Riseofthephoenix
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This is the main villian in my story.
First for his background:
His father was a man named Kravos, who had a brother called Sousan (both were born on hell). Kravos was a man who believed power and dominance was essential in winning people over and without power, he would become nothing. Sousan however believed love and hearing the words of the people was the way. Both brothers would argue over their beliefs and both having their own powers, Kravos could blacken and erode things by touch forming blackened skin or clouds of dark ash. His brother Sousan emitted bright powerful light which burned on touch.
Kravos became fixated into his power and people started to fear him including Sousan. At this time Sousan was falling in love with a women whom Kravos also secretly admired. Kravos grew jelous and angry of Sousan and out of hatred made his way with Sousan's wife. Angered Sousan Killed his brother thinking Kravos bloodline was over, or was it...
Sousan's wife gives birth to three sons, one of them being Kravo's son who is named 'Dervish'. Dervish is unaware of his real father and believes Sousan to be it. One night Dervish awakens his powers (which are Kravo's passed on) and shows them to Sousan. From this point on Sousan grows fearful of Dervish and avoids trying to talk to him.
The one son is (cannot say), the other son is named Ivan. Through childhood Ivan and Dervish share a bond of friendship and express their dreams for the future. Dervish starts to have problems however as his powers respond to his emotions, making it uncontrollable. From Sousan fearing him and him fearing his own power Dervish starts to have mood swings, getting angry or lashing out.
One day he accidentally blackens a women's hand while in a dream, which is incurable (her hand pretty much becomes ash). some people find out and gang up on him. Threatened Dervish unwillingly kills the people using his powers, labelling him a monster. Sousan finds out about this and can't do anything (since he no longer is in his prime, old)
First for his background:
His father was a man named Kravos, who had a brother called Sousan (both were born on hell). Kravos was a man who believed power and dominance was essential in winning people over and without power, he would become nothing. Sousan however believed love and hearing the words of the people was the way. Both brothers would argue over their beliefs and both having their own powers, Kravos could blacken and erode things by touch forming blackened skin or clouds of dark ash. His brother Sousan emitted bright powerful light which burned on touch.
Kravos became fixated into his power and people started to fear him including Sousan. At this time Sousan was falling in love with a women whom Kravos also secretly admired. Kravos grew jelous and angry of Sousan and out of hatred made his way with Sousan's wife. Angered Sousan Killed his brother thinking Kravos bloodline was over, or was it...
Sousan's wife gives birth to three sons, one of them being Kravo's son who is named 'Dervish'. Dervish is unaware of his real father and believes Sousan to be it. One night Dervish awakens his powers (which are Kravo's passed on) and shows them to Sousan. From this point on Sousan grows fearful of Dervish and avoids trying to talk to him.
The one son is (cannot say), the other son is named Ivan. Through childhood Ivan and Dervish share a bond of friendship and express their dreams for the future. Dervish starts to have problems however as his powers respond to his emotions, making it uncontrollable. From Sousan fearing him and him fearing his own power Dervish starts to have mood swings, getting angry or lashing out.
One day he accidentally blackens a women's hand while in a dream, which is incurable (her hand pretty much becomes ash). some people find out and gang up on him. Threatened Dervish unwillingly kills the people using his powers, labelling him a monster. Sousan finds out about this and can't do anything (since he no longer is in his prime, old)