Dorky finishes my suiton.

[Ciberr]

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*Waits for Dork*

( xd I like calling you dork )

 

[UchihaInza]

i guess you like the word dork then xd Uchiha Inza

 

[Sharingdork]

i guess you like the word dork then xd Uchiha Inza

No spam, please. This is not the place.

Anyhow, it would appear you were training with my good friend Pineapple-sama! He's awesome... I had a very long fight with him, once... But we're not here for that. O_O
I want you to perform the technique he last taught you in as much detail as you can, please.

 

[Ciberr]

I turn my body towards a forest of trees and begin flowing chakra throughout my upper body and into my arms. I then release and concentrate the suiton chakra in my right arm and begin to radiate the suiton chakra around my arm. Next i condense and compress the raw suiton chakra into a cylinder of suiton which stays around my arm thanks to the natural hydrogen bonds given off by the properties of the suiton element. Finally i raise my arm to aim the cylinder of suiton and fire it towards the forest of trees adding spin onto the water giving it a substantial amount of velocity and impact power. The water hits the trees and crashes through a few trees before slowly becoming weaker as it crashed through many and many trees.

I hope that was good. I'm still a little rusty. xd

 

[Sharingdork]

This was the technique?

( Suiton: Mizu Hashira Suiryoku no Jutsu ) - Water Release: Water Pillar Thrust
Rank: C
Type: Supplementary
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: N/A
Description: The user will manipulate their chakra and then they create water to rise up from the ground beneath the target lifting them into the air.

What the heck was Pineapple on!? Water around the arm is no where close to how this jutsu is supposed to be used (not your fault, it's Pineapple's...).

So, how the technique is actually performed, is you concentrate suiton chakra into the ground, collecting moisture in the ground and other sources of water beneath your target. Then you release the water upwards to send your target flying. I want you to try it on me, as this isn't a harmful technique. As such, I shouldn't get hurt.

Seriously, Pineapple; make your explanation of how it works at least somewhat match the description! xd

 

[Ciberr]

xd I was wondering why he said something about the arm. Anyways...

After you complete your sentence i focus suiton into the ground below leading into you. The suiton builds up and collects moisture allowing it to build up and become geyser like. This built up water travels under you and blasts upward, sending water below up causing you to rise into the air. This water sends you pretty high up leaving you open to other attacks. The justu itself is non lethal so it leaves you un harmed.

 

[Sharingdork]

( Suiton: Haretsu sui Yashi ) - Water Release: Water Bursting Palm
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: After making the ram hand seal the user generates water around their right arm and then by thrusting their arm forwards they release the water in the form of a projectile bullet that drives through the opponent pushing them back several feet.

Look familiar? You know what to do...

 

[Ciberr]

xd Where have I seen this before ? ...

I turn my body towards a large tree as I build up suiton chakra throughout my body. I preform a single ram handseal and and focus all suiton chakra to my right arm. The said suiton chakra collects around my arm as I condense the chakra so water will form around my arm prone to be launched. I raise my arm and thrust the said arm forward, firing the built up water like a bullet so to speak. It travels quick and hits the tree driving into it knocking it down.

 

[Sharingdork]

Alright, good job. Now I'm going to ask that you give me a pro and a con to each jutsu so I know you understand the workings, advantages, and disadvantages to each jutsu. While for some of these it'll be more of a "why am I doing this?", a few jutsu will either require that you know something beyond what the description says, or you may even need help with a jutsu; like I say, if you can't find a con for a jutsu, that doesn't mean it's invincible. Otherwise, everyone and their dog would open a battle with it and claim it has no weakness!

So... This technique was placed right under a Kisame-only jutsu, but the funny thing is, this technique has the exact same effect as the Kisame jutsu; the difference in description is that it addresses Kisame directly, it uses the phrase "mastery", and it refers specifically to Samehada instead of saying "sword". Look it up and laugh. :| xd
However, for this jutsu I want you to channel suiton chakra into the ground, and collect moisture to create a small pool of water beneath your feet. Then, manipulate the pool to move forward quickly carrying yourself on top of it. As you're going, try swinging a sword until you feel that you have your balance ann the movement of the water, and therefore yourself, won't hinder your swordsmanship.

Spoiler

( Suiton: Seisuiryū ) - Water Release: Azure Water Stream
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user will create a moving body of water beneath him that travels towards the opponent carrying the user. They then slash the opponent with their sword multiple times.

 

[Ciberr]

I start off by creating moisture in my feet by flowing and condensing suiton chakra into my legs leading into my feet. I then condense all the chakra in the ground under my feet to appear as a pool of water that is able to "Carry" me so to sleep while im standing. I then assure my footing is proper then i control the water beneath me and It moves me around. Finally while moving me around I draw my sword and begin moving in circles, swinging my sword around as an example of my balance and mastery of this technique.

Pro: This justu allows me to move around at a fast speed, and the possible cutting damage for this justu is high.
Cons: You have water on your feet, making raiton a danger to you.

 

[Sharingdork]

Alright, good job.

So now I want you to build up chakra within your body, and move it into your mouth, where you'll build up a large amount of water. Then, I want you to put your hand over your mouth, and expel the water onto your hand, using shape manipulation to make the water long, then, tubular, and malleable, like a whip. Then I want you to whip the branches off the near-by tree.

Spoiler

( Suiton: Nagareru no Muchi ) - Water Release: Flowing Whip
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user first kneads chakra in their mouth and then, placing their hand on their mouth expels water in the form of a whip which they use to lash their opponent, sending them flying backwards.

 

[Ciberr]

Ok simple enough. I build up suiton chakra in my chest to an extent where a slight bulge can be seen. I then send the suiton into my mouth through my wind pipe and I knead the water chakra in my mouth into a whip of water. I raise my right hand to my mouth and spit the whip out onto my hand. I then look around and start swinging the whip at the branches. Breaking them off whip maintaining the whip itself.

Pro: Impact of being hit by this whip knocks back his/ her opponent.
Con:Only short range opposed to other justu that could be used this isn't an idea justu to use.

 

[Sharingdork]

Yes, the other jutsu may be mid-range, but it also requires handseals and a water source, which this one does not. Also, hand-held weapons reaching into mid-range really give your opponent an edge to see what's coming and defend against it, so... Pick your poison.

Next up, I want you to send your suiton chakra into the air, condensing a great deal of moisture in the air into a number of condensed water droplets. Then, cause the droplets to fall down upon us with great force(if you mess up and hit yourself, that's your fault. xd I'll defend myself). You can do this by causing droplets to fall down, or by swinging your hand and condensing moisture in front of you to send a barrage forwards instead of down. (I never knew about this technique! O_O It's awesome-sauce!!!)

Spoiler

( Suiton: Shawā ) - Water Release: Showers
Rank: C
Type: Offensive
Range: Short - Mid
Chakra cost: 15
Damage points: 30
Description: The user condenses water vapour in the air above them to generate multiple projectiles of water which shoot at their target with a great amount of force and speed. The user can also shoot a barrage of small water projectiles directly from the swing of their hand.

 

[Ciberr]

I look towards the sky and area around and above my opponent. I then focus suiton chakra in my body to emit from out my body into the sky above my opponent. Then after condensing creating hydrogen bonds with the raw water chakra, I can create moisture in the air. Finally it allows me to further condense the moisture into a lot of water droplets right over your head. They fall down and hit you hard on the head xd

Pros: Can provide a great distraction.
Cons: C ranked. Not much damage to be done here.

 

[Sharingdork]

*I allow myself to take the whole shower, grinning.*

Excellent, my student. You have learned well. My sensei, Migualon J.J., has decided that now is the time for him to leave his sensei status behind, and thus I must too leave behind my status as senpai. With that said, I can no longer teach you. This post is a confirmation that you know how to use the previous jutsu, for your future teacher as well as for you to use as you see fit in fights from now until you find a new sensei/senpai (find a senpai; senseis should be kept less busy with basic element so they can do more advanced things instead, IMO), as well as a formal good-bye as teacher and student. I had fun, and I hope you have fun with your time on NarutoBase as well.

My only regret is that I was not more active to post here... I'll talk to you later.

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