Does the text look dumb?

[R4mbl3]

Idk if this was worth another thread or not. So Sorry ahead of time.

But I made this picture earlier and added some text.
Does it look stupid?

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[Neji360]

It's a little hard to read

 

[Kαmi]

It's just a tad hard to read, looks awesome though, just make it more visible.

 

[Katkot]

Looks awesome ..

 

[R4mbl3]

Thanks, I was afraid it would be hard to read. But ill have to do it tomarrow. But I definitely like this style.

 

[Kαmi]

The style is nice, keep everything the same, just make it more readable and you'll have an even more legit sig my friend.

 

[Kages]

You can keep it the same style but just make it a bit more bold or outline the edges.