Denji's adventures begin! Chp. 1

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Denji was just a regular 13 year old boy with an average life. He was shy, though he could be harsh towards others at times, but that may have been because of his up bringing. He lived in an apartment with his friend, Chiako, he didn’t ever know his parents, from what he was told they had died in a war against the Mikaijin. For Denji, he really didn’t know or care too much about finding out.

Denji, was tall for his age 5’10” , brown hair, dark brown eyes, that look black from far away, he has tan, olive colored skin. He was skinny, but fit, six pack, big legs, the only problem was his small arms.
Chiako was a smaller kid, 5’5”, he was paler than Denji, but still tanner than most, he had deep blue eyes, and wears small circular glasses he was skinny, but had no muscle, (all his time was spent in the library, while he should have had some in the gym)

School for Denji was a just a nuisance, he was no good at it. Don’t think he wasn’t smart, he was an extremely intelligent boy, especially because he had scored an IQ of 160 on a school wide IQ test. Though, the only reason he stayed a straight A student was because of his friend Chikao, who scored an IQ test of 150, but he loved school and kept all of Denji’s grades up.

Our story begins with Denji waking up, first day back at school.
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Chiako: DENJI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Denji: *Eyes open* Oh hey Chiako, what’s up?

[COLOR="[LIME"]Chiako[/COLOR]: *sighs then laughs a little* Denji, you know what today is right?

Denji: It’s, ummmmm *looks at calendar* Tuesday?

Chiako: No, it’s the first day of school, you do know about school, right? *Sigh* Denji get ready quick! If you don’t wake up now, you’ll never be able to eat! or to shower! you know, if you don’t shower, none of the girls will talk to you!

Denji: Chiako, you know we won’t be able to get girls! You’re the only person I can talk to without being awkward or shy.

Chiako: C’mon, you’re not gonna be like that this year! We’re in the eighth grade! We’re top of the middle school food chain! We gotta look good for our first day, GET UP!

Denji: *Sigh* fine, make food for me though!

Chiako: That’s the spirit!!

They arrive at a stone building with sixteen steps heading down and two brick sides on them. The building has a sign on top of it that says Datska Middle School

Crowds are all over with people talking

Chiako: Ahhhh finally, being able to be back at school it’s so great, isn’t it Denji!

Denji: uhh ya I guess so...

Chiako: What happened to all your abundance of energy you had this morning?

Denji: You know how I don’t like talking to people!

A group of girls walk up to them

Amarante: *smiles at Denji then says* hey there Denji

Denji: *scoffs* oh hey Amar- Chiako cuts in

Chiako: Hey Amarante, how you doin, whatch’ya doin later, wanna see a movie

She walks away

Chiako: Can you believe that! Dude, what was with the scoff, SHE OBVIOUSLY LIKED YOU!!

Denji: Dude shut up! We just need to go get our schedules!

They walk in

Denji: ahhhhh.... WE HAVE NO CLASSES TOGETHER!

Chiako: Hahahaha I end school before you

Denji: What!!!! I HAVE AN EXTRA PERIOD!!

Chiako: hahahahahahahHahahhhaaa *Falls to the ground* *gasps for air* ahh ahh ahh

Denji: *Kicks Chiako* I’m going to class

Denji sits in the back of the class in every class and sleeps.. except math where the girl of his dreams ,Aoi, sits in front of him.



Denji lives in his boring life, and has the same schedule..

A month later

November 22

Denji: Hey.... Chiako!

Chiako: Denji! it’s 4 in the morning! Since when do you get up this year!!

Denji: do you know what day it is?

Chiako: *hahaha time to play a game*

Denji: What game?

Chiako: Dude what are you talking about? Games? what? and no what day is it today

Chiako: *Of course I know it’s your birthday silly, we’ve been friends since before I can remember*

Denji: Dude what’s with the confusing statements? If you know it’s my birthday then just say it’s my birthday, don’t be a ****!

Chiako: What are you talking about! You know what! Never mind.. Hahaha, happy birthday dude!

Denji: ahhh, thanks man, I’m gonna get ready for school early today, you can go back to sleep.

Chiako: *Blinks* Early... You... *Why is he up early, and getting ready for school before the last minute*

Denji: *looks back at Chiako* *clears his ears*

Denji goes to school while the sky is black and sees Aoi

*Denji looks her way and blushes, then she looks his way*

Denji hears: *Wow, he’s looking at me, should I tossel my hear, no uhhh oh he’s walking towards me*

*Denji then notices he is moving over towards over to Aoi and he tries to stop but he just can’t. Then he gives himself a little talk, “Hey, it’s my birthday, it’s my day I can talk to her.... I can do it!!!*

Denji: uhmmm, uhh, hey Aoi.

Aoi: uhmm, uhh hi Denji!

Denji: your hair looks... really..... good today
*Ahhhhh!!! heeheeehee, he’s talking to me, and he thinks my hair looks good!*
Denji: Oh, sorry did I say that to early, uhgg I’m so stupid!

Aoi: No, no, no! I think it’s.. sweet *she smiles nicely*

Denji: Cool, uhmm, I’ll see you later.


Denji climbs to the roof of the school, on a high ladder he found and thinks to himself
“man what has this noise I have been hearing today! I should just focus really hard on people and what they’re saying!”

The next few months go the same way as before, but now Denji just avoids the extra noises of people he hears.

January 7

Chiako: DENJI!!!!!

Denji: WHAT!!

Chiako: There’s a concert tonight! and guess who’s gonna be there????

Denji: Aoi?

Chiako: Aoi? who the fu-, who cares about Aoi? No stupid AMARANTE!!!!

Denji: oh.... Alright I’ll go with you... I guess..... I just.. Don’t like....

Chiako: Ya ik PEOPLE!

Denji: ya.... alright what ever, lets get ready for school.

That night at the concert

Chiako: Alright, we’re the first ones here!!!

Denji: Great.... *sighs a sigh of releaf* no people...

Chiako: ya.. wait look at the doors! People!! Yes!!!

Denji: No.... Iuhh mean uhh great!

Chiako goes to flirt on Amarante, and gets slapped... About a half hour into the concert Denji starts hearing the noises again most of them singing along with the songs, some just noises that sound like their lives. Then Denji starts hearing to many noises that he starts screaming at the top of his lungs. Then everyone looks at him and all the noises are the same thing

“What’s with this kid”
This is when Denji, finally realizes that the things he’s hearing, are peoples thoughts.

At this points, he runs out of the dome and runs towards home


Man that was humiliating, and I can hear what people are thinking and school tomorrow is gonna su- his thought was interrupted by running into a glass door with a sign on it saying
“We’ll teach you to focus your inner strength!”

Intrigued, Denji walks in to find a man sitting on a training man


Strange Man: Come in!!! Sit!!!

Denji: Ummm, the sign said tha-

Strange Man: Yes, yes, yes we’re a dojo in all forms of martial arts! To focus your strength! Would you like to join?
*I feel a special power in this kid*

Denji: Yes... I’ll Join!
The End (of chapter 1)​
 
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Not a bad start at all! There are some obvious spelling and grammar mistakes but other than that, I can see the beginnings of a great fanfic! I patiently await the next chapter ;)
 
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