and is a D-Rank jutsu under its own element(Mizu/Water Tsuchi/Earth Sumi/Ink)
_____
(Bikoku Ninjutsu) - Shadow Stealth Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:This jutsu lets the user follow the target covert by concealing the users presence.
_____
(Henge no Jutsu) - Transformation Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Henge no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique, which every ninja learns at the Ninja Academy. Henge allows the ninja to transform themselves into any person or object. This allows the ninja to move with stealth or to trick their opponents.
_____
(Gokan Sakusou) - 5 Senses Confusion Disorder

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:N/A
Damage Points:N/A
The user throws an explosive kunai at their target and the mist spreads threw the air.This jutsu causes the opponent to be hit by attacks even though they think they dodged it or countered it.This effect lasts for 2 turns.
_____
(Kawarimi no Jutsu) - Change of Body Stance Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description: Kawarimi no Jutsu is a basic Ninjutsu technique. When in danger the ninja will quickly substitute themselves with another nearby object. This can be a block of wood or even another person. This allows the ninja to quickly flee and hide while the original object takes the brunt of their opponents attack.
_____
(Nawanuke No Jutsu) - Escape Skill

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:Using chakra the user can escape from being tied down(only works with non-chakra ropes).
_____
(Kakuremino No Jutsu) - Magic Cloak Of Invisibility Technique

Rank:E
Type:Supplementary
Range:Short
Chakra Cost:5
Damage Points:N/A
Description:The user will pull out a cloak that is pre designed for their use.Then by using ninjutsu they make the cloth blend into the background(Konohamaru used this to follow Naruto in episode 2 and got caught because he was holding the cloak wrong).Skilled ninja can see through this jutsu(Rank c and above)

The history could be a bit longer also, but as your only a chuunin at the moment you can't really expect alot of history I suppose

After you add those^^^^^^^ you'll just have to wait for a mod to look over and approve your bio
 
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Re: Dumah hyuuga

Np and good luck on getting it approved.

(PS- Don't freak out if it isn't approved right away. There are alot of bios that need checked and it could take a few weeks....)
 

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Re: Dumah hyuuga

I see, that will be enough time to get use to all the rules n stuff.

Btw Props for lord Aoshi and sano, dont see them very often these days xD
 

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Re: Dumah hyuuga

u might want to try and add some pics if u want

just pick out a anime pick that gets ur attention and say its a hyuuga
 
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