Did Kishi Lose Focus With The Manga?

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I didn't put that more thought than kishi did at all
The proof is kakashi having the left sharingan obito having the right since the beginning
And my yin/yang perspective does match up

hashi yang;madara yin
hiruzen yang danzo yin
ashura yang;indra yin
In terms of Yin and Yang, these pairs fit. However, none of them ever saw eye to eye and were in constant conflict with one another.

Hashirama trumped Madara in ideals and perseverance.

Ashura's policy of love and companionship defeated Indra's focus on power for generations across the millenia.

Danzo was the one was revealed to have kept the village safe. While Hiruzen admitted and demonstrated his acquiescence to Danzo's tactics and just waifing on important issues of state (the Hyuga Affair with Kumo, Oro's experiments and perversion of Hashi's genes, and Oro's invasion of Konoha with a 1 month pre-warning).


With regards to Kakashi, his counterpart would be Guy, not Obito. Kakashi is a Yin, not a Yang.

These are the attributes of Yin and Yang.

Yin (Black): • Negativeness • Passiveness • Gentleness • Internal • Insubstantiality • Feminine • Moon • Darkness • Night

Yang (White): • Positiveness • Activeness • Firmness • External • Substantiality • Masculine • Sun • Brightness • Day


Sasuke, Itachi, Danzo, Neji, Orochimaru, Gaara and others are all Yin types. Medical ninjutsu is also in the Yin classification, so Sakura, Shizune, Kabuto, Cee and Tsunade would all fall under that umbrella as well. Sensors too; Karin, Ino, Tobirama.
 

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The real problem is the length of the series. Anything and everything diminishes in value the more there is of it. Keeping a story fresh and consistent is a difficult thing to do even when the story is short. In order to keep the reader engaged, plot turning points, twists, development of the protagonist and antagonists, etc. need to be taken into account. Some of the problems I saw overall were:

1. The original theme was lost. As OP stated, it started out as the underachiever striving to become someone of import (Hokage) through hardwork and friendship. This completely got lost when we learn Naruto wasn't an underachiever, a a child of prophecy born to be the next Hagoromo basically.

2. The focus on the Sasuke/Naruto dynamic. This should have been secondary and not the driving force behind the whole manga. Naruto's obsession with bringing Sasuke back was, at best harmful to his overall goal of becoming Hokage.

3. The Protagonist's Lineage should have been covered in Part I. Which, in turn, should have been reflected in his abilities. As it was fundamentally and elaborately laid out for the Uchiha, Sasuke's movesets clearly denote his clan's Lineage. So too should have Naruto. Naruto Should have been versed in at least a few Uzumaki Jutsu. not just Rasengan everything.

thats just to name a few.
 

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Yes he did, the themes of this manga became inconsistent. Everything went into the gutter with the child of prophecy horsehit. The War arc(especially the Kaguya arc) speaks for itself, the dude lost what ever drive he had for the series.
 

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I still don't understand the message kishi was trying to portray. Anti war but what enabled the shinobis to come together was a massive war. Is he trying to say we need an alien invasion for peace. And that whole talk with neiji turned into complete and utter horse shit. It's actually funny we went from a ninja wanting to be recognised to fighting aliens and hundreds of years old beings and ninjas from the past.
 

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Y u people keep focusing on naruto for sh*t... Even one piece have many plotholes like luffy still has power to fight an army after still getting brutal beatings from sanji but still no one gave a fu*k about that!!
 

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Y u people keep focusing on naruto for sh*t... Even one piece have many plotholes like luffy still has power to fight an army after still getting brutal beatings from sanji but still no one gave a fu*k about that!!
Because Naruto went from being a great series, to a train crash that didn't know when to stop crashing. All the asspulls, retcons and plot points that Kishi made up as he went along, are what brought the series down. He threw everything and the kitchen sink into his series, probably in the hope that it would all mean something in the end. 2 years after the conclusion, it's hard to identify what the series was about, since Kishi changed directions so often.
 

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Currently rewatching the entirety of ATLA and LOK and it's only reminded me of how salty I am about Kishi's handling of the story of Naruto after chapter 450 and how SP milks out the anime with endless filler and crappy animation.
 

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lot of variables. 1. editors changing stuff for the better and worst. 2. alot of his plot ideas/changes is in motion rather than planned out (explains the constant inconsistencies, retcon) 3. "inspirational" ideas from other animes/movies ran out dry or deluded his series to what's now become. 4. his wife and child (yes, it influenced lots of his shippuden especially 500+) 5. couldn't figure out when to end the manga (lead to bad pacing in war arc). 6. manga deadline (kaguya arc. nuff said) 7. obsession style to keep this "parallel" between naruto and sasuke (likely created this indra/ashura nonsense)

astonished he even made this far despite the decline in quality 5-6years ago. personally I loved the gokage summit arc for sasuke's inevitable outcome but I do believe that kishi should've pulled a togashi (hunterXhunter) and left on a high note with pain arc. take a few years off and come up with better material instead of the flop mess we got for 2 1/2 years war arc.
 
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lot of variables. 1. editors changing stuff for the better and worst. 2. alot of his plot ideas/changes is in motion rather than planned out (explains the constant inconsistencies, retcon) 3. "inspirational" ideas from other animes/movies ran out dry or deluded his series to what's now become. 4. his wife and child (yes, it influenced lots of his shippuden especially 500+) 5. couldn't figure out when to end the manga (lead to bad pacing in war arc). 6. manga deadline (kaguya arc. nuff said) 7. obsession style to keep this "parallel" between naruto and sasuke (likely created this indra/ashura nonsense)
So much truth. SMH how it all turned sour.

astonished he even made this far despite the decline in quality 5-6years ago. personally I loved the gokage summit arc for sasuke's inevitable outcome but I do believe that kishi should've pulled a togashi (hunterXhunter) and left on a high note with pain arc. take a few years off and come up with better material instead of the flop mess we got for 2 1/2 years war arc.
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Thinking about what you said, they may not have been such a bad idea. After chapter 450, Naruto had mastered both sage mode and the rasenshuriken (which at the time, were 11th hour additions to his arsenal of abilities that should've been worked on and foreshadowed during his time with Jiraiya after the time skip), had accomplished his goal of having the entire village acknowledge him and was officially on the short list for Hokage. Sasuke had just completed his mission to kill Itachi also. This would've been a great time to cool things off and think up better stories. Perhaps another time skip with Naruto and the K11 at the ages they were in The Last, and having more responsibility and not needing to be chaperoned by their Jonin sensei. You can still have Sasuke atttack the Gokage Summit and a war, but make it a war between nations. Not a war of the 5 nations against plant people. Or, no war at all.
 
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It completely lost focus right before the Paina rc. It focused on Sasuke & Naruto too much and was sponsored by Michael Bay. It wasn't a ninja manga anymore and turned into an a supernatural explosion fest.
this story was never about ninja...it was about supernatural wizards posing as ninja

6. Everything about Kaguya
7. The Chosen One plot point erased all of the "working hard" messages Naruto had in Part 1 not to mention generic.
8. The title of Hokage became worthless and lost all impact & symbolic meaning. That title meant nothing after the manga ended.
and these are your own opinions
 

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this story was never about ninja...it was about supernatural wizards posing as ninja



and these are your own opinions
Its called criticism & isn't much of an opinion when everything I said actually happened. It falls more into the fact category. If you cant take the basics of criticism, don't read anything about it.
 

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So much truth. SMH how it all turned sour.
lol thanks, and yes it certainly should be the truth, most of what I said more or less was said from the very man himself. Honestly even till this very day it makes me wonder if those interviews were like a low key apology to his fans cause just about everything he said were literally what conspired to the flaws, especially that interview when he mentioned he had no idea how to kill off madara :lmao: I would not be surprised if that entire laughable kaguya arc was made just to finish him off with a back stab zetsu.


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Thinking about what you said, they may not have been such a bad idea. After chapter 450, Naruto had mastered both sage mode and the rasenshuriken (which at the time, were 11th hour additions to his arsenal of abilities that should've been worked on and foreshadowed during his time with Jiraiya after the time skip), had accomplished his goal of having the entire village acknowledge him and was officially on the short list for Hokage. Sasuke had just completed his mission to kill Itachi also. This would've been a great time to cool things off and think up better stories. Perhaps another time skip with Naruto and the K11 at the ages they were in The Last, and having more responsibility and not needing to be chaperoned by their Jonin sensei. You can still have Sasuke atttack the Gokage Summit and a war, but make it a war between nations. Not a war of the 5 nations against plant people. Or, no war at all.
Yeah I agree. I thought it was odd how in part 1, naruto drastically increased from scrub to skill with jiraiya by learning basically 2 sannin-kage lvl abilities that were used by a sannin/kage and had basic skill in using kyuubi chakra in such little time, but in shippuden he barely changed at all after 2yrs of intense training. maybe it was to make hebi sasuke look better, cause let's face it. kishi flawed "style" will hinder anyone's potential for plot (example: amat nerf). so logically, hebi and early TS naruto (w/o sagemode) should've been around the same lvl as hebi if went by the logical route instead of kishi's plot.

Nonetheless, I don't bother criticizing and nitpick too much about pre-war arcs. cause at the end of the day I still loved all those arcs and there was a point (war arc) when I was just disgusted with kishi, went from probably the biggest narutard to the biggest hater. not just because the arc itself but because I was angry that kishi could do better than this. but after the manga ended, thinking about those interviews again, i eventually realized that he really is just a mediocre writer and those arcs we all loved or not liked etc. they were alot better than it should had been under this guy. we the readers were fortunate and we should cherrish those arcs cause it could've easily (and I do indeed mean easily) been worst. or maybe kishi really is a good writer and his family time, deadlines, editors is what screwed him over. cause let's face it. togashi only got the chances to take long hiatus(s) cause he's married to rich ass mangaka. meanwhile kishi had to make a living off his only successful manga forcing him to continue non stop which lead us to the inevitable and unvoidable war arc. lol who knows...
 
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lol thanks, and yes it certainly should be the truth, most of what I said more or less was said from the very man himself. Honestly even till this very day it makes me wonder if those interviews were like a low key apology to his fans cause just about everything he said were literally what conspired to the flaws, especially that interview when he mentioned he had no idea how to kill off madara :lmao: I would not be surprised if that entire laughable kaguya arc was made just to finish him off with a back stab zetsu.




Yeah I agree. I thought it was odd how in part 1, naruto drastically increased from scrub to skill with jiraiya by learning basically 2 sannin-kage lvl abilities that were used by a sannin/kage and had basic skill in using kyuubi chakra in such little time, but in shippuden he barely changed at all after 2yrs of intense training. maybe it was to make hebi sasuke look better, cause let's face it. kishi flawed "style" will hinder anyone's potential for plot (example: amat nerf). so logically, hebi and early TS naruto (w/o sagemode) should've been around the same lvl as hebi if went by the logical route instead of kishi's plot.

Nonetheless, I don't bother criticizing and nitpick too much about pre-war arcs. cause at the end of the day I still loved all those arcs and there was a point (war arc) when I was just disgusted with kishi, went from probably the biggest narutard to the biggest hater. not just because the arc itself but because I was angry that kishi could do better than this. but after the manga ended, thinking about those interviews again, i eventually realized that he really is just a mediocre writer and those arcs we all loved or not liked etc. they were alot better than it should had been under this guy. we the readers were fortunate and we should cherrish those arcs cause it could've easily (and I do indeed mean easily) been worst. or maybe kishi really is a good writer and his family time, deadlines, editors is what screwed him over. cause let's face it. togashi only got the chances to take long hiatus(s) cause he's married to rich ass mangaka. meanwhile kishi had to make a living off his only successful manga forcing him to continue non stop which lead us to the inevitable and unvoidable war arc. lol who knows...
A similar thing happened with Toriyama and Dragon Ball. Mainly Z, during the Frieza and Android/Cell sagas. It was Toriyama's editor who came up with a lot of the ideas and story directions for DBZ, while Toriyama kept trying to kill Goku off, so he could end the manga.

Things like, Goku "dying" on Namek but not really, because TPTB reversed Toriyama's decision. Goku was supposed to die the "strongest in the universe".

Gohan being SSJ and the creation of SSJ2, was Toriyama's editor's idea. Tori wanted to end the Cell Games with Gohan getting super pissed in base form and blowing Cell away.

The various android models. Tori's original idea for the androids that destroyed the future were #20 and #19. An old man and a fat albino. #16-18 and Cell all came from the editors.

Plot device Room of Spirit and Time/Hyberbolic Time Chamber to accelerate the Z fighter's skills and power levels.

Goku dying "for good" against Cell and Vegeta quitting fighting forever. While Gohan and Trunks become the new defenders of Earth.

And a whole bunch of other shit. Tori dumped his editors in exchange for coming back to do the Buu Saga. Which, if you're familar with, was a cluster****.

Gohan going to HS. Gohan being a superhero. Gohan being hyped up to be the hero, but supplanted at the last minute.

Bringing back the Budokai and then dropping it.

Goten being created to replace Goku, but Tori brought Goku back later and removed Goten's purpose for existing. If you watch DB Super, you'll notice Goten is pretty much MIA.

The original plan for the Buu Saga was to have a fused 8 year old boy with long blonde hair and no eyebrows (what became SSJ3), fight a fat, pink, bubble gum monster, wearing a white diaper, purple cape, yellow rain boots and has a phallic appendage on his head that turns people into candy.

The other forms of Buu were added later to add menace to the threat, and like Kishi with the war arc, Tori didn't know how to end his story. Dumping Goten, Trunks and Gohan and bringing Goku back to be the hero again.


Toriyama lost the point entirely. In a recent interview for Super, Toriyama said he didn't even remember what DBZ was about.
 

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A similar thing happened with Toriyama and Dragon Ball. Mainly Z, during the Frieza and Android/Cell sagas. It was Toriyama's editor who came up with a lot of the ideas and story directions for DBZ, while Toriyama kept trying to kill Goku off, so he could end the manga.

Things like, Goku "dying" on Namek but not really, because TPTB reversed Toriyama's decision. Goku was supposed to die the "strongest in the universe".

Gohan being SSJ and the creation of SSJ2, was Toriyama's editor's idea. Tori wanted to end the Cell Games with Gohan getting super pissed in base form and blowing Cell away.

The various android models. Tori's original idea for the androids that destroyed the future were #20 and #19. An old man and a fat albino. #16-18 and Cell all came from the editors.

Plot device Room of Spirit and Time/Hyberbolic Time Chamber to accelerate the Z fighter's skills and power levels.

Goku dying "for good" against Cell and Vegeta quitting fighting forever. While Gohan and Trunks become the new defenders of Earth.

And a whole bunch of other shit. Tori dumped his editors in exchange for coming back to do the Buu Saga. Which, if you're familar with, was a cluster****.

Gohan going to HS. Gohan being a superhero. Gohan being hyped up to be the hero, but supplanted at the last minute.

Bringing back the Budokai and then dropping it.

Goten being created to replace Goku, but Tori brought Goku back later and removed Goten's purpose for existing. If you watch DB Super, you'll notice Goten is pretty much MIA.

The original plan for the Buu Saga was to have a fused 8 year old boy with long blonde hair and no eyebrows (what became SSJ3), fight a fat, pink, bubble gum monster, wearing a white diaper, purple cape, yellow rain boots and has a phallic appendage on his head that turns people into candy.

The other forms of Buu were added later to add menace to the threat, and like Kishi with the war arc, Tori didn't know how to end his story. Dumping Goten, Trunks and Gohan and bringing Goku back to be the hero again.


Toriyama lost the point entirely. In a recent interview for Super, Toriyama said he didn't even remember what DBZ was about.
lol yeah I heard of some of these before. that gohan being the hero thou was supposely a translation error. he did indeed wanted goku to be the hero again appearently. the last one seems legit for certain, the man does not remember shit about his series (then again, why would he since he actually said he hated most of DBZ) lol even said one time he had no idea wtf super saiyan 3 was and said "is that the long hair one?". appearently super saiyan 3 is suppose to be the actual super saiyan 2, while gohan's SSJ2 from cell saga was still super saiyan w/ gohan's hidden potential activated. anyway, yes. it's akira's situation that more or less gives me the benefit of a doubt for kishi and lesser extent kubo (bleach). but then on the other hand, there's one piece, he's been in similiar situations and still managed to thought out so many ideas hundreds of chapters ahead and foreshadow so many vital and even small overlooked details and manage to push it to chapter 800+ with far more characters to handle (where as akira/kishi significantly reduced the relevant characters to just a couple. remember konoha 11? remember yamcha tien krillen? lol). so I can forgive kishi and akira but It's still not excusable.

edit: lmao now that I think about it, the first half of the war arc it seems like kishi tried to pull a one piece but gave up and relied on naruto and sasuke (and I guess itachi) to quickly solve and conclude the arc (could explain the sudden speed of pacing and ridiculous amount of powerups)
 
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