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Diamond Hearts [Chapter 1 - A Hero’s Legacy]
Author’s Notes: Welcome to Diamond Hearts… once called A Hero’s Legacy. I’ve worked on this for years… been changing it constantly as I got older and smarter. I hope everyone who reads this likes it and gives constructive criticism. As I said, I’ve been working on it for a while so I want your honest opinions with both likes and dislikes if there are any. No matter how good a writer is, there is always room for improvement. Here’s the first chapter, enjoy!
“He was something else…” A soft, feminine voice said.
A man was swinging his sword, slaying the army of enemies that were attacking the Matsuzaki Village. This man was none other than, Oboro.
Oboro ran quickly and swiftly through the village. Many attempted to at least cut the man on his arm, but they failed miserably. Those who tried to surround him were pushed back by wind. The ones who tried to run at him were burned by fire. Some tried to hide underwater, but were caught in whirlpools. It didn’t stop there. The last few of them tried to hide in trees and underground. Their bodies were instantly crushed by earth. This man… was definitely something else. Until… he was mysteriously was killed.
“You were born on that same exact day… Fourteen years ago that was. And look at you now…” The woman was telling her son about his father. What were their names? The woman’s name was Mizuka Kazuma and the boy’s name was Tsubasa Hwoarang.
“So… is it a bad thing or good thing?” Tsubasa questioned his mother. Sadness could be seen in Mizuka’s eyes as she continued talking about Oboro.
“Is what good or bad?” Mizuka asked; trying to understand what her son was asking.
Tsubasa was sitting on his bed and his mother sat beside him. He turned his attention from her and looked out of the window. “Is it a good thing to be born on the same day your father dies?”
Mizuka was caught off guard. She certainly didn’t expect Tsubasa to ask such a question. She gave a fake smile when Tsubasa looked back at her. She didn’t really have an answer. “Maybe you should get some rest… Tsubasa.”
Tsubasa smirked and stood up after his mother. He pulled the covers off of his bed for a little and laid down. His mother put the covers over him. Tsubasa felt that he was too old to be getting this kind of treatment, but would never say anything. This was what made her happy… seeing her son every day.
Mizuka kissed Tsubasa on his forehead and walked towards his bedroom door. Tsubasa watched her as she stopped at the door. She turned the lights off and looked at Tsubasa. “Tsubasa…” She said; getting him to pay attention to her even more. “If it wasn’t for you coming into this world the same day your father died… I would be sad. But, you… you’re my bundle of joy.” She told him with a smile; tears slowly running down her cheeks. Tsubasa smiled and closed his eyes as his mother walked out. A single tear ran down his face.
“Working hard, are ya?” A man in a black uniform said to Tsubasa. He was another Member of the Oboro Clan… the Ninja Squadron. He was actually the strongest ninja there. He was like an older brother to Tsubasa. His name was Tadashi.
“Yeah… I have to. I can’t let the Clan down…” Tsubasa replied. He seemed to be training; trying to make his Fire Element Stronger. He was also trying to get to the stage where he could release his Aura so that everyone could finally tell him what level Aura he had. The highest level Aura so far was the A+ Level. The only man to possess that was Oboro… Tsubasa’s father.
“So, did Mizuka ever tell you why we’re known as the Oboro Clan?” Tadashi asked. Tsubasa simply nodded and put his hands on his head.
“It’s because of the several heroic things my father did for Matsuzaki!” Tsubasa exclaimed.
Tadashi smiled. In his eyes, Tsubasa wasn’t just going to become a strong Shinobi or Elemental Fighter, but he was also going to be a bright scholar. “…He’s definitely the result of a Hero’s Legacy…” Tadashi thought to himself.
“Do you have to go on a mission today?” Tsubasa asked. He hoped he’d say no, but he knew that Tadashi would be back either way.
“Yeah… I do. I was supposed to be going to one of the other villages, but I wanted to check up on you and Mizuka.” He explained to Tsubasa. “But, now that you mention it… I should be leaving now. I’ll see you around tomorrow…”
With that being said, Tadashi ran off. He was running quickly through the busy village and swiftly as well. Tsubasa could only think of one thing. “Oboro Hwoarang… I want to be just like you so that I can protect everyone and go on missions with Tadashi.”
Author’s Notes: Welcome to Diamond Hearts… once called A Hero’s Legacy. I’ve worked on this for years… been changing it constantly as I got older and smarter. I hope everyone who reads this likes it and gives constructive criticism. As I said, I’ve been working on it for a while so I want your honest opinions with both likes and dislikes if there are any. No matter how good a writer is, there is always room for improvement. Here’s the first chapter, enjoy!
Chapter 1
A Hero’s Legacy
A Hero’s Legacy
“He was something else…” A soft, feminine voice said.
A man was swinging his sword, slaying the army of enemies that were attacking the Matsuzaki Village. This man was none other than, Oboro.
Oboro ran quickly and swiftly through the village. Many attempted to at least cut the man on his arm, but they failed miserably. Those who tried to surround him were pushed back by wind. The ones who tried to run at him were burned by fire. Some tried to hide underwater, but were caught in whirlpools. It didn’t stop there. The last few of them tried to hide in trees and underground. Their bodies were instantly crushed by earth. This man… was definitely something else. Until… he was mysteriously was killed.
“You were born on that same exact day… Fourteen years ago that was. And look at you now…” The woman was telling her son about his father. What were their names? The woman’s name was Mizuka Kazuma and the boy’s name was Tsubasa Hwoarang.
“So… is it a bad thing or good thing?” Tsubasa questioned his mother. Sadness could be seen in Mizuka’s eyes as she continued talking about Oboro.
“Is what good or bad?” Mizuka asked; trying to understand what her son was asking.
Tsubasa was sitting on his bed and his mother sat beside him. He turned his attention from her and looked out of the window. “Is it a good thing to be born on the same day your father dies?”
Mizuka was caught off guard. She certainly didn’t expect Tsubasa to ask such a question. She gave a fake smile when Tsubasa looked back at her. She didn’t really have an answer. “Maybe you should get some rest… Tsubasa.”
Tsubasa smirked and stood up after his mother. He pulled the covers off of his bed for a little and laid down. His mother put the covers over him. Tsubasa felt that he was too old to be getting this kind of treatment, but would never say anything. This was what made her happy… seeing her son every day.
Mizuka kissed Tsubasa on his forehead and walked towards his bedroom door. Tsubasa watched her as she stopped at the door. She turned the lights off and looked at Tsubasa. “Tsubasa…” She said; getting him to pay attention to her even more. “If it wasn’t for you coming into this world the same day your father died… I would be sad. But, you… you’re my bundle of joy.” She told him with a smile; tears slowly running down her cheeks. Tsubasa smiled and closed his eyes as his mother walked out. A single tear ran down his face.
…The Next Day…
“Working hard, are ya?” A man in a black uniform said to Tsubasa. He was another Member of the Oboro Clan… the Ninja Squadron. He was actually the strongest ninja there. He was like an older brother to Tsubasa. His name was Tadashi.
“Yeah… I have to. I can’t let the Clan down…” Tsubasa replied. He seemed to be training; trying to make his Fire Element Stronger. He was also trying to get to the stage where he could release his Aura so that everyone could finally tell him what level Aura he had. The highest level Aura so far was the A+ Level. The only man to possess that was Oboro… Tsubasa’s father.
“So, did Mizuka ever tell you why we’re known as the Oboro Clan?” Tadashi asked. Tsubasa simply nodded and put his hands on his head.
“It’s because of the several heroic things my father did for Matsuzaki!” Tsubasa exclaimed.
Tadashi smiled. In his eyes, Tsubasa wasn’t just going to become a strong Shinobi or Elemental Fighter, but he was also going to be a bright scholar. “…He’s definitely the result of a Hero’s Legacy…” Tadashi thought to himself.
“Do you have to go on a mission today?” Tsubasa asked. He hoped he’d say no, but he knew that Tadashi would be back either way.
“Yeah… I do. I was supposed to be going to one of the other villages, but I wanted to check up on you and Mizuka.” He explained to Tsubasa. “But, now that you mention it… I should be leaving now. I’ll see you around tomorrow…”
With that being said, Tadashi ran off. He was running quickly through the busy village and swiftly as well. Tsubasa could only think of one thing. “Oboro Hwoarang… I want to be just like you so that I can protect everyone and go on missions with Tadashi.”
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