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(LOL them pics. I have a proposal. To make things easier, you can find an image of the jutsu instead of writing a wallie, IF YOU WANT. I just like reading your detailed performances. And if you have questions, ask ^^)

I just had a question. You know how when Sasuke fought Itachi and he broke his shuriken apart. Can i use the same with these kind of shuriken? And moreover if I can, will it still have the numbing effect?
"Yes, I believe it would have the same effect."

"Now, generate purple lightning and push it forward like a wave in front of you. This can damage and knock away enemies that try and get too close. Purple lightning looks pretty awesome in my opinion... but this technique only works in short range, keep that in mind."

A Souji Clone begins running up to Nikodo.

( Raiton: Rakurai Senkou ) - Lightning Release: Thunderbolt Flash
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user releases a current of purplish lightning from their hands forward, damaging and knocking away enemies. The range of this technique is, however, limited.

"The second technique has you applying defensive wall principles and creating a lightning wall with your hands outstretched in front of you, except this is a plasma barrier. You'll need to maintain your focus on this wall, but the interesting here is that the jutsu follows you where you move. If you ram an opponent with the wall active, you can use it like a riot shield. Alternatively, discharge the electricity in any direction you choose, creating an energy wave that can hit targets who are close by.

"It lasts three turns, but I believe you can deactivate it by unleashing the wave at any point."


( Raiton: Purazuma Bōru ) - Lightning Release: Plasma Ball
Rank: B
Type: Offensive, Defence
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20 (-5 per turn active)
Damage points: 40
Description: The user manipulating their chakra generates a plasma barrier around them to serve as a defence which protects them from incoming attacks, even from something as wide-ranged as the Quicksand Waterfall Flow. However the user cannot use other techniques besides lightning release or physical based techniques while sustaining the technique. The user can rush at their opponents even if the barrier is active and use it to ram against them. The shield can be used offensively, by discharging the electricity in the direction of their choice in a wave resulting in using the energy of the barrier and ending its effects.
Note: Technique remains active for 3 turns.

"And finally, the last B-rank technique has you manipulating your Raiton chakra and creating a lightning orb in your hands. Release it into the air, and after a few seconds, the orb of lightning will rain down lightning bolts that will hit any enemy in its attack radius. A fast, simple move, and the delayed release can open up a lot of combat options."
( Raiton: Kaminari no Shōgeki Ame ) - Lightning Release: Lightning Shock Rain
Rank: B
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user manipulates their lightning chakra condensing into a orb of chakra and then releasing it into the air. The lightning orb will then remain in the air for several seconds releasing a continous rain of lightning bolts shocking any enemy within the radius of the attack.
Note: Lasts only the turn in which its used
 

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(LOL them pics. I have a proposal. To make things easier, you can find an image of the jutsu instead of writing a wallie, IF YOU WANT. I just like reading your detailed performances. And if you have questions, ask ^^)
I would really like to continue this way, it is a lot more fun and I will be able to get myself used to the enormous typing I do in each thread. And lets be honest I could at any time switch to shorter replying but I love this way and your training so I will keep it at this!!!



After the explanation was given, Nikodo simply took a deep breath and stretched his arms high, it was midday and he was tired from all the training they been doing, still he had no time to show tiredness. Considering he already heard the explanation, Nikodo simply extended both of his hands right before him. Taking his stance, he started kneading chakra into his body, while slowly transferring it forward towards his extended arms, the chakra being quickly transferred in there, allowed him to perform the jutsu rather quick without losing time, this could be a perfect way to counter a jutsu efficiently. With a rapid movement then he pulled his arms back, both at the same time, pausing for a slight second, everything seemed for the moment calm, the wind hitting the leaves, while the bird were chirping, and the grass moving on resonance, when for a slight second his eyes widen, and he forcefully thrusts his arms forward, kicking in a compressed lightning wave, made out of a purple glow of aura which hit the clone, rippling through his body, causing him to be electrocuted and disperse.

Alright, so this jutsu is pretty cool in my opinion. Advantages to it might be a very quick dodge against earth based projectile attacks. Another very good usage might be when a person is rushing towards you and you give them quit a nice and warm welcoming, while rippling through him easily. I just had a few questions though...

1. Can this jutsu be used only with one hand ?
2. Must the user stay stationary when he charges for this jutsu ?
3. Can the jutsu be used, when you are for example in a rapid movement like punching or blocking ?
4. Can this jutsu be used in other directions, like if you extend your arms in one side ?

Disadvantages would really be only the very limited range, like if you think about it, you can use this jutsu as perfect offense or defense, but if the enemy is too far he will use that chance. And another one is that, there will be a moment in slight seconds where this skill will leave a gigantic opening, wheer after the wave left your body, that moment could be perfectly used for offense.


For the next jutsu, once again, Nikodo lifts his arms on each side, closing his eyes, while his position is stationary, calm and focused. Once again he starts accumulating chakra in his body the amounts were the same as before, while this time, he started sending the chakra into 2 opposite sides, his left and right, were gradually being filled by the same amount of chakra. Once charging it ended, he continued leaking the raw chakra maintaining it in a small ring all around him, with the chakra being formed, and the ring being stationary, he simply opened his eyes. At that exact same second, chakra starts transforming into super-heated lightning being in a glue like formation, indicating it was already plasma. The wall was able to move in resonance with him, keeping the same distance all the time, no matter how fast his moves. This wall seems to be a pretty cool way of defense.

Ok, so advantages to this skill might be superb defense no matter from where of the 360 degree angle possibility of attacks. Another very good advantage is that you can turn this attack into a wave of lightning and plasma whenever you need to, so it has another very good possibility there.

Disadvantages might be the possibility of attacks coming straight up or straight down which are very hard to dodge to begin with. And another very poor aspect of this jutsu is that vision might be severely limited and you could get knocked down by an incoming attack easily.


For the last jutsu with a quick motion, once again, Nikodo brought up forward his right hand, making it seem like he is holding a sphere in his hands. He started as before, molding chakra into his body, while his eyes, were giving an unattainable focus towards the hand right before him. As the chakra was being transferred, a small glow was visible hovering over his palm. The small glow was being omitted by a tiny sphere which started growing in size, as it filled his whole hand. The blue hue was reflecting on his face, as it turned from serious to a small smile, he felt progressing as he was in the last jutsu of the B ranks. As the small ball was created, Nikodo simple lifted his right hand and it started levitating into the air, as it slowly omitted chakra. He forcefully brought his head back down, thrusting both hands in the sides. At that moment hundreds of lightning bolts were falling all around, making a dodge close to impossible.

Advantages are simple. This jutsu is pretty quick in execution. And pretty misleading. Many people will consider I am using Rasengan maybe and when the ball starts glowing it might give me a chance to surprise them and kill this with one of the bolts.

Disadvantages thought might be the fact that the bolt needs time to be created enough chance for an attack, and another one is that the lightning bolts will fall in an uncontrollable manner and hit even your allies if not careful. I doubt I will actually use this jutsu.
 

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1. Can this jutsu be used only with one hand ?
2. Must the user stay stationary when he charges for this jutsu ?
3. Can the jutsu be used, when you are for example in a rapid movement like punching or blocking ?
4. Can this jutsu be used in other directions, like if you extend your arms in one side ?
"Let's breakdown your questions and answer them one at a time.

"Firstly, you need to use both hands to create the purple lightning. So you can't form it with one hand."

"Second... I don't believe so. So, in a fight, you could run to the left and release the lightning towards me, for example. Just remember that it's a short-ranged technique."

"Third, no. You can, however, use it to finish off a taijutsu combo. So, for example, you're punching and kicking me, and to finish me off, you can use this to shock me and knock me back."

"And lastly, yes."

"Hope those answered your questions!"

"Now for the A-ranks. These techniques are volatile and generally incredible in their strength and effects. I expect you'll treat them with the respect they deserve."

"The first one has you forming the Monkey, Ox, Boar, and Tiger handseals. Discharge electricity from your hands and form them into lightning disks. You can then throw them like frisbees at your targets. They have cutting and shocking properties."


Souji points to a couple of trees that are ripe to be cut down for firewood.

(I think this tech is like Krillin's Destructo Disk, honestly xD)
( Raiton: Raisogekishin ) - Lightning Release: Lightning Rat Violent Quake
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: After performing the required hand seals Monkey → Ox → Boar → Tiger the user releases a discharge of electricity that shapes itself into several destructive disks of lightning. These are shot at the targets with great speed.

"The second jutsu is the chidori. Very self explanatory, it's been spammed by certain people in our world, ad nauseam. I want you to be detailed with the formation of the chidori, and analyze it well. I'll fill any points you may have missed."

He sets up a training dummy that looks like Karin, the Uzumaki Lol
(Raiton: Chidori) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user must first perform the following sequence of hand seals Ox → Rabbit → Monkey → Dragon → Rat → Bird → Ox → Snake → Dog → Tiger → Monkey and they will then focus lightning chakra into their hand to create a lightning jutsu that is concentrated in the user's palm and thrusted toward the opponent at high speed. The lightning in the user's palm sounds like birds chirping, hence the name, and allows the user to perform high grade cutting damage or high penetration piercing thrusts.
Note: Someone who mastered lightning release can perform chidori with just the Ox hand seal.
Note: Uchiha Sasuke and Kakashi Hatake bios can use the technique without handseals

"The next A-rank jutsu is a personal favorite of mine, and very powerful. Concentrate your Raiton chakra in your open hand and form a sphere of lightning that surrounds your hand. You can then throw it as a projectile towards your enemy, or punch them with it while it's still connected to your hand. Either way, upon contact, the sphere explodes in a massive lightning explosion. Powerful and fast; the personification of lightning's properties."


Souji creates a Shadow Clone for Nikodo to test the jutsu on.
(Raiton: Sanda Appu) – Lightning Release: Thunder Up
Rank: A
Type: Offence
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: The user concentrates a lot of lightning chakra into their hand, compressing it into a ball of lightning energy. The user can then hurl it at the enemy or trust it forward in a melee attack. Once the ball hits the target, it expands into a massive lightning explosion.
 

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After having received a perfect explanation by his Sensei, Nikodo just as before started kneading chakra in his body. It was no rush so he took his time, as his mind went ahead imagining what it would be like to use this jutsu in battle. As the thoughts travel all around, the chakra amounts needed were already gathered, he followed it up with the 3 necessary handseals and he simply extended both of his hands up. The lightning based chakra traveled at the hands, as with great concentration he created 3 imaginary spots in each hand higher up then usual and the disks were at some distance from one another. As the lightning was being concentrated at that spots it began to glow blue, the center was first, as it started expanding in size forming the Frisbee's. Once all have been created on both hands, he simply threw them with great power and accuracy aimed towards the tree trunks, where 2 lightning disks his teach tree trunk causing it to fall into the ground, this wood will be able to warm many families over the winter so Nikodo simply gave his thoughts about this technique.

Advantages to this skill is I guess, Amazing counter for any kind of earth projectile thrown towards you. Another very good advantage is that this skill uses more then one disk, so if they are throw carefully, you can make the chances of this technique being dodged close to zero. And another advantage is that you will be able to feel like Frieza or Krilin while using it ;___;

Disadvantages would be the fact that the disks are a pretty easy weapon to avoid if you are fast enough or if you can high step. Like you can use some next level matrix dodging. Another disadvantage to keep in mind is that wind walls or wind which surrounds the user or enemy will be able to correctly dodge this skill!!!


For the second jutsu, it was one of the most iconic so Nikodo got fully serious. He was maintaining his attention through all the time the explanation was given and as soon as it ended, Nikodo started making the seals Ox → Rabbit → Monkey → Dragon → Rat → Bird → Ox → Snake → Dog → Tiger → Monkey. While making the seals he kept on creating chakra transferring it to the forearm of his left hand. Once the seals were finished, he held the left hands wrist with the right hand, as he began transferring chakra in the palm of the left hand. The chakra as it was being concentrated, with the usage of the shape manipulation he simply made a balls of compressed chakra, while with his left hand. With the nature manipulation the lightning currents started flowing until the whole ball of chakra became a ball of compressed lightning energy. The lightning currents flowing all around him, giving it a subtle blue glow as the noise was covered by the chirping sound of the lightning. Then he simply looked at the dummy and realised the red hair and the similar face, she was a fellow Uzumaki. Without even questioning why Souji did that, Nikodo simply pulled his left hand back, charging for a thrust right in the left side of the dummy. The moment the lightning touched the dummy, it went through insanely easy, This jutsu had an amazing cutting power, since it went through wood like through butter, this technique is a dangerous one in the hands of someone who might abuse it. After being done with the attack, Nikodo released the chakra control making the Chidori slowly get smaller until it dispersed.

Advantages to this skill would be immense cutting powers, so high you could break through virtually anything. Another very good advantage is that this skill, has many ways to be used since it is literally in your own hands what you do with it. You might target someone from behind, before, sneakingly, even though the chirping sounds make it difficult to used while sneaking. This is an amazing jutsu as it is!!!

Disadvantages would only be the range, and the difficulty to control the lightning. Since you can only hit everything in your hand reach if you, and as you run to reach someone in mid or long range he will try the impossible to stop you. And the second one is the difficulty in control, the lightning will make the hand swing a little slower then usual which might cost your life!!!


For the last jutsu, just as the example above, Nikodo started charging lightning chakra inside his body, slowly transferring it to his right hand which was stationary down. As the amounts of chakra necessary for the succession of the jutsu were gathered, he simply lifted his hand up and concentrating it from the wrist down. When the clenched his hand, his fist was radiating a blue color as a sphere of lightning covered the whole fist. The sphere was transparent showing that the lightning affinity had effect because of the color or bright blue and small lightning sparks. As Nikodo had the jutsu ready eh simply turned towards the clone. He pulled his punch back, and bent his knees slightly, he breath became calm, while the vision was focused on the clone. As a sudden spark happened his eyes widen and he thrusts his punch forward towards the clone, hitting it in the right side of the cheek. The moment the punch connected a huge explosion of lightning occurred which made the clone disperse in seconds. This one is a deadly jutsu as well.

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Advantages would be that this skill can be used in 2 forms projectile based and in the punch for like I just now. If either of them connects to the target he is done for, there is no way anyone could stand that immense punch. Another good advantage is that with the projectile form you could even stop projectile weapons or blind the opponent.

Disadvantages would be the fact that this skill is pretty easy to deduce, the moment the enemy will see the punch glow he will counter attack without thinking twice. Another one would be that wind attacks towards the hand will make the punch useless, even stopping the explosion.
 

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(That's exactly how I visualize Thunder Up. Great minds think alike xD)

Souji created a campfire from the cut up firewood and began cooking some food. It was midafternoon... dinner would be coming soon. He pondered for a moment how long the training session had actually been... but it was typical.


"Now, this technique is a variant of the chidori: The sharp spear. Create a Chidori in your hands and use shape manipulation to form a blade that can reach up to 10 meters. This blade can split apart into multiple blades, and you use it much like a sword, and almost has a solid feeling, much like a tangible object."

"What makes this jutsu different from the regular chidori, and what advantages does it have over its parent technique?"

(Raiton: Chidori Eiso) - Lightning Release Chidori Sharp Spear
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user increases the range of their Chidori by using form manipulation to extend it into a blade up to 10 meters in length. This blade is capable of splitting into multiple additional blades upon contact with an enemy, drastically increasing the number of wounds it can inflict. Like other Chidori-related techniques, this jutsu will numb its target upon contact but unlike others, seems to focus more on having a cutting power, like a katana, than a piercing one. Because of its cutting abilities, it often seems to manifest a certain "solidity"; a tangible aspect.

"After that, perform a set of three handseals and place your hand on the ground, creating a large triangular bolt of lightning that cuts through the ground while rushing towards your target. Anything in its path is hit. Some things to note: this travels along the ground as it needs it as a medium to be effective, and it's also a stream type, in which you can control the path of the attack with your chakra. You should know the implications of that."


(Raiton: Ikazuchi Hakai) – Lightning Release: Lightning Destruction
Rank: A
Type: Attack
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: After performing a small sequence of 3 hand seals the user will place their hand on the ground converting their chakra in to lightning. The user then sends an enormous bolt of electricity that cuts through the ground in the direction of the enemy. The shape of the bolt is a triangular with the base in the direction of the user and the tip headed towards the target. It causes devastating destruction on its way and generates enough heat and power to destroy whatever it comes into contact with.
 

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After getting the first jutsu explained, he realised that this technique is a variation to something he had already learned. So knowing this would pretty much apply to the same principle. So as he charged chakra into his body, his stance got lower, just as before, he places his left hand, with the palm facing up and the fingers bent as if he was holding something, right before him. Closing his eyes, he began to feel the chakra as it was being gathered and transferred to the hand he was extending. As the arm got to get all the amounts of chakra needed Nikodo opened his eyes, as a small ball started being created at his palm. The ball of compressed chakra, was not long, until it started to make chirping sounds as different kinds of lightning spars were visible all around. It is a blue subtle glow, so basically a normal chidori. But as that was finished, Nikodo stretched all his muscles once again, as he made the sphere, become a lot longer in length, as the shape it had before, started changing up, until it became 10 m long and glowing with a subtle blue. The blade was made right above him, as his head was simply gazing at the tip of it. The jutsu and lightning almost seemed solid so it basically was a blade made out of compressed lightning chakra, which can be used to cut things even in the distance. Having finished the performance, he swung it 2 times and realised it was pretty much controllable despite of the enlarged size. This technique would be pretty amazing in battle, since it was strong, quick and could cut through about everything!!! Having performed the technique he just cut the chakra flow in the arm, and the soear vanished in the thin light. Being done he simply gave his insight about the jutsu...

This technique sure differs from the normal Chidori, and along with those difference come various strengths and weaknesses, which basically will make the usage of the Chidori even wider in general. This technique covers one aspect, which is range. Unlike the normal Chidori where you need to run, to impale someone, with this skill, you just extend your hand, and reach him automatically. Another point is that this technique will other then piecing abilities have even cutting abilities, which can be unlocked, just by thrusting your hand sideways. In this way, you can cut in half, rock type attack which are thrusted towards you. Another very amazing way to use it, might be using it to cut weapons heading towards you, destroying the momentum and actually stopping the attack. The possibilities are virtually endless.


For the second jutsu just as before after the explanation was fully given, without hesitation, Nikodo made 3 handseals, and slightly went down, touching the ground with his hand. As he was charging chakra he looked up, towards the clone which Sensei forgot to make. After the amounts needed were enough, with a very fast speed, the lightning chakra, traveled to his hands. In the ground, both hands started glowing blue, with different kinds of lightning sparks all around, showing that the lightning affinity was very well present. Then with a simply shaking of his body, bolts of lightning used the ground and started travelling to the clone with insane speeds. The clone was facing lightning coming full frontal towards him, and chances to actually dodge this would be pretty low in general. So as the lightning was traveling and the tries to dodge sideways were impossible, the clone was hti from the shock, making his body be extorted to the full charge of the lightning, burning him and ripping it's limbs apart. The clone dispersed then after being hit by the very strong surge of power. Getting up back again, he gave his insights about the jutsu...

Advantages to this skill would be the fact that you can actually control the direction the lightning will take, so you can't technically move away from this skill as it will follow you...till you get out of the range of course. Another advantage worth considering is that you can use this jutsu against, lightning techniques which use the earth to manipulate matter all around you...

Disadvantages would be first and foremost the 3 handseals which will basically make the jutsu a lot slower than necessary and cause you to lose time. Another one is that for the lightning to be controlled, you always need to keep your hands connected to the ground, which could cause your life.

 

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"For this next jutsu, I'm going to cast a genjutsu on you. Don't worry, let me explain."

"This next technique is the Chidori Nagashi, where you'll create and mold a Chidori throughout your entire body as an unfocused current that can paralyze enemies in its attack range. Alternatively, you can also channel the Nagashi through a focused conduit like a weapon to increase its range. However, one of the better usages is its ability as a full-body chakra surge, where you can disrupt your chakra system with a running of your own chakra throughout your entire body. This full-body surge can dispel genjutsus cast on you by expelling foreign chakra that's been inserted by an enemy. Note, however, that it can only dispel genjutsus up to one rank lower than the Nagashi itself; a property among full-body surge techniques. So, since this jutsu is an A-rank, it can dispel up to B-rank genjutsus."

"There have been a lot of misuses of this jutsu, so be sure to understand it and ask me questions if you have any concerns. But for now, let's try this..."


Souji places Nikodo under a genjutsu, changing his surroundings to make it look like a dry desert instead of the grassy field they were doing the training in.


Rank: D
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra Cost: 10 (+5 if you use it double)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user casts an illusion over an area that allows him to manipulate the way an area looks to fool an opponent. He can only change the way the terrain looks, and not any other feature.



(Raiton: Chidori Nagashi) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds Current
Rank: A
Type: Offense/Defence
Range: Short (Mid if channeled through a medium)
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: N/A (+10 if used to boost weapon damage)
Description: This jutsu allows the user to generate non-focused electricity from their body. It can be used as an omnidirectional attack or be channeled through weapons, the ground or other conductive mediums. Because the electricity isn't focused, it doesn't kill on contact, instead it has great numbing and paralyzing effects. To channel Nagashi through a medium, the user needs to focus the technique into one of his hands which will then be put in contact with the medium and can only choose to either do a widespread attack throughout his whole body or to channel it into something; he cannot achieve both usages at the same time. Despite not having much destructive or damaging properties, Nagashi can be used to destroy low rank earthen and wooden structures and even negate chakra on the ground to stop high ranked earth and wood techniques. It has also been noted that Lightning Specialists that have mastered Lightning to the highest degree can resist total paralyzation, although they still feel the pain and numbing effects.
Note: Paralyzation lasts 1 turn if sucessful but is ineffective against bios who have a primary Lightning Specialty

Once Nikodo dispels the genjutsu with the Nagashi, Souji speaks again.

"For the last technique in this set, you'll be performing another Chidori variant once more. Create a Chidori in your hand, but apply shape manipulation to shoot out senbon shaped lightning bolts in a torrent towards your target. Pretty simple, but the jutsu is very fast and can hit multiple targets or pelt a single one with multiple attacks."

"Like I said, ask me questions if you have any."


(Raiton: Chidori Senbon) - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds Needle
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user reshapes the Chidori in their hand into the form of countless senbon which are shot with a simple hand movement towards the target. The senbons are extremely precise and have the same numbing and paralyzing effects as Chidori, carrying enormous speed. Because the technique requires no handseals and is done with simple hand movements, its extremely hard to avoid while in short range and quite dangerous to counter due to the precision attacks it can be used to perform.
 

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Having both techniques explained perfectly, in one simple second, all the environment changed, becoming from the normal training field inside a very dry desert, with the golden sand reflecting the sun. It seemed as if this place had no life, no matter how much time we give it. Even though his vision was tricked, his other senses were saying another story. He could still feel the cool weather of the wind in the training ground. He could still hear the leaves rustling in the wind, and the places whether the sun wouldn't touch his body, because of the shade the trees were casting. No matter how you looked at it, it was a simple Genjutsu, which once Nikodo had studied, it was a simple idea for performing this skill. Being fully calm, just as in the case of Chidori, Nikodo started charging chakra in his body. With his eyes closed, mind and spirit calm, everything around him became silent. As he had enough chakra completed, unlike sending it to the left arm, he transferred it all equally, in the rest of his body including all the limbs. Then as he opened his eyes, he released all that chakra around him, causing huge amounts of chakra to leave his body and in that simple second, Nikodo appeared back into the training field. He was able to see Souji and everything around just as they were before, so he finally gave his insights on the jutsu, and some things which he didn't understand.

Advantages to this skill is the fact that you need no hand seals or hand motions so you can perform it virtually in no time and hit the enemy if he is about to do something bad. Another advantage is that skill skill might be able to stop movements of people all around you, so you can use it pretty much anytime you are in a sticky situation allowing you to escape.

Disadvantages to this skill is that you would even zap friends if they are close to the enemy and maybe force you not to use it if they ever kidnapped someone. Another disadvantage is if the enemy charges wind affinity all around him in order to protect himself and it could harm you even more.

I have some things unclear though...You say this skill could paralyze the enemy, but can it even harm him? We have seen that Sasuke was able to destroy many targets in the anime, could I do the same? And another one is, that can I perhaps be able to protect myself from weapons like this?


For the second skill, as he had just finished his previous technique, directly, without losing time he started charging chakra for the next technique. just as in every case of the chidori, as he rose his left hand, he started charging lightning based chakra into it. As the amounts of chakra were similar to the one chidori already had. But this time around, he had to do remote manipulation unlike before. Waving his left hand right before him, he started remotely separating chakra of the chidori in various places as he was waving, molding that raw lightning chakra he was able to make very small senbons, which then flied across the place all around at the place where he waved, with speeds high enough that it would be close to impossible to dodge them. Having easily performed it, he started giving his insights about this skill.

Advantages to this skill will be that it is insane quick offense and you can easily hit any enemy who is dashing towards you with offensive intentions. Another one would be that you could deflect weapons with that pretty easily so you could not leave any kind of openings.

Disadvantages to this skill is that a wind protective shield would be able to catch everything without worrying to much about it. Another one would be that this skill could be perfectly read by someone with the sharingan and countered by the same senbon, or even aim them at vital parts of your being.
 
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"You can paralyze multiple targets and stop the chakra infusion of certain structures, but not completely destroy them. To defend against something like this, try using a wind jutsu or try and push your enemy away, contain them in some form of enclosure, or just stay out of range. The typical counters are endless, but I expect you'll be creative with them."

"Last two A-ranks!"

"First, channel your Raiton chakra throughout your body and release it into your surroundings. Use shape manipulation to form a vortex of electrical currents around you like a tornado. It's like one of those long Chinese Dragons that wraps around you, as a visual reference point. This dragon can then shoot forward in front of you. Even if the opponent manages to dodge, the lightning can jump from the vortex and shock, giving it a nice area of effect property."


The first clone starts reading what appears to be... well, this is a family website, so Lol

(Raiton: Rairyu no Tatsumaki) - Lightning Release: Thunder Dragon Tornado
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short-Long
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user forms a whirling vortex of electricity around themselves. The vortex will take on the form of a dragon’s head and will grow to then shoot forward and cover the area in front of them. Even if the attack doesn't directly connect with his foe, the lightning can jump from the vortex to hit a nearby target.

"Then, the final A-rank has you weaving the Rabbit, Rat, Horse, and Ram handseals. Slam your hand on the ground and release a ton of Raiton chakra into it. It will pool beneath my second clone's feet and erupt as a large column of electricity that decimates anything caught in it. You can control the size and height of the pillar, within reason, of course."

"You can even hit low flying targets if you get the timing right."


The second clone starts reading the same thing the first clone was reading :|

( Raiton: Denpō Sekka ) – Lightning Release: Telegram Flash
Rank: A
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 30
Damage points: 60
Description: After doing the Rabbit → Rat → Horse → Ram hand seals, the user will slam his hand on the ground and release into it a massive amounts of lightning chakra which will then pool beneath his opponent before releasing itself into a gigantic column of lightning which shocks anything caught above it. The technique can affect a bigger or smaller area depending on the users will.
 

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As Sensei finally finished the replies, saying this was the last one of the A ranks, meaning further progress in what started not so far ago. It seems like time really goes by really fast. So as the jutsu were explained, Nikodo just as before started charging chakra inside his body, until the amounts were equal like they were before to all the A rank lightning techniques. As the amounts were sufficient, he started releasing them through all the pores in his body, making them gather all around him, then with further attention and concentration he started having the chakra rotate around him clockwise as it was speeding up. As the raw chakra was rotating it started showing small sparks of lightning as it was all cloaked into very strong bolts and electromagnetic waves of lightning which were accelerating all around him at speed unimaginable. Once the speed was fast, with the further use of shape manipulation the tip of the tornado, started forming into the snout and head of a dragon. As he was looking before him seeing the clone read "that" magazine, he must be stopped. So directing the head of the dragon, he made it dash towards the person right before him, at speed which noone could evade, and after being hit, the clone was fully electrocuted, and it dispersed. Having it vanish, Nikodo walked slowly towards it, picking up the magazine...It made him feel bad...it was the superman comic of last month...Shameful, very shameful!!!

Alright, advantages to this skill are the fact that the range is pretty much insane, so you can hit everyone close and far to you. Another one is that you will be able to use it without any kinds of seals and that will help you in most cases when you are in a sticky situation. And yet again another one is that you can change the direction in seconds, so even though you think you dodged it, you will be feeling the pain of the attack.

Disadvantages to this skill really aren't that many. If you consider everything good it can do, I guess one of them is that it is kinda stream based, so as it is flying you can't use other jutsu which the enemy can use as a chance. Another one is that this skill as it is forming around you, it can block your vision and make you vulnerable.


As the time for the second jutsu arrived, just as before, Nikodo started charging chakra inside his body. Having his eyes locked at the clone, as the chakra was complete, he simply made 4 handseals and following it with something, he simply slammed his hands into the ground. As everything was calm and quite, his forearm muscle, and biceps feel the chakra charge through towards the ground. As it reached the ground, with chakra control he prevented the earth from braking up, but it caused it to move right through it, as it was traveling, his eyes get higher, looking that the clone was still reading and laughing, while the lightning was literally under his feet. With a simply clench of muscles, the chakra under him sprouted in the from of a gigantic lightning pillar which hit the clone hard enough it simply caused it to vanish in this air, and over that it simply destroyed the paper until it wasn't decipherable. Having finished the last one of A ranks he gave his last insights.

Advantages to this skill is that it is pretty deceitful. Having someone bend first, will indicate more to a Doton than a Raiton technique, so the person will be ready to reply to it, but do it wrong. Another one would be that this skill could have one more usage and that would be being able to use before the opponent is landing, so that you can kill him in mid air, before he can dodge or sidestep.

Disadvantages is that this skill needs 4 handseals which will leave the opponent time to think. Another one is that sharingan users will see lightning released being charged up in their body and they will reply with wind accordingly. Another one is that they will be able to feel vibrations in the earth and yet again, reply accordingly.
 

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(Such training excellence.)

Souji took a quick break and revealed the final scroll, with a confident grin on his face.

"S-ranks. These are the pinnacle of Lightning release techniques... most of them are unlike you've ever seen, but rather, heard in the stories of famous shinobi in the past."

"The very first S-rank Raiton technique is powerful, fast, and all around, one of the best standard techniques in existence. After performing the Snake hand seal, you'll fire a lightning spear from either your hands or mouth. This has such high piercing potential, it can punch through any earth technique like nothing. It's incredibly fast and difficult to evade. In fact, you would need really strong wind techniques or equal ranked Raiton to even stop this."

"Destroy that huge boulder, pierce through it and break it apart."

"I do have one question here. You can also split the spears into multiple parts, but each one will be individually weaker. So, doing the math, we can have one S-rank spear, two A-rank spears... finish the rest for me, please."


(Raiton: Gian) - Lightning Style: False Darkness
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Descripton: The user, after performing the Snake hand seal, emits lightning in the shape of a spear from their hands or mouth which then pierces the enemy. Kakuzu, the original user, shoots the technique from his Lightning mask's mouth. Its destructive power is great enough to even pierce through rock; meaning it has a high killing potential. The user can increase the number of spears to attack multiple enemies by branching the main spear. This, coupled with the sheer speed of the lightning, makes it a difficult technique to evade. This strong attack can be defended against by an equally strong attack of the same element such as Raikiri.

"The second jutsu is the Raikiri. Kakashi Hatake's signature technique. It's legendary for its usage and feared for its strength. I shouldn't really have to explain it to you; other than the fact that it's a Chidori with more chakra control required, and higher strength and power in general."

"If you've got any questions, let me know!"


(Raiton: Raikiri) - Lightning Release: Lightning Blade
Rank: S
Type: Offense
Range: Short (Long if applied to a projectile weapon)
Chakra Cost: 40
Damage Points: 80
Description: The Lightning Cutter is an enhanced and concentrated form of the Chidori with the same effects and drawbacks that is done performing the Ox → Rabbit → Monkey hand seals. According to Might Guy, it gained its name after Kakashi split a bolt of lightning with it. Because the Chidori is already powerful on its own, the Lightning Cutter requires better chakra control, which is exemplified in its appearance. The Chidori appears as simply a mass of white electrical chakra in the user's hand, while the Lightning Cutter is much more focused. Kakashi has shown different ways of forming and using the Lightning Cutter, unique to him. For example, he demonstrated the ability to imbue a projectile weapon, such as a kunai, with his Lightning Cutter, granting the technique long-range capabilities by throwing the kunai towards his target. In this instance, the kunai was capable of piercing through multiple large rocks with ease, without any loss of momentum or change in trajectory.
Note: Kakashi biographies can use the technique without hand seals.
Note: Only Kakashi biographies can apply the technique to a kunai and use it as a projectile attack.

Souji looked at Nikodo. He was worn out and seemed tired, but at the same time, stronger, wiser, and more focused. Having trained many students, it was a sensation of growth of progression that he always looked forward to. Nikodo's inherent talent was being formed into something truly special and razor-sharp. Souji could just feel it radiating.
 

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The S rank techniques a part which each shinobi will reach, during his training and through all this day, as the training started in the morning, Nikodo realised it was close to dusk. Seems like another day is coming to an end, but this one other than the others was over faster than he expected...No...it was faster than he wanted it to be. Seeing how Sensei was happy, that this ended, it seems like the emotions were different. Nikodo too was happy, but yet again, sad that this other journey ended this quick. Despite that, he decided to show his top performance in the last rank of skills. It was something which was close to his heart. As after the yet again perfect explanation, he began.

As he was ready and in battle position Nikodo looked close at the huge boulder right in front of him, the size was not to be underestimated, but as this skill was close to being the strongest one of the lightning element itself, it should be no challenge. So as he was charging chakra inside his body, he simply looked at the boulder with his eyes being narrow and his body stance normal with his hands clenched to fists in either side of his body. The hands rise as the amounts of chakra needed were met, and after they connect a handseal was visible, it was the snake handseal. As the hands connect, he positions his right leg before him, as the hands touch in the end of the palm and get pulled back. All the chakra gathered was slowly transferred inside the hands, slowly in the center creating a small blue glowing spark. The center being white, all around emitting a dull blue glow, as the form started getting bigger and bigger until it filled both hands. The light from the lightning attack was from below, showing all over Nikodo's body, showing the shadow in his face as his face was full serious all the time, was his eyes, were reflecting the glow calmly. With a quick movement he put out a short tempered scream which was in one way or another saying a word not fully understandable, but what they were basically able to hear was "Hadouken". As the lightning spear out of compressed lightning chakra was flying, Nikodo's position was with his hands right before him, while his vision was locked into the boulder. The the lightning spear hit it, was able to easily go right through it, as it split the rock into huge chunks, but it was as if the lightning was going through butter and not that big of a boulder, returning into his first position, he gave his insights about this skill.

To answer your question as this jutsu is a full S ranked powered one,so if you create 2 spears all of them will be A ranked, if you choose to create 4, all of them will be B ranked, if you choose to create 8, they will be C ranked, and for each to be D ranked you should make 16. We can take this even further and create up to 32 E ranked skills.

Advantages to this skill is that it is the ultimate counter to the Earth shield. It is strong enough to cut through about anything you can possibly create, another one is that you need only one seal to use it, so you can perform it insanely fast. Another advantage is that it is very flexible as it can be used either by the mouth or hands, giving it a surprise factor whenever you choose to use it. Another one would be that I look exactly like Ryu from Street fighter.

Disadvantages to this skill is that you still need to perform one handseal, which could give you a loss, especially against the many wind jutsu which require none at all. Another one is that this skill will still be easily sensed by sharingan users and countered beforehand. And another one is that you could move out of the way with very fast speed.


For the second jutsu, As Nikodo heard that this was basically Chidori, but a lot more focused, he became excited. Chidori was an insane jutsu in usage and a similar jutsu to it, but even stronger would be insane. As as before with Chidori, Nikodo bent his knees slightly, as he weaved through the handseals while charging all those amounts of chakra inside his body. Being done with the handseals, he extended his left had ans positioned it with his palm as if he was holding a sphere, with the end of the palm faced to him and the fingers away. With his right hand, he held the wrist of the left one, as a small blue glowing sphere was visible floating about 5 cm in the air, over the palm. The size slowly got bigger and bigger and lightning sparks were visible all around everything. The sphere was getting bigger, but unlike chidori the shape was limited as it was insanely round and very compressed. The amounts of chakra were a lot larger creating an even stronger and deadlier weapon, it looks like what was created now, was the next step of chidori, it was basically, the signature jutsu of the Copy Ninja...Raikiri!!

Advantages to this skill would be everything what Chidori had, so a strong lightning attack, which is able to clearly cut through any form of defense and even some other kinds of attacks. It is even perfect for very quick assassinations or annihilation, plus it will be very effective against wood based techniques.

Disadvantages is this large number of seals, and the range which it is in. But if you have a Kakashi biography both will not count, so you can call this jutsu about unbeatable.
 
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"Nikodo, these two techniques are Chidori variants. Simple and effective, but quite versatile nonetheless. For such moves, forming the chidori doesn't count as a move, so be aware of that."

"For this first one, form a chidori and point your palm forward; the one where you formed the Chidori. Release the chakra in a blast of lightning. The formation of the angle is enough to create a spreading attack that pushes forward. Fast and efficient; it can tear through any Earth technique, and serve as a lethal offensive attack."

"Hit those targets over there."


A set of targets rested quietly, waiting for their inevitable demise.

(Raiton: Chidori Raimei) - Lightning Style: 1000 Birds Thunderstorm
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost:40
Damage Points:80
Descripton: The user will channel lightning chakra into his hand, covering it with a massive chidori. The user will then point his palm forwards, unleashing that chakra, creating a massive 120º blast of lightning that spreads from his hand, outwards and forward towards the enemy.

"Next, form a Chidori and run up to your opponent-in case, my clone. Strike him, and once you do, apply your shape manipulation to extend your chidori into a long lightning spear that impales and pushes him upward. The tip of the spear will explode, just to add more injury to injury."

"Go ahead."


( Raiton: Chidori Shinsō ) - One Thousand Birds True Spear
Rank: S
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description:The user starts off by dashing at his opponent with a Chidori in his hand. As they strikes his opponent, they uses shape manipulation to extend the Chidori into a lightning spear that impales and hurtles the opponent into the air. The user then increases the potency of the lightning, generating a powerful electric explosion at the end of the spear and sending the enemy back to the ground.
Note: Only the spear extention can reach up to mid range.
 

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As the jutsu was explained the Uzumaki got into position to perform the techniques, just as before he extended his left hand forward as he was now charging lightning chakra in his hand, while being calm and collected. Looking at the hand, he was already charging chakra in his left hand as the right one was holding the wrist while having his position low. As the chakra in his body were at the right proportions he started sending all the chakra needed at the left hand as he started materializing everything in the hand, creating once again the lightning in the palm. But now unlike before, he fully extended his arm forward as he then started releasing the lightning violently, without real focus as all the strong lightning charges were now being released in a random pattern but in a focused area only 122 degrees, right before him, as the right hand was trying to focus the lightning as good as possible. The lightning was hitting target after target. Being pierced by that strong lightning and the bolts as they branch out was a killer technique no matter who you use it against. As the lightning Ran out, Nikodo gave his insights.

If you ask me this is an amazing jutsu and to be honest it makes me feel like a sith lord. So the advantages to it would be the lack of seals so it is very quick and strong. Another one would be the wide range of 120 degrees, which could level anything in it's path even if you are attack from 2 different directions. And another advantage to this is that it could atek on large groups of enemy easily restricting forward movement. And another one is that if used in a water source this jutsu could kill everyone standing on the water.

Disadvantages would be that it is a stream type, so you need to constantly give it chakra if you wanna stay strong against it. Another one would be that if attacked from behind you can't fully change direction with this technique. Another one would be that wind attacks which cover a very large area could naturally insulate this jutsu and not let it pass through.


For the second technique, just as in the case of a normal chidori he started gathering chakra in the palm as he held it down, with the fingers of the right hand wrapping around the left hands wrist, as everything else seemed calm. And slowly a blue subtle glowing sphere was visible in the left hand, and the lightning started being visible all around it, while the chirping sounds followed. The lightning started getting larger and larger. The amounts of chakra gathered were insane a lot larger than normal chidori as the power of the jutsu increased as well. Now as the jutsu was half performed he looked at the clone, while he ran towards him, keeping the chidori hand behind him, as he continued forward step after step. As he now was just looking at the clone not moving at all. Thrusting his hand forward and touched the clones chest, and instantly with shape transformation he started changing the shape of the sphere to a large sphere pushing the clone forward as far as the chakra allowed, as he was about 8 m away, the tip of the sphere which had most chakra concentrated exploded in a lightning storm, which caused the clone to be dispersed.

Advantages to this technique would be the lack of seals, but along with it you can even take care of the enemy way better and push him forward not allowing him to counteract. Another one would be if you are at a cliff and you hit him and push him off the ledge you could pretty much push him way back till eh goes over the safe zone and to the sharp rocks or the all eating monster in the end.

Disadvantages to this technique would be that this technique still needs to touch the enemy so if it doesn't happen, or if the enemy dodges it you could be fully open to another offensive attack. Another one would be that if it was countered by the wind fist, the lightning would be ineffective. And another one would be that if the enemy has sharingan he could predict this technique and predict a good way to dodge it.
 

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Souji took a deep breath.

"Awesome! These are the last two! For the first one, you will form two Chidoris in your hands, one in each. Clap your hands together, and this burst of two energy sources will cause a massive thunderbolt that will be linearly directed at your target. Incredibly powerful and it can leave a massive crater from the impact of the jutsu. Unfortunately, using this in short range is impossible, lest you suffer friendly fire."

"One thing here. This jutsu is best done from high ground. So, walk over to the edge of this hill we're standing on, and fire the ThunderClap at the ground below us, at the trees below. I want you to observe its destructive capabilities."


(Raiton: Chidori Jinrai) – Lightning Release: 1000 birds ThunderClap.
Rank: S
Type: Attack
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra cost: 40
Damage points: 80
Description: The user will cover his hands in with lightning, essentially performing a (Raiton: Chidori) Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds in each hand. Clapping his hands together, the user can unleash that massive amount of lightning chakra into the form of a powerful Thunderbolt directed at the target. The technique is best used if the user has a height advantage in relation to the target. The thunderbolt is strong enough to leave a giant crater and cannot be used while being in Short-range of the target, at the risk of being hit also.

"You'll like this next one." he said.

Molding Katon chakra in her mouth and performing a single handseal, Souji opened his mouth and applied shape manipulation to turn the fire building up in it into dragon-shaped fireballs. Looking up towards to the sky, he spewed out these fireballs, which caused the otherwise clear skies to begin to get cloudy due to the extreme heat. The alteration of the local weather meant only one thing...


Rank: B
Type: Offense/Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 20
Damage Points: 40
Description: The user fires several large dragon-shaped fireballs at their opponent after performing one handseal. It is able to alter localized weather conditions to the point of making thunder clouds when shot into the air, enabling the user to perform Kirin.




"Kirin."

"I've taken the liberty to helping you set up for this legendary technique. As the thunderclouds and natural lightning begin to form, perform a Chidori (you need to post the move) and use it to control the lightning that starts striking, applying the highest levels of shape and nature manipulation to literally tame lightning. It requires two moves on the turn you use Kirin, so be aware of that."

"This is one of the most powerful techniques in existence. If you manage to pull it off in a battle, it's almost considered an instant win."

"For this, so that we don't get fried, direct the Kirin towards that nearby hill over there, a safe distance from our own hill. But even at that distance, we'll feel the aftershocks. I fully expect the hill to be completely obliterated. A testament to its frightening power."


There was a dummy on the hill over there that had the image of Itachi Uchiha, made out of straw and cloth U_U

(Raiton: Kirin) - Lightning Release: Kirin
Rank: S
Type: Offense
Range: Mid-Long
Chakra Cost: 70
Damage Points: 120
Description: After using a fire jutsu to heat the atmosphere and create thunderclouds in the sky, the user will use Chidori to take control of the lightning above. They can then make the lightning strike an opponent in the blink of an eye.
Note: Can only be avoided with time/space techniques or otherwise absolute defenses.
Note: Can only be used once per battle.
Note: In the turn before the use of Kirin, the user must have used at least a B-Rank, Long Range Fire (Katon) technique directed at the sky.
Note: User needs to post Chidori, meaning that in the turn Kirin is used, the user spends 2 moves.
 

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As the first jutsu was explained, Nikodo slowly started walking towards the cliff while he was slowly gathering up chakra in his body. As he was walking he started thinking that another element is completed now, making a slight smile he continued till he reached the top. He then extended both hands forward slightly with the palm facing up, making a stance like Yahiko did when he was reminded of the crying nation of amegakure. As he closed his eyes, he gathered up the lasts bit of chakra as he was channeling them towards his palms. With the shape manipulation he started making 2 balls of light in both of his palms as he was looking up. The lightning affinity started giving it the chirping sounds. The lightning was visible all around, as the 2 chidori were created. As both of the chidori were set on place. Nikodo rushed those palms towards one another at high speed, as they connect. The 2 spheres meld and then form a very strong bolt, which will fire from an opening in the hand which was traveling at insane speed, hitting the clone which was on the field. The explosion which hit the clone vaporized part of the ground along with the clone is seconds. This was a jutsu whose power level was insanely strong!!!

Advantages to this skill is the lack of seals which can make it very quick. Another one is the confusion, as chidori is generally not a projectile attack but now it could be used as one. Another advantage to it would be that this skill could take out many enemies if they are cramped in one area. And the last advantage would be that it can be used in an angle so you can save yourself from the damage.

Disadvantages to this skill would be that you need to use both hands and you will be defenseless for a second. And another one would be that you can't be able to use it in close range. You can't erven use this if your ally is close as it would kill him as well.


It was time for the last technique of lightning release. A jutsu so strong that it is considered god like as the power surpasses that of any jutsu. A technique said to belong to the gods and whose power rivals that of any technique. The flame dragons fly up, ad the clouds gather all around. The rain starts slowly falling, while there is thunder and lightning visible in the sky. Closing his eyes and inhaling deep Six looked at the sky, while he was feeling the immense power of the lightning. He started controlling all the raw lightning as he makes some handseals and extends his left arm, with lightning visible all around. a mighty roar is hear from the heavens. As Nikodo jumps high over to the cliff looking at the dummy. His eyes were glowing as the mighty lightning starts channeling only in one place. With his eyes now locked at the clone. He extends his left hand, as with all his power with shape and nature control, a dragon head poked from the clouds. It's size was immense as the look of it, was with red glowing eyes. The dragon had a short look at the dummy. As Nikodo then said with a cam voice...Begone with the thunderclap... Die!! Viciously pulling his hand down, he redirected the dragon with insane speed at the dummy with the maximum control possible, the dragon hit right on spot, exploding in a maelstrom of lightning which leveled the hill, as it created a huge crater, with nothing but dust. No sights of survival. Once you are hit my that, it is certain death. Getting down from the cliff, the clouds started clearing as the light rays pierced through the clouds, shining on the battlefield as he started explaining the last technique.

Raiton: Chidori - Lightning Release: One Thousand Birds
Rank: A
Type: Offense
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 30
Damage Points: 60
Description: The user must first perform the following sequence of hand seals Ox → Rabbit → Monkey → Dragon → Rat → Bird → Ox → Snake → Dog → Tiger → Monkey and they will then focus lightning chakra into their hand to create a lightning jutsu that is concentrated in the user's palm and thrusted toward the opponent at high speed. The lightning in the user's palm sounds like birds chirping, hence the name, and allows the user to perform high grade cutting damage or high penetration piercing thrusts.
Note: Someone who mastered lightning release can perform chidori with just the Ox hand seal.
Note: Uchiha Sasuke and Kakashi Hatake bios can use the technique without handseals.

Advantages to this skill is the fact that it is sheer undodgeable by custom bios, which don't have a perfect defense. No one can react so far no matter what you do. Another advantage is that you can direct the dragon wherever you want so there is no meaning if the enemy will run, this jutsu will hit him. It is an unforgiving one...

Disadvantages would be that you need to use a fire tech and wait one turn for this skill. And another one is that you need to use chidori so you roughly need 2 slots to perform one technique which could cost you the battle. Another one is that perfect defense, like yata mirror, insane chakra chains, or phasing technique could dodge it.
 

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There wasn't much to be said. Nikodo, perhaps one of his best students yet, had completed Raiton.

"See the destruction Lightning causes? Be careful when you wield this... always direct it, be its master. Never lose control, focus. Remember those tips that and you'll do fine."

"If you have any questions, you can always contact me. But for now... let's go back to Konoha and get some much needed rest. Agreed?"


Patting his back, the two shinobi walked together, a new bond formed.
 
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Understanding how now everything worked, the day came to an end. It was already dusk, so as they had to go to the same location, Nikodo suggested with an enthusiastic voice: Shall we go have a Ramen and Ichirakus? I know someone who loves it there. I pay this time around...

They continued walking slowly understanding that from this training a new friendship was formed something which will hopefully last.




I had fun man, thanks!!
 
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