Doton Training With Ruiz Sempai

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Got it *I start gathering my doton chakra and focus it to the ground. I start putting my chakra into the ground in front me. While I put my chakra and I use it to manipulate the ground into mud. I keep manipulating it till I completely summon a river of mud.*
 

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(Doton: Retsudotensho) - Earth Style: Split Earth Turn Around Palm
Rank: C
Type: Offense
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: 30
Description: This technique causes the ground surrounding the enemy to spiral inwards on itself, burying them alive or crushing them. This technique is much more damaging if used in rocky mountainous areas, or inside a cave.

*creates clone*
 

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Got it *I start gathering my doton chakra. After I get enough chakra I put it into the ground surrounding your clone. My chakra manipulates the ground and makes it spiral inwards. As the ground spirals your clone is sunk in and dissapear.*
 

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Your chakra manipulates the ground? O_O
Almost, try again.
 

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*I start gathering my doton chakra. After I get enough chakra I put it into the ground surrounding your clone. My chakra to make the ground move spiral inwards.I keep focus on making the ground spiral inward. As the ground spirals your clone is sunk in and dissapear.*
 

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(Doton: Doryuu Kekai) - Earth Style: Earth Fissure
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short/Long
Chakra Cost: 15
Damage Points: N/A
Description: This jutsu splits the earth apart to make a fissure. The size of the fissure is proportioned to the amount of chakra of the user.

*creates clone*
 

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Got it. *I start gathering my doton chakra. After I gather my doton chakra I start putting it into to the ground. As I put my chakra into the ground I use it to cause a split in ground underneath your clone. I keep using more chakra so that the split will be bigger. After I make the split your clone fall into it and dissapear.*
 

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(Doton Kekkai: Doro Domu) - Earth Style Barrier: Earth Dome Prison
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short/Mid
Chakra Cost: 20 (+10 chakra each turn the opponent is inside the dome)
Damage Points: N/A
Description: After striking the ground with their hands, the user overturns the earth, causing it to rise up around his opponent(s). Then, by placing his/her hands against the dome, the user is able to drain out the chakra from the people trapped inside and absorb it into their own body. At the same time, the user will use their own chakra to spread throughout the dome. This allows the user to repair any damage their opponent(s) manage to inflict on the inside.

*creates clone*
Try it out
 

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Got it. *I start gathering my doton chakra and focus it to my hands. I strike my hands on the ground and use my chakra to make the ground overturn. When the ground overturns it rises around your clone causing him to be trapped in a dome. I walk to the dome and place my hands on to it. When I place my hands on it I start draining out your clone causing your clone to loose it's chakra and makes him dissapear.*
 

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My clone starts destroying the dome from the inside**

What will you do? O_O
 

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*As your clone starts destroying the dome from inside I start putting my chakra to spread into the dome. As my chakra gets into the dome I use my chakra to fix the damage your clone does to the dome.*
 

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Good, but also remember to leech his chakra at the same time.

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(Doton: Domu) – Earth Release: Iron Skin Technique
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A (+10 to physical attacks)
Description: After performing a single hand seal the user will channel their chakra throughout their entire body, which then hardens their skin to a steel-like quality. This increases their defensive power to the utmost limits. The user’s skin also becomes much darker, an almost black colour. The destructive power of physical attacks is increased, making this a great, all purpose technique. But this technique when activated leaves the user vulnerable to lightning based techniques.

*shows you the one handseal*
Now try it out.
 

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Got it. *I see you do the hand sign and copy it. After I do the hand sign I start focusing my doton chakra into my entire body. When I focus my chakra into my entire body it starts to harden into steel like quality. I keep focusing my chakra so that my entire body is steel like quality and is starts to darken to a black like color. I finally get my whole body to a darken color.*
 

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Good ^^

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(Doton: Iwa Keiro) – Earth Style: Rock Trail
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user slams their hands on the ground and giant rocks rise up and jag the opponent from underneath.

*creates clone*
 

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Got it. *I start by gathering lots of my doton chakra. After I gather my chakra I start channeling to my hands and slam my hands on the ground. When I hit the ground my chakra goes into the ground and giant rocks start raising up. When I have the rocks raise I send them underneath your clone and your clone dissapear.*
 

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(Doton: Doro Kakou) – Earth Release: Mud Fall
Rank: B
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short – Mid
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user creates an opening within the sky, which drips down onto the opponent a large amount of mud, covering them. It’s normally followed up by Lightning release: sixteen pillar bind to create a giant oven around the opponent and then using Fire release: Firing biscuit technique to ignite the oven, hardening the mud and immobilizing the enemy target.

If you get confused by this one, just ask for help :p
*Creates clone*
 

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I'll at least try this :p *I start by gathering my doton chakra. I start sending my chakra into the sky and focus on creating an opening. When my chakra makes an opening in the sky it starts dripping down mud on your clone. I keep using my chakra to make mud drop on your clone till its completely covered by mud.*
 

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Lol, I can understand how this can be confusing, so your explanation is fine.

(Doton: Otoshibuta) – Earth Release: Dropping Lid
Rank: B
Type: Attack
Range: Short-Long
Chakra cost: 20
Damage points: 40
Description: The user creates a giant earthen lid, big enough to trap over twenty people within it, and throws it in the air so it lands on the target, trapping and stunning him. It can also be used from an elevation to drop down on the target.

*creates clone*
Try it out on my clone :p
 

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Lol okay *I start by gathering my doton chakra and focus it into the ground. When I do this I use my chakra to create a giant earthen lid. When I have the lid I use my chakra to make it big enough to trap 20 people. When I make the lid big enough I throw it in the air and it lands on your clone. When it lands on your clone it traps and stun your clone.*
 

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I checked this training thread to see how you do and i must say i am disappointed Ruiz.

Most techniques if not all, are auto-learned. In one post, Johninto Takashi is learning one technique. Other thing is, you just post the jutsu's description and wait for him to describe how he does it. Although he may describe it correctly in some times and some techniques may be self-explanatory, others aren't. You must describe how he can perform it, what it is used for and how can be used.

I prefer you take more time teaching things, than using this method. If your student complains, tell him what i just told you here. Being a sempai is not only a status, it also requires responsibility. If people simply ignore that and want to learn techniques via the one post method, just stop training them. It is better for them to not know anything than be taught wrong and cause trouble in the arena.

Take all the time you need, but teach things properly please. Other people didn't have this luck and were immediately stripped off their sempai status so next time, don't mess up. I can't check all the trainings you do, but if i find one more like this, you won't be my sempai anymore (and probably any other sensei's sempai, as you will get reported to the Official Sensei Group).

Now please, continue.
 
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