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[Better]

*Gin stands there like a boss while the earth tremors, then falls down* Good, I almost lost balance there <_<

(Doton: Dorosandan) – Earth Release: Mudshot
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 10
Description: The user spits a thick globule of mud at the target. If aimed correctly, it can blind the target's vision and choke them. It can also be used to create a sticky patch on the ground.

I focus your earth chakra in your mouth and release a mud shot at my clone, make sure you aim it at my clones face blocking it's vision.

 

[Yveltal]

the last thing I want is mud in my mouth

* I concentrate and start gathering doton chakra and then channeling it into my mouth. I then materialize the doton chakra into mud. With my mouth filled with mud, I face your clone and concentrate on his face. I then expel a thick sludge of mud towards you clone's face. The mud strikes his face, blinding him in the process.*

 

[Better]

lol xd

(Doton: Iwa Yado Kuzushi) - Earth Release: Stone Lodging Destruction
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short-Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Descripton: This technique allows the ninja to control nearby stone and rock. This can be especially useful if in a cave or a stone lodging. The technique can loosen the rocks and cause them to come raining down on whomever is trapped inside.

Alright, my clone magically is in the cave over there, don't ask how he got there though. Let's just say he's fast O_O. I want you to focus your doton chakra control the rocks and stones and loosen them. Allowing them to rain down on my clone and making him disperse.

 

[Yveltal]

xd where did the cave come from????

*Stands near cave*

* I concentrate and start by channeling my doton chakra through the ground and into the structures of the cave. I then start controlling the rocks structure of the cave. I start pulling a couple of the rocks out of place. The cave then begins to collapse, the falling debris then crush your clone.*

 

[Better]

O-o don't slack U_U

(Doton: Doryū Taiga) - Earth Release: Earth Flow River
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: After forming the needed hand sealTiger, the user transforms the ground underneath their opponent into a river of mud that throws them off balance and away from the user. The mud created by this technique can also be used as a medium for the Earth Release: Earth Dragon Bullet technique.

I want you to form the tiger handseal and transform the ground underneath my clone into a river of mud that carries him away. After my clone gets carried away I want you to form a dragon bullet by

(Doton: Doryudan) - Earth Release: Earth Dragon Bullet
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: When used with Earth Release: Earth Flow River, the user will then perform the Ram → Horse → Dragon they can create a dragon-like head to fire concentrated mud at an opponent. This can also be combined with a fire jutsu to shoot lava toward an opponent.

by forming Ram → Horse → Dragon hand seal and creating a dragon head that goes at my clone and hits it and makes it disperse.

(creates clone)

 

[Yveltal]

* I begin by performing the Tiger hand seal and then channeling my doton chakra into the earth around us. I then concentrate and soften the earth beneath your clone until it turns into mud. Your clone then looses his balance,falls over, and slides away in the mud. Not wasting time I quickly perform the Ram → Horse → Dragon hand seals, and manipulate the mud I created, and shape it into a dragon's head with its mouth open. I then make the mud dragon head use the mud it was created in to fire mud shots at your clone.*

Question: About hiding like a mole technique, when I'm underground is it possible to perform earth shaking?

 

[Better]

Nope, once your are underground, you can manipulate your chakra to do anything else, so no techniques while using it.

(Doton: Ganchūrō no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Rock Pillar Prison Technique
Rank: C
Type: Defence/supplementary
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: After performing the required hand seals Rat → Horse → Dog → Snake and they then create a large amount of rock pillars from under ground. They can then be controlled to surround their opponent and create a bamboo-like thicket of rock.

I want you to form the hand seals Rat → Horse → Dog → Snake and then create a large amount of rock pillars from underground. Then control them and have them imprison my clone.

(creates clone)

 

[Yveltal]

*I begin by gathering my doton chakra and then channeling it into the earth. I then perform the handseals Rat → Horse → Dog → Snake; causing seven pillars of earth to come out of the ground underneath your clone, thus trapping him.*

 

[Better]

why you slack off :O

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(Doton: Doroku Gaeshi) - Earth Release: Earth Shore Return
Rank: C
Type: Defence
Range: Short
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: After striking the ground with their hands, the user creates a large wall of earth in front of him/her. The defence is not perfect though, since a hard or drilling impact can puncture the wall. Also, since this technique only guards frontal attacks, the enemy can easily attack from the side or even from above.

I want you to strike the ground with your hands, this will create an earth wall in front of you.

Gin throws kunais at you O__O

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(Doton: Doro Hōshi) - Earth Release: Mud Spore
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This technique lets the user summon a river of mud infront of them. This technique can have water added to it to speed up the flow and increase its power.

I want you to summon a river of mud in front of you, if you know any water, add to it so it can pick up the muds speed and increase it's power.

 

[Yveltal]

lol my fault, I just got a lot on my mind this week

* Noticing the incoming kunais, I quickly slam hands down onto the ground, thus releasing doton chakra into the earth. I then concentrate and cause the earth to rise up and form a rectangular wall. The oncoming kunais then pierce the earth wall by the tips.*


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*I concentrate as I channel my doton chakra into the earth in front of me. I then manipulate the texture of the earth; softening it enough to make thick and slimy. I then send it gushing down the area in front as if it were a river. I quickly gather my suiton chakra and then channel it into my mouth. I then convert the suiton chakra into liquid state and release a stream of water into the river of mud to increase its power and flow.*

 

[Better]

lol you can take your time, i was just been replying to everyone right now for a straight hour lol Thought you wanted to get in on it.

(Doton: Retsudo Tenshō) - Earth Release: Tearing Earth Turning Palm
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: After performing the required hand seals Boar → Ox → placing hand on the ground, the user causes the ground surrounding the enemy to spiral inwards on itself, burying them alive or crushing them. This technique is capable of causing quite a bit of damage to the area. This technique is much more damaging if used in rocky mountainous areas, or inside a cave.

Form the hand seals and focus your chakra into the ground underneath my clone then place your hand on the ground and it will cause the ground underneath my clone to spiral inwards and bury my clone alive.

*creates clone*

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(Doton: Dochū Eigyo no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Underground Projection Fish Technique
Rank: C
Type: Defence/Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Using this jutsu, a person can hide underground until they're ready to attack an opponent. By utilizing earth-chakra, the person can stealthily emerge from the ground without disrupting the ground around him. This jutsu can also be used to avoid incoming jutsus.

I want you to use your earth chakra and travel underground, allowing yourself to sink underground without disturbing it and dodge this fireball.

*shoots fireball*

 

[Yveltal]

oh XD

* I perform the Boar → Ox hand seals and then place my hands onto the ground. I then channel my doton chakra into the earth your clone stands on. I then soften the earth a little and then manipulate the earth to spiral inwards;sucking sucking everything above it into its depths.*

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O__O isn't this basically Hiding like a Mole technique

* I begin by channeling my doton chakra into the earth beneath me. I then manipulate the earth, giving it a quicksand texture; allowing me to easily slip into the earth, thus evading the fireball. I then easily slip back and resurface.*


off-topic Q: If my CJ thread is closed am I allowed to still use it and teach other people and also whats max number of people that I can teach a move?

 

[Better]

You tell me, what do you as a difference?

(Doton: Moguragakure no Jutsu) – Earth Release: Hiding like a mole technique
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user changes earth into fine sand by channeling chakra into it, allowing the user to dig through it like a mole. While underground one can sense what is happening on the surface and use the information to launch a surprise attack on the enemy. Once can also hide deep in the ground, escaping to a depth where the enemy cant reach. It also appears that after digging, the ground can be returned to its original state, leaving no trace of where the user entered the earth.


(Doton: Dochū Eigyo no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Underground Projection Fish Technique
Rank: C
Type: Defence/Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: Using this jutsu, a person can hide underground until they're ready to attack an opponent. By utilizing earth-chakra, the person can stealthily emerge from the ground without disrupting the ground around him. This jutsu can also be used to avoid incoming jutsus.

 

[Yveltal]

well the 2nd one leans more towards defense. And also it leaves no trace of you digging underground. And I'm guessing the 2nd one doesn't allow you to sense whats above like the first one.

 

[Better]

Both don't leave traces, but good Undeground Fish doesn't let you sense whats above you.

(Doton: Doryūkatsu) - Earth Release: Earth Flow Divide
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: The user will first perform the required hand seals Rabbit → Boar → Rat → Horse → Tiger → Snake and then by flowing concentrated chakra from one's palms into the Dragon Veins flowing underground, one can tear the earth apart, creating large chasms by firstly raising the earth in the desired location and then splitting that peice of earth through the center. The length, width, direction, and curve of the chasm are all up to the user. Manipulating the Dragon Veins requires fine chakra control, but if one has such skill, they can use this technique to divide the space between the enemy and their own team in two, destroy enemy camps or defences, and even to attack.
Note: This does not split the earth appart directly to cause opponents to fall in the fissure.

I want you to first perform the required hand seals Rabbit → Boar → Rat → Horse → Tiger → Snake and then by flowing your concentrated chakra from your palms into the Dragon Veins flowing underground, This should cause the ground to split into two.

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(Doton: Tsuchi Douyou no Hira) – Earth Release: Earth Shaking Palm
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: After performing snake hand seal the user slams their hand on the ground. The result is that the ground becomes heavily turned up with chunks of rubble popping out of the ground. This technique is used as a means to distract opponents to either create an escape or follow through with a surprise attack.

Perform the snake hand seal and then slam your hand onto the ground, this will cause chunks of rubble to pop up out of the ground, you can use this technique to distract your opponent.

 

[Yveltal]

........ the hell is a dragon vein?

* I start by performing the Rabbit → Boar → Rat → Horse → Tiger → Snake hand seals. I then place my palms onto the ground and channel my doton chakra through my palms and into the dragon veins. The ground in front begins to rise up about 10ft and then split into two.*

Question:If I was to use this on an opponent who is using "Hiding like a Mole technique" or "Underground Fish Projection" would it work?

*I quickly perform the Snake hand seal and then slam my hands onto the ground releasing doton chakra into the earth. The earth begins to rumble;popping out of place*

 

[Better]

It would split the earth, so the person hiding would be in one of two pieces of earth you made imo. Also, don't slack :T_T:

(Doton: Kengan no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Fist Rock Technique
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: After performing the snake → Seal of Confrontation and then by encasing their arm in rock, the user can deal a powerful hardened punch against an opponent while being protected from direct contact with their target. If necessary, the weight of the rock can be increased to further increase the punch's destructive power through the Earth Release: Added Weight Technique or the Earth Release: Super Added Weight Technique.

Perform the snake and then the seal of confrontation, then encase your arm in rock, creating a giant rock fist O___O, hit my clone with it. Later on i'll teach how you can make this technique stronger.

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(Doton: Ton'neru chika no Jutsu) - Earth Release: Tunneling Technique
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Long
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user after performing the required hand seals Ram → Dog → Rat → Bird is able to create a wide tunnel in the ground, this cannot travel through rock though or anything with a high density. The large tunnel that is created allows the user to transport others without detection.
Note: The initial entry of the technique is short range.

I want you to perform the required hand seals and then create a wide tunnel in the ground, you can transport others with this technique. Quite ninja like, unlike everything else <_<

 

[Yveltal]

>___< I'm not slacking.......I'm not very descriptive when it comes to jutsu's unless you want me to bs on the description amd plus not all the techniques like.....require a descriptive performance o__o

*I concentrate and perform the Snake hand seal and then the Seal of confrontation. I then channel my doton chakra into my right arm and cause rocks from the earth to encase my right arm into a rock like gauntlet. I then charge at your clone deliver a dirty punch right in the stomach, sending him flying back.*

I am the AVATAR!!!

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*I concentrate and perform the Ram → Dog → Rat → Bird hand seals. I the channel my doton chakra into the earth beneath me. I then soften the texture of the ground beneath and then create a deep whole in the ground.*

 

[Better]

._. it's how you learn U_U

Doton: Retsudo Tenshin) - Earth Release: Violent Heavenly Earth Needle
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage point: 30
Description: The user after after using earth release: earth flow wave, will perform the snake hand seal and then will create a large needle out of it to impale the opponent.
Note: Must use Earth Release: Earth Flow Wave before hand

Use Earth Flow wave first, and then perform the snake hand seal and then create large needles that impale my clone from the flow.

creates clone

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(Doton: Dāchiganshō) - Earth Release: Ground Bedrock
Rank: C
Type: Offensive, Supplementary
Range: Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: After forming the necessary seal Snake, the user creates two walls of earth and traps their target in between them.

Form the snake hand seal, and then create two earth walls that trap my clone in between them.

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[Yveltal]

* I concentrate and gather large sum of doton chakra. I then channel my doton chakra into the earth beneath me. I then manipulate the earth beneath me, causing various sized rocks to protrude out of the ground and rise; picking me up into the air as if i was riding a wave. I then "surf" my towards your clone. As I get real close, i quickly perform the snake hand seal and channel my doton chakra into the earth wave; shaping tip of the earth wave into a sharp needle. The earth needle then pierces through your clone's chest*


*I start by gathering my doton chakra and then quickly performing the Snake hand seal. I then channel my doton chakra into the earth. I then concentrate and cause two walls of earth to rise from the ground around your clone. I then manipulate the two walls to slide closer towards your clone. Your clone is then trapped in between the two walls.*