Dem Paw Doe. >:]

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We are a clan founded by Kuma Bartholomew.Our home lies in the outskirts of Kirigakure and we live in a single unit much like the Uchiha clan did,making us born Kirigakure ninja although our allegiance lies with the clan itself the most.We are a honorable clan that never surrenders,members of the Bartholomew clan are born with a paw print embedded on the both of our hands.Our paws are the source of our special abilities.Namely we are able to push away any object,including the air around us at great speeds.We are also capable of moving at great speeds ourselves if the repel us or repel the friction of the air around us.Another ability,although it can be used only by the masters of our kekkei genkai is that we can repel the pain and exhaustion from either ourselves or another clan member and then launch the extracted pain and exhaustion at the opponent in the form of a powerful red paw bubble.Our current leader is Priest Alexander Bartholomew

Gathered most of that from other training threads. I've read a lot of them (mostly Vayne's)... So I know of the abilities..
 

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Good.

now lets do some exercise.

*takes you to a forest of trees*

I want you to start palming the trees until they fall. This is just mere exercise, no clan ability is involved.
 

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After receiving my instructions I walk up to a tree and analyze it for a while. Without the Paw's abilities eh? After analyzing the tree for a moment I get in a traditional sumo stance with both legs spread shoulders length apart and bent. My arms are bent, hands resting just above my waist as my palms face outward at the tree. Without hesitation I thrust a forward right palm at the tree, my fleshing banging against the bark and doing more pain to my hand than damage to the tree. After the first right palm I swiftly follow up with a left palm and I get the exact same results. I continue thrusting my palms into the tree until I gradually over time start piercing through it. I'd finally get the tree broken down so I move on to a new one in order to repeat the same process. Finally after days of ripping trees apart I stop and look over at you to speak.. We done?
 

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Good.

*takes you to a place full of boulder*

Go place your paw on one of those big rocks and knead your chakra into your hands, then try and push the rock towards a direction
 

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I walk up to a random boulder, one thatt sits alone in an opening in field... It looked like it weighed a ton, but if the clan head thought it was possible to move it with my paw alone, I had to give it a go.. I'd get with arms reach of it before placing my right paw on the boulders surface, feeling it out as if it was Broly's wife. >.> once I've touched it I use chakra in that paw to create pushing affect so to speak. I'd thrust the chakra forward without moving a muscle, but to no surprise, the boulder didn't budge an inch. I'd continue for about an hour, but the boulder had moved only a few feet at most, disappointing. Smh. Finally, right as I was about to give up I give it one last try with all of my effort and guess what? The boulder jolts in the direction I'm facing, crashing through numerous trees as it goes..
 

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Yes but you can't do it freeform. You'de have to post a paw jutsu

Paw Arts: Repel (Nykyujutsu: Oshi)
Rank: B
Type: Attack/Supplementary/Defense
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: This technique is a very simple
technique that nearly all bartholomew clan
members can use. The user puts his paw on a
boulder(or if applicable one of the opponents
jutsu) and using the power of his paws he
repels the boulder. When this happens the boulder goes off into the air behind the user
instantly disappearing from view. The user can
choose the location of where he wants the
boulder to land(without stating it) and in 4
turns the boulder lands there. This technique
can be used for attacking by simply having the rock come down and hit the opponent on the
back of his head in 2 turns time. For defense
the user can have the boulder appear in front
of him to stop an opponents jutsu(Only B rank
and under).
~This is only an example of the techniques usage, the ability of the paws is to repel
anything. Obviously the user can't repel a
lightning, fire or wind jutsu without taking
damage, however if he wants, he can however
he takes 20 damage to his paws and he can't
use his paw abilities for 2 turns.
~This technique can't be used to teleport
other people to desired locations.
~The boulder can be in the air for as long as
the user pleases. Meaning it could be more
than 24 turns if he wishes.

Take a look at the above. Its what we are aiming at and what we have been trying to achieve.
So I want you to study it critically and give me 3 comprehensive and creative way you can use this.
What do you see about it, is it helpful? Would there be any Pros and Cons?
 
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Welll 3 ways I could use this? My mind has been sucky lately so excuse my lack of creativity as of late...

1. I could repel a sword or blade of some sort and have it disappear before later in the fight having the blade pierce the opponent in the back of the head.

2. Don't know if this is possible, but after creating a stone golem or great stone golem, repel it to vanish into the sky until It's needed. Than when the time is right I could have it appear right behind the opponent to put it to use all close and personal, or simply have it appear back in front of me to be used as a defense.

3. Not sure if this is possible either, but I could repel a water source to vanish and when I see my opponent using lightning around his body, have the water appear on them and have them electrocute themselves.

As you know, it has a lot of pros. Like repelling the opponents jutsu, no matter what kind of jutsu it is.

I guess a con would be us taking damage if we repel fire lightning or wind...
 

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Correct me if I'm wrong, but was the repel jutsu updated?




As i see the clone run at me i simply make a single hand seal to create a giant wolf-like creature to my immediate right within arm's reach. Upon the wolf materializing i reach over and put my right hand on the entity of wind, repelling it out of sight in the blink of an eye. The actions happen in a moment's notice though i quickly follow up with a real attack. Seeing the clone enter about a 5m distance away from me i extend my pinky and index fingers to make bull horns with wind coating my fingers. I'd dash in a zig zag fashion at the clone with quick speeds, thrusting my right hand with the horns into his ribs. Simultaneously to me rushing at the clone in the zig zag manner i call back the wind beast that i repelled before, allowing it to appear directly behind the clone. Upon its appearance behind the clone the wolf simply slashes him in the back, giving me an easier open to land my attack almost right after.

(Fuuton: Hageshii Soyokaze) - Wind Release: Tempestuous Whisk
Type: Supplementary/Offensive
Rank: A
Range: Short (Created) - Long (Reach)
Chakra: 30 (-5 per turn)
Damage: N/A
Description: The user will perform the required handseals (3) before focusing their fuuton chakra into the air at any location on the battlefield (within short range) to generate a large amount of wind, the winds will them gather into a centered body. Then, through the use of chakra control the wind will shape into a large dog-like beast composed solely of wind. Giving off a beastly form, when standing with four feet, his height was twice can be high as a normal-sized adult human. While his total body length ranges up to five meters. The beast commonly called Soyokaze has a body running through confimed wind to form its legs body and head, while being seemingly covered in round quilt partterns, which have a more aggressive wind properties to them. As its name and body structure imply, this beast excels in wind manipulation. It has the ability to with a single swipe of its claws, which can slash human flesh with ease, release a three blade pattern of its claw, roughly 1 meter in length each blade towards the target. This can be done successively if wanted, and each 3 bladed swipe has a strength of B rank. Soyokaze's other primary ability is to 'surf' through the air, using its wind abilities to do so, this is done by a certain method. The method of 'surfing' is turning its entire body into a gale of wind, which moves 25% (1/4th) faster than the user's base speed (the beast's base speed on ground is the same as the user's base). While in gale form, the beast can still manifest and solidify only selective parts of its body if wanted, with the gole of causing damage, such as rushing towards the target as a gale and then manifesting only a claw to slash at them. Lastly, the beast of wind can by will turn into a wave of slicing winds when wanted, carrying an A rank strength behind it, once used however, the beast ceases to exist completely. Because of this, this technique is commonly known as Final howl, needless to say, this can only be used 1 time each time Tempestuous Whisk is used. Freeform slashing or biting does not have rank strength, but it can slash and stab into human flesh, though not deep into the bone.
Note(s):
- Can only be used x3 per battle.
- Must wait a three turn cooldown before using again.
- Remains on the field three turns or otherwise ends when Final howl is used.
- Turning into gale form counts as 1 move, each time it's used.
- Releasing the claw blades count as 1 move each time used. And can only be used x4 per battle.
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Paw Arts: Repel (Nykyujutsu: Oshi)
Rank: B
Type: Attack/Supplementary/Defense
Range: Short-Long
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: This technique is a very simple
technique that nearly all bartholomew clan
members can use. The user puts his paw on a
boulder(or if applicable one of the opponents
jutsu) and using the power of his paws he
repels the boulder. When this happens the boulder goes off into the air behind the user
instantly disappearing from view. The user can
choose the location of where he wants the
boulder to land(without stating it) and in 4
turns the boulder lands there. This technique
can be used for attacking by simply having the rock come down and hit the opponent on the
back of his head in 2 turns time. For defense
the user can have the boulder appear in front
of him to stop an opponents jutsu(Only B rank
and under).
~This is only an example of the techniques usage, the ability of the paws is to repel
anything. Obviously the user can't repel a
lightning, fire or wind jutsu without taking
damage, however if he wants, he can however
he takes 20 damage to his paws and he can't
use his paw abilities for 2 turns.
~This technique can't be used to teleport
other people to desired locations.
~The boulder can be in the air for as long as
the user pleases. Meaning it could be more
than 24 turns if he wishes.

(Fuuton: Osuushi no yubi) - Wind Style: Bull's Finger
Type: Offensive
Rank: B
Range: Short
Chakra: 20
Damage: 40
Description: The user coats his hand in wind chakra while extending only the index and pointer finger (resembling a bull's horns). The user then weaves in and out and slams his fingers covered in fuuton chakra into the target; delivering a blow identical to two knives being stabbed into something.
-Only used twice per battle[/spoile
 

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You are right, The tech was updated.

Now post the updated one and analyse it. Seems you did something wrong but I'm guessing if you read the updated version, you'll get it.
 
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